Unit8Naturaldisasters-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年八年级上册英语单元写作深度指导(牛津译林版)(原卷版+解析)

Unit8Naturaldisasters单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度记叙文：灾害发生的当天情况说明文：灾害防范措施本单元的话题是“自然灾害与防范”，主要介绍自然灾害的发生和防范措施，包括介绍自然灾害发生时的情况、防范措施等相关内容。在具体的写作中，学生应注意以下几点：1.能够正确拼写描自然灾害的相关词汇；2.能够恰当使用相关短语和句型表达；3.能够正确使用过去进行时进行描述当时的状况。【词汇积累】1.一个像雷声的很大的声音2.开始晃动3.害怕的尖叫4跑出楼房5.尽某人最大的能力做某事6.四面八方7.玻璃块8.倒塌9.黑暗安静10.根本不11.觉得紧张12.快速跳动13.被困住14.自言自语15.片刻的恐惧16.穿过17.冷静下来18.喊救命19.慢慢爬过黑暗20.足够的空间更我移动21.试图找到出路22.移走23.明亮的日光24.拖干净水25.输掉决赛26.上千的27.撞上28.冲走29.引火30.从树上掉下来31.有雷电的风暴32.着火33.受伤34.坏掉35.摔倒36.尽快37.用某物盖住某物38.保护自己免遭危险39.着火的建筑40.从洪水中过去41.保持某人安全免遭危险【句型积累】42. Soontherealnoisecame,likebombsundertheground. 很快，像地下的炸弹一样的声音传来。43. Outside,peoplewererunninginalldirectionswhilepiecesofglassandbrickswerefallingdown. 外面，碎玻璃和碎砖纷纷掉落下来，人们四处逃散。44. Icouldnotseeanythingatall,andIdidnotknowifanyoneelsewasnearme. 我什么也看不见，也不知道是否有人在我附近。45. Ifeltnervousandmyheartwasbeatingfast. 我感到紧张，我的心跳得很快。46. AmomentoffearwentthroughmymindbutItoldmyselftocalmdownsinceIwasstillalive.我的脑中掠过一阵恐惧，但我告诉我自己要镇定下来，既然我仍然活着。47. Istartedtopullmyselfslowlythroughthedark. 我开始在黑暗中慢慢地向前移动身体。48. AsIwastryingtofindmywayout.Isuddenlyheardsomenoiseaboveme. 当我尝试着找到出路，我突然听到了上面的噪声。49. Timmywassleeping/asleepwhentheearthquakestarted. 当地震开始的时候蒂姆在睡觉。50. Mydad’scarbrokedownbecauseofthecoldweather. 由于糟糕的天气我爸爸的汽车出故障了。51. Staylowtotheground. 贴着地面。52. Thesnowkeptfallingaroundus. 雪不停地在我们周围落下。53. IwasdoingmyhomeworkintheclassroomwhenMr.Wucameinandtoldustogohomeearly. 当吴老师进来告诉我们早点回家时，我正在教室里做家庭作业。54. WelostourumbrellainthewindandInearlyfellover. 我们在风中丢了雨伞，我差点儿摔倒。55. Suddenly,astrongwindcamefrombehind. 突然，一阵大风从后面刮来【谚语积累】1.Natureiskindofalovingmother,butalsoabutcherincoldblood. 自然不仅是位慈爱的母亲，还是个冷血的屠夫。2.Fishjumpoutofthewaterandraincomes. 鱼儿出水跳，风雨就来到。3. Allofthedisaster,butbecauseoflove. 所有的灾难，不过是因为眷恋。灾时状况【万能写作模板】灾时状况Anearthquake/Aflood/Asnowstorm/...hit....Iwasdoing...when......becauseoftheheavyrain/snow....Wecouldonlyhear/see.......keptfalling.Suddenly,..防范措施...hadtowalkslowly/pulloneselfthrough....防范措施If...,don’t...灾后感受...wasreallyterrible.灾后感受Wewereallsave.2022年6月10日，李华的家乡四川雅安市芦山县发生了一场地震，地震造成了巨大的损毁，但幸运的是，李华一家安然无恙。假如你是李华，请你描述一下地震发生时家里人的活动情景及感受：1.李华在浴室里洗澡；2.爸爸在电脑旁工作；3.妈妈在厨房里做晚餐；4.爷爷奶奶在客厅看电视。要求：1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.Atthattime,allmyfamilywereathome.Iwastakingashowerinthebathroom.Myfatherwasworkingonthecomputer.Mymotherwascookinginthekitchen.MygrandparentswerewatchingTVinthelivingroom.Wewereallscared.

Theearthquakemadeourneighborhoodinamess.Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.Butluckily,itwasn’ttooheavyanditdidn’tlastfortoolong.Wewereallsafe.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”；③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“家里人的感受”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；第二步，接着按照要点叙述当时家里人各自正在做的事情，以及家人们的感受；第三步，介绍地震给周边生活环境带来的破坏，抒发作者的感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①bescared感到害怕②inamess乱七八糟[高分句型]Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.（and连接三个并列的名词，therebe句型，就近原则，过去分词作定语）英汉互译（一）BencouldhearstrongwindsoutsidehishomeinAlabama.Blackcloudsweremakingtheskyverydark.Withnolightoutside,itfeltlikemidnight.（1）ThenewsonTVreportedthataheavyrainstormwasinthearea.Everyoneintheneighborhoodwasbusy.Ben’sdadwasputtingpiecesofwoodoverthewindowswhilehismomwasmakingsuretheflashlightsandradiowereworking.（2）她也放了一些蜡烛和火柴在桌子上.Benwashelpinghismommakedinnerwhentherainbegantobeatheavilyagainstthewindows（3）晚餐后，他们试着去玩游戏，butitwashardtohavefunwithaseriousstormhappeningoutside.Bencouldnotsleepatfirst.Hefinallyfellasleepwhenthewindwasdyingdownataround3:00a.m.Whenhewokethesumwasrising.Hewentoutsidewithhisfamilyandfoundtheneighborhoodinamess.（4）Fallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbishwereeverywhere.Theyjoinedtheneighborstohelpcleanuptheneighborhoodtogether.（5）Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapartitbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.将文中划线部分译成汉语或者英语.1．2．3．4．5．（二）Inmanycountries,therearesomestormsinsummerorautumn.Whenastormcomes,itisoftenwiththunderandlightening(雷电).Soit'susuallydangerousduringastorm._Themostimportantthingyoucandoistogetyourself,yourfamilyandyourhomeprepared._有时,尽管你在室内,也是不安全的。Thelighteningcangothroughelectricalwires(电线)andoverphonelines._Sometimesitkillspeoplebysettingtheirhouseonfire._Ifyoustayoutside,youwill-alsobeindanger._Whenyoustandinanopenplaceorunderabigtree,thelighteningmayhityou.Whenyouseeastormcoming,goindoors.Don'tstayoutside._在室内,最好不要用手机或电脑。Keepawayfromoutsidedoorsandwindowsanddonotlieon.thefloor.Inordertoprotectourselves,it'snecessaryforustoknowthedosanddon'tinastorm.6．7．8．9．10．（三）

WhenSamwasan11-year-oldboy,arainstormhithishometownonadarknight.71.Whenthestormcame,hewasdoinghishomework.

Hissisterwasasleepandhismotherwasbusycookinginthekitchen.72.他爸爸正在看电视.Suddenly,allthelightswentoff.73.Thentherainbeatagainstthedoorsandwindowsheavily.Thewindblewstrongly,sohissisterwokeup.Shewasscaredandstartedtocry.74.这家人什么也做不了。Sam’sfathertookouttheflashlight,butthebatteries（电池）weredead.75.Sohismotherfoundsomecandlesandaboxofmatches.Thenextmorning,aftertheylistenedtothenewsontheradio,theyrealizedthataheavyrainstormhadhappened.11．12．13．14．15．【参考答案】（一）【答案】1．电视新闻报道该地区有一场大暴风雨。2．Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．Afterdinnertheytriedtoplaygames.4．到处都有倒下的树坏了的窗户和垃圾。5．尽管暴风雨破坏了很多的东西但是它使家人和邻居们更相近了。（二）【答案】6．你能做的最重要的事情就是让你自己、你的家人和家准备好。7．Sometimesitisn’tsafeevenifyouareinthehouse.8．有时它通过让人们的房子着火来杀死人们。9．当你站在开阔的地方或大树下时，闪电可能会击中你。10．Inthehouse,youhadbetternotusethephoneorcomputer.（三）【答案】11．暴风雨来临的时候，他正在做作业。12．HisfatherwaswatchingTV.13．然后雨重重地敲打着门窗。14．Thefamilycouldn’tdoanything.15．因此他的妈妈找到了一些蜡烛和一盒火柴。（一）地震是一种自然现象，虽然目前我们还无法预测，但我们可以了解一些自救知识，减少地震带来的伤害。假如你是你学校校报英文版的编辑，请你写一篇题为“WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchool”短文，刊登在校报上。提示：◆在高楼里，不要从楼上跳出去。远离窗户和黑板。远离火源。藏在课桌下面。当地面停止摇晃时，快速离开大楼，然后去操场。◆在操场上上体育课，待在那里。不要返回到教室去。不要站在高楼和高树附近，因为它们可能落到你的身上。总之，按照在学校所学的知识去做。保持镇定，要勇敢且乐于助人。要求：1.时态：一般现在时

人称：第二人称2.包含信息提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchoolYouhavenoideawhentheearthquakewillhappen,butyoushouldknowwhattododuringanearthquakeatschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）Writeapassageofatleast40wordsonthetopic“Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?”(以“台风来时我们该怎么做？”为题写一篇不少于40个词的短文)Usethefollowingpointsasareference(以下内容仅供参考)1.Whatcanweseewhenthereisatyphoon?2.Whatmayhappenwhenthereisatyphoon?3.Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）2020年7月17日，恩施州因持续暴雨爆发特大洪水，恩施人民团结一致抗击洪水。请根据要点提示并结合你的所见所闻写一篇英语短文，介绍恩施人民如何互帮互助共渡难关。要点提示：1.简要描述受灾情况；2.齐心协力抗洪救灾（如：转移群众、提供住宿、捐赠物品、清扫街道……）3.谈谈自己的感受。写作要求：1.要点齐全，并根据内容适当发挥；2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80词；3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。参考词汇：洪水flood

捐赠donate___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）请根据下面提示，以“Alandslide（山崩）”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。提示：1.上周一早上，在连续下了两天大雨之后发生了山崩；2.我和妈妈在家，爸爸下午回来，雨很大，他叫我和妈妈赶快带伞离开；3.就在那时，房子开始摇晃，我们非常害怕，迅速跑开了；4.第二天上午回家时，我们发现房子没有了，到处是碎玻璃和砖块，我们感到很伤心。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）假如你是Lucy，昨天下午你所居住的地方遭遇了一场暴风雨。请给你的好友Lily写一封电子邮件。向她描述一下暴风雨来临时，你的家人（爸爸、妈妈、你、妹妹）都在干什么，暴风雨的影响是什么？要求：1.须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.词数：80词左右；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。DearLily,Letmetellyousomethingabouttherainstormyesterdayafternoon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lucy

参考答案：1.【答案】例文：WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchoolYouhavenoideawhentheearthquakewillhappen,butyoushouldknowwhattododuringanearthquakeatschool.Whenyou’reinahighbuilding,don’tjumpoutofit.Stayawayfromwindowsandblackboardsandfire.Hideunderthedesk.Whenthegroundstopsshaking,leavethebuildingquicklyandthengototheplayground.Ifyou’rehavingaPEclassintheplayground,pleasestaythere.Don’tgobacktotheclassroom.Don’tstandneartallbuildingsortalltrees,becausetheymayfalldown.Ifyoufollowtheserules,youcanbesafeduringanearthquake.Keepcalm,bebraveandhelpful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，以第二人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题——发生地震时该做什么；第二步，介绍如何在地震中自救；第三步，叮嘱注意事项并做总结。[亮点词汇]①stayawayfrom远离②falldown掉落③keepcalm保持镇定[高分句型]①Whenthegroundstopsshaking,leavethebuildingquicklyandthengototheplayground.(When引导的时间状语从句)②Ifyou’rehavingaPEclassintheplayground,pleasestaythere.(If引导的条件状语从句)2.【答案】例文Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?Atyphoonisakindofverystrongwind.Whenthereisatyphoon,wecanseethecloudsmovingquicklyinthesky.Peopleholdtheirraincoatstightlywhentheyarewalkinginthestreets.Thestrongwindmaybreakthewindowsanditmayalsoblowawaytheflowerpotsoutsideourflat,soweshouldclosethewindowsandmovetheflowerpotsintotheflat.Weshouldstayathomeandlistentothenewsaboutthetyphoon.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求根据提示内容写一篇关于“台风来时我们该怎么做？”的短文，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，表述完整。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍台风来临时，我们会看见什么；第二步，介绍台风来临时，会发生什么；第三步，介绍台风来临时，我们应该怎么做。[亮点词汇]①akindof一种②blowaway吹走③stayathome待在家[高分句型]①Peopleholdtheirraincoatstightlywhentheyarewalkinginthestreets.（when引导时间状语从句）②Thestrongwindmaybreakthewindowsanditmayalsoblowawaytheflowerpotsoutsideourflat,soweshouldclosethewindowsandmovetheflowerpotsintotheflat.（so连接并列句）3.【答案】例文：Inmanyareasofthecity,therewasseriouswaterlogging,vehicleswereflooded,houseswereirrigated,anditwasdifficultforpeopletotravel.Inaddition,thedisastercausedalargeareaofpowerfailure,people’sproductionandlifewereseriouslyaffected.Inordertofightfloodsandprovidedisasterrelief,peopleworkedtogether.Withthegovernment’spositiveresponse,groupsandorganizationstransferredpeople,andlocalcharitiesraisedmoneytoprovidepeoplewithaccommodationanddonatedgoods.Aftertheflood,manyvolunteersvolunteeredtocleanthestreetsandresumedtheconstructionofthecity.Afterthis,Ithinkunityisstrength.Chinesepeoplecanovercomeanydifficultybyuniting.Inaddition,weshouldlearntotakeprecautionsandtryourbesttominimizethelosses.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，按照要点提示介绍恩施州因暴雨引发的洪涝灾害；内容包括：恩施州的受灾情况、人们救灾的措施行动、自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文以第三人称、一般过去时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按要点分段叙述，保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。4.【答案】AlandslideLastMondaymorning,aftertwodays’heavyrain,alandslidehappened.Iwasathomewithmymotherandthenmyfathercamebackintheafternoon.Itwasrainingheavily.Heaskedmetoleavequicklywithumbrellas.Justthen,thehousestartedtoshake.Wewereveryafraidandranawayquickly.Thenextmorning,wewentbackhome.Wefoundthattherewasnohouseatall.Therewereonlypiecesofglassandbrickseverywhere.Wefeltverysad.【详解】这是一篇要求写自己经历的一次自然灾害——山崩。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。5.【答案】DearLily,Letmetellyousomethingabouttherainstormyesterdayafternoon.Athalfpastsixyesterdayafternoon,therainstormcame.Itfeltlikemidnight.Atthattime,myfamilyweredoingdifferentthings.Myfatherwaslookingthroughthenewspaperinthelivingroom.Mymotherwascookingdinnerinthekitchen.Mysisterwasreadingastorybook.IwasdoingmyEnglishhomeworkonline.Aftertherainstorm,ourneighborshelpedeachotherinneed.Therainstormwassostrongthatitbrokemanythingsapart,butitbroughtfamiliesandneighborscloserthanbefore.Yours,Lucy【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：根据题干要求，具体介绍昨天暴风雨来临时，你的家人在做什么以及暴风雨的影响，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；第二步，具体介绍暴风雨来临时，你的家人正在做的事情以及暴风雨的影响。[亮点词汇]①feellike感觉像②lookthrough浏览③inneed在困难中④so...that...如此……以至于……[高分句型]Therainstormwassostrongthatitbrokemanythingsapart,butitbroughtfamiliesandneighborscloserthanbefore.(so...that引导的结果状语从句；比较级句型)

Unit8Naturaldisasters单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度记叙文：灾害发生的当天情况说明文：灾害防范措施本单元的话题是“自然灾害与防范”，主要介绍自然灾害的发生和防范措施，包括介绍自然灾害发生时的情况、防范措施等相关内容。在具体的写作中，学生应注意以下几点：1.能够正确拼写描自然灾害的相关词汇；2.能够恰当使用相关短语和句型表达；3.能够正确使用过去进行时进行描述当时的状况。【词汇积累】1.aloudnoiselikethunder一个像雷声的很大的声音2. starttoshake 开始晃动3. screaminfear 害怕的尖叫4. runoutofthebuilding跑出楼房5. do/tryone’sbesttodosth 尽某人最大的能力做某事6. inalldirections 四面八方7. piecesofglass 玻璃块8. comedown 倒塌9. darkandquiet 黑暗安静10. not...atall 根本不11. feelnervous 觉得紧张12. beatfast 快速跳动13. betrapped 被困住14. Saytooneself 自言自语15. Amomentoffear 片刻的恐惧16. Gothrough 穿过17. Calmdown 冷静下来18. Shoutforhelp 喊救命19. Pulloneselfslowlythroughthedark慢慢爬过黑暗20. Enoughspaceformetomove 足够的空间更我移动21. Trytofindone’swayout 试图找到出路22. Moveaway 移走23. Brightdaylight 明亮的日光24. mopupthewater 拖干净水25. losethegame 输掉决赛26. thousandsof 上千的27. crashinto 撞上28. washaway 冲走29. startafire 引火30. fallfromthetree 从树上掉下来31. astormwiththunderandlightning 有雷电的风暴32. catchfire 着火33. get/behurt 受伤34. breakdown 坏掉35. fallover 摔倒36. assoonaspossible 尽快37. coversthwithsth 用某物盖住某物38. protectoneselffromdanger 保护自己免遭危险39. thebuildingonfire 着火的建筑40. gothroughthefloodwater 从洪水中过去41. keepsbsafefromdanger 保持某人安全免遭危险【句型积累】42. Soontherealnoisecame,likebombsundertheground. 很快，像地下的炸弹一样的声音传来。43. Outside,peoplewererunninginalldirectionswhilepiecesofglassandbrickswerefallingdown. 外面，碎玻璃和碎砖纷纷掉落下来，人们四处逃散。44. Icouldnotseeanythingatall,andIdidnotknowifanyoneelsewasnearme. 我什么也看不见，也不知道是否有人在我附近。45. Ifeltnervousandmyheartwasbeatingfast. 我感到紧张，我的心跳得很快。46. AmomentoffearwentthroughmymindbutItoldmyselftocalmdownsinceIwasstillalive.我的脑中掠过一阵恐惧，但我告诉我自己要镇定下来，既然我仍然活着。47. Istartedtopullmyselfslowlythroughthedark. 我开始在黑暗中慢慢地向前移动身体。48. AsIwastryingtofindmywayout.Isuddenlyheardsomenoiseaboveme. 当我尝试着找到出路，我突然听到了上面的噪声。49. Timmywassleeping/asleepwhentheearthquakestarted. 当地震开始的时候蒂姆在睡觉。50. Mydad’scarbrokedownbecauseofthecoldweather. 由于糟糕的天气我爸爸的汽车出故障了。51. Staylowtotheground. 贴着地面。52. Thesnowkeptfallingaroundus. 雪不停地在我们周围落下。53. IwasdoingmyhomeworkintheclassroomwhenMr.Wucameinandtoldustogohomeearly. 当吴老师进来告诉我们早点回家时，我正在教室里做家庭作业。54. WelostourumbrellainthewindandInearlyfellover. 我们在风中丢了雨伞，我差点儿摔倒。55. Suddenly,astrongwindcamefrombehind. 突然，一阵大风从后面刮来【谚语积累】1.Natureiskindofalovingmother,butalsoabutcherincoldblood. 自然不仅是位慈爱的母亲，还是个冷血的屠夫。2.Fishjumpoutofthewaterandraincomes. 鱼儿出水跳，风雨就来到。3. Allofthedisaster,butbecauseoflove. 所有的灾难，不过是因为眷恋。灾时状况【万能写作模板】灾时状况Anearthquake/Aflood/Asnowstorm/...hit....Iwasdoing...when......becauseoftheheavyrain/snow....Wecouldonlyhear/see.......keptfalling.Suddenly,..防范措施...hadtowalkslowly/pulloneselfthrough....防范措施If...,don’t...灾后感受...wasreallyterrible.灾后感受Wewereallsave.2022年6月10日，李华的家乡四川雅安市芦山县发生了一场地震，地震造成了巨大的损毁，但幸运的是，李华一家安然无恙。假如你是李华，请你描述一下地震发生时家里人的活动情景及感受：1.李华在浴室里洗澡；2.爸爸在电脑旁工作；3.妈妈在厨房里做晚餐；4.爷爷奶奶在客厅看电视。要求：1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.Atthattime,allmyfamilywereathome.Iwastakingashowerinthebathroom.Myfatherwasworkingonthecomputer.Mymotherwascookinginthekitchen.MygrandparentswerewatchingTVinthelivingroom.Wewereallscared.

Theearthquakemadeourneighborhoodinamess.Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.Butluckily,itwasn’ttooheavyanditdidn’tlastfortoolong.Wewereallsafe.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”；③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“家里人的感受”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；第二步，接着按照要点叙述当时家里人各自正在做的事情，以及家人们的感受；第三步，介绍地震给周边生活环境带来的破坏，抒发作者的感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①bescared感到害怕②inamess乱七八糟[高分句型]Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.（and连接三个并列的名词，therebe句型，就近原则，过去分词作定语）英汉互译（一）BencouldhearstrongwindsoutsidehishomeinAlabama.Blackcloudsweremakingtheskyverydark.Withnolightoutside,itfeltlikemidnight.（1）ThenewsonTVreportedthataheavyrainstormwasinthearea.Everyoneintheneighborhoodwasbusy.Ben’sdadwasputtingpiecesofwoodoverthewindowswhilehismomwasmakingsuretheflashlightsandradiowereworking.（2）她也放了一些蜡烛和火柴在桌子上.Benwashelpinghismommakedinnerwhentherainbegantobeatheavilyagainstthewindows（3）晚餐后，他们试着去玩游戏，butitwashardtohavefunwithaseriousstormhappeningoutside.Bencouldnotsleepatfirst.Hefinallyfellasleepwhenthewindwasdyingdownataround3:00a.m.Whenhewokethesumwasrising.Hewentoutsidewithhisfamilyandfoundtheneighborhoodinamess.（4）Fallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbishwereeverywhere.Theyjoinedtheneighborstohelpcleanuptheneighborhoodtogether.（5）Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapartitbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.将文中划线部分译成汉语或者英语.1．2．3．4．5．（二）Inmanycountries,therearesomestormsinsummerorautumn.Whenastormcomes,itisoftenwiththunderandlightening(雷电).Soit'susuallydangerousduringastorm._Themostimportantthingyoucandoistogetyourself,yourfamilyandyourhomeprepared._有时,尽管你在室内,也是不安全的。Thelighteningcangothroughelectricalwires(电线)andoverphonelines._Sometimesitkillspeoplebysettingtheirhouseonfire._Ifyoustayoutside,youwill-alsobeindanger._Whenyoustandinanopenplaceorunderabigtree,thelighteningmayhityou.Whenyouseeastormcoming,goindoors.Don'tstayoutside._在室内,最好不要用手机或电脑。Keepawayfromoutsidedoorsandwindowsanddonotlieon.thefloor.Inordertoprotectourselves,it'snecessaryforustoknowthedosanddon'tinastorm.6．7．8．9．10．（三）

WhenSamwasan11-year-oldboy,arainstormhithishometownonadarknight.71.Whenthestormcame,hewasdoinghishomework.

Hissisterwasasleepandhismotherwasbusycookinginthekitchen.72.他爸爸正在看电视.Suddenly,allthelightswentoff.73.Thentherainbeatagainstthedoorsandwindowsheavily.Thewindblewstrongly,sohissisterwokeup.Shewasscaredandstartedtocry.74.这家人什么也做不了。Sam’sfathertookouttheflashlight,butthebatteries（电池）weredead.75.Sohismotherfoundsomecandlesandaboxofmatches.Thenextmorning,aftertheylistenedtothenewsontheradio,theyrealizedthataheavyrainstormhadhappened.11．12．13．14．15．【参考答案】（一）【答案】1．电视新闻报道该地区有一场大暴风雨。2．Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．Afterdinnertheytriedtoplaygames.4．到处都有倒下的树坏了的窗户和垃圾。5．尽管暴风雨破坏了很多的东西但是它使家人和邻居们更相近了。【分析】文章讲述了Ben住的社区经历了一场严重的暴风雨，虽然暴风雨过后一片混乱，但它使得邻居们走得更近了。1．ThenewsonTV“电视新闻”；report“报道”；that引导宾语从句，无实际意义；aheavyrainstorm“一场大暴风雨”；inthearea“在这个地区”，故填：电视新闻报道该地区有一场大暴风雨。2．she“她”，人称代词主格作主语；also“也”，位于实义动词前；put…on“把……放在……上”；somecandles“一些蜡烛”；matches“火柴”，故填Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．afterdinner“晚饭后”；they“他们”，人称代词主格作主语；trytodosth“试着做某事”；playgames“玩游戏”，故填Afterdinner,theytriedtoplaygames.4．Fallen“倒下的”，过去分词作定语；trees“树”；broken“破坏的”；windows“窗户”；and“和”；rubbish“垃圾”；everywhere“到处”，故填：到处都有倒下的树坏了的窗户和垃圾．5．Although“尽管”；the