高三英语高考总复习英语作文之叙事记叙文 课件

NarrativeWriting课文里的写作密码—叙事记叙文Learningaims1.Bytheendofthisclass,wewillhavebeenableto:2.masterthebasicstructureofanarrativewriting.3.learnhowtoorganizethepointsandhowtousesomepracticalandwonderfulwordsandsentencesinwritingnarrativeessays.考纲解读考生根据提示进行进行书面表达学生应该能：1.清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思；2.有效运用所学语言知识。应用文practicalwriting书信、通知、便条、致辞等议论文argumentativewriting单论点议论、对比议论、驳论文说明文expositorywriting说明现象、利弊、图表、步骤等记叙文narrativewriting人物、物体、经历、故事改写等JohnSnowwasawell-knowndoctorinLondoninthe19thcentury.Hewantedtofindthecausesofcholerainordertodefeatit.In1854whenthediseasehitLondonagain,itbegantogatherinformation.Hemarkedonamapwhereallthedeadpeoplehadlivedandhefoundthatmanypeoplewhohaddrunkthedirtywaterfromthepumpdied.Sohegotthatpollutedwatercarriedthevirus.Healsofoundasupportingevidence:twopeoplewhohadmovedawayfromBroadStreetbutstilldrankthewateralsodied.Hesuggestedthatthesourceofallwatersupplybeexaminedandpeopleshouldnotbeexposedtopollutedwateranymore.Finally,“KingCholera”wasdefeated.Summarywhowherewhenwhywhathow定义及写作框架

叙事类记叙文，多以事件为中心，以时间和空间为线索，按事件的发生、发展及结局展开，一般最后要表达对事件或活动的感想或看法。whowhywhatwhenwherehow上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：1.农场情况;2.采摘过程;3.个人感受。注意：1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好。高考真题复现学生初稿高考英语作文评分标准

第五档(很好)：(21-25分)----皇宫别墅或乡村庭院1.完全达到了预期的写作目的。2.表达思想清楚，语言通顺，连贯性较好。3.语法结构或词汇方面基本没有错误，但能使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇；具备较强的语言运用能力。第四档(好)：(16-20分)----小区精装房1.基本达到了预期的写作目的。2.表达思路清楚，语言连贯，全文结构紧凑。3.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。第三档(适当)：(11-15分)----普通装修基本切题，有些地方表达思路不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中间一些是严重错误。第二档(较差)：(6-10分)----地基成型基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。第一档(差)：(0-5分)----装修材料到场条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分行文均有错误，且多为严重错误。就近原则Neitheritscausenoritscurewasunderstood.Wecollectedvegetablesandfruits,andwealsoatesomefreshfruitsthere.教材经典原句句式升级___________wecollectvegetablesandfruits,____we_____atesomefreshfruitsthere.就近原则not(only)...but(also)...either...or...neither...nor...therebe就远原则aswellas；together/alongwith；includingexcept/besides/but/apartfrom/inadditiontoratherthanNotonlybutalsoNeitheritscausenoritscurewasunderstood.教材经典原句句式升级倒装________________________________,webenefitedalotfromtheactivity.Thoughwewereexhaustedandtired,webenefitedalotfromtheactivity.ExhaustedandtiredthoughweweresurpriseQ2.Q1.学习大礼包letmetryTranslation1.此次活动使我们获益良多。它不仅让我们贴近自然，使我们从繁重的学业负担得到放松，也促进了我们的友谊发展。（倒装）Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedfriendshipamongus.surpriseQ2.Q1.学习大礼包letmetry2.为了让学生们体验农场生活，上周末我们学校组织了一场水果采摘活动。我和所有的同学们一起，参加了采摘，这真是一次收获满满又有意义的活动。（就远原则）TranslationInordertogivethestudentsatasteoffarmlife,ourschoolorganizedafruit-pickingactivityonafarmlastweekend.I,aswellasallthestudents,participatedinthepicking,whichturnedouttobeextremelyfruitfulandmeaningful.

surpriseQ2.Q1.学习大礼包letmetrysurpriseQ2.Q1.学习大礼包letmetry时间状从关系词Whenwegotthere,wesaw...andstartedpickingfruits.教材经典原句句式升级Somanythousandsofterrifiedpeoplediedeverytimetherewasanoutbreak.________________________________________________________________

wereachedthere,weweregreetedwiththetwitteringofbirdsandthefragranceofflowers.Themoment/Instantly在到达时，我就被一片水果海洋给淹没了。他们是如此的诱人以至于我情不自禁地采摘起来。（arrival）TranslationUpon/Onarrival,Iwasoverwhelmedbyaseaoffreshfruit.TheyweresoinvitingthatIcouldn’tresistpickingthem.无灵主语Acloudofdangerousgasfloatedarounduntilitfounditsvictim.教材经典原句句式升级Themomentwereachedthere,

______________________seized

oureyes.

Whenwegotthere,wesawvariousfruitsandvegetables...aseaoffreshfruitsandvegetables

1.看着我们的劳动成果，一股幸福感与成就感油然而生。Seeingwhatwedid,agreatsenseofhappinessandachievementfloodedoverme.Onarrivingatthefarm,whatcameintosightwasvarietiesoffreshvegetablesandfruits.2.一到达农场，首先映入眼帘的就是各种各样的瓜果蔬菜。(what主从)TranslationAllthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,___________________________________（呼吸着新鲜的空气，欣赏着沿途美丽的风景。）非谓语HefoundthatitcamefromtheriverpollutedbythedirtywaterfromLondon.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing.教材经典原句句式升级enjoyingthefreshairandbeautifulscenery.__________________,westartedpickingfruits.改写句子Wewerebathedinwarmsunshine,andwestartedpickingfruits.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulsceneryandwehadlotsofphotostakentocapturethepreciousmomentforever.____________________,wehadlotofphotostaken,__________________________________.BathedinwarmsunshineAttractedbythebeautifulscenerycapturingthepreciousmomentforever.Ourschoolorganizedafruit-pickingactivityonafarmlastweekend,in______hundredsofusparticipated/tookpart.非限制性定语从句Awoman,whohadmovedawayfromBroadStreet,likedthewaterfromthepumpsomuchthatshehaditdeliveredtoherhouseeveryday.Ourschoolorganizedafruit-pickingactivityonafarmlastweekend.Hundredsofustookpartinit.教材经典原句句式升级whichInresponsetothe20thCPCnationalcongress,aspecialceremonywasheldonourschoolsquarelastMonday.TheceremonystrengthenedourawarenessofmakingChinastrongandbooming.

合并句子whichstrengthenedourawarenessofmakingChinastrongandboomingInresponsetothe20thCPCnationalcongress,aspecialceremonywasheldonourschoolsquarelastMonday____________________________________________________________.ShowTime高考英语作文评分标准

第五档(很好)：(21-25分)----皇宫别墅或乡村庭院1.完全达到了预期的写作目的。表达思想清楚，语言通顺，连贯性较好。2.语法结构或词汇方面基本没有错误，但能使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇；具备较强的语言运用能力。第四档(好)：(16-20分)----小区精装房1.基本达到了预期的写作目的。表达思路清楚，语言连贯，全文结构紧凑。2.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。第三档(适当)：(11-15分)----普通装修基本切题，有些地方表达思路不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中间一些是严重错误。第二档(较差)：(6-10分)----地基成型基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。第一档(差)：(0-5分)----装修材料到场条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分行文均有错误，且多为严重错误。Yourscoresare:___________Evaluation(Afterclass)MyweekendInordertogivethestudentsatasteoffarmlife,ourschoolorganizedafruit-pickingactivityonafarmlastweekend,whichturnedouttobeextremelyfruitfulandmeaningful.Thefarmisfarfromthecity,sowetookabusth