高考英语复习读后续写练习+车站失散：焦急寻找弟弟的简妮丝 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习车站失散：焦急寻找弟弟的简妮丝1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Whereisit?We’regoingtobelate!”Janicesearchedthehousecrazilyforherwallet.“Josh!Didyouhidemywallet?WehavetobeatGrandpa’sforhisbirthdayparty!”Josh,Janice’sfour-year-oldyoungerbrother,smiledinnocentlyather,buthiscunning(狡黠的)eyesgavehimselfaway.Shetriedherbestnottoshout.Grinning(咧嘴笑)likeacat,Joshreachedunderthesofa,pulledoutherwalletandhelditoverhishead.Janicegrabbedit.Tenminuteslater,theyhurriedtothetrainstation.Red-facedandsweating,JaniceletgoofJosh’swristandremovedthesweatfromherforehead.Thetrainarrived.Hersmilefrozewhensherealizedthatthetrainwaspackedwithpassengers.GrabbingJosh’shand,Janiceboardedthetrain.Shecommanded,“Thetrain’sreallycrowded,Josh.Behaveyourself,stickclosetome,andnomonkeybusiness!”Joshnodded,holdingtightlytoarail.Janicesmiled.4续写原文Whenitwastimetogetoffthetrain,Janicequicklypushedherwaythroughthecrowdtogetontotheplatform.“Wemadeit!”Janicesaid,turningaround.Joshwasnowheretobeseen.Thecrowdwasfloodingout,butJoshwasnotamongthem.“Thetraindoorsareclosing,”thencametheelectronicvoice.Soon,thecrowdontheplatformdieddown.ThelastthingJanicesawwasJosh’slittleanxiousfaceatthetrainwindow:JustasJanicewasabouttocalloutJosh’sname,thetraindisappearedfromview.“Josh!”Janicescreamed.5续写原文Janice’smindwastransportedbacktowhenshewaslostatthezoo.Shecouldstillvividlyrememberthetoweringfiguressurroundingherandnoneofthemwere’familiar.“Idon’twantJoshtogothroughthatsamebitterexperience,”Janiceletoutasigh.Janicetookouthermobilephone,readytocallhermother.However,midway,shedecidedagainstit.Hermother,whowasfarawayinFranceonbusiness,coulddonothingbutgetrestless.Janicepacedupanddowntheplatformanxiously.6段首句Paragraph1：Justthen,Janicereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber.Paragraph2：Havingwavedgoodbyetothelady,theyheadedfortheirdestination.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9简妮丝为参加爷爷生日派对匆忙找钱包，调皮的弟弟乔什藏起钱包后与她前往车站。车站人多拥挤，上火车时简妮丝叮嘱乔什跟紧。下车时简妮丝挤出人群却发现乔什不见，只看到火车窗口乔什焦急的脸后火车驶离。简妮丝回忆起自己曾在动物园走失的经历，为不让乔什重蹈覆辙，她决定不告知在法国出差的母亲，独自在站台焦急踱步，内心充满担忧与不安，不知如何找回弟弟。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Justthen,Janicereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber.就在这时，简妮丝接到了一个陌生号码来电。她的心猛地一紧，心想会不会是和乔什有关。她急忙接起电话：“喂？”电话那头传来一个温柔的女性声音：“你好，请问是简妮丝吗？我在火车站发现了一个小男孩。他好像迷路了，一直在找他的姐姐。我觉得可能是你的弟弟。”简妮丝如释重负，眼眶瞬间湿润了。“哦，天哪，是的！你在哪里？他怎么样？”电话里的女士回答道：“我们在车站的服务台。他有点害怕，但没有受伤。”简妮丝立刻以最快的速度冲向服务台，脑海里不断浮现出和乔什重逢的画面。11续写思路分析Para2：Havingwavedgoodbyetothelady,theyheadedfortheirdestination.向那位女士挥手道别后，他们朝着目的地出发。简妮丝紧紧地握住乔什的手，一刻也不想松开。她轻声责备道：“你可把我吓坏了，乔什。别再这样乱跑了。”乔什抬起头，用那双充满懊悔的大眼睛看着她，点了点头。他们加快脚步，弥补之前耽误的时间。一路上，简妮丝不停地查看乔什是否还在自己身边。当他们终于赶到爷爷的生日派对时，大家都对他们的迟到感到惊讶。简妮丝迅速解释了事情的经过，一家人围拢过来，纷纷给予乔什关爱与拥抱。简妮丝看着这一幕，心中满是感激，庆幸这场风波终于过去，一家人又团聚在一起了。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Justthen,Janicereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber.Herheartskippedabeat,hopingitwasrelatedtoJosh.Shequicklyanswered,"Hello?"Akindfemalevoicecamethrough,"Hi,isthisJanice?Ifoundalittleboyatthetrainstation.Heseemstobelostandkeepsaskingforhissister.Ithinkitmightbeyourbrother."Janice'seyesfilledwithtearsofrelief."Ohmygod,yes!Whereareyou?Isheokay?"Theladyonthephonereplied,"We'reatthestation'sinformationdesk.He'sabitscaredbutunharmed."Janicerushedtowardstheinformationdeskasfastasshecould,hermindracingwiththoughtsoffinallybeingreunitedwithJosh.14范文呈现Havingwavedgoodbyetothelady,theyheadedfortheirdestination.JaniceheldJosh'shandtightly,notwantingtoletgoeveragain.Shescoldedhimgently,"Youscaredmesomuch,Josh.Don'trunofflikethatagain."Joshlookedupatherwithbig,remorsefuleyesandnodded.Theywalkedbriskly,makingupforthelosttime.Alongtheway,JanicekeptcheckingonJosh,makingsurehewasstillbyherside.WhentheyfinallyarrivedatGrandpa'sbirthdayparty,everyonewassurprisedbytheirlatearrival.Janicequicklyexplainedwhathadhappened,andthefamilygatheredaroundJosh,showeringhimwithloveandhugs.Janicewatched,gratefulthattheordealwasoverandthattheywerealltogetheragain.15升级版范文呈现Justthen,Janicereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber,herheartpoundingwithanticipation,forshehopeditwasrelatedtoJosh.Swiftlyanswering,"Hello?"cameakindfemalevoice,"Hi,isthisJanice?Ifoundalittleboyatthetrainstation,whoseemslostandkeepsaskingforhissister.Isuspectitmightbeyourbrother."Janice'seyes,filledwithtearsofrelief,exclaimed,"Ohmygod,yes!Whereareyou?Isheokay?"Theladyonthephonereplied,"We'reatthestation'sinformationdesk.He'sabitscaredbutunharmed."Janicerushedtowardstheinformationdeskasfastasherlegscouldcarryher,hermindracingwiththoughtsoffinallyreunitingwithJosh.16升级版范文呈现Havingwavedgoodbyetothelady,theysetofffortheirdestination.JanicegraspedJosh'shandtightly,vowingnevertoletgoagain.Gentlyscoldinghim,shesaid,"Youscaredmesomuch,Josh.Neverrunofflikethatagain."Josh,withbig,