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continuationwritingLastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解读故事readforcharacters
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Margarito,Steve,MikeLastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解读故事readforcharacters
readforplot
readforconflict/problem
readforcharacteristics
readfortheme
LastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解读故事readforcharacters
readforplot
readforconflict/problem
readforcharacteristics
readfortheme
LastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.
Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:
Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.
Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.EnvironmentEmotionActionweatherStep2
四句确定框架1.主题句（文章最后一句）
Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.
雨虽然很冷，但他的心里却充满了前所未有的温暖。
Outsidethecar,thewindstillhowlingandtherainwhippingagainstthewindow,butthekindnessfromthestrangerswarmedupeverysoul.车外，风还在呼啸，雨打在窗户上，但陌生人的好意温暖了每个人。Step2
四句确定框架2.衔接句（第一段最后一句）
Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Hewasrescuedbythetwokindmen.Step2
四句确定框架3.情感句（确定文章走向）
Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.trappedfearhopeanticipationsafehope：Asparkofhopewaskindledinhisheart.anticipation:HisdespairfadedawayandwasreplacedbyanticipationStep2
四句确定框架4.动作句（增加文章画面感）
Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”递石头：靠近：砸窗户：救人：handedbentdownpickedupgraspeddashedtowardsheldtheropetightlystaredatthemworriedlyapproachedwadedintomadehiswayglancedaroundleanedbackhammeredagainst
threwtherockbrokethewindowitcrackedandbrokeandbecomepieceshewasrescuedhewaspulledoutandtakentothedeliveryvehicleStep3
三回扣1.回扣原文细节（对应原文内容）
天气：Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.
Suddenly,alightningshoneandthesoundoftherainbecameloud.TheheavyrainmadeStevetoodifficulttomove.
环境：Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.Stevewadedintothemuddycreek.情感：Worriedaboutherson’ssafety."Areyouhomeyet?Everything'sgood?"Hismother'sanxiousvoicecameover.Step2
四句确定框架1.主题句（文章最后一句）2.衔接句（第一段最后一句）3.情感句（确定文章走向）4.动作句（增加文章画面感）
trappedfearhopeanticipationsafehandedapproachedbrokethewindowhewasrescued应用实践四句确定框架1.情感句（确定文章走向）2.动作句（增加文章画面感）MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.应用实践四句确定框架1.情感句（确定文章走向）2.动作句（增加文章画面感）MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.berescuedthanksrelievedregretedtearedansweredreachedouthispocketpickedupthephonehearingUponhearingcouldn'tcontrolhimselftookadeepbreathcomfort应用实践四句确定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.heansweredthephone.应用实践四句确定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.heansweredthephone.1.情感句（确定文章走向）berescuedthanksrelieved/nervoustearedmerrymotherconcernedworkersnervous:Withtremblinghands,concerned:Uponhearingtheconcernedvoice./Hismother'sanxiousvoicecameover.teared:hiseyeswereglisteningwithhisheld-backtearsmerry:Stevedissolvedintolaughter,hiseyesgleamedwithmerriment./
Her
eyestwinkled
withmerrimentnervous:Withtremblinghands,concerned:Uponhearingtheconcernedvoice./Hismother'sanxiousvoicecame
over.teared:hiseyeswereglisteningwithhisheld-backtearsmerry:Stevedissolvedintolaughter,hiseyesgleamedwithmerriment./
Her
eyestwinkled
withmerrimenthope：Asparkofhopewaskindledinhisheart.anticipation:Hisdespairfadedawayandwasreplacedbyanticipation环境描写：alightningshoneandthesoundoftherainbecameloud应用实践四句确定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.heansweredthephone.2.动作句（增加文章画面感）answeredreachedouthispocketpickedupthephoneheardUponhearingcouldn'tcontrolhimselftookadeepbreathcomfortreachedintodrewoutansweredexpressapproachedclutchedgazedathuggedtookoutscribbled1.bentdown弯腰2.pickedup捡起3.grasped抓住4.dashedtowards冲5.handedthestone递石头6.heldtheropetightly紧紧的抓住石头7.staredatthemworriedly他担心地盯着他们8.wadedintothewater趟进水里9.madehiswayto前往10.glancedaround环顾四周11.leanedback向后倾斜12.hammeredagainst击打
13.threwtherock扔石头14.itcrackedandbrokeandbecomepieces它裂了，碎了，变成了碎片15.hewaspulledoutandtakentothedeliveryvehicle他被拉了出来，带到送货车上16.reachedintohispocket,drewoutthephoneandansweredthecall把手
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