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ReadingforWriting:WriteanarrativeessayUnit5FirstAid【版本:新人教册别:选择性必修二】LearningObjectives语言目标:1)理解、记忆并运用语篇中的(话题/写作)词/块/句,如firstaid,helpsbtoone’sfeet,performedtheHeimlichmanoeuvre等;2)熟悉并掌握的记叙文的文体特征、语言特点、过渡与衔接和主题的升华,学会使用记叙文的写作技巧。能力目标:分析和把握记叙文的语言特征和文本结构;能够写简单的记叙文。情感目标:了解急救知识和技能,提高安全意识和自我保护意识,深刻理解生命的意义和珍爱生命的重要性,学会关爱他人,传递友爱。contentsLeading-inⅠWritingReadingⅡAssignmentIIIⅣILeading-inWhatdoestheboyontherightsufferfrom?2.Whatcouldwedoifsomeoneissufferingfromit?Choking.
PerformHeimlichmaneuver.Leading-inHeimlichmaneuverCulturalnoteFounder:HenryHeimlich(1920—2016)ⅡReadingnarrativeThestoryofachockingincident(set-up:who,what,whereconflict)TheintroductionoftheHeimlichmanoeuvreConclusion:commentsonthechokingincident(quote)ReadandThinkChenWei,ahighschoolstudentinBeijing,hadhisdinnerinterruptedwhenheheardsomeonescreamingfromanothertable.Afellowdinerattherestaurant,ZhangTao,waschokingonsomesteak.Hewasnowholdinghisthroatwithhisfaceturningred,whilehisdesperatefriendswereslappinghimontheback.______________________________________________________________________TheFirstAidHeroinSchool:HeimlichManeuverCanSaveAMan'sLife
____________________.HegotupandrantoZhang’stableatonce.WiththehelpofZhang’sfriends,hewasabletohelpZhangtohisfeet.Then,standingbehindZhang,ChendidtheHeimlichmanoeuvre.Thefoodwasinstantlyforcedout,andZhangbegantobreatheagain.Tenminuteslater,anambulancearrived.ThedoctorscheckedZhangandmadesurethathewasfine.TheysuggestedheChenwastednotime.transitionalsentence:linkupideasbetweenparagraphsainthefirstorthirdperson
inactivevoicesimplepasttenseReadandThinkyourarmsaroundhiswaist.Makeafistwithonehandandplaceitintheupperpartofhisstomach.Grabbingyourfistwithyourotherhandtightly,pushupandintohisstomachinonemotion.Continuedoingthisuntiltheobstructionisforcedout._______________________________________________________________________,asyoumayhurthim.Instead,laythechildfacedownonyourlapwiththeheadlowerthantherestofhisbody,andthengivefirmslapstohisupperbackuntilhecanbreatheagain.DoingtheHeimlichmanoeuvreonasmallchildisnotrecommended
transitionalsentenceReadandThink_____________________________________________.Youcannotjuststandbyanddonothing.Luckily,Chenhadlearnthowtogivefirstaidinschool.SeeingZhangchoking,heremainedcalmandreactedimmediately.Chenlatersaidabouttheincident,“____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.”Weareallhumansandweallhavearesponsibilitytolookafteroneanother’swelfare.Withchokingvictims,everyminutecounts.HowcouldIjustifysittingthereanddoingnothing?aquotetosumupgiveuniqueinsightinhischaractertransitionalsentenceReadandThinkChenWei,ahighschoolstudentinBeijing,hadhisdinnerinterruptedwhenheheardsomeonescreamingfromanothertable.Afellowdinerattherestaurant,ZhangTao,waschokingonsomesteak.Hewasnow__________________(手按着喉咙)_______________________(满脸通红),whilehisdesperatefriendswere________________________(拍他的背).Chen________________(毫不迟疑).HegotupandrantoZhang’stableatonce.WiththehelpofZhang’sfriends,hewasableto_________________________(扶着他站起来).Then,standingbehindZhang,ChendidtheHeimlichmanoeuvre.Thefoodwasinstantlyforcedout,andZhangbegantobreatheagain.holdinghisthroatwithhisfaceturningredslappinghimonthebackwastednotimehelpingZhangtohisfeet
(exercise)Tenminuteslater,anambulancearrived.ThedoctorscheckedZhangandmadesurethathewasfine.Theysuggestedheeatmoreslowlyandtakesmallerbitesbeforetheyleft.Chokingvictimsusuallyhaveonlyaboutfourminutesbeforetheycollapseandsometimesdie,________(leave)notimeforanambulancetoarrive.Tosolvethisproblem,in1974,anAmericandoctor,HenryHeimlich,createdtheHeimlichmanoeuvre,_______(save)thousandsoflivesaroundtheworld.DoingtheHeimlichmanoeuvreisquick,practical,andeasy.Itissoeasy,infact,thatalmostanyonecanlearnhow.leavingsaving
(exercise)Ifyouseesomeonechoking,firstcalltheemergencyservices.Thenmakesurethatthevictimisreallychoking:Achokingpersoncannotspeak.Slappingthevictim’sbackwilloftenforceouttheobstruction.Ifthisdoesnotwork,youcanperformtheHeimlichmanoeuvreby_____________________(站在此人身后)and__________________________________(用双臂环抱其腰部).Makeafistwithonehandandplaceitintheupperpartofhisstomach.Grabbingyourfistwithyourotherhandtightly,pushupandintohisstomachinonemotion.Continuedoingthisuntiltheobstructionisforcedout.standingbehindhimwrappingyourarmsaroundhiswaist
(exercise)________(do)theHeimlichmanoeuvreonasmallchildisnotrecommended.Instead,laythechildfacedownonyourlapwiththeheadlowerthantherestofhisbody,andthengivefirmslapstohisupperbackuntilhecanbreatheagain.Withchokingvictims,everyminutecounts.Youcannotjuststandbyanddonothing.Luckily,Chenhadlearnthowtogivefirstaidinschool.SeeingZhangchoking,heremainedcalmandreactedimmediately.Chenlatersaidabouttheincident,“HowcouldIjustifysittingthereanddoingnothing?Weareallhumansandweallhavearesponsibilitytolookafteroneanother'swelfare."Doing
(exercise)WritingⅢWritingtask
September11th,2021WorldFirstAidDayfallsonthe2ndSaturdayinSeptember.Thisyear’sthemeistobe“TheFirstAidHeroinSchoolorCommunity”.NowChinaDailyiscallingforessayson“sharingyourstoryaboutprovidingfirstaid”.________________________________________________________________________________________________
Howtowriteagoodnarrativeessay?Agoodnarrativeessay
Set-up:(introducewho/what/where)Conflict:(involveachallenge/difficulty)Conclusion:summary(evaluation/quote)
v-ingformfirstaidHeimlichmanoeuvrewastenotimeslapsbonthebackhelpsbtoone’sfeet…inthefirstorthirdpersoninactivevoiceinsimplepasttenseUsefulexpressionsLanguagefeaturesstructuregrammar二、写作思路(1)一审:体裁、结构和主题体裁:记叙文主题:旅游城市推荐(2)二定:时态和人称时态:过去进行时(现在分词)人称:第一、三人称为主(3)三明确:明确写作要点事件发生的人物时间地点原因,现场情况和心理活动,总结事件的结果并表达自己的观点主题写作——急救经历结构:三段第一段:导入事件的时间地点人物及原因第二段:介绍现场情况,心理活动,病人情况以及自己会的急救知识第三段:总结事件的结果和自己的想法TheFirstAidHeroinCommunityTheset-up:Theconflict(s):Conclusion:WhowerethepeopleinvolvedWhathappenedWheredidithappenWantedtoseethemovieShouldwehelpThemanwasnotbreathingWashealiveCouldhebesavedCouldIremembermytrainingWoulditwork“It'sagreathonortosavealife.
It'salsoagreathonortopayitforward.”Revise
Finally,wehadachancetosee‘PayitForward’.MyfriendMaryandIwereonourwaytothecinematoseeamoviewehadtalkedaboutforages.Almostthere,wesawanoldman________(sit)onthepavementoutsidethehot-potrestaurant.___________________________.TheFirstAidHeroinCommunity:_______________________PayitForwardsittingHelookedindistress.Theset-upWho:Mary,Iand
anoldmanWhat:toseeamovieWhere:incommunity
Iwantedtohelphim,butMarythoughthemightjustbedrunkandwewouldbelatetoseethemovie.IreallycouldnotignorethefactthathemaybeintroubleandIalsohadrecentlyfinishedafirst-aidcourse.______________________________________________________________.Themanwasalmostunconcious.Hewas______________________________________(手按着喉咙满脸通红).Ispoketohimbuthecouldnotspeak.Iopenedhismouthbutcouldseenoobstructions.________________________________.Itriedhardtoremembermyrecenttraining.________(try)hardtorecalltheHeimlichmanoeuvre,I______________________.___________________,_______________________________________________________________________Wewastednotimeanddecidedtoseewhatwasthematterwithhim.holdinghisthroatwithfaceturningredIslappedhimontheback.Nothing.Trying
helpedhimtohisfeetStandingbehindhimIwrappedmyarmsaroundhiswaistandperformedtheHeimlichmanoeuvre.Theconflict(s)WantedtoseethemovieShouldwehelp?ThemanwasnotbreathingWashealive?Couldhebesaved?CouldIremembermytraining?Woulditwork?Revise
Themancoughedandspatoutalargelumpoffood.Westayedwithhimasherecoveredfromtheshock.WehadofcoursemissedthemoviebutIwaspleasedthatIhadbeenabletousemytrainingtosavesomeone’slife.Afewdayslater,wereceivedaVIPseasonpasstothecinemafromthegratefulman.Icouldnothelp_________(think)aboutthequoteourteacheratthefirstaidschoolhadkeptusing“_______________________________________________________________________________________.”
thinkingIt’sagreathonortosavealife.It'salsoagreathonortopayitforward.ConclusionThemanwassaved.Wegotaseasonticketforthecinema.“It’sagreathonortosavealife.
It’salsoagreathonortopayitforward.”Revise佳作赏析
TheFirstAidHeroinCommunity:
PayitForwardFinally,wehadachancetosee‘PayitForward’.MyfriendMaryandIwereonourwaytothecinematoseeamoviewehadtalkedaboutforages.Almostthere,wesawanoldmansittingonthepavementoutsidethehot-potrestaurant.Helookedindistress.Iwantedtohelphim,butMarythoughthemightjustbedrunkandwewouldbelatetoseethemovie.IreallycouldnotignorethefactthathemaybeintroubleandIalsohadrecentlyfinishedafirst-aidcourse.Wewastednotimeanddecidedtoseewhatwasthematterwithhim.Themanwasalmostunconscious.
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