读后续写-人与动物主题 课件-高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写个人成长

人与动物续写文本（2024年南阳市期中考试高一英语）

Onesunnyday,Alex,ayoungboy,waswalkinghomefromschoolwhenhenoticedsomethingunusual.Asmall,scruffy(邋遢的)dogwassittingalonebythesideoftheroad,itseyes fulloffearandconfusion.Thepoordoglookedlostandhungry.Alexfeltasenseofempathy(同情)inhisheartashewalkedtowardsthedogslowly,offeringitapieceofhissandwich.

Themomentthedogcautiouslytookthefoodfromhishand,Alex'sheartmelted.Hecould

seethatthedogwasaloneandscared,andheknewhecouldn'tjustleaveitthere.Withoutasecond thought,Alexdecidedtotakethedoghome.Hecarefullyhidthedoginthegarage,hopinghis

fatherwouldn'tfindout.

Fordays,Alexspentallhissparetimeinthegarage,playingwiththedog.Henamedthedog

Max,andtheyquicklybecameclosefriends.Theirbondgrewstrongerdaybydayastheyshared

countlessadventurestogether.MaxbroughtsomuchjoyintoAlex'slife.

Oneday,Alex'sfatherdiscoveredtheirsecret.HewassurprisedandtoldtheboytoputMax

backonthestreet,thinkingitwasforthebest.Withaheavyheart,Alexdidashewastold.Heleft

Maxatthepark,hopingthatsomeoneelsewouldfindhimandgivehimalovinghome.Butashe

walkedaway,hisheartachedwithsadness,tearswellingupinhiseyes.

Alexwasheartbroken.HemissedMaxterriblyandfoundithardtofocusonanythingelse.

Hisgradesstartedtoslip(下滑),andhebecamequietandsilent.Hisusualcheerfulnesshad

disappeared,replacedbydeepsadnessthatseemedtoswallowhimwhole.Seeingthis,hisfatherrealizedhowmuchMaxmeanttoAlex.(1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答

ThefatherdecidedtobringMaxback_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

TheboytookfullresponsibilityforMax._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ReadforthecharactersAlexMaxayoungboy,noticedalostdogandbroughtithome,withwhomhehadajoyfultimealostdogcameacrossAlexwhotreateditasgoodfriendsecretlyAlex’sfatherdisagreedwithkeepingthedogathomeandaskedputMaxbackonthestreet2RReadfortheplotandemotionalchangesplotmountain

climax冲突最大化，也是情节转折点AlexcameacrossalostdogandoffereditfoodAlexdecidedtobringithomeandhidthedogAlexnameditMax,andbondgrewstrongerdaybydayAlex’sfatherfoundMaxandaskedAlex’sputMaxbacktothestreet,Alex’sdid.ItbroughtabadinfluenceonAlex,andhisfatherrealizedthis.爸爸决定把Max带回来。Alex见到后会作何反应？Alex以后照顾狗狗，这对于他的成长有何作用？主旨在哪里？worriedpitifulhappyanddelightedsadandsorrowheartbroken

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Thebondbetweenhumansandanimalsisbuiltonlove,trustandmutualrespect,enrichingbothlives.Readforlanguage

Onesunnyday,Alex,ayoungboy,waswalkinghomefromschoolwhenhenoticed

somethingunusual.Asmall,scruffy(邋遢的)dogwassittingalonebythesideoftheroad,itseyes

fulloffearandconfusion.Thepoordoglookedlostandhungry.Alexfeltasenseofempathy(同情)inhisheartashewalkedtowardsthedogslowly,offeringitapieceofhissandwich.

Themomentthedogcautiouslytookthefoodfromhishand,Alex'sheartmelted.Hecould

seethatthedogwasaloneandscared,andheknewhecouldn'tjustleaveitthere.Withoutasecond thought,Alexdecidedtotakethedoghome.Hecarefullyhidthedoginthegarage,hopinghis

fatherwouldn'tfindout.bedoing...when独立主格with复合结构

Fordays,Alexspentallhissparetimeinthegarage,playingwiththedog.Henamedthedog

Max,andtheyquicklybecameclosefriends.Theirbondgrewstrongerdaybydayastheyshared

countlessadventurestogether.MaxbroughtsomuchjoyintoAlex'slife.

Oneday,Alex'sfatherdiscoveredtheirsecret.HewassurprisedandtoldtheboytoputMax

backonthestreet,thinkingitwasforthebest.Withaheavyheart,Alexdidashewastold.Heleft

Maxatthepark,hopingthatsomeoneelsewouldfind

himandgivehimalovinghome.Butashe

walkedaway,hisheartachedwithsadness,tearswellingupinhiseyes.

Alexwasheartbroken.HemissedMaxterriblyandfoundithardtofocusonanythingelse.

Hisgradesstartedtoslip(下滑),andhebecamequietandsilent.Hisusualcheerfulnesshad

disappeared,replacedbydeepsadnessthatseemedtoswallowhimwhole.Seeingthis,hisfatherrealizedhowmuchMaxmeanttoAlex.主语+谓语+其他，非谓语动词独立主格故事梗概:小男孩Alex在放学路上看到一只邋遢的小狗，心生同情，给小狗一块三明治后，决定把小狗带回，藏在车库里。他们很快成为了好朋友。然而，父亲发现了这个秘密后，要求放回小狗。Alex虽不情愿但照做了，他伤心不已，成绩下滑。父亲看到Alex的变化后意识到了小狗对他的重要性。Readthe2givensentences推测续写情节ThefatherdecidedtobringMaxback父亲努力寻找小狗Max的过程及成功寻回小狗并将其带回家后的场景。由第一段首句及第二段首句推测:父亲寻找小狗，并将其带回。写作难点:父亲如何找到小狗?Alex见到小狗作何反应?注意最后一句与第二段首句的衔接。TheboytookfullresponsibilityforMaxAlex认真照顾小狗，产生巨大变化，父亲认识到小狗对Alex的积极影响，Alex也懂得了人与动物的相互依存。由第二段首句推测:Alex悉心照料小狗。写作难点:Alex如何照顾小狗?产生什么改变?父亲和Alex学到了什么?动作和情感细节描写1.他不遗余力的寻找小狗，但是徒劳。2.疲惫但是快乐，爸爸带着小狗回了家。3.他松了一口气当他在公园看到小狗时候。4.Alex跪下来拥抱了小狗。HedecidedtobringMaxback.HewenttoextraordinarylengthstosearchforthedoginthenearbyblocksbutinvainExhaustedbutjoyful,thefatherbroughtMaxhome.HebreathedasighofreliefthemomenthesawMaxwanderinginthepark.AlexkneltdownandhuggedMaxtight.

ThefatherdecidedtobringMaxback.He________(不遗余力)tosearchforthedoginthenearbyblocksbut_______(徒劳地).ItsuddenlycrossedhismindthatmaybeMaxwouldhavereturnedtothepark.He______(松了一口气)themomenthesawMaxwanderinginthepark.Thesettingsun___________(投射出橙色光芒)overthem.

(疲惫但快乐)_________,thefatherbroughtMaxhome.

(一看到)_______Max,soamazedwasAlex______herushedforward,knelt

downandhuggedMaxtight,hiseyes_______(twinkle)withexcitement.Fromthenon,Maxbecamean________(不可或缺的)partoftheirfamily.小试牛刀

TheboytookfullresponsibilityforMax.Tiring

feeding,bathingandwalkingMaxwere,hegained_____________(一种成就感)fromthesepuppycare____(杂务).ThedaysofMax'scompanywitnessedAlex's________________(更加发自内心的笑声)and(循序渐进的学习进步)_______.__dawnedonthefatherthatMaxhelpedAlexbuildconfidenceandtaughthimaboutresponsibilityand_______(同情).Haditnotbeenforthisexperience,Alex________(永远不会知道)thebondbetweenhumansandanimalsisbuiltonlove,trustand___(相互的)respect,________(enrich)bothlives.核对答案：

ThefatherdecidedtobringMaxback.Hewenttoextraordinarylengthstosearchforthedoginthenearbyblocksbutinvain.ItsuddenlycrossedhismindthatmaybeMaxwouldhavereturnedtothepark.HebreathedasighofreliefthemomenthesawMaxwanderinginthepark.Thesettingsuncastanorangeglowoverthem