强基联盟 高三上学期10月联考读后续写分析讲义

强基联盟读后续写分析Ahigh-pitchedscreamstoppedLauraDouglasinhertracks.Spinningaroundonthenarrowdirtpath,shethoughtthathercousinCassiewasindanger.Instead,Cassiewasknee-deepinflowersthatcoveredthemeadow（草地）likeaquilt.“Cassie!Youscaredmetodeath!”Laurascolded,hervoiceechoingthroughthemeadow.“Iamsorry,”Cassie,absorbedinherphotography,didn'tnoticethethickfogrollingin,consumingthenearbymountains.“Notagain!”Lauracomplained,hereyesshiftingtotheapproachingclouds.“Wegottago!”Cassie'sfocusremainedonhercamera,capturingtheshort-livedbeautyofthemoment.Lauratiedaredscarfaroundherhair,“Let'sgobacktothecampsite.”Thegirlsquicklyrandownthewindingpath,themeadownowcoveredbyathickfogandasteady,coldrain.Theroadturnedslippery,andtheyhadtomoveslowlytoavoidslidingdown.“It'sdangerous!Weneedshelternow!”Cassiescreamedafteraloudcrackofthunder,thestorm'sstrengthincreasingrapidly.Laura'skeeneyesfoundasmallcaveintherockface,partlyhiddenbyoverhangingbranches.Itwasn'tmuch,butitofferedachancetoescapetherain.“Cassie,overhere!”Lauracalledout,hervoicebarelycarryingoverthewind.Cassie,wetandshaking,stumbledtowardstheplaceofLaura'svoice.Assheapproached,shecouldseetheshelter.Itwasn'tperfect,butitwasbetterthannothing.“Smartthinking,Laura,”Cassiesaid,herteethchattering（打颤）withcoldasshepressedherbackpackclosetoherchest.Thebackpack,atoughandwaterproof（防水的）model,hadbeenagiftfromherfather,anexperiencedhikerwhohadinsistedonitsnumerouspocketsandsectionsforemergencysupplies.Littledidtheyknow,hisadvicewouldproveinvaluableonthisday.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。“Checkyourbackpack,”Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.前四段的环境描写都可以呼应微信公众号ClassroomMissYan1)Cassiewasknee-deepinflowersthatcoveredthemeadow（草地）likeaquilt.这里把花海比做被子，后面可以沿用这个比喻比如：Littledropletsofwaterwerestillhangingonthepetalofflowers,glitteringinthesilvermoonlightliketinydiamondsdecoratingcolorfulmeadow,creatingamostgorgeousandfascinatingquiltintheworld.微信公众号ClassroomMissYanCassie,absorbedinherphotography,didn'tnoticethethickfogrollingin,consumingthenearbymountains.这里提到有浓雾，后面应该云雾消散，很多暴风雨的场景可以反着写一写比如：Thethickandblindingfogeventuallydispersed,revealingtheentirelydifferentsightofthemeadow.微信公众号ClassroomMissYan(其他自己想)Thebackpack,atoughandwaterproof（防水的）model,hadbeenagiftfromherfather,anexperiencedhikerwhohadinsistedonitsnumerouspocketsandsectionsforemergencysupplies.前面提到主角是又冷又被淋湿了，躲在小山洞里面。这边爸爸的背包里面有哪一些emergencysupplies可以用呢？这里可以自己自由发挥。“Let'sgobacktothecampsite.”Thegirlsquicklyrandownthewindingpath,themeadownowcoveredbyathickfogandasteady,coldrain.Theroadturnedslippery,andtheyhadtomoveslowlytoavoidslidingdown.微信公众号ClassroomMissYan这里是蜿蜒的湿滑的小路，最后他们怎么回到露营地的呢？下水作文“Checkyourbackpack,”Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful.Laura’swordsremindedCassieoftheemergencysuppliesherfatherinsistedontaking.Withoutanydelay,sheunzippedallthepocketsofthebackpack,fumblingoutallthesuppliesinadesperateattempttofindsomethinguseful.Fortunately,amongthemwereablanket,aflintandaflashlight.Wrappingthemselvesintheblanket,theyhuddledtogether,withalittlefiretokeepthemwarm.Althoughtheferociouswindwashowlinglikewolves,andtherainwasbeatingagainstthebranchesoutsidetheshelterruthlessly,theyfeltsafeandwarmatthemomentallbecauseoftheirfather’sforesight.(95)微信公众号ClassroomMissYanAsnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.Silvermoonlightdispersedthedarkcloudintheskyandthickfogonthemeadow,filteringthroughthebranchesandintothelittlecavetheywerehiding.“letgetbacktocampsiteorourfriendsmaygetworried,”Laurasuggested.Afterpackingeverythingup,theyhittheroadwithaflashlightandacompassintheirhands.Theflashlightlitupthewindingpathtowardtheircampsite,illuminatingeverysmallpuddleofwatertheys