高考英语复习读后续写练习+小镇少年的舞台逐梦之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习小镇少年的舞台逐梦之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文AteenageboynamedJoellivedinasmallfarawaytown.Joelwasanambitiousrapperwhospentcountlesshoursinhisbedroomwritinglyrics(歌词)andperfectinghisflow.Butheneverperformedonstage.Hisdreamwastomakeitbiginthemusicindustryandsharehispassionforrapwiththeworld.Hehopedthatonedayhisdreamwouldbecomeareality.Littledidheknowthisdreamwasabouttocometrueinthemostunexpectedway.Onesunnyafternoon,Joelwaswalkingthroughhisneighborhoodwhenheheardboomingmusiccomingfromanearbypark.Interested,hefollowedthesoundanddiscoveredacrowdofpeoplegatheredaroundastage.Tohissurprise,thefamousrapperLattowasintownandperforminghershowforthecommunity.JoelhadalwaysbeenLatto’sfaithfulfan.He’dliketobecomearapperlikeher.Pushinghiswaythroughthecrowd,Lattocametofrontofthestage.4续写原文Joel’sheartracedwithexcitementashewatchedLattoappealtotheaudiencewithhercharminglyricsandundeniabletalent.Hewavedhisarmsandcheeredloudlytogetherwithallthepeoplepresent.Allofasudden,afearlessideasuddenlyoccurredtohim.Inspiredbyherperformance,Joeldecidedtoseizetheopportunityandshowhisskillsbeforehisidol(偶像).Joelwentuptotheeventorganizerandexplainedhispassionforrap,hopingtobegivenachancetoperform.ImpressedbyJoel’senthusiasmanddetermination,theeventorganizeragreedtolethimperformashortsetafterLattofinishedherperformance.Joelwasoverjoyedandspenttheremainingtimepractising,makingsurehewasreadytodeliveranunforgettableperformance.Heprayed(祈祷)atthebottomofhisheartthathewouldsucceedlikeLatto.Lattoendedhershowandthecrowdbrokeup.5段首句Para1:Joelsteppedontothestage,hisheartbeatingwildly.Para2:WitnessingJoel’sincredibleperformance,Lattoapproachedhim.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个名叫乔尔的十几岁男孩住在一个遥远的小镇上。乔尔是一个雄心勃勃的说唱歌手，他花了无数的时间在卧室里写歌词，完善自己的流畅度。但他从未在舞台上表演过。他的梦想是在音乐行业取得成功，并与世界分享他对说唱的热情。他希望有一天他的梦想能成为现实。直到某天他遇到了自己的偶像歌手拉托，在拉托的鼓励下，乔尔参加了表演，得到了观众的认可。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:Joelsteppedontothestage,hisheartbeatingwildly.由第一段首句内容“乔尔走上舞台，他心狂跳”可知，第一段可描写乔尔表演的经过以及观众的反应。10续写思路分析Para2：WitnessingJoel’sincredibleperformance,Lattoapproachedhim.由第二段首句内容“看到乔尔令人难以置信的表演，拉托走近他”可知，第二段可描写拉托给乔尔建议，两人成为朋友。11续写思路分析故事的发展方向人物与梦想Joel，居住在偏远小镇，热爱说唱，梦想在音乐界大放异彩。意外机遇偶遇Latto演出，受其感染，大胆向组织者自荐。积极筹备获表演机会后，抓紧练习，期待出色发挥。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Joelsteppedontothestage,hisheartbeatingwildly.Closinghiseyesbriefly,hevisualizedhimselfperformingflawlessly.Whenheopenedhiseyes,helaunchedintohisrapwithconfidence.Hislyrics,filledwithstoriesofhishometownandhisjourney,flowedsmoothly.Hemovedwithrhythm,engagingtheaudiencewithhisenergy.Thepeopleintheparkwereamazedbythisyoungtalentwhohademergedfromtheirmidst.Hisperformancewaslikeaboltoflightning,electrifyingtheatmosphere.14范文呈现WitnessingJoel’sincredibleperformance,Lattoapproachedhim.ShewasclearlyimpressedandtoldJoelthathehadanaturalgift.Lattoofferedtocollaboratewithhimonafutureproject,whichsentshockwavesthroughthecrowd.ThisopportunitywasbeyondJoel’swildestdreams.WithLatto’ssupport,Joelknewhehadarealchancetomakeitinthemusicindustry.Fromthatdayon,heworkedtirelessly,knowingthathisencounterwithLattohadsethimonapathtoachievinghisultimategoalofsharinghispassionforrapwiththeworld.15升级版范文呈现Joelsteppedontothestage,hisheartbeatingwildly.Closinghiseyesbriefly,hevisualizedhimselfperformingflawlessly.Whenheopenedhiseyes,helaunchedintohisrapwithconfidence.Hislyrics,filledwithstoriesofhishometownandhisjourney,flowedsmoothly.Hemovedwithrhythm,engagingtheaudiencewithhisenergy.Thepeopleintheparkwereamazedbythisyoungtalentwhohademergedfromtheirmidst.Hisperformancewaslikeaboltoflightning,electrifyingtheatmosphere.16升级版范文呈现WitnessingJoel’sincredibleperformance,Lattoapproachedhim.ShewasclearlyimpressedandtoldJoelthathehadanaturalgift.Lattoofferedtocollaboratewithhimonafutureproject,whichsentshockwavesthroughthecrowd.ThisopportunitywasbeyondJoel’swildestdreams.WithLatto’ssupport,Joelknewhehadarealchancetomakeitinthemusicindustry.Fromthatdayon,heworkedtirelessly,kn