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高考英语读后续写语篇练习忙碌的夏天:三重任务的挑战与成长1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IknewIwouldhaveabeyond-busysummerIwouldbeajuniorteacherfortheLittleDragonsKarate(空手道)Camp.AndIhadtodosummerswimteam.AndOllieandIalreadyhadtwocustomersforourdog-walkingbusiness,“Youmightbebitingoffmorethanyoucanchew,”mymomsaidwithawarningglimpsewhenItalkedtoheraboutitandannounced,“Iwanttodoeverything!”“Don'tworry.”Igrinned“Ihavestrongteeth!”Mymomsmiledback.“Inthiscase,it'syourorganizationalskills,notyourteeth,thatneedtobestrong.”Ididn'ttakeittomyheart.4续写原文Andthefirstweekreallywasnoproblem.MyfriendOlliewasoutoftownandkaratecamphadn'tstarted,somyswimstuffwasallIneededtoworryabout.Thenextweekwasgreattoo.Iswam,andaLittleDragonatkaratecamptoldmeIwashisfavoriteteacherever!Ididlearn,though,thatstayingorganizedwithtwoactivitieswasharder.Mybackpackwasalreadystuffedwithatowelandswimthings,soIneededanotherformykarateclothing.Ridingmybikefromkaratecamptothepoolwithtwobackpackswasachallenge.ButIstillhaditundercontroluntilOlliegotback.“We’relategettingourbusinesstogether!”hesaid.“We’llhavetospendeveryspareminutepreparing.”“ButIdon'thaveanyspareminutes!”Isaid.5续写原文“DidyouforgetweagreedtowalkAlfieeverySaturday?AndMuffinonTuesdaysat4:00?”Ollieasked.Icouldn'tletOlliedown,soItookoutathirdbackpackandfilleditwithdogtoys,treats,andplasticbags.IthoughtIwasallset.ButIwaswrong!Itdidn'ttakelongformydog-walkingstuffandkaratestuffandswimstufftogetallmixedup,forgotten,orlost.Oneday,IforgotmykaratebackpackandhadtoborrowEmma'sextraoutfit,whichwastootight.Thenextday,Irememberedmykaratestuffbutforgotmyswimsuit,soIhadtohelpoutinthesnackshopandstayoutofthepoolallafternoon.Andanothertime,whenIreachedintomydog-walkingpackforplasticbags,allIcouldfindwereswimgoggles(护目镜)andsunscreen.6段首句Paragraph1:Worsestill,Ihadtokeeptrackofallthespecialtimes.Paragraph2:Luckily,I,withmyparents,cameupwithasolutiontogetorganized.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开,文章讲述作者成为了小龙空手道训练营的初级老师,负责遛狗,空手道和游泳的业务,过了一段时间,作者发现总是不能安排好这几项业务。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1Worsestill,Ihadtokeeptrackofallthespecialtimes.“更糟糕的是,我还得记住所有特别的时间”,故事的发展方向可以推测为主人公逐渐发现自己承担的任务越来越多,时间越来越紧张,导致无法高效地管理所有活动的时间安排,可能会因为记错或安排不当而出现更多的困扰或冲突。11续写思路分析Para2:Luckily,I,withmyparents,cameupwithasolutiontogetorganized.“幸运的是,我和父母一起想出了一个方法来保持有序”,可以推测,故事的结局可能会转向解决问题的方式,主人公意识到单靠自己无法应对一切,于是和父母商量制定了更合理的时间表或工具(例如制定日程表、使用提醒工具或分担任务),帮助主人公将所有的活动重新组织起来。12续写思路分析故事的发展方向主人公学会了如何平衡各项任务,并且通过与父母和朋友的合作,最终不仅能够高效完成所有事情,而且收获了成长和组织能力的提升。13续写思路分析故事的结局Thisconclusionresolvesthetensionaroundmanagingtimeandresponsibilities,showingthatthecharacter'shardworkandwillingnesstoseekhelpleadstoamorebalanced,organizedlife.Italsooffersasenseofgrowth,wherethecharacterlearnsthevalueofplanningandprioritizing.14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Worsestill,Ihadtokeeptrackofallthespecialtimes.IhadtoarriveearlyforthekaratetestonMonday.IhadtostaylatertohelpwithswimmingpoolcleanuponFriday.IhadtopickupAlfie15minutesearlyonSaturday.IhadtowalkMuffinonTuesdayafternoons.Iranaroundlikeachickenwithitsheadoff,onthevergeofbreakingdown.ItwasthenthatIrecalledmymother'swarning.Althoughembarrassedbeyondwords,Iworkedupthenerveandwalkedtomyparents,makingacleanbreastofmytroubleandcallingforbackup.16范文呈现Luckily,I,withmyparents,cameupwithasolutiontogetorganized.Westartedwithacalendar,onwhichImarkedallmytaskswitharedmarker.Thenwefoundthreebagsrespectivelyusedformydog-walkingstuff,karatestuffandswimstuff.WealsoputawhiteboardinthekitchentomakesurethatItooktherightbagontheappropriateday.Fromthenon,mybeyond-busysummerwassmoothsailing,duringwhichIlearnedavaluablelesson:Ifyoutriedtousethedog'sropeasyourkaratebelt,it'stimetoimproveyourorganizationalskill17升级版范文呈现Worsestill,Ihadtokeeptrackofallthespecialtimes.Itwasliketryingtojuggleadozenclocks,eachtickinginadifferentdirection.Withkaratecamp,swimmingpractice,anddog-walkingshifts,Ifoundmyselfconstantlycheckingmyphoneforschedules.ThereweretimeswhenIhadnoideawhetherIwassupposedtobeatthepooloronawalk,andworse,I’dmissappointmentsorshowuplate.ThemoreItriedtokeepup,themoreconfusedIbecame.EvenOllienoticed,andhe’dask,“Areyousureyou’reokay?You’relookingabitfrazzled.”Tobehonest,Iwasoverwhelmed,andIknewitwastimetodosomethingbeforeitallcamecrashingdown.18升级版范文呈现Luckily,I,withmyparents,cameupwithasolutiontogetorganized.Oneevening,afteryetanotherstressfuldayofscramblingtofindmyswimgear,mymomsuggestedcreatingadailyplanner.Wesatdownandworkedoutadetailedscheduleforeachactivity,color-codingittokeepeverythingclear.Ievenhadadesignatedspotformybackpacks,oneforeachactivity.Mydad,who’salwaysbeengoodwithtechnology,helpedmesetremindersonmyphone,soIwouldn'tforgetthesmallertaskslikefeedingthedogsorpickinguptreats.Soon,every

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