专题05-1 读后续写高分句式之动作链句式（含答案解析）

专题05-1读后续写高分句式（解析版）动作链高分句式动作链高分句式记叙文中的动作描写既能够推动故事情节的发展，也能够塑造人物形象及性格。但是，笼统的动作描写难以达到这样的效果。因此，要构建生动的故事情节、塑造丰满的人物形象，就需要学会精细化地进行动作描写，将动作分解成可陈述的连贯片段，串联成动作链，从而构建生动、立体的画面。构建公式1动词的三联动：谓语动词A＋B＋and＋C高考典例1.(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.一下飞机，我就疯狂地跑过机场大楼，毫不犹豫地跳进了排在第一位的出租车。2.(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.Gunter把出租车停在公交车后面，转过身来，脸上带着大大的笑容看着我。3.(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."我跳下车，疯狂地冲向那台机器，把卡插进去，却只看到屏幕上显示“故障中，抱歉”。4.(2023·浙江1月卷)Hegatheredhandfulsofdamptreeleaves,wrappedthemwithstring,andlitthebunchtocreateatorch.他收集了几把潮湿的树叶，用绳子把它们捆在一起，并点燃了一束做成火把。仿写练习1.我艰难地说完，盯着里的卡，然后抬头看着他的眼睛，带着羞愧和尴尬。____________________________________________________________________________________________2.我向Gunter挥手，大步走过去(stride)，一把揽住他(gather)，用力拥抱(embrace)。____________________________________________________________________________________________3.Gunter捞出了他的小手机,拍了拍(pat)我的肩膀，笑道“合个影吧”。____________________________________________________________________________________________4.那位女士只是笑了笑，告诉我的母亲这是一份礼物，还没等她说更多就离开了。____________________________________________________________________________________________5.我们乘坐一辆旧吉普车穿过茂密的丛林，欣赏美丽的景色，聆听动物的叫声。____________________________________________________________________________________________6.他立即上前安慰我，然后建议打电话寻找我丢失的钱包。____________________________________________________________________________________________7.这对双胞胎早早地起床，蹑手蹑脚地走到厨房，开始为他们亲爱的妈妈做一顿美味的早餐。____________________________________________________________________________________________8.然后他们端上早餐，上楼叫醒了妈妈。____________________________________________________________________________________________9.阿里赢得了三等奖，获得了新鞋，像鸟儿一样飞奔回家。____________________________________________________________________________________________10.他拦停下出租车，提着箱子跳上了车，对司机说：“请到警察局去。”____________________________________________________________________________________________11.那个绝望的女人擦了擦眼泪，抬起眼睛盯着天花板。____________________________________________________________________________________________12.男孩们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服跳进水里。____________________________________________________________________________________________13.这个歌手瞥了一眼观众，深吸了一口气，开始唱歌。____________________________________________________________________________________________14.他们跨过大河和辽阔的平原，爬上高山，俯瞰深谷。____________________________________________________________________________________________15.他把手伸进口袋，掏出一把零钱，递给店员。____________________________________________________________________________________________16.他穿上外套，气冲冲地走了出去，砰地关上了门。____________________________________________________________________________________________17.我跑出房间，疯狂地向公共汽车跑去，在车开动前跳上了车。____________________________________________________________________________________________18.他笑了笑，深吸了一口气，为比赛做好了准备。____________________________________________________________________________________________19.她跳起来，冲上前，紧紧地拥抱了男孩。____________________________________________________________________________________________20.她沿着小路爬行，迅速弯下腰，用手轻轻地捧住蝴蝶。____________________________________________________________________________________________21.瑞安挣扎着站起来，掸去夹克上的灰尘，走向一个空座位。____________________________________________________________________________________________22莫莉兴奋地拉开抽屉，拿出书，立刻从柜台走了出来。____________________________________________________________________________________________答案1.Ifinishedmywordswithdifficulty,staredatthecardinmyhand,andthenlookedupintohiseyeswithshameandembarrassment.2.IwavedatGunter,strodetohim,andgatheredhimintomyarmswithastrongembrace.3.Gunterfishedouthislittlephone,pattedonmyshoulderandsmiled“Let'stakeapicturetogether!”4.Thewomanjustsmiled,toldmymotheritwasagiftandleftbeforeshecouldsaymore．5.Wetravelledthroughthethickjungleinanoldjeep,enjoyedthebeautifulviewsandlistenedtothecallsoftheanimals.6.Heimmediatelycameforward,comfortedmeandthensuggestedmakingcallsformylostwallet.7.

Thetwinsgotupearly,tiptoedtothekitchenandsettleddowntocookingadeliciousbreakfastfortheirbelovedmother.8.Thentheycarriedthebreakfast,advancedupstairsandwokeuptheirmother.Aliwonthirdprize,gotthenewshoesandflewtohishomelikeabird.10.He

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thedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”11.Thedesperatewomanwipedhertears,liftedhereyesandfocusedhereyesontheceiling.12.Theboysrushedexcitedlytothelake,tookofftheirclothesandjumpedintothewater.13.Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.14.They

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thebusandjumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdeparture.18.Hesmiled,tookadeepbreathandgotreadyfor

therace.19.Shejumpedup,dashedforwardandhuggedtheboytightly.20.Shecreptalongthepath,bentoverswiftlyandcuppedherhandsaroundthebutterflygently.21.Ryanstruggledtohisfeet,dustedthejacketandmadehiswaytoanemptyseat.22.Mollyexcitedlypulledthedraweropen,tookoutthebookandwalkedoutfromthecounterimmediately.构建公式2非谓语动词高考典例翻译练习(2023·全国甲卷)WhenDerekbuiltourfamilyhouseabouteightyearsago,Iwasheavilyinvolved,paintingtheroomsandputtingdowntheflooringthroughoutthehouse.当德里克大约八年前建造我们家的房子时，我参与了大量的工作，粉刷房间并铺好整个房间的地板。1.由于经济衰退，我的父亲失业了，使我们家的情况更糟糕了。Astheeconomywasindecline,myfatherlosthisjob,leavingourfamilyevenworseoff．2.我非常感动，把发生的事情发到了网上，表达了我真诚的感谢，并希望能与她结识。IwassomovedthatIpostedwhathadhappenedonline，expressingmysinceregratitudeandhopingtomakeacquaintancewithher．3.为了庆祝我们的十周年纪念日，我和丈夫预定了去墨西哥的旅行。Tocelebrateourtenthanniversary,myhusbandandIbookedatriptoMexico.4.观众们被他们的表演深深打动，爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。Deeplymovedbytheirperformance,brokeinto.非谓语动词doing,havingdone和done作状语时，主要表示原因、结果或伴随动作。doing/havingdone形式所表达的动作与主语之间构成主动关系，done则构成被动关系。句型公式：①主语十didsth,doing...②Doing...，主语+didsth仿写练习1.当意识到我是金牌得主时，惊讶和难以置信的感觉包围了我。（2023・新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________2.“非常感谢您，我亲爱的老师，”我用温柔的声音说道，低下头来吸引老师的注意。（2023・新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________3.感觉非常开心，我可以立刻想象我的家人骄傲地拥抱我的情景。（2023新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________4.我向他点点头，鼓励大卫参加大型越野赛。（2023・新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________5.我感到紧张和焦虑，我一直在想，如何才能在不被人注意的情况下离开电影院。____________________________________________________________________________________________6.被疯狂的喜悦所淹没，我站起来，挥舞着拳头，大声喊道：“我成功了！”（2023•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________7.在我的话的鼓舞下，大卫用闪闪发光的眼睛看着我，可爱的脸上露出灿烂的微笑。（2023•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________8.在欢呼声中，我在记者的镜头前和众多家长和学生的目光下接受了金牌。（2023•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________9.受热情和鼓舞的激励，大卫干劲满满地加快了步伐。（2022•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________10.被他的精神所感动，我跟着他，一路上为他加油。（2022•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________11.带着疲惫感起床后，我检查了一下邮箱，并未带有任何期望。（2023•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________12.因虚弱而在医院接受了治疗后，他完全康复了！____________________________________________________________________________________________13.大卫权衡了我的话后，低声而坚定地说：“我想跑！”（2022•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________14.经过反复考虑，我提到了一些因他的决心和毅力而赢得人们赞扬的事件。（2022•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________15.读完日记后，儿子泪流满面，开始回忆起他过去和父亲坐在一起的日子。____________________________________________________________________________________________答案1.RealizingthatIwasthewinnerofthegoldmedal,Iwassurroundedbysurpriseanddisbelief.2."Thankyouverymuch,mydearteacher,"Isaidinagentlevoice,loweringmyheadtocatchmyteacher'sattention.3.Feelingontopoftheworld,Icouldinstantlypicturemyfamilymembershuggingmewithpride.4.

Inoddedathim,encouragingDavidtoparticipateinthebigcross-countryrun.5.Feelingnervousandanxious,IkeptwonderinghowIcouldleavethecinemawithoutbeingnoticed.6.Overwhelmedbywildjo