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阅读下面材料,根据其内容及所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Christmaswasapproaching,andIhadnoideawhattogetformywife.WehadjustmovedtoItaly.Donnawasawayattendinganimportantmeeting,soIhadtherestoftheweektofigureoutwhattogetherasaChristmasgiftbeforeshegotback.MyhousepartnerwhileDonnawasawaywashercat,Princess,whowaseverythingthathernameimplied.IwaskeepingPrincessindoorsinournewhomeuntilshebecamefamiliarwiththeplaceandthenplannedtoslowlyintroducehertothegreatoutdoors.Princesshadotherideas,andslippedoutofthehouseasIwasbringinginsomefood.BythetimeIhadturnedaroundandgonebackoutofthedoortolookforher,shewasgone.DonnawouldbebackinafewdaysanditwouldruinChristmasforbothofusifPrincesswasnotbackbythen,safeandsound.DonnahadalreadyexcitedlytoldmeoverthephonethatshehadfoundseveralfuntoysanddelicioussnacksforPrincessasChristmasgifts.Shecouldn’twaittogetbackandwrapthemup.Iwasinbigtrouble.IhadtofindPrincessassoonaspossible.So,ImadeupaposterofthecatthatIpersonallydrewbecauseIcouldn’tfindaphotoofheranywhere.Iwassuremywifehadhundredsonherphone,butIdidn’tdareaskherforone.Perhapsbecausemyposterwerenotsoclear,soonpeopleintheareacametomyhousewithseveralhomelesscats.ThoughPrincesswasn’tamongthem,Iletthemstayinouryard.IfiguredDonnawouldunderstand.Donna’shappydailycallscontinued,asdidmydailysearchesforPrincess.Istillhadn’tmentionedanythingaboutthedisappearancetomywife.Finally,thedaycameformywifetoreturn.注意:1.续写词数应为100左右;2.开头已给出。Paragraph1:Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:WhenDonnasawthehomelesscatsintheyard,hereyesjustfilledwithtears.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意圣诞节快到了,妻子唐娜(Donna)外出开会,我要为她准备圣诞礼物。唐娜不在时,她的猫公主(Princess)溜出了家门。我知道如果在唐娜回来前找不回公主,这个圣诞节就毁了,因为唐娜已经为公主准备了圣诞礼物。我找不到公主的照片,就自己画了海报寻找,虽然没找到公主,但收留了一些被送来的流浪猫。唐娜每天都开心地和我打电话,而我一直在找公主,没敢告诉她猫丢了,终于到了唐娜回来的日子。伏笔与续写回应伏笔:我不敢向妻子要公主的照片。续写中我向妻子坦白猫丢了的事,解释了没要照片的原因,回应了这个伏笔,推动情节发展。伏笔:我收留了流浪猫。续写中妻子看到流浪猫后流泪,我的解释和妻子的反应都围绕这个伏笔展开,体现了我们的善良。续写要点第一段情感线:忐忑、愧疚。我在机场接妻子时决定坦白,心里忐忑不安,因弄丢公主而愧疚,向妻子讲述事情经过和自己的努力。故事线:描述在机场接妻子时我的紧张心情,如实告诉她公主走失了,以及我制作海报、收留流浪猫的过程。续写示范:Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened.Itookadeepbreathandsaid,"Donna,Princessgotout.I'vebeenlookingeverywhere.Imadeaposterbutitdidn'tworkwell.I'msosorry."Iwatchedherfaceclosely,waitingforherreaction.第二段情感线:感动、善良。妻子看到流浪猫流泪,既有对公主走失的难过,也有被我收留流浪猫行为感动的成分,展现出善良的品质。故事线:讲述妻子看到院子里流浪猫后的反应,包括流泪,我向她解释收留原因,我们决定一起寻找公主。续写示范:WhenDonnasawthehomelesscatsintheyard,hereyesjustfilledwithtears.IquicklyexplainedthatIletthemstayaspeoplebroughtthemthinkingtheywerePrincess.ShesmiledthroughhertearsandsaidweshouldkeeplookingforPrincesstogether.情感线从最初找猫时的焦急,到接妻子时的忐忑、愧疚,再到妻子看到流浪猫后的感动与难过交织,情感细腻且符合情境,使读者能深切感受到人物内心世界。情感变化推动故事发展,让读者更关注后续找猫的情节和夫妻间的情感。故事线故事围绕公主走失展开,包括我找猫、准备向妻子坦白、妻子回来后的情节,情节完整、逻辑清晰,有明确的起因、经过和发展方向。每个环节紧密相连,突出了夫妻间的情感、对宠物的爱以及善良对待流浪动物的主题。主旨升华句"Trueloveisn'tjustaboutthejoyofsharinggoodtimes,butalsothestrengthtofacedifficultiestogether."(真正的爱不只是分享美好时光的快乐,也是共同面对困难的力量。)"Inthesearchforourlostbeloved,weoftendiscoverthedepthofourhumanityandkindness."(在寻找我们走失的所爱之物时,我们常常发现人性和善良的深度。)"Eveninthefaceofloss,ourabilitytoshowcompassiontoothercreaturesdefinesourtruecharacter."(即使面对失去,我们对其他生物表现出同情的能力决定了我们的真实品格。)"ThejourneyoffindingPrincesstaughtusthatlovecanextendbeyondourownpetstothoseinneed."(寻找公主的过程教会我们,爱可以从我们自己的宠物延伸到那些有需要的动物身上。)"OuractionsduringthiscrisisshowthatthespiritofChristmasisnotjustaboutgifts,butaboutloveandkindnesstowardsalllivingbeings."(我们在这场危机中的行动表明,圣诞节的精神不仅仅是礼物,还有对所有生物的爱和善良。)下水文一Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened.Itookherhands,lookedintohereyes,andsaidwithguilt,“Donna,Princessgotout.I’vetriedsohardtofindher.”Itoldheraboutthehomemadeposterandthecatsbroughtbyneighbors.Shewasshockedatfirst,butthenshehuggedme,sayingitwasn’tmyfault.

WhenDonnasawthehomelesscatsintheyard,hereyesjustfilledwithtears.Shewentovertothemandpettedthemgently.Shesaidthroughhertearsthatitwasakindthingtodo.WebothknewwehadtokeeplookingforPrincess,butthesecatsalsoneededourcarefornow.下水文二Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened.InervouslytoldherthatPrincesshadslippedawayandthatI'dbeensearchingfrantically.IshowedhertheroughdrawingontheposterandexplainedhowI'dlettheothercatsstay.Donna'sfacefell,butsheremainedcalm.

WhenDonnasawthehomelesscatsintheyard,hereyesjustfilledwithtears.Shecroucheddowntocomfortthem.ShetoldmethatalthoughshewasworriedaboutPrincess,thesepoorcreaturesdeservedlovetoo.WedecidedtosearchforPrincesstogetherandalsotakecareofthenewcats.参考答案Paragraph1:Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened.IexplainedtoheraboutPrincessandhowIhadbeensearchingforhereveryday.Donnawasunderstandingandsupportive,butshecouldn'thelpfeelingsadaboutPrincess.WespentthenextfewdaystryingtofindP

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