2024-2025学年新教材高中英语Unit6Atonewithnature表达作文巧升格学案外研版必修第一册

PAGEUnit6Atonewithnature写一篇概要写作本单元的写作项目是写一篇概要。概要写作是在正确理解文章的基础上，在不变更原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。[写作步骤]1．览全文，定体裁。阅读整篇文章，找出作者的写作目的；2．划要点，省细微环节。再次阅读文章，找出并总结出每段的主旨句或关键词；3．析结构，换表达。运用恰当的连接方式，把主旨句连接成逻辑连贯的语段。[常用词块]1．befamousforituniqueflavor因其独特的风味而出名2．thenewly­builtpartdating/tracedbacktotheTangDynasty新建的部分可以追溯到唐朝3．havewitnessedgreatchangesinnaturalenvironment已经见证了自然环境的诸多变更4．beofgreatvalueinmedicine在药用方面有极大的价值5．speakhighly/poorlyofitseffect对其效果评价很高/很低6．abigproblemwaitingforustodealwith亟待我们处理的一大问题7．findawayouttosolvethepresentconflict找到解决当前的冲突的方法8．reducepeople'spressureinworkandstudy减轻人们工作以及学习方面的压力9．giveusarealsenseofhappinessofenjoyingnature给我们一种真正的享受自然的华蜜感10．provideafreshexperienceofgardeningforus供应一种全新的园艺体验[常用语句]1．争论文可用以下开头语：(1)Thepassage/authorarguesthat...本文/作者主见……(2)Thepassage/authorhighlightstheimportanceof...本文/作者强调了……的重要性。(3)Thepassage/authordiscussestheimpactof...本文/作者探讨了……的影响。(4)Thepassage/authorcompares...with...本文/作者比较了……与……2．说明文可用以下开头语：(1)Accordingtothepassage/article，wecanknow...依据文章我们可知……(2)Thispassage/articleismainlyabout...这篇文章主要是关于……(3)Inthepassage，thewriter/authormainlytellsus...在这篇文章中作者主要告知我们……(4)Anewstudyfound...一个新的探讨发觉……(5)Thepurposeofthereportistoshow...这一报告的目的是表明……阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandeveryschooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschooldayends.Meanwhile，theyarethesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool，accordingtotheNationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration(NHTSA).Childrenare70timesmorelikelytoarriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtravelledtoschooldrivingthemselvesorridingwithfriends.Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenation'smotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehiclesontheroad.Also，severalnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer，suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside，stoparmcameras，GPStrackingandcollisionlesseningsystems.Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks，closely­spacedseatsandenergy­absorbingseating.Buteventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumupwhychildrenaresaferwhenridingthebig，yellowbus.Thebusisonlyassafeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrivethem.AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriver'sLicense(CDL).Theyarerandomlytestedforalcoholanddrugs，usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked，andaregiventhesamereviewforcriminalhistoryasteachersandotheremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents.Inordertoserveasaschoolbusdriver，mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompleteatrainingcourse，alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel.Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment，notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36­passengercarsthatwould，butforthebuses，beontheroadtakingandpickingupschoolchildren.Additionally，schoolbusesusealternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgas，andelectricpower.ToddMonteferrario，PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation，saidparentsshouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbuswhentheycan.[学生习作]Thefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationandtheyarethesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool.(要点1)Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenation'smotorvehiclesafetystandardsandseveralnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer.(要点2)Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks，closely­spacedseatsandenergy­absorbingseating.(要点3)名师点评：1．能够找出主题句，但是存在原文照搬现象，未能总结归纳；2．文中的要点不够齐全，文章未能读透彻；3．主题句的连接过于简洁。[升格作文]TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetoschoolintheUSforthefollowingreasons.(要点1)Firstly，schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.(要点2)Secondly，thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualificationtestsandsafetydrivingtrainings.(要点3)Thirdly，schoolbuses，poweredbygreenfuels，areenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivatecarshittingtheroads.(要点4)Therefore，childrenareencouragedtogotoschoolbyschoolbus.(要点5)阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Environmentalproblemsarebecomingmoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.Forexample，carshavemadetheairunhealthyforpeopletobreatheandpoisonousgasesaregivenoffbyfactories.Treesonthehillshavebeencutdownandwastewaterisbeingpouredcontinuouslyintorivers.Furthermore，whereverwegotoday，wecanfindrubbishcarelesslydisposed(处理).Therearedifferentkindsofpollutants，eachofwhichcomesfromdifferentsources.Itisnecessarytoidentifythesourceofpollution，inordertomakeapolicytogetridofthem.Differentproducts，processesandactivitiesofourindustrializedworldtogetherformthemajorsourceofpollution.Theformsofpollutioncanbemainlydividedintothreekinds—solids，liquidandgas.Thesepollutantshavegreatlydamagedourplanetandcontinuetodoso.Infact，pollutionisthreateningourexistence.Thewholeecologicalbalanceoftheearthischanging.Massivedestructionofenvironmenthasbroughtaboutnegativeeffectsandevenposedagreatthreattoman'sexistence.Wemustfacethesituationthatexistsandtakeactiontosolveourenvironmentalproblems.Forinstance，newlawsmustbepassedtoplacestrictcontroloverindustrialpollution;thepublicmustreceivetheeducationaboutthedangerofpollutionandraisetheirawarenessofprotectingtheenvironmentandsoon.Theearthisourhomeandwehavethedutytotakecareofitforourselvesandourlatergenerations.Fortunately，moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheseproblems.Measureshavebeentakentodealwiththesesituationsbythegovernment.Andlawshavebeenpassedtostoppollution，Ihopetheproblemswillbesolvedinthenearfutureandourhomewillbecomebetterandbetter.__________________________________________________________