专题20-读后续写：情感刻画(原卷版)-2022年高考英语读后续写核心素养与实战演练

专题20读后续写：情感刻画（原卷版）情感细节包括人物的感受、情绪，是续写中必不可少的细节描写之一。合理的情感情绪描写与刻画，可以凸显人物的性格、人际关系的特征、以及烘托故事高潮进而突出语篇主题等。因此，合理的情感情绪刻画在续写中是非常必要的。以下就是读后续写过程中，刻画人物情感情绪的四个方法：一、直接描写法直接利用恰当的表情感的形容词、副词或名词、介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐例如：快乐(happy,delighted,pleased,joyful,enjoyable等)、吃惊(surprised,shocked,amazed,astonished)等形容词或介词短语(toone'ssurprise,inrelief,inpanic)等描述人物的情绪。二、环境烘托法利用环境细节“融情于景”烘托人物的情感【例1】Dellafinishedhercryinganddriedherface.Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutunhappilyatagraycatwalkingalongagrayfenceinagraybackyard.(小说《麦琪的礼物》中利用3个形容词gray，体现了Della的难受和不开心。)【例2】涌上心头

sth.welluponme/sth.sweptoverme

Afloodoffearwelledupinme.一股恐惧涌上心头。高考真题：(1)[2020.7全国新—爆米花]Hewassodelightedthathecouldhardlyspeak,buthisbrightsmilefacespokeforhim.(2)[2020.1浙江—给Poppy买狗作伴]Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelittledog.(3)[2017.11浙江—与善忘母亲一同旅游]Everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourney,apleasantsmilewouldspreadoverMom’sface.三、动作反映法利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪例如：下面文章片段中的句子：Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hoping_to_see_the_lake.(动作描写，说明Jane满怀期望)Tohersurprise,(利用介词短语体现Jane的吃惊)shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow­cappedmountaintop.(寓情于景，体现Jane的无望失落)Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.四、句式变换法利用高级句式和修饰成分细化情感细节句型1：独立主格结构①“Absolutely！”repliedJohn,excitementshinninginhiseyes.(利用名词excitement和独立主格结构，描写John的兴奋激动)约翰答道，“一定”，他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。句型2：so...that结构②Soangrywasthebearthatitroaredandsmackedthefenceviolently.(so...that倒装句型)熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。句型3：how+宾语从句③Youcannotimaginehowfrightenedwewereattheapproachofthepolarbear.(how引导的宾语从句，介词短语)你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们多么的恐惧。句式4：非常…

Iammorethan+情感类形容词to…

I’mmorethanhappytolearnthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity.得知你被北京大学录取，我非常高兴。句式5：让我非常…的是…

Muchtomy+情感类名词,…

Muchtomydisappointment,noonecameuptogivemeahelpinghand.令我非常失望的是，没有人站过来帮助我。句子演练Ⅰ.按要求补全下面动作、情感和心理细节的句子1．简又害怕又无助，靠着一棵树坐下，歇歇疼痛的双脚。,Janesatagainstatree,.(形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语)2．“如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了，”她想，悔恨的泪水模糊了她的眼睛。“，”shethoughttoherself.(虚拟语气的倒装句，with复合结构)3．她挣扎着站起来寻找那个湖。4．她精疲力竭，她爬上一块大石头，躺了下来，很快睡着了。(so...that状语从句，一连串的动作)5．简醒来时天已经亮了。6．尽管很沮丧，她还是决定继续前进。,shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.(让步状语从句),shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.(状语从句的省略句)7．随着小溪的声音，她向水边走去。,shewalkedtowardthewater.(非谓语动词作状语)8．突然，她注意到远处有一个熟悉的身影向她走来。(非谓语动词作宾补)Ⅱ.将以上补全后的各句合并为短文，注意恰当的衔接过渡【补充语料1】1.愤怒类(1)Hewasfumingwithrage.

他气得大发雷霆。（fumev.发怒）(2)Hecouldhardlycontrolhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。(3)Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得脸色阴沉。（脸上一块乌云）2.悲伤忧愁类(1)Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。(2)IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。(3)Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她手在颤抖，她快要哭了。（verge边缘）(4)Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathewasdrownedwithsadness.听到消息，他淹没在悲伤中。(5)Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirface.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。3.害怕类(1)[2018.6浙江卷：农场游玩迷路]Tearsoffearandregretrolleddownmycheeks.(2)[2017.6浙江卷：与朋友骑车遇狼]AfterhearingMac’sexperience,theyfroze,theirmouthshangingopen.(3)Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。(4)Fearsslowlycreptuponher.恐惧慢慢蔓延到她身上。(5)Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白站在那里，舌头打结，说不出话。【补充语料2】关于情感句子的积累：(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写），用so..that...兴奋：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我激动得跳了起来开心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高兴得上蹿下跳。感动：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感动得一句话也说不出来。悲伤：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands.我难过得用手捂住了脸。生气：IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我气得一句话也说不出来。害怕：Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.我害怕得手心冒汗，心怦怦直跳。羞愧：IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。模拟练习01读后续写

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。MissusSommers

onedayfoundherselftheunexpectedowneroffifteendollars.Itseemedtoheraverylargeamountof

money.

Foradayortwoshewalkedaroundinadreamystateasshethoughtaboutherchoices.HerdaughterJaniewaswearingwornshoesandneedednewones.Shewouldbuyclothfornewshirtsfortheboys.HerdaughterMagshouldhaveanother

dress.Andstilltherewouldbeenoughleftfornewstockingsforherchildren.Theideaabouthowtospendthedollarsmadeherrestlesswithexcitement.Onthedaysheplannedtogoshoppingwiththemoney,sheatealightmeal-no!Betweengettingthechildrenfedandthehousecleaned,andpreparingherselftogoshopping,she

forgot

toeatatall!Whenshearrivedatthelarge

department

store,shespottedapileofsilkstockingsattheentrance.Asignnearbyannouncedthattheyhadbeenreducedinpriceayounggirlbehindthecounteraskedherifshewishedtoexaminethesilkylegcoverings.Shesmiledasifshehadbeenaskedtoinspectdiamondjewelry,andstartedtofeelthesoft,expensiveitems.MissusSommerspickedupablackpairandlookedatthemclosely.Tworedmarkssuddenlyshowedonherpaleface.Shelookedupattheshopgirlandsaidproudly,“Well,Iwill

buy

thispair.”MissusSommerschangedhercottonstockingsforthenewsilkonesintheladies’restarea.Shehadletherselfbecontrolledbysomemachine-likeforcethatdirectedheractionsandfreedherof

responsibility.Howgoodwasthetouchofthesilkonherskin!Thensheputhershoesbackonandputheroldstockingsintoherbag.Next,shewenttotheshoedepartment,whereshetriedonapairofnewboots.Herfootandanklelooked

lovely.Shecouldnotbelievethattheywereapartofherself.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Afterbuyingapairofnewboots,shewalkedintotheclothingdepartment.______________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Shewasabouttoleavethestorewhenakidrunningaroundremindedherofsomething.______________________________________________________________________________________翻译小练习：1.来到化妆镜前，上下打量着镜子里的自己，眼睛盯着鞋子，“如果我的鞋子和我身上完美的衣服搭配，我看起来会更漂亮吗？萨默斯太太心想，向部门的女售货员招手。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.萨默斯太太问她今年的时装款式是什么，是否可以试穿一下。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.她的要求得到了批准，萨默斯太太继续尝试她认为在她身上最好的东西。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.身上穿着不同的衣服，她在镜子前转来转去，像时装秀上的超级模特一样欣赏自己。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.她一件接一件地试穿，深情地把它们放进购物车里。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________