读后续写+从竞争到尊重：音乐之旅的启示+讲义 高三上学期期中考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。LeahhadbeentryingforAuditions(试演)forAll-StateBand.Then,thedaybeforetheaudition,shemetintoRachelJacobs.“So,Leah,IhearyouareauditioningforAll-State.Doyoureallywanttoembarrassyourself?”Rachelsaidsnottily(自负的).RachelandLeahhadbeenfightingforfirstchairintheschoolbandeversinceLeahhadgottenit.“Rachel,I’mstillfirstchair,”Leahreplied.Thatafternoon,Mr.Johnson,theschoolbanddirector,stooduptomakeanannouncement.“Kids,”hesaid,“todayRachelJacobswouldliketochallengeLeahFosterforfirstchair.”Leahwasn’tworried;Rachelhadchallengedherfourtimesandnothinghadcomeofit.However,Leahhitthenotewrong,andhersoundwasnotgoodatall.Rachel,ontheotherhand,playedperfectly.Leahwasshameful.Itwasoneofthebandpiecessheshouldhaveknown.Rachelwasgivenfirstchair,andLeahleftthebandroomwithtears.Shewentthroughtherestofherclassesinahaze.“We’releavingfortheauditioninonehour!”saidMr.Fosterthenextmorning.“Idon’tfeelwell.Maybenextyear,”saidLeah.Thensheburstintotearsandranfromtheroom.Hermomfollowedherintoherbedroomandsatonthefootofherbed.“Oh,Leah.Firstofall,I’veheardyouplayyoursong,andyou’renotgoingtoshameyourself.Braveryisn’taboutnotbeingscared—itmeansdoingsomethingdespitethefactthatyou’reafraid.Andifyougooutthereanddoyourbest,we’llbeproudofyou,nomatterwhattheoutcome.”Leah’smomsmiled.“Sowhatdoyousay?Dowehaveanauditiontogoto?”“Yeah,Iguess,”Leahreplied.“Goodgirl!Getdressednow.Westillhavehalfanhour.”Leahsatoutsidetheauditionroomnervouslygraspingherflute(笛子).Finally,theycalledhername.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Leahsteppedontotheauditionstage.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Congratulations!Youdeserveit,”Rachelsaid,stickingoutherhands.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意Leah一直在为All-State乐队试演做准备，但在试演前一天，Rachel向她发起挑战争夺学校乐队第一把交椅，Leah发挥失常输掉了第一把交椅，她非常沮丧。第二天要去正式试演时，Leah起初想逃避，在妈妈的鼓励下，她决定参加。Leah紧张地坐在试演房间外等待叫号。二、伏笔及续写回应伏笔1：Leah之前一直是第一把交椅，且Rachel多次挑战都未成功，这次Leah意外失利，为她在正式试演时的心理状态和表现埋下伏笔，她可能会更加紧张和渴望证明自己。续写回应：在试演舞台上，Leah会努力克服紧张情绪，发挥出自己的水平，回应她对自己实力的信心以及想要重新证明自己的决心。伏笔2：妈妈对Leah的鼓励，提到勇敢是尽管害怕仍去做某事，以及无论结果如何都会为她骄傲，这为Leah参加试演并可能取得好成绩做了铺垫，体现了家人支持的力量。续写回应：Leah在试演中的表现会受到妈妈鼓励的影响，她可能会更加勇敢和自信，成功后也会更加理解妈妈话语的意义，回应了妈妈的鼓励和信任。伏笔3：Leah和Rachel之间一直存在竞争关系，尤其是在第一把交椅的争夺上，这为两人在试演后的互动和关系变化埋下伏笔。续写回应：Rachel在Leah取得成绩后的反应和举动会展现两人关系的转变，可能是从竞争到相互认可或尊重，回应了之前的竞争状态以及在音乐追求中的共同经历。三、续写要点第一段：描述Leah上台后的紧张表现，如心跳加速、手发抖等。讲述她如何克服紧张，想起妈妈的话，调整状态开始演奏。提及她演奏时的专注和投入，以及演奏结束后的期待和不安。第二段：阐述Rachel向Leah表示祝贺的情景和话语，以及Leah的惊讶反应。讲述两人之间的交流，可能包括对彼此的认可、对竞争的看法等。说明Leah的感悟，如关于竞争、友谊和成长的认识，升华主题。四、情感线从失败后的沮丧和对试演的恐惧，到受到妈妈鼓励后的决心，再到试演时的紧张与专注，最后到听到祝贺后的惊讶和对人际关系的新感悟，情感经历了起伏和转变。五、故事线Leah输掉学校第一把交椅→想逃避试演→妈妈鼓励决定参加→试演舞台上的表现→得知结果Rachel祝贺→Leah的感悟和成长六、主旨升华句Competitionisnotjustaboutwinningorlosing,butaboutgrowingandlearningfromeachother,andtruesuccessliesinthecouragetofacechallengesandthegracetoaccepttheoutcome.（竞争不仅仅是关于输赢，而是关于相互成长和学习，真正的成功在于面对挑战的勇气和接受结果的风度。）Inthejourneyofpursuingourdreams,setbacksarejuststeppingstonestogreaterachievements,andwiththesupportoflovedonesandthestrengthwithinourselves,wecanovercomeanyobstacle.（在追求梦想的旅程中，挫折只是通向更大成就的垫脚石，有了亲人的支持和自己内心的力量，我们可以克服任何障碍。）Braveryisnottheabsenceoffear,butthedeterminationtomoveforwarddespiteit.Throughcompetition,wenotonlydiscoverourpotentialbutalsobuildbridgesofunderstandingandrespectwithothers.（勇敢不是没有恐惧，而是尽管有恐惧仍决心前进。通过竞争，我们不仅发现自己的潜力，还与他人建立理解和尊重的桥梁。）Everychallengeisanopportunityforgrowth,andwhenwefaceitwithcourageandperseverance,wecantransformdefeatsintovictoriesandrivalsintofriends.（每一个挑战都是成长的机会，当我们以勇气和毅力面对它时，我们可以将失败转化为胜利，将对手转化为朋友。）Intheworldofmusicandcompetition,truesuccessisnotmeasuredbytrophiesalone,butbythelessonslearned,therelationshipsbuilt,andthegrowthofthesoul.（在音乐和竞争的世界里，真正的成功不仅仅由奖杯来衡量，还包括所学的教训、建立的关系和灵魂的成长。）七、写作示范写作示范一Leahsteppedontotheauditionstage.Herheartwaspoundingsohardthatshethoughtitmightjumpoutofherchest.Herhandstrembledassheheldtheflute,andshecouldfeelthesweatonherpalms.Shetookadeepbreathandtriedtocalmherself,thinkingofwhathermomhadsaid.Sheclosedhereyesforamoment,thenopenedthemwithnewfounddetermination.Shestartedtoplay,atfirstalittleshaky,butasshegotintotherhythm,shebecamemoreandmorefocused.Thebeautifulmelodyfilledtheroom,andshepouredallheremotionsandskillsintotheperformance.Whenshefinished,therewasamomentofsilence,andthenasmatteringofapplause.Shewalkedoffthestage,notsureifshehaddonewellenough,butfeelingasenseofreliefthatshehadgivenitherbestshot.“Congratulations!Youdeserveit,”Rachelsaid,stickingoutherhands.Leahwasstunned.ShehadexpectedRacheltobejealousoratleastindifferent.ShehesitantlytookRachel'shand.“Thankyou,”shesaid.Rachelsmiled.“Youreallydidgreatoutthere.Iguesswebothhavealottolearnfromeachother.Thiscompetitionhasmademerealizethatit'snotjustaboutbeingthefirstchair,butaboutgrowingasmusicians.”Leahnoddedinagreement.Sherealizedthatthroughthisexperience,shehadnotonlyimprovedherskillsbutalsolearnedabouttheimportanceofsportsmanship.Shewasgratefulfortheopportunityandlookedforwardtomorechallengesinthefuture,knowingthatwithhardworkandapositiveattitude,shecouldachieveanything.Andshealsounderstoodthattruefriendshipandrespectcouldbebornoutofcompetition,makingthejourneyofmusicevenmoremeaningful.写作示范二Leahsteppedontotheauditionstage.Thebrightlightsshonedownonher,makingherfeelabitdizzy.Shecouldseethejudgessittinginfrontofher,theirexpressionsseriousandexpectant.Shetookadeepbreathtosteadyherselfandremindedherselfofhermom'swords.Shebegantoplay,andatfirst,hernoteswereabithesitant.Butthen,asshegotintotheflow,sheforgotabouthernervousnessandletthemusictakeover.Sheplayedwithpassionandprecision,pouringherheartintoeverynote.Thesoundoftheflutefilledtheroom,andshefeltasifshewasinaworldofherown,justherandthemusic.Whenshefinishedplaying,sheheldherbreath,waitingforthejudges'reaction.Therewasabriefpause,andthensomenoddingandmurmursofapproval.Shewalkedoffthestagewithamixtureofreliefandexcitement.“Congratulations!Youdeserveit,”Rachelsaid,stickingoutherhands.Leahwassurprisedbutalsopleasantlyso.ShelookedatRachelandsawagenuinesmileonherface.“Thankyou,Rachel,”shesaid,shakingherhand.“Ididn'texpectthisfromyou.”Rachelshrugged.“Well,we'vebeencompetingforsolong,butIcanseethatyoureallyworkedhardforthis.Irespectthat.Maybewecanbemorethanjustrivals.”Leahsmiledback.Thismomentmadeherrealizethatcompetitiondoesn'talwayshavetobecutthroat.Itcanalsoleadtomutualrespectandgrowth.Shewasproudofherselfforovercomingherfearsandfordoingwellintheaudition.AndshewasgratefultoRachelforherunexpectedkindness.Thisexperiencetaughtherthatinthepursuitofherdreams,shecouldfindfriendsandsupportersinthemostunexpectedplaces.Itwasavaluablelessonthatwouldstaywithherasshecontinuedonhermusicaljourney,makinghermoredeterminedthanevertoreachforthestarsandembracealltheopportunitiesthatcameherway.参考答案Paragraph1:Leahsteppedontotheauditionstage.Herfirstnotewasclearandloud,and