读后续写遇险类+森林迷途与求生 讲义 高三第一次模拟考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Lastyear,duringthesummerbreak,myfriendsandIdecidedtogoforawalkintheforest.Theforesthadpaths,andwedecidedthatwewouldhikealongthepathsandmeetatacentralpointtohaveadrinklater.Thewholeteamhadseveralgroupsandwehadplannedonmeetingwiththerestoftheteamafterthreehours.Ihadalighter,apartiallychargedphone,andabottleofwater.Wecontinuedonourwaytowardsthedeeperpartoftheforestuntilwewerefarfromanyrecognizabletrail.Aftertwohours,wewereinthedeepestpartoftheforest,andwecouldnottraceourotherfriends.Allofasudden,abearcamerushingalongourpath,andweallrunindifferentdirections.Afterrunningforaboutfiveminutes,Istoodaloneinabush.IhadnoclueaboutmysurroundingsasIhadneverbeen.therebefore.Ishoutedatmyfriends’namesloudly,butallwasinvain:therewasnoreply,andthewholeplacewassilent.IwasconfusedandfeltlikecryingasIrealizedIwasalonewithnothingtoprotectmyself.Withalotoffear,ItriedtotracethepartwhereIhadcomefrom,butallwasuseless:lwaslost.AsIwalkedalongthepathtryingtolocatemyfriends,IrealizedthatIwastired,andnothingwaslookingfamiliar.Iwasoutoffood,water,andbarelyhadanybatteryinmyphone.Idecidedtowalkthroughthebushesasthetreeshadgrownsoclosetogether.Isqueezedmyselfbetweenthelittletrees.Aftersomethirtyminutes,itstartedrainingheavily.ThoughIhadheavyclothing,IwasrainedonuntilIwassoakedup.IstartedfreezingandprayingtotheGodforprotectionanddirectionoutoftheforest.注意;1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.-______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意去年暑假，“我”和朋友们去森林散步，计划分组行动后在中心点会合。“我”带着一些基本物品深入森林，两小时后与朋友走散，遇到熊后各自逃跑。“我”身处陌生环境，呼喊无果后迷路，食物和水耗尽，手机电量不足，还遭遇大雨，处境艰难。二、伏笔及续写回应（一）伏笔携带物品：“我”有打火机、部分充电的手机和一瓶水，为后续可能的生火、求救等情节提供了基础，续写中可利用这些物品展开求生行动。与朋友走散且环境陌生：增加了故事的紧张感和孤独感，续写可围绕“我”如何寻找朋友或设法让朋友找到自己展开。下雨：使“我”的处境更加恶劣，可在续写中体现“我”如何应对恶劣天气以及这对“我”心理和身体的影响。（二）续写回应第一段：可写“我”利用现有物品尝试向同事发出信号的方法，如生火、用手机灯光等，以及在此过程中的心理活动和期待。第二段：写听到远处噪音后的反应，可能是朋友的声音或者其他未知情况，“我”如何进一步采取行动以及最终可能的结果，如是否成功与朋友会合等。三、续写要点（一）第一段描述“我”尝试制作信号的具体方式和过程，如火堆的搭建、手机的使用等。“我”的心理状态，如希望与绝望交织、对朋友出现的期待等。周围环境的变化对“我”行动的影响，比如风雨是否影响生火等。（二）第二段听到噪音时“我”的第一反应和后续行动，如大声呼喊回应、寻找声音来源等。对噪音来源的猜测和内心的担忧或喜悦。故事的结局走向，是否成功与朋友会合或发现其他情况。四、故事线进入森林-与朋友走散-迷路遇雨-尝试发信号-听到噪音-可能的结果（找到朋友或其他情况）五、感情线从最初的兴奋和好奇，到遇到危险后的恐惧和孤独，再到尝试求生时的希望与绝望交织，最后到听到噪音时的紧张和期待。六、主旨升华句Inthefaceoftheunknownforestandthetrialsofbeinglost,courageandresourcefulnessbecomethebeaconsthatguideusthroughthedarknessofdespair.（面对未知的森林和迷路的考验，勇气和机智成为引导我们穿过绝望黑暗的灯塔。）Whenlostinthewild,everyefforttosurviveandconnectisatestamenttothehumanspirit'sresilienceandthepowerofhopethatkeepsusgoing.（当在野外迷路时，每一次求生和联系的努力都是人类精神韧性和支撑我们前进的希望力量的证明。）Amidstthesolitudeoftheforestandtheperilsofbeinglost,thedeterminationtofindawayoutandthelongingforconnectionfuelthejourneyofsurvivalandself-discovery.（在森林的孤独和迷路的危险中，找到出路的决心和对联系的渴望推动着生存和自我发现的旅程。）Lostintheforest,welearnthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,ourinnerstrengthandthewilltoreachoutcanleadustothelightofsafetyandthewarmthofcompanionship.（在森林中迷路时，我们了解到即使在最绝望的情况下，我们的内在力量和寻求联系的意愿也能带领我们走向安全的光明和同伴的温暖。）Intheheartoftheforest'smysteryandtheturmoilofbeinglost,thestruggletosignalforhelpandthehopeofhearingaresponsearethethreadsthatweavethestoryofsurvivalandthediscoveryofourowncapabilities.（在森林神秘的中心和迷路的混乱中，发出求救信号的努力和听到回应的希望是编织生存故事和发现我们自身能力的线索。）七、写作范文范文一第一段Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Iusedthelightertostartafire,hopingthesmokewouldcatchtheirattention.Thewetbranchesmadeitdifficult,butIpersisted,carefullyblowingonthesmallflames.IalsotookoutmyphoneandsetittoflashthebrightestlightIcould,wavingitaroundintheairperiodically.AsIworked,Ikeptprayingthatmyfriendswouldseeorsensemysignals.Thedarknesswasclosingin,andthefearofspendingthenightaloneintheforestwasoverwhelming,butIforcedmyselftostaycalmandfocusedonmyattemptstomakecontact.第二段Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Myheartleaptwithhope.IimmediatelystoodupandshoutedasloudlyasIcould,"I'mhere!I'moverhere!"Ilistenedintently,tryingtodeterminethedirectionofthesound.Itseemedtobegettingcloser.Istartedrunningtowardsit,stillshouting,myvoicehoarsefromtheeffort.AsIgotcloser,Irecognizedthevoicesofmyfriends.Finally,wereunited,exhaustedbutrelieved.Wehuggedeachothertightly,gratefultobebacktogether.Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofstayingcalmandresourcefulindifficultsituationsandthevalueofthebondwithmyfriends.范文二第一段Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Igatheredsomedryleavesandsmallbranchestobuildabiggerfire,hopingthebrightflameswouldbevisiblefromadistance.Ikeptthelighterclose,carefullynurturingthefire.Ialsousedmywaterbottletoreflectthelightofthefire,creatingaflashingeffect.Asthedarknessdeepened,myanxietygrew,butIrefusedtogiveup.Ikeptthinkingaboutmyfriendsandhowtheymustbelookingformetoo.Istaredintotheforest,willingsomeonetoseemysignalsandcometomyrescue.第二段Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Ifrozeforamoment,thenquicklygotup,myheartpounding.Ilistenedcarefully,anditsoundedlikevoices.Ishoutedbackwithallmystrength,"I'mhere!Help!"Iwaited,holdingmybreath.Thenoisegrewlouder,andsoonIcouldseetheflashlightbeamsofmyfriendsthroughthetrees.Iwasovercomewithreliefandjoy.Whentheyfinallyreachedme,wewereallemotional.Werealizedhowimportantitwastosticktogetherandbemorecarefulinthefuture.Thisadventuremadeusstrongerandmoreawareoftherisksandrewardsofexploringtheunknown.【答案】Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Aftermanyvaintrials,itoccurredtomethatIhadalighterwithme.Iwaswildwithjoyanddecidedtobuildasignalfirebycollectingleavesandlightingthemupformyfriendstos