新高考英语二轮复习题型归纳与变式演练专题32 读后续写03 环境描写突破（原卷版）

专题32读后续写03环境描写突破（原卷版）目录TOC\o"1-3"\h\u专题32读后续写03环境描写突破（原卷版） 1Part1命题解读 2Part2思维导图 2Part3环境描写的重要性 2第一种方法：“情景交融”法 3第二种方法：比喻法 4Part4素材积累 51.人物动作的画面定格 52.特殊寓意的写景画面 63.其他环境描写 8Part5模拟演练 171．（2022·福建漳州·一模） 172．（2022·重庆·西南大学附中一模） 193．（2022·湖南邵阳·一模） 204．（2022·江苏省苏州实验中学模拟预测） 215．（2022·湖南·长郡中学二模） 236．（2022·湖南·周南中学模拟预测） 247．读后续写模拟专练01 258．读后续写模拟专练02 28

Part1命题解读通过对环境的描写，能够向读者交待故事的背景，衬托人物，渲染气氛，从而推动情节发展。环境描写真的是必不可少的。此外，作者可以通过环境描写向读者间接的表达着故事中主人公的内心情感变化。Part2思维导图Part3环境描写的重要性首先要明确的是，把主旨想清楚，时刻不忘“写景乃为主旨服务”这句话。如果景物与主旨无关，就是为写景而写景，就是无效的写景。例如，大家看看我要传达出“高兴”与“悲伤”两种不同主旨时，该用下面哪种景物描写。A.花儿低着头，杨柳无精打采。B.花儿昂着头，杨柳摆动这枝条。答案一目了然。所以，景随主旨变。先确定主旨，然后来写景，这样才有效果。通常情况下，传达出的情感好，则用褒义色彩的美好的、正向的词。传达出情感需要不好，则用贬义色彩的糟糕负面的词。大家看下面三例：Thewindwasblowingdreadfully(恐怖地)。Thewindwasblowingsoftly（柔和地）。Thewindwasblowingcomfortably（舒服地）。可以看出三句传达出什么样的情感吧。 第一种方法：“情景交融”法用一个公式来表达就是：写景+感受写景后，再添加一个明显的情感描写，就是指：有时在景物描写之后，加上一两句自己的情感态度。这样做的整体效果就是：情境交融。当然，如果你想造成“留白启发思考”的效果，那么就没有必要添加这种显性的情感态度描写了。举个例子，大家记得2017年11月高考《健忘的妈妈》的故事续写吧。第一段可以用到下面三句：Thatnightwesetupourtentinapark.（那天晚上我们在公园里搭起帐篷。）Themoonwasheldupabovethesky,shininghersmoothandcharmingmoonlight.（月亮被高举在天空的上方，照耀着她那光滑而迷人的月光。）Twinklingstarswereblinking（眨眼）,andfragrant（芬芳的）breeze（微风）gentlyblew.（闪烁的星星眨着眼，芬芳的微风轻轻地吹着。）这个景物描写很精彩。但是如果后面在加一句：Restingbeside

mymother,withhandsheldtightlybyher,Ifeeltheworldissobeautiful.（躺在母亲身边，双手紧紧地握着母亲，我觉得这个世界是如此美丽。）这样一加，就让“母亲”显现，就让“我与母亲关系和谐”的主旨就显现了。再比如，下面两句景物描写：第1句：Thewindwas

howlingdreadfully

andtherainwas

pouring

fromtheheaven,

whippingagainstthebranchesoflined（成排的）

trees.（风可怕地嚎叫，雨从天倾斜而来，拍打着成排的树枝。）第2句：Theworld

wasloadedwith

aseaofdarkness（世界承载着一片海洋般的黑暗）.这两句的后面，如果再加一句：Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature.Asenseofhorror

creepingupon

me.（我被自然发怒的力量抓住了。一种恐惧感悄悄爬到我身上。）这样就进一步强调了自己的情感。总之，根据凸显“情感”的需要，我们可以决定是不是该加一句显性的“情感表达”，来决定是不是呈现显性的“情景交融”。 第二种方法：比喻法我们的环境描写还可以用比喻手法，用“like”即可，并交代、突出特点。如果总结成公式，那就是：写景+比喻+特点与大家分享的例子是一位美国作家的短篇小说TheWhistle

(寒笛)中的写景片段：原文是：

Nightfell.Thedarknesswasthin,

like

some

sleazy

dressthathasbeenwornandwornformanywintersandalways

lets

thecold

through

tothebones.Thenthemoonrose.译文：

夜色降临,暮色稀薄,

犹如穿过了数个冬季的敝衣,难以抵御刺骨的严寒。而后月亮升起。（sleazy

稀薄的，

let..through

让...通过,类似passthrough）02我们再来做句子分析：这句话的核心句是：Thedarknesswasthin，即：暮色稀薄。其他内容都是锦上添花的作用，就是让这个核心句子显得更加完整具体。怎么做到的呢？首先是用到了比喻：这里的

like.就起到了这个作用：“like

some

sleazy

dress”像是一条薄薄的裙子，将darkness比作薄薄的裙子还不够，还穿了好几个冬天(hasbeenwornandwornformanywinters),冬天里穿裙子一定非常的寒冷。于是作者又加上了寒冷入骨(tothebones)。如此，一个寒冷的夜晚(coldnight)与一件不能御寒的敞衣相联系，内容可以如此丰富。关于比喻，可能有些同学不是特别熟悉，再给大家一个例句：Afirestill

flutteredinthegrate(壁炉炉膛),...

like

abirdtryingtofinditswayoutoftheroom.一团火还在壁炉炉膛里舞动着，就像一只挣脱束缚的鸟。这句话里，把壁炉里跳动的火苗比作想挣脱束缚的鸟（finditswayoutoftheroom）。使“火苗”的描写更加生动。我们再来上面提到的“薄雾”的例子，回忆一下公式：写景+比喻+特点如果说详细一点就是：平平无奇的交代下自然现象+比喻（定语从句或非谓语修饰）+突出特点(冷得不得了)学习读后续写，最快的方式，就是改编，仿写。我们一起来牛刀小试一下吧：如果我们要描写“雾”，应该怎么写呢？Thewindwasblowing.Themistwasgettingthick,

like

ahuge

texturedvelvetcloak,

making

whatishiddeninsideanunclearmystery.风正在吹。雾越来越浓，像一件巨大的有质感的天鹅绒斗篷，把一切隐藏在模糊的神秘之中。这句仿写的句子很好的get到了比喻的精髓，非常好的运用了“like”，texturedvelvetcloak（有质感的天鹅绒斗篷），形象具体。非谓语making做状语，也着实炫了一下语法。既简洁描绘了景色，又营造了一种神秘、紧张的氛围。Part4素材积累1.人物动作的画面定格Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.

她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼，立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.站在空旷的道路旁，他们抬头仰望天空，从内心感受到珍贵的平和。2.特殊寓意的写景画面Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.

天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。（黎明到来的画面）ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）

Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）

Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.

抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）Dottedwithglittering

stars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.

缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面）Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。

（雨水来临的画面）

Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.

我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）

3.其他环境描写1．Stanleyhadaposterofhimhangingonthewallofhisbedroom（房间，环境描写）2．Itwaswhilehewaswalkinghome,carryinghiswetnotebook,withtheprospectofhavingtocopytheruinedpages,thatthesneakersfellfromthesky（事件，叙事，画面感）3．Theshovelswerefivefeetlong,fromthetipofthesteelbladetotheendofthewoodenshaft（说明，介绍物品）4．Thelakewassofullofholesandmounds(土丘)thatitremindedStanleyofpictureshe'dseenofthemoon

（地貌，环境描写，修辞）5．Thesunhadonlyjustcomeupoverthehorizon(地平线，天边),buthealreadycouldfeelitshotraysagainsthisface（天气，炎热，环境描写）6．Thesunwasn'tyetup,butitsraysarcedoverthehorizonandbroughtlighttothesky（天气，日出，环境描写）7．Itwasespeciallybeautifulinthespring,whenthepeachtrees,whichlinedtheshore,bloomed(开花)withpinkandrose-coloredblossoms(花，花朵)

（春天，环境描写）8．Theairbecameunbearablyhumid(湿热的)Stanleywasdrenched(湿透的)insweatBeadsofmoisture(水珠)randownthehandleofhisshovelItwasalmostasifthetemperaturehadgottensohotthattheairitselfwassweatingAloudboomofthunderechoedacrosstheemptylake（炎热，天气，环境描写）9．Thepeaklookedtohimexactlylikeagiantfist,withthethumbstickingstraightup（山峰，环境描写，修辞）10．Thestormmovedofffartherwest,alongwithanyhopeofrain（天气，环境描写）11．Ithadthecool,smooth(光滑的)texture(质地)ofmetal（介绍物品，说明，描写）12．Theboatlayupsidedown,halfburiedinthedirt（环境描写）13．Itwasasiftheyhadbeenwalkingacrosstheflatbottomofagiantfryingpan,andnowtheyhadtosomehowclimbupoutofit（环境描写）14．Patchesofweedsdotted(点缀)themountainside（环境描写）15．Hewasinafieldofgreenishwhiteflowersthatseemedtoextendallthewayaround

(环境描写)16．Thesuncutthroughthecloud,andStanleyfeltitsraysbeatingdownonhimButsoonmorecloudsfilledthesky,shadingStanley（环境描写）17．Itwastoomuchofacoincidence（巧合）tobeamereaccident

（观点，评价）18．Itturnedoutthesneakershadbeenstolenfromadisplayatthehomelessshelter（结果，解开真相）19．Foronceinhislifeitpaidtobeoverweight（幽默，修辞）20．Againstherbetterjudgment,sheagreedtohelphim（让步）21．NothinginlifeiseasyButthat'snoreasontogiveupYou'llbesurprisedwhatyoucanaccomplishifyousetyourmindtoitAfterall,youonlyhaveonelife,soyoushouldtrytomakethemostofit（评价，鼓励）22．Bythenextmorning,Zerostillhadn'treturned（结果，准确运用时态）环境描写烘托情感气【用温暖阳光表现】01.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.当我沐浴在阳光下，那感觉就像是琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我每一寸肌肤。02.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.当我拉开窗帘，阳光倾泻而入。【用蓝天白云表现】01.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithfluttering（飘舞;

振翅）larks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩飞舞。

bedottedwith意为“星星般点缀着…”.abutterflyflutteringitswings.…一只拍动着翅膀的蝴蝶。Thepaperflutteredtothefloor.

纸飘落到地板上。02.Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.朵朵白云飘在蓝天中，就像安静的鱼儿在广阔的海洋中畅游。

【用徐徐微风表现】01.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。02.Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn.Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!即使在秋日里，公园里都开满了各式各样的鲜花，香气伴着微风四处弥漫。多么香甜啊！

03.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.

Therewasasongineveryheart.

Therewascheerineveryface

and

aspringineverystep.

Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.夏日周六的早晨，阳光明媚，空气新鲜，处处洋溢着生机。每个人的心中都荡漾着一首歌。每个人脸上都洋溢着欢乐，每个人都迈着跳跃的步伐。空气里弥漫着芬芳的花香。

04.Colorfulflowerswerebloomingbeneaththebluesky,andthesunshinereflectedonthelake,makingitshinelikediamonds.ButSusanjustcouldn'tfocusherattentiononthebreathtakingbeauty.蔚蓝色的天空下，百花盛开，阳光洒在湖面上如同铺上了一颗颗闪耀的钻石。但是苏珊并没有被这令人窒息的美景所吸引。【用风雨天气来表现】1.Thefrostyairblewin,

cuttinglikeknife.寒冷的空气吹进来，如同刀割般的感觉。2.Therewasa

deathlystillness

inthehouse.房子里一片死寂。3.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.雨倾盆而下，洪流猛涨，狂风在肆意地冲击着房屋。4.Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling.在那个狂风暴雨的夜晚，海浪在肆意地拍打着，劲风在愤怒地咆哮着。

5.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky.

风猛刮着身侧的树木，闪电在空中持续乱舞，孩子们吓坏了。

6.Thenightwasveryquiet,soeventheslightestsoundmadetheboysjumpfromfear.夜晚非常安静，所以即使是最轻微的声音也使孩子们惊得跳起。【阳光明媚，生命美好，心情愉悦的景色描写】1.

Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff(延伸)

tothehorizon,slowlynarrowingto

nothingness（虚无）,onlytore-emerge（重新出现）

againonyourleft.2.

WhenIwasbathedin

thesunlight,itfeltlike

theamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.3.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。4.

WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳光倾斜而入5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。6.Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。

7.

Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.8.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。9.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、点缀）theslope.风，轻柔而清冷，轻点这树枝，搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。10.

Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!公园的角落里开着各种各样的花，即使是在秋天，我也会在凉风中闻到清新的香味。多甜蜜啊！11.

ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.这是一个星期六的早晨，整个夏天的世界都是明亮而清新的，充满了生机。每个人心中都有一首歌。每个人脸上都洋溢着欢乐，每个脚步都轻快。空气中弥漫着宜人的花香。村子那边的卡第夫山，山上长满了绿色的树木，看上去很美。

【暴风骤雨、心情抑郁的景色描写】12.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。13.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(苍白昏暗的月亮).14.Thefrostyair（寒冷的空气）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.15.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。Stung的原形为sting“叮咬”16.Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswithasighingsound.叹息的声音17.Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂18.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(阴郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheradded

whatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(阴冷的暴风雨袭来),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛）,which

thewindwasdespoiling(摧残),

andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuch

cruelsightsthelongervisible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）

【烦闷焦躁的景色描写】19.It’shotenoughtomelthell.天热得能融化地狱。20.Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybecomesheavy.Ithangsoverthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,andsitsonmyshoulders.整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。

【凄风苦雨、狂风暴雨、恐惧阴冷害怕的景色描写】21.Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashing

andthewindswerehowling(嚎叫).22.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂风肆意冲击房屋。23.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthe

lightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky(闪电在空中持续乱舞).24.Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling(寒冷的细雨),andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）

puffs（一阵阵小风）intoasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir（活动的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉闷地）

andsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands（踹口袋里的手）.

【早上】1.Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.阳光的甜蜜充满我的肺。2.Thefirstrayofsunlightistoofragiletotouch.第一缕阳光太脆弱，无法触摸。3.Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthesunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.春风拉开云帘，阳光洒进教室。4.Thewholeworldblossomswithonebreathofthesunshine.一缕阳光，全世界绽放。5.

Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofold

trees.雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树的树枝上。6.

Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatI'mthere.被雨露亲吻，脚下湿漉漉的地面冰凉。鸟儿在我身边忙碌着，根本不在乎我在那里。7.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.一股浓浓的泥土香从地底升起，将一切都笼罩在它柔软的怀抱中。8.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.

拉开窗帘，阳光洒进来。9.

Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowd

intomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate纤弱的,精致的

airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.金色的阳光，娇嫩的绿色，一片芬芳的花海涌入我的眼帘。步入画中，鸟鸣啾啾，令我醉醺醺。很快，纤弱的细腻的空气和柔软的雨滴融化了我的心。10.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.那是星期六的早晨，整个夏天的世界都明亮清新，充满生机。每个人心中都有一首歌。每一张脸上都洋溢着欢呼，每一步都充满了春天。空气中弥漫着宜人的花香。村外上方的卡迪夫山（CardiffHill）绿树成荫，看上去很美。【黄昏】1.

Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,hequickenedhissteps.随着天色渐渐暗了下来，光线也渐渐暗了下来，他加快了脚步。2.

Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.太阳躲在山后，漆黑一片，什么也看不见。3.Fallingleavesfluttereddowninthecoolmid-autumnair,biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandbeckoningtheautumnin.中秋的凉风中，落叶飘落，告别甜美的夏天，迎接秋天的到来。4.

It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingmindlesslydown,theairmoist,thesidewalkmushyunderfoot.天已经黑了，雪还在下，一团团潮湿的雪花漫不经心地飘落下来，空气潮湿，人行道在脚下变得糊状。5.Theraindrummedonthewindow,

biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打在窗户上，告别了最后一缕阳光。6.

Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindraped

overthesky.余晖被急速落下的夜幕抹去，犹如漆黑的帷幕笼罩在天际。7.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.走在街上，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，一个人会从我身边掉下来，随着空气轻轻地将它带到地面，轻轻摇晃。8.Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblamelessblueandshimmering.湖水映照着头顶的天空，两人都是无可指摘的蓝色，闪烁着微光。9.Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.

日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。10.ThestrongsunonmyblackhairwouldburnmeinminutesifIcouldn’tfindshelter.如果我找不到庇护所，我黑发上的强烈阳光会在几分钟内灼伤我。11.Thesundroppedthrough

andlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳落下，落在他的头和肩膀上。【晚上】1.Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight(昏暗的灯光)inthevillage.从远处，他看到村子里有些昏暗的灯光。2.Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousandscared.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.爸爸和我之间的沉默让我更加紧张和害怕。那一刻，除了天空中几颗星星发出的微弱光芒外，天已经完全黑了。3.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，风，雷鸣般的乌云，让我完全掌握在它们的力量中。4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality,andthestarsthatdottedtheskylitupthenight.天空，午夜蓝，赋予场景一种童话般的质感，点缀天空的星星点亮了夜晚。5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.

湛蓝的天空点缀着飞舞的百灵鸟。6.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.狂风呼啸，雨从天上倾泻而下，拍打着成排的树枝。世界笼罩在一片黑暗的海洋中。我被大自然的咆哮力量所吸引，一种恐怖感在我身上蔓延。我立即转身滑进床上，蜷缩起来。7.

Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，风，雷鸣般的乌云，让我完全掌握在它们的力量中。8.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(阴郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheradded

whatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(阴冷的暴风雨袭来),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛）,which

thewindwasdespoiling(摧残),

andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuch

cruelsightsthelongervisible.这一天的晚上很长，很忧郁，在哈特菲尔德。天气增添了它可能的阴霾。一场阴冷的暴风雨袭来，七月的任何东西都没有出现，只出现在被风掠走（残）的树丛中残酷的景象越久可见。9.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，

andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.

天阴沉沉的，乌云密布，整个世界仿佛都笼罩在一张巨大的灰色被子里。10.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon.Thefrostyairblewin,cuttinglikeknife.

稀疏的树木在狂风吹拂，凌乱的灰色云彩掠过苍白病态的月亮。寒气袭来，如刀割一般。【其他句子赏析】1.Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleysandsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.我在飞驰的车里闭上了眼睛。蜿蜒的河流、巍峨的山脉、深邃的山谷和阳光明媚的海滩让我完全着迷。2.Thegentlebreeze(微风)strokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.微风轻抚着他的头，仿佛抚慰了他所有的疲惫。3.Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Wanderinginthewoods,Allyslowedherpacetofindthelittleguyinthemixedair.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmileandtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.Thebreezepattedherontheface,warmandcomfortable.熟悉的泥土气息迎面扑来。漫步在树林中，艾莉放慢了脚步，在混杂的空气中找到了小家伙。太阳带着灿烂的笑容看着她，花儿也朝她开心地点点头。微风轻抚着她的脸庞，温暖而舒适。4.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.狂风呼啸，雨从天上倾泻而下，拍打着一排排的树枝。世界笼罩在一片黑暗的海洋中。我被大自然的咆哮力量所吸引，一种恐怖感在我身上蔓延。我立即转身滑进床上，蜷缩起来。5.Onthedaybacktoschool,darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Therainpoureddown,withcolddropsandangrywindsslapping(拍；掴)myface.Iwasdrownedinfloodsofwarmtearsandfreezingrain.返校那天，天上乌云低垂。雨倾盆而下，冰冷的水珠和怒风拍打（拍；掴）我的脸。我被温暖的泪水和冻雨淹没了。6.Spring,likeanamazingartist,paintsourcampuswithricheranddeepercolors.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate纤弱的,精致的

airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.Oh,I’mlost…inthemasterpieceofSpring!春天，像一位了不起的艺术家，用更丰富更深沉的色彩描绘了我们的校园。金色的阳光，娇嫩的绿叶，一片芬芳的花海涌入我的眼帘。步入画中，鸟鸣咝咝咝咝不已。很快，纤弱的细腻的空气和柔软的雨滴融化了我的心。哦，我迷失了……春天的杰作！Part5模拟演练（2022·福建漳州·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Allisonstoodinlinewiththerestofherclass,waitingfortheschooldoorstoopen.ThiswasthelastdaybeforeschoolclosedforChristmasbreak.Shecouldn’twaitforsecretgiftswap(交换)happeninginclasstoday.Alisontunedtosaysomethingtoherbestfriend,Wendy,thenfroze.ShewassurprisedtoseeWendylookingdownatthegroundwithherbookspressedtightlytoherchest.“What’swrong,Wendy?”Allisonaskedquietly.Wendyshookherhead,hereyesconnectingwithAllison’s.AllisoncouldseethatWendy’sfacewasasdarkasacloud,withnosmileinsight.“Myparentsdidn’tgivemeanythingtobringtothegiftswap,”shewhispered.“Theysaidtheydidn’thaveextramoneyforstufflikethat.”AllisonlookedatWendy,confused.“But,weweren’tsupposedtobringanythingexpensive.Justsomethingsmallthatdidn’tcostalotofmoney.”Allisonthoughtbacktothelasttimeshe’dbeenatWendy’shouse.She’dopenedtherefrigeratorlookingforsomethingtodrink,onlytofindthatitwasmostlyempty.ThefurnitureinWendy’shouselookedoldandbeatenup.“Itwillbeokay,Wendy,”Allisonsaid.“WegettohaveallthattimeoffforChristmas.Comeon,cheerup!”Wendygaveherasmallsmile,thenlookedaway.Atthatmoment,awhistleblew,andthekidsstartedwalkingintotheschoolbuilding.TheChristmaspartywasabouttostart.Onebyone,thekidsdroppedtheirgiftsintothebagtheteacherwasholding.AllisonlookedoveratWendy.Mostofthekidsweresmilingaroundthebag,eagertogetstarted,butWendystoodofftotheside,lookingdownatherfeet.Allisonhatedseeingherfriendsoupset.Shewishedthereweresomethingshecoulddoaboutit.“Comeonup,Allison.It’syourturn,”theteachersaid.Sooneveryonehadpulledoutagiftandunwrappedit.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Allisonlookeddownathergift:alittleglasscat.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Wendy,Iwantyoutohavethis,”shesaid.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2022·重庆·西南大学附中一模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。KenScottkickedoffthecoversandleaptoutofbedathishomeintheRockyMountaintownofMullan,Idaho.He’djustheardontheradiothatthenearbySilverMountainResorthadbeenblessedwithnearlyafootandahalfofnewsnow.Asanexperiencedskiaddict,hedidn’twanttomissthisbiggoldenopportunity.Theseconditionsarewhatskierslivefor.WhenScottreachedSilverMountain’slockerroom,hecameacrosshisfriendPaul,aformerskiinstructorwhohadalsobeenaregularontheseslopesformorethantwodecades.Bothofthemwereexhilarated.Beforesettingoff,itwasPaul’sroutinetocheckhisphonetightlyfixedinsidehisparka(风雪外套).Forthenexthourthepairskiedonvariousrunsunderalightlydullsky,makingfreshtracks.Theywerebothinaplayfulmood,laughingastheytackledthesteepruns.Almostimmediately,thesnowbeneaththeirfeetgaveway.Inamillisecond,Paulrealizedwhatwashappening.“Avalanche!(雪崩)”heyelledtoScott,whowasnotfarbehind.Scottresponded.Thesuddensnowslidecausedfearinhisvoice.“Thisishappening!”Instantly,bothwerehitbyamassofsnowthatwouldhitandcarrythemsome500feetdownthemountain.Scottfeltitsurroundingandenclosinghim,movingquicklyuphisbackandoverhisshoulders,thenheavyagainsthisneck.Snowfilledthespaceinfrontofhimandpileduparoundthewholeofhim.Paul,too,wassweptdownhill.Theyrememberedtheavalanchesurvivallessonstheyhadlearned.Keepyourheadup.Trytoswim.Stayontopofthesnow.Butthesnowwastoopowerfulandtheyfeltthemselvesrollinglikealoadofclothesinawashingmachine.WhenScottfinallycametorest,hewaslyingonhisleftsideandcompletelyburied,skisandpolesstillattached.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2022·湖南邵阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasChristmas1961.Iwasteachinginasmalltownwheremytwenty-seventhirdgraderseagerlyexpectedthegreatdayofgift-giving.Eachdaythechildrenmadesomenewwonders-stringsofpopcorn,hand-madedecorations,andGermanbellsmadefromwallpapersamples,whichwehungfromtheceiling.Throughitallshestayedindifferent,watchingfromadistance,seeminglymilesaway.Iwonderedwhatwouldhappentothisquietchild,oncesohappy,nowsosuddenlyunsociable.Ihopedthecelebrationswouldlightherup.Butnothingdid.Wemadecardsandgiftsformothersanddads,forsistersandbrothers,forgrandparents,andforeachother.Athomethestudentsmadethefriedmarbles（油炸玻璃弹子）andcompetedwithoneanothertobringintheprettiestones.Asmygifttothem,Imadeeachofmystudentsalittlebagforcarryingtheirfriedmarbles.AndIknewtheyhadeachmadesomethingspecialforme.Thedayofgiftgivingf