2025届广东省深圳市龙文一对一英语高三第一学期期末考试试题含解析

2025届广东省深圳市龙文一对一英语高三第一学期期末考试试题注意事项1．考生要认真填写考场号和座位序号。2．试题所有答案必须填涂或书写在答题卡上，在试卷上作答无效。第一部分必须用2B铅笔作答；第二部分必须用黑色字迹的签字笔作答。3．考试结束后，考生须将试卷和答题卡放在桌面上，待监考员收回。第一部分（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）1．We’dbettergonow,______we’llmissthetrain.A．butB．soC．otherwiseD．therefore2．MaybesomeofyouarecuriousaboutwhatmylifewaslikeonthestreetsbecauseI’veneverreallytalkedaboutit______.A．inplace B．inturn C．inforce D．indepth3．ThisJanuarywillbeverypreciousforusbywhichtimewe________reviewingSeniorBookI.A．willfinish B．willhavefinishedC．havefinished D．willbefinished4．PremierLiKeqiangofficially______theplantodeveloptheBayAreainhisgovernmentworkreportdeliveredatthestartoftheNationalPeople’sCongresssessioninMarch.A．laidoutB．laidoffC．laiddownD．laidup5．Thisfootballplayerwasaccusedoftakingmoneyfornotscoringgoals______.A．bychance B．onend C．inturn D．onpurpose6．Withpeoplepayingattentiontofitness,self-servicemini-gyms,eachcoveringabout5squaremeters,________inChina’smajorcitiestheseyears.A．havesprungup B．sprangupC．hadsprungup D．springup7．Schoolchildrenmustbetaughthowtodealwithdangerous________.A．statesB．conditionsC．situationsD．positions8．It’ssupposedtobetheendofthepaperback(简装书)andthe__________ofdigitalmedia,butsomebookstoresaresurvivingtheInternetAgewithsurprisingsuccess.A．deadline B．dawnC．dusk D．departure9．_______travellingexpensesrisingalot,wehadtochangeallourplansforthetour．A．As B．By C．Since D．With10．________challengesinChinascar-sharingeconomy,sharedmobilitystillhasapromisingfuture.A．Despite B．BesidesC．Concerning D．Regarding11．—Didyougotolastnight’sconcert?—Yes.Andthegirlplayingtheviolinattheconcert_______allthepeoplepresentwithherexcellentability.A.impressed B．compared C．conveyed D．observed12．—DidyouhavedifficultyfindingAnn'house?—Notreally.She___uscleardirectionsandwewereabletofindit.easily?A．wastogive B．hadgivenC．wasgiving D．wouldgive13．AccordingtoTheSun,Britishscientistshavesolvedtheancientriddleof________camefirst—chickenoregg?A．whoB．whatC．whichD．that14．Theenquiry________newfacts,thejudgehadtopostponethetrialagain.A．todevelop B．developedC．havingdeveloped D．beingdeveloped15．_____workingability，youarenoworsethantheothers，itisjustyouwhodon’tputyourheartinyourwork．A．Infavorof B．Inhonorof C．Intermsof D．Incaseof16．—Whatdoyouthinkofteaching,Bob?—Ifinditfunandchallenging.Itisajob________youaredoingsomethingseriousandinteresting.A．which B．whereC．when D．that17．Asa(n)________andeffectivemethod,expresswaynoisebarrierisaprimarymeasureusedtoreducetrafficnoise.A．correctional B．flexible C．economical D．investigative18．Mymomonceworkedinaverysmallvillageschool,whichis__________onlyonfoot.A．acceptable B．adequate C．accessible D．appropriate19．—Startingaconversationisagoodwaytokilltimeonthetrain.—_______.Ialsoliketotalkwithstrangers.A．Thatistrue B．ItsoundslikefunC．Idon’tthinkso D．Youarekidding20．Somepeopleusehand-writtenletters______typingbecausethey’remorepersonalandrepresentyoursincerity.A．inpreferencetoB．inprocessofC．inreferencewithD．insearchof第二部分阅读理解（满分40分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。21．（6分）EisanInternet-basedschoollocatedinBeijing,China.Asthebusinessgrows,weneedprofessionalsandopen-mindedindividualsfromtheUSA,theUK,Canada,Australia,NewZealand,andIrelandwhowouldlovetocontributetheirknowledge,ideas,teachingexperience,andcreativitytoourschool.ExperienceandQualifications:·OnlinenativeEnglishspeakersfromthecountriesreferredtoabove.·Below50yearsold.·Experiencedinlanguageteaching.·CELTAorotherTEFLcertificationorequivalent(同等的)experienceisanadvantage.·BeingabletospeakCHINESEisanadvantage.·Abletoteachthefollowingsubjectsinalldifferentagelevels:English,BusinessEnglish,Math,Science,SocialScience,TOEFL,andIELTS.DutiesandResponsibilitiesforVideoClassRecordings:·Theteachershouldmakea20-minutevideorecordingperlessonwithoutastudentusingourmaterialsandsoftware.·Theteachershouldmakethevideorecordinglessonsinteresting,livelyandfun.·Teachersshouldbemorecreativeespeciallyforbeginner’slessons.DutiesandResponsibilitiesforOnlineClass:·Deliverone-on-oneorgroupclasses.·Teachersshouldmaketheclasslivelyandinteresting.·Providingfeedback(反馈)oneverylessonisapartofteachers’work.PaymentandBenefits:ForVIDEOCLASSRECORDINGS30-50USDperhour.ForONLINECLASSES15USDperhouror7.5USDper30minutes.Alotofprizesawaityouifourstudentslikeyourvideos.You’llbecomefamousandyoucanearnmuchmorethanyoucanimagine.LessonSchedule:Mondays-Sundaysat4pm-11pm(thisscheduleisflexible)Ifyouareinterestedtoapply,youcansendyourresume(简历)withaphotoandsampleaudioorvideorecordedclasstomyemailaddress:341317451@or2564610797@.Formoreinformationaboutourcompany,youcanalsovisitourwebsitehttp://www..1、Theteacherswillmainlycomefrom________.A．EuropeandAfricaB．developedcountriesC．English-speakingcountriesD．countrieswhereEnglishisstudied2、Whowillbeatanadvantageamongequivalentapplicants?A．Thosewhoseageisbelow50.B．ThosewhocanspeakChinese.C．Heorshethathasteachingexperience.D．ThosewhosemothertongueisEnglish.3、Ifyouareadmittedasanonlineclassteacheryoushould________.A．makeyoureverylessoncreativeandinterestingB．makea20-minutevideorecordingeverydayaloneC．makevideorecordingsperlessonwithyourstudentsD．providefeedbackoneverylesson4、Ifateacherteachesonlineclassesthreehoursadayhewillget________.A．22.5dollarsB．45dollarsC．90dollarsD．150dollars5、Wecanlearnfromthispassagethat________.A．ifateacherhasachievementshe’llgetmuchmorepayB．theteachermusthaveCELTAorotherTEFLcertificationC．theteachershaveclasseseveryafternoonfromMondaytoFridayD．resumesaresenttothewebsitehttp://www.22．（8分）Untilrecently,voicecloning—orvoicebanking,asitwasthenknown—wasacustomizedindustrywhichservedthoseatriskoflosingthepowerofspeechtocancerorsurgery.Synthesizing（合成）avoicewasalongandexpensiveprocess.Itmeantrecordingmanyphrases,eachspokenmanytimes,withdifferentthehistoryoftheKidPassblogemotionalemphase（s重音）andindifferentcontexts(statement,question,commandandsoforth),inordertothetipsonwritinggoodarticlesonlinecoverallpossiblepronunciations.Notanymore.Softwareexiststhatcanstorepiecesofrecordedspeechwhichismerelyfivemillisecondslong,eachmarkedwithaprecisepitch（音高）.Thesecanbeputtogethertomakenewwords,andadjustedindividuallysothattheyfitharmoniouslyintotheirnewsonichomes.Thisismuchcheaperthanconventionalvoicebanking,andpermitsnovelusestobedeveloped.ThisyearVivoTextplanstoreleaseanappthatletsusersselecttheemphasis,speedandlevelofhappinessorsadnesswithwhichindividualwordsandphrasesareproduced.Mr.Silbertreferstotheemotivequalityofthehumanvoiceas“theultimateinstrument”.Yetthispoweralsotroubleshim.VivoTextlicensesitssoftwaretoHasbro,anAmericantoymakerkeentosellincreasinglyinteractiveplaythings.Hasbroisaware,Mr.Silbertnotes,thatwithoutsafeguardsanaughtychildmight,forexample,typeimpolitewordsonhismother’ssmartphoneinordertoseeayoungersiblingburstintotearsonhearingthemspokenbyatoyusingmum’svoice.Moretroubling,whentestedagainstvoice-biometricssoftwarelikethatusedbymanybankstoblockunauthorizedaccesstoaccounts,morethan80%ofthefakevoicestrickedthecomputer.AlanBlack,oneofFestvox’sdevelopers,thinkssystemsthatrelyonvoice-IDsoftwarearenow“deeply,fundamentallyinsecure”.Dr.Saxenaandhiscolleaguesaskedvolunteersifavoicesamplebelongedtoapersonwhoserealspeechtheyhadjustlistenedtoforabout90seconds.Thevolunteersrecognizedclonedspeechassuchonlyhalfthetime(ie,nobetterthanchance).Theoutcome,accordingtoGeorgePapcun,anexpertwitnesspaidtodetectfakerecordingsproducedasevidenceincourt,istheappearanceofatechnologywith“enormouspotentialvaluefordisinformation”.Asmightbeexpected,countermeasurestorecognizesuchdeception（欺骗）arebeingdeveloped.NuanceCommunications,amakerofvoice-activatedsoftware,isworkingonalgorithms（算法）thatdetecttinyskipsinfrequencyatthepointswhereslicesofspeecharestucktogether.Adobe,bestknownasthemarkerofPhotoshop,animage-editingsoftwaresuite,saysthatitmayadddigitalwatermarkstospeechsynthesizedbyavoice-cloningsoftwarecalledVoCoitisdeveloping.Suchtechnologymayhelpcomputersrecognizesuspiciousspeech.Evenso,itiseasytoimaginethechaosthatmightbecreatedinaworldwhichmakesiteasytoputauthentic-soundingwordsintothemouthsofopponents—betheycolleaguesorheadsofstate.1、Paragraphs1and2aremainlyabout.A．significantelementsinfluencingvoicecloningB．possibleapplicationsofvoicecloninginrealityC．complexitiesofcreatingasyntheticcopyofavoiceD．differencesbetweentraditionalandexistingvoicebanking2、What’sHasbro’sattitudetowardsVivoTest’snewapp?A．Optimistic.B．Conservative.C．Unconcerned.D．Subjective.3、TheexperimentcarriedoutbyDr.Saxenaandhiscolleaguesshowsthatvolunteers.A．identifiedclonedspeechinabout45secondsB．preferredarealspeechtoavoicesampleC．provedonlyalittlehardertofoolthansoftwareD．foundithardtousethesoftwaretorecordtheirvoices4、Whatcanweinferfromthelastparagraph?A．Investmentsshouldbeincreasedtoadvancevoicecloning.B．Long-termmeasuresshouldbetakentopopularizetheideaofvoicecloning.C．Disagreementsamongfirmsaboutthewaytotreatvoicecloningaregettingserious.D．Problemsofvoicecloningareunavoidabledespitetheeffortsthathavebeenmade.23．（8分）“Tomorrowisanotherday”—thislinehasimpressedvariouspeopleatvarioustimes.It’snow70yearsafter

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appearedinthefilm,butitstillseemstoholditspowerespeciallyduringaneconomicdownturn.ThephrasecomesfromafilmadaptationofMargaretMitchell’ssuccessful1936novelGoneWiththeWind.It’ssetintheAmericanSouthandtellsthestoryofastrongheroine,ScarlettO’Hara,whostrugglestofindloveduringtheCivilWarand,afterwards,ofherstrengthinsurvivingthewaranditshardships.LovestoryInamomentofdespair,ScarlettfinallyrealizesthatherlovebelongstoRhettButler.Formanyaudiences,itisthethemeofloveandstrugglethathaskeptthemoviealive.WhiletheburningofAtlantamightseemirrelevant(不相关的)totoday’sviewers,thetimelessthemeoflovekeepsitsabilitytotouchpeople.Withapromisetoherloverstillinhermind,ScarlettchoosestostayinthemidstofwarandtakecareofMelanie.ButherheartisbrokenwhenRhettjustwalksaway,leavingthewomanthatheoncelovedwithcruelwords,“Frankly,dear,Idon’tgiveadamn.”(毫不在乎)Greatepic(史诗)Thefilmshowsthelove-haterelationshipofthesecharacters,butalsoAmericanhistory,thefalloftheConfederacyandthefollowingperiodofReconstructionintheSouth.Thebackgroundmadethisfilmatrueclassicintheepicgenre.WhenthefilmopenedafterWorldWarII,Frenchviewerslovedit,anditremindedthemoftheirfightagainsttheNazis.In1940Shanghai,duringtheWarofResistanceAgainstJapaneseAggression(侵略),peoplestoodinlineforhourstowatchthisfilm,andsawthesamesufferingtheywerehavingaswellasthehopeandpossibilityofbuildinganewhomelandfromtheruins.Eachnationalitycouldidentifywiththestoryandseeitasavictory.Infact,GoneWiththeWindneverlostitscharmandabilitytoinspireandamaze.BiggestofalltimeThefilmhadfivedirectors,15-plusscreenwriters,andanunexpected$3.9millionbudget.Thefilmbroughtin$200million,whichmakesitthebiggestsellingfilmofalltimesinNorthAmerica.Italsowon10Academyawardsin1940.1、Theunderlinedword“it”inthefirstparagraphrefersto______.A．thenovelGonewiththeWindB．“tomorrowisanotherday”C．themovieGonewiththeWindD．theAcademyAward2、Thetextiswrittenmainlyto______.A．celebratetheanniversaryofMargaretMitchellB．introducehowthefilmwasdirectedandfilmedC．throwlighton(阐述)thecharmofthemovie“GonewiththeWind”D．inspirepeopletostruggletheeconomicdownturn3、ItcanbeconcludedthatScarlettO’Harais______.A．optimisticandluckyB．childishandrealisticC．caringandstubbornD．strong-mindedandpersistent(坚毅的)4、ThepassagementionsShanghaiinorderto______.A．provethatthebackgroundofthemovietouchedviewersB．describehowpopularthemoviewasatthattimeC．pointoutthatShanghaiwasacenterofentertainmentD．tellusthatChineseweresufferingtheWarthen24．（8分）Youknowthosenutritionguidelinesthegovernmentissueseveryfewyears?Itturnsoutthatfollowingthemisn'tjustgoodforyourhealth.It'sgoodfortheplanet,too.“Whatwefoundisthatimpactsvaryacrossnations,butinthehigh­impactnations,ingeneral,youcanseethat,ifyoufollowanationallyrecommendeddiet,despitethefactthatthesedietsdon'tmentionexplicitly—ormostofthemdon'texplicitlymention—environmentalimpacts,thatyouaregoingtohavelowerenvironmentalimpactsduetothat.Sothat'ssortoffairlyclearacrossallthehigh­incomenations.”saidPaulBehrens,anenvironmentalscientistatLeidenUniversityintheNetherlands.Thefoodweeattakesabigtollontheenvironment.Athirdoftheice­freelandonEarthisusedforagriculture,andaccordingtosomeestimates,producingfoodaccountsforroughlyafifthofallhuman­causedgreenhousegasemissions.Fertilizerrunoffalsoleadstootherproblems,likethealgaebloomsinLakeEerieandtheDeadZoneintheGulfofMexico.However,followingdietaryguidelineswouldreducethoseimpacts,especiallyinwealthycountriesliketheUS.“Mostofthereductionscomefrommeatanddairy，”whichhaveanoutsizedimpactonlanduseandpollution,andareamajorsourceofgreenhousegases.(That'spartlyduetocowfarts.Seriously.)Followingthesuggestionswouldalsomeaneatingfewercalories,sincemanypeoplehereeatmorethantheyneed.Overall,inhigh­incomecountries,Behren'steamestimatesthatfollowingtherulescouldresultinasmuchasa17percentreductioninlanduse,a21percentreductioninnutrientpollution,anda25percentdropinagriculturalgreenhousegasemissions.Cuttingdownonhowmuchfoodwewaste—whichisroughlyathirdintheUS—couldhelpevenmore.TheresultsareintheProceedingsoftheNationalAcademyofSciences.Ofcourse,peoplearenotoriouslybadatfollowingdiets.But:“Thesenationallyrecommendedguidelinesdoactuallyhaveaknock­oneffectonotherareasofpolicymaking.SoifI'mdevelopinganewhealthy­eating­for­schoolsprogramthenthat'sgoingtobebasedoffalotofdetailthatIgetfromthenationallyrecommendedguidelines.Sowhileitmightnotnecessarilybethecasethatpeoplefollowdirectly…theyactuallyarequiteinfluentialonthepreparationofotheradvice.”Itseemsthatasmallerenvironmentalfootprintandahealthierlifestylecouldgohandinhand.1、WhichofthefollowingstatementwillPaulBehrensapproveof?A．Followinganationallyrecommendeddietcanhavesimilarimpactsindifferentcountries.B．Followinganationallyrecommendeddietcandogoodtoourhealth.C．Notallthecountrieshaverecommendeddietsinanexplicitmanner.D．Somehigh­incomenationsdon'tmentionthedietexplicitlyforitsimpactscanbeignored.2、Whatdotheunderlinedwords“takesabigtollon”inparagraph3probablymean?A．showssignsof B．hasabadeffectonC．takesfulladvantageof D．makesupfor3、WhichofthefollowingisTRUEaccordingtothepassage?A．Foodproductioncanleadtoabout20percentofhuman­causedgreenhousegaswithonlyathirdoftheice­freelandused.B．Itisestimatedthatfollowingdietaryguidelinescanleadtodecreaseinmorelandusethaninnutrientpollution.C．PaulBehrens'newprogramconcerninghealthyeatingforschoolsislikelytobebasedonnationalnutritionguidelines.D．Somewealthycountriestendtoreducemeatanddairythoughtheotherareasofpolicymakingisn'teffectedmuch.25．（10分）Youarechattingwithfriendsonthephone,butyoucan’thelpbrowsingashoppingwebsiteinthemeantime.You’reeatinglunchaloneinthecanteen,butitonlyfeelsrightwhenyoustartplayingashowonyourphone—asifit’sanecessarysidedish.Wenowliveinaworldthatbombardsuswithinformation.Itseemsunnaturaltodoonlyonethingatatime.It’sasifwe’reallsufferingfromwhatarecentQdailyarticlecalled“multitaskingOCD”(多任务强迫症).“Withnewsreducedto140charactersandcommunicationincreasinglymadebyemojis(表情符号),wehavedevelopedtheabilitytofocusourattentiononseveralactivitiesanddevicesatthesametime.”SabyOtmani,founderofthewebsitePulpix,oncewrote,“Weneedlotsofstimuli(刺激元素)tokeepusinterestedandtofightoffboredom.”Butperhaps“fightingoffboredom”isnottheonlyreason.Myownobsessionwithmultitaskingmainlycomesfromthefactthateveryonearoundmeseemstobeconstantlystudying.Eachminutewithoutnewinformationfeelslikeawasteoftime.SoIalwayshavemyheadphoneson,whetherI’mcommuting,exercisingorwalkinginthepark.I’mforeverlisteningtosomething—acourseonclassicalmusic,oronnewmediamanagement,andheavenknowswhatelse—justsoIcankeepupwiththeworld.Peoplewhocan’tstayawayfromsocialmediaareknownasFOMO(fearofmissingout).Theyhavetobeconstantlyupdatedaboutwhattheirfriendsaredoingandsaying.ButI’dguessthat“FOFO”betterdescribesme—“fearoffallingout”.Nomatterwhatyourreason,multitaskingisapartofmodernlife.Doyourbesttomakethemostoutofit.1、Withtheexamplesinthefirstparagraph,theauthorintendsto________.A．explainwhat“multitaskingOCD”islike B．showhowbusytoday’slifeisC．showthatpeopletodayoftenfeellost D．showpeopleliketobefashionable2、Whydopeoplelikemultitasking,accordingtoOtmani?A．Theylackthepatiencetofinishonethingatatime.B．Itcanhelpthemtocommunicatetheirideas.C．Theyaremoreablethanthepastgeneration.D．Itcanpreventthemfrombeingbored.3、Theunderlinedword“obsession”isclosestinmeaningto“________”.A．interest B．knowledge C．understanding D．worry4、Whyisthewritercrazyaboutmultitasking?She________.A．wantstostayaheadofherfriends B．wantstohavesomethingtoshowoffC．doesn’twanttogetleftbehindbyothers D．thinksitisboringtodoonethingatatime第三部分语言知识运用（共两节）第一节（每小题1.5分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项．26．（30分）AxelWinchwasbornnearly13weeksprematurely(早产地).He12pounds,12ouncesandhadbleedinginhisbrain,visionandhearing2.Afteraweekinthe3inGrandJunction,whereparentsMelissaandAdamWinchlive,he4alife-threateningintestinal(肠道的)condition.Doctors5toairlift(空运)AxelandMelissamorethan200milestoChildren’sHospitalinAurora.Hishealthremained6overthenextfewweeksashislungsshutdown.“Thereweremanytimeswedidn’tthinkhewasgoingto7.”Adamsaid.8,supportwasontheway.Melissa,39,isapoliceofficer.ThepolicedepartmentinGrandJunction9officersinAurora.Soon,membersoftheAurorapolicedepartment10thehospitalwithoffersofhelp.Onebroughtthembananabread.Adetectivegavethe11aplacetostay.Butthenthingsgot12again.AfterweeksofcaringforAxelinAurora,thecouplehadtobrieflyreturntoGrandJunctionontwoseparate13.First,theirhousehadbeenundercontractandtheyhadto14intwodays.Thesecondtime,Melissa’s15hadrunout,soshehadtoreturntoworkforafewdays.Theyhatedhavingtoabandontheirson,whohadimprovedbutwasstillfacing16surgeries.“Wewereafraidhewasgoingtodiewhileweweregone,”Adamsays.AurorapoliceMikesetupa17forhisofficerstospendtimewithAxel—whenhis18couldn’thethere.They19theparentsphotosofthemselvesasleepwithAxelandupdatesfromthenurses.Afterfourmonthsinthehospital,Axelwas20enoughtogohome.1、A．lost B．measured C．weighed D．gained2、A．mistakes B．problems C．systems D．aids3、A．hospital B．family C．prison D．church4、A．determined B．changed C．improved D．developed5、A．decided B．promised C．waited D．hoped6、A．stable B．safe C．dangerous D．harmful7、A．play B．live C．work D．study8、A．Gradually B．Obviously C．Properly D．Fortunately9、A．contacted B．fired C．praised D．persuaded10、A．escaped B．left C．flooded D．shut11、A．team B．child C．couple D．policeman12、A．correct B．tough C．normal D．easy13、A．areas B．classes C．occasions D．groups14、A．moveout B．breakdown C．pullin D．stayup15、A．idea B．luck C．energy D．leave16、A．open B．further C．previous D．quiet17、A．house B．company C．schedule D．library18、A．classmates B．friends C．teachers D．parents19、A．handed B．asked C．texted D．returned20、A．strong B．brave C．fast D．confident第二节（每小题1.5分，满分15分）阅读下面材料，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。27．（15分）Forthose1．haveseenWarforthePlanetoftheApes,it’seasytocometothisconclusion-themovieisn’taboutwarortheplanet,andit’snot2．(necessary)evenabouttheapes.Themovieisabout3．(survive)andthechoicesweallmakewhenonewantstosurvive,goodorbad.Withastorythatshouldhavebenfullofconflictandviolence,ittakesadifferentapproach.Youmayfind4．(you)exposedtosmallpocketsofaction.Whilerecentsci-fimovieshavebecome5．(know)fortheiractionandscenes,WarforthePlanetoftheApeshastakensciencefiction6．athoughtfulandintelligentdirection.WarforthePlanetoftheApesmaynotbetheactionandmonsterfilmthatyouhadinmind,7．it’sthekindoffilmthatwillmakeyouwanttositinsilenceinthetheaterforafewminutesafteritends,takingin8．you’vejustwitnessed.Thefewmoviesthathavethateffect9．(be)usuallyabouthumans,butthisfilmenablespeople10．(feel)thatwayaboutapes.Andthatiswhatmakesitamasterpiece.第四部分写作（共两节）第一节短文改错（满分10分）28．（10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不