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25届南昌零模应用文读后续写应用文原题假设你是李华,今年暑假你和同学相约南昌梅岭风景区,进行了为期一天的徒步活动,请你以AHikingExperience为题给校英文报写一篇短文分享这次经历,内容包括:活动的过程;采取的防护措施;个人感受写作思路和语料积累写作提纲:paragraph1:总述事件──谁做了什么事情paragraph2:详细介绍──准备+出发+休息+所见paragraph3:最后收尾──所感写作语料:①总述:hadamemorablehikingadventureinMeiLingScenicArea②准备:tookproperpreparations,applyingsunscreen,wearinglongsleeves,andcarryingenoughwater.③出发:Thedaybeganearlywithusassemblingatthefootofthemountain.④过程:followwindingtrailsatabriskpace,weascendedthemountain;encourageeachothertokeepgoing⑤休息:takebreaksundertheshadeoccasionally;⑥休息:Wetookourtime,stoppingoccasionallytotakephotographsandadmirethebreathtaking/spectacular/picturesqueviews.⑦抵达:whenarrivingatthesummit,weweregreeted/rewardedwiththegrandview.⑧感想:demandingasthehikingwas,itwasadayfilledwithexcitement,challenges,andunforgettablemoments.⑨感想:wereturnedhomewithnotonlyanewfoundaweofnature,butalsoaheartfullofcherishedmemories.AHikingExperience参考范文:Thissummervacation,IjoinedmyclassmatesforahikingtripintheMeilingScenicAreainNanchang.Wetookproperpreparations,applyingsunscreen,wearinglongsleeves,andcarryingbugrepellentandenoughwater.Webeganwithagentleclimbandtookregularbreaksundertheshade.Thehikingwastough,butthesupportfromfriendsmadeitenjoyable.Reachingthepeak,wewererewardedwithabreathtakingview.Thistripwasmorethananescapefromthecityheat.Wereturnedhomewithnotonlyasunkissedglowbutalsoaheartfullofcherishedmemories.读后续写原题阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“We'redownsizing.”Thebosssaid.AndAlexwaslaidoffwithoutwarning.Hishands,oncesteadyonthefactorymachinery,trembledashepackedhisbelongings.Friends,onceunitedbythemonrhythmofthefactorywhistle,wentaway,theirlivesbranchingintonewpathsthatdidn'tincludehim.“Ajobsaman'sbackbone,"hisfatherwouldconstantlysayindisappointment.Hewanderedthroughlife,movinglikeaboatwithoutarudder(舵).Unemployedanduncertain,hisdaysweregrayandboring,punctuatedbytheoccasionaljobinterviewsthatlednowhere.Oneday,thecoldrainfell,matchingthedespairthathadsettledinhisheart.Duckingintothenearestshelter,hepushedopentheheavydoorsoftheoldtownlibrary,aplacehehadn'tvisitedsincehisschooldays.Withfewpeopleinthelibrary,theplacewasquiet,whosetoweringbookshelveswerelikesilentsoldiersguardingthewisdomoftheages.Themustyscentofagedpaperandthesoftwhispersofturningpagesenvelopedhim,offeringthepeacehehadn'thadforalongtime.Hebeganvisitingthelibrarydaily,awayfromthenoiseofhisownuncertainty.Eachbookwasawindowtoanotherworld,anotherlife,andhefoundhimselfdrawntothestoriesofthosewhohadfacedadversityandemergedstronger.Sometimes,thelibrarian,Mrs.Harper,akind,silverhairedwoman,oftenbroughthimcupsofhotchocolateorcoffee,hersilentsupportaforttohiswearyspirit.Asweeksturnedintomonths,Alexfoundhimselflostinthepiles,divingintobiographiesandhistories,philosophiesandscientificbreakthroughs.Hereadaboutgreatminds,inventors,andvisionarieswhohadoncestoodattheedgeofdespair,onlytorisetothepeakofsuccessandfounddirectionsanddiscoveredhispassionfortechnologyandinnovation.Greatlyinspired,Alexsignedupforaprogrammingcourseontechnologyandexcelledit.Withanewfoundsenseofdirection,hebeganhisjobsearchwithdetermination.paragrapgh1:Despitethetoughpetition,Alexaimedforpositionsatmajorpanies.paragrapgh2:Yearslater,hegotthenewsthatthelibrarywasclosingforlackoffunds.续写思路主要大意:这篇文章讲述了Alex被突然解雇后的生活。失业和不确定的未来让他的日子变得灰暗和无聊,偶尔的面试也没有任何结果。在一个寒冷的雨天,他走进了久违的小镇图书馆,那里的宁静和书籍给他带来了久违的平静。他开始每天去图书馆,沉浸在各种书籍中,特别是那些克服逆境、变得更强大的人的故事。随着时间的推移,Alex在图书馆的书籍中找到了对技术和创新的热情,并报名参加了一个编程课程。续写方向:描述Alex在竞争激烈的就业市场中如何利用他在图书馆学到的知识和编程技能,以及他如何克服困难,最终在一家大公司找到工作。但忙于工作,不再像以往每日去图书馆。描述多年后,当Alex得知图书馆因资金不足而面临关闭时,他的感受和行动。他可能会利用他的成功和资源来帮助图书馆,也许是通过筹款活动、吸引更多的社区支持,或者甚至投资图书馆,以确保它能够继续为其他人提供知识和灵感的源泉。参考范文Despitethetoughpetition,Alexaimedforpositionsatmajorpanies.Hecarefullytailoredhisresumeandpouredallhiseffortsintopreparingforinterviews.Facedwithstrongpetitorsandrejections,hewasoverwhelmedwithhighpressure.Gatheringhimself,hedrewstrengthfromtheresiliencehehadlearnedfromthegreatminds.Alexrosetothechallengeandrefinedhisapproach.Finally,hispersistencepaidoffwhenhewasofferedaposition,wherehecouldapplyhispassionandtalenttoinnovation.(71字)Yearslater,hegotthenewsthatthelibrarywasclosingforlackoffunds.HecalledMrsHarperandwasinformedthatthelibrary,hissanctuaryduringhisdarkestdays,wasstrugglingtostayopen.Thelibrarywaslikeaboatadriftinastorm.Thenewshithimhard,stirringupmemoriesamongthestacks.Withouthesitation,Alexsprangintoaction,offeringfinancialcontributionsandorganizingafundraisingcampaign.Finally,thelibrarysurvived,itsdoorsopenformanymoretofindpeaceandinspiration.(71字)下水范文Despitethetoughpetition,Alexaimedforpositionsatmajorpanies.Hebecameafamiliarfigureinthebustlingtalentmarkets,hiseyesalwaysbeamingwithconfidence.Thetimeinthelibraryhadequippedhimwitharesilienceandabreadthofknowledgethatsethimapartandtheinterviewswereneverdauntingashedrewstrengthfromthestoriesofgreatmindshehadreadinthelibrary.Eventually,hispersistencepaidoffandhesecured/landedapositionataleadingtechnologyfirm.Withdaysprogressingandhisroleatthepanyincreasinglydemanding,theoncedailyvisitstothelibrarybecamealuxur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