语文版四年级上册语文作文提升练习

语文版四年级上册语文作文提升练习一、快乐习作。题目：假如我是要求：你是否也经常幻想，假如我是一只小鸟，我就能……；假如我是魔法师，我会……如果给你一个机会，你会变成谁？你会做些什么呢？先把题目补充完整，再把你的想法写出来，字数在350字左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、写作天地。题目：春天来到我身边要求：1．仔细观察身边春天到来的景象，选择合适的景物进行描写；2．文章布局合理，描写有序，动静结合；3．字数在400字左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、写作天地。题目：满意要求：1．想一想谁做了什么事？让谁很满意？选择合适的题材把事情写具体；2．写出自己真实的感情和想法，注意语句的通顺；3．字数400字左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四、习作表达。那一刻，我真（高兴、紧张、难过、激动、害怕……）提示：先把题目补充完整。再围绕题目写一件印象深刻的事，注意写清楚事情的经过和感受。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五、快乐作文。题目：这里风景独好美丽的风景无处不在，只要你留心观察。以“这里风景独好”为题，写一写你见过的风景好的地方，要按一定的顺序写，做到条理清晰，语句通顺。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六、快乐习作。你最喜爱的是什么呢？是一个人一件事，一处景物还是一件物品呢？你最喜欢的他的原因是什么？请你以“我最喜爱的”为题，用具体的事例写一篇习作，要求把题目补充完整，做到重点突出，内容具体，语句通顺。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________七、习作训练。新编童话故事很有趣，我们也来一起编写吧！可以新编《龟兔赛跑》，也可以另选一个熟悉的故事，如《狐假虎威》《井底之蛙》《狐狸和乌鸦》，创编新故事。题目自拟，400字左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________八、习作训练。生活中，你一定有喜欢的东西或喜欢做的事情，其中也一定发生了许多有趣的故事……请你以“我喜欢”为题目，写一篇不少于400字的作文，把你喜欢的事物或喜欢做的事情写出来。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________九、习作训练。假如你们班来了一位新班主任，他想尽快熟悉班里的同学。请以“我的‘自画像’”为题，向班主任介绍自己，让他更好地了解你。注意写出自己的特点。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________十、快乐习作。小朋友你一定和爸爸妈妈外出旅游过吧，哪一处风景名胜给你留下深刻的印象呢？无论是一处著名的旅游景点，还是一处不起眼的小地方，拿起你的笔写一写吧。要求：1．按一定的顺序写；2．抓住景物的特点写；3．题目自拟。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________十一、习作表达。题目：想起那件事，我就提示：横线上可以填开心、激动、后悔、自豪……要求：先将题目补充完整，再作文；叙述清楚，条理清晰；内容具体、完整；富有真情实感；语句通顺、连贯；标点符号使用恰当；不得抄袭、套作；字迹整、规范；文中不得出现真实的人名、地名等相关信息；字数不少于350。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________十二、写作天地。先读明白要求，再选择一个内容，自拟题目写一篇作文。1．在你亲身经历的事情中，选一件印象最深的写下来。注意：按照一定的顺序把事情写清楚，并写出自己当时的心情，表达真情实感。2．神话或者童话故事里的人物，往往都有超强本领、特异功能，比如点石成金、瞬间转移、隐身、时光倒流、飞天遁地、去哪里的WIFI都可以自动进入……发挥想象，编写一个神话（或童话）故事，让你故事里的人物也有一两种特异功能。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________十三、习作表达。题目：以“我的好朋友”为题目，写一篇记叙文。要求：（1）可以写人，也可以写物。（2）有中心、有条理。叙述的时候要注意些清楚他（它）为什么是你的好朋友。字数在350字左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________十四、习作展示。玩儿是孩子们最开心、最难忘的事儿。你和小朋友在一起（或者你独处时）会玩些什么？选一件你印象最深的事，按照一定顺序，把这件事情写清楚。题目自己定。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________十五、快乐习作。“尝试”也就是试一试，是非常有意义的实践活动。它可能成功，也可能失败。然而不管怎么样，它都会使你有所发现，有所收获。请以“那是一次的尝试”为题，选取你生活中经历的一次尝试，把它写下来。要求：把题目补充完整，书写工整，标点正确，语句通顺，条理清楚。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案一、例文：假如我是一只小鸟一天清晨，我打开窗户，看到一群小鸟在天空中飞来飞去。它们很欢快地在风中飞翔，不停地叽叽喳喳叫着。于是我陷入了无尽的遐想。假如我是一只小鸟，我想飞去北京，去看看语文课本里雄伟的万里长城，去看看圆明园的名胜古迹，去欣赏颐和园的美丽风景。假如我是一只小鸟，我一定要去感受祖国的大好河山！假如我是一只小鸟，我要飞到大海上，看看大海是多么的宽阔，见识一下可爱的海豚在大海里快乐的游来游去。看看书本里的鲸鱼到底有多么的庞大。假如我是一只小鸟，我想飞到伦敦，看我最喜欢的伦敦跨年烟花晚会，那艳丽的烟花在天空中争奇斗艳，让我心潮澎湃。假如我是一只小鸟，我要飞到埃及，去看看金字塔里的木乃伊，去感受一下古国的伟大文明。假如我是一只小鸟，我要飞入人群中，用我欢快的歌声为人们消除忧愁带来无尽的欢乐。假如我是一只小鸟，我要飞入森林，去看看森林里的可爱的动物们是怎样快乐的生活，我还要和它们交朋友，成为它们中的一员。假如我是一只小鸟，我可以做很多很多我现在做不到的事情，可我不是一只小鸟。但是我可以通过自己的努力，插上梦想的翅膀，让自己飞翔。二、范文：春天来到我身边春天的颜色真是五彩缤纷：太阳是红灿灿的，天空是湛蓝的，树梢是嫩绿的，迎春花是娇黄的……难怪世人会吟咏春天，画家爱描绘春天，因为春天是世界一切美的融洽，一切彩的总汇。春天是生命的使者，“忽如一夜春风来”春风饱含着深情，悄悄来到了人间，轻盈地奔跑着，送来了温暖的阳光，逗笑了冰冻的小河，唤醒了冬眠的生灵，吹绿了田间的麦苗……清晨走在路上，你会觉得那醉人的春风竟扒面而来，那熬了一冬有点儿僵硬的行人的面容，霎时舒展开来，被温柔的春风抚摸得有了几分悦色。这时你放眼四周，到处是生命之绿的蓬勃，到处是妩媚春色的涌动，到处是充满活力的生机。这和煦的春风，没有狂躁，没有暴虐，没有欺骗，没有惊心动魄，有的只是温暖与温柔。与之相比，那些冰雹、雷电、山崩、海啸……都不值一提。随着第一场雨的降临，春姑娘提着裙角，迈着轻盈的步伐，翩然而至。每个地方，都有她的足迹；每个角落都留下了她的倩影。看：那长长的柳枝是她飘逸的长发，在风中飞舞;那碧绿的草坪是她的纱衣，在风中飞扬。瞧，春姑娘正在我们的校园中漫步，她走过的每一个角落都在萌发着新的生命。三、范文：满意在一个阳光明媚的早晨，爷爷带我去上书法课。书法班搬家了，书法班原来从我家一出门走几步就到了，可是现在我要走七八条路口。爷爷开着三轮车带我来到了书法班，书法老师笑眯眯地拉着我的手走进屋里，我急忙跑回爷爷身边对爷爷说：“再见。”爷爷也对我说再见。一转眼的功夫，一节书法课过去了。老师带我们坐公交车回家，我们上了公交车，有的同学坐着坐着就睡着了，有的同学在打游戏，有的同学在交流说话，还有的同学在观察欣赏窗户外面的小鸟和风景，还有的同学在看书等等。下一站到了，几位年轻的阿姨叔叔上了公交车，车子刚要启动的时候，我从窗外看见一位老爷爷奋力地喊着什么，仔细一听原来老爷爷在喊：“等一下，等一下。”我见了忙对公交车师傅说“等一下”，司机师傅停住车问“怎么了？”我说：“一位老爷爷要上车。”司机把门儿打开了，只见老爷爷颤巍巍地上了车，老爷爷白发苍苍的，脸上布满了皱纹，喘着粗气，我赶紧看了一下周围还有没有空的位置，一个座位也没有了。我想了一下，然后跳下了座位说：“老爷爷，我看见您跑得这么累，这个座位还是您坐吧！”“谢谢你啊，小朋友，还是你坐吧！”“不用，我不累，我坐了一路了，正好起来活动一下。”老爷爷连连感谢。“不用谢”。说完就把老爷爷扶到了座位上。车子上的人都对我竖起了大拇指，我对我这次的表现很满意。四、范文：那一刻，我真高兴骑自行车，我很早就学会了，可是，骑自行车转一百八十度的弯，我还不会。转弯时，要么就是摔倒在地，要么就是骑到了路旁的草丛里……总之，一直都没有学会。一个星期六的晚上，我和妈妈像往常一样，来到了钱塘江的江堤上练自行车转弯。我坐在自行车座上，用力的踩着踏板，在自行车平稳后，我猛的把龙头往左一偏，整个自行车立马往左倾斜，我下意识的自我保护，马上把脚放到地上，这才支撑住了整个自行车。我没有气馁，把车掉了个头，继续练习。我继续骑着自行车，到妈妈身旁时，吸取了上一次的教训，没有转的那么猛，轻轻的往左边稍微偏了一点，可没有如愿，只转了九十度的弯，骑进了路旁的草丛里……我每一次练习差不多都是这两种情况，我不知道到到底应该怎么做。这时，妈妈说：“转弯时要放慢速度，龙头偏的角度也要适中。”听了妈妈的话，我又试了一次。这次我一开始就放慢了速度，车平稳后，我小心翼翼的把龙头往左偏了四十五度，手颤颤抖抖的，生怕车会倒掉，慢慢的，自行车在地面上画了一个半圆，我成功了！我太高兴了！这就是我努力了半个月的成果！那一刻，我真高兴！高兴我学会了一百八十度的转弯！五、示例：这里风景独好没有泰山的巍峨，没有长城的壮丽，也没有黄果树瀑布的豪迈……我们学校校园最美。每天一进校园就看到美丽的小花园。小花园右手边是一棵高大的榕树，郁郁葱葱，像一柄绿色的大伞。榕树底下凉快极了，在酷暑难当的盛夏，它可是一个极好的避暑“胜地”。中间是一棵菠萝蜜树。每到五月份，树上就长出一个个淡黄色的花苞。暑假过后，只见菠萝蜜树上就长出一个个比足球还大的菠萝蜜。左手边也是一棵高大榕树，它虽然饱经风霜，却仍然郁郁苍苍，充满生机。它有四层楼那么高，像一个绿色的卫兵在保护我们的安全。树下还有一些石桌石椅，供人们休息、学习、工作。每天早晨，院子里传来哥哥姐姐们的朗朗书声。中午，院子里飘来泡面的香味，让人直流口水。傍晚时，院子里热闹非凡，有的你追我赶，有的踢足球，还有的在聊天……我们校园就是这样一个美丽、充满生机的地方。这里风景独好！六、范文：我喜欢的植物我最喜欢芦荟。它长着挺拔秀丽的身体，还有既水灵又饱满的绿色叶子。我把芦荟当做中草药，因为我哪里受了伤，即使火辣辣的疼，我也会拿芦荟的绿叶子来止疼。抹上芦荟汁液我受伤的地方立刻会清凉无比，虽然还是有点隐隐作痛，但是已经可以消肿、止疼了。夏天，讨厌的蚊子，给我送来一个个“红包”让我奇痒我比。这时候，我就用芦荟的叶子消肿、止痒。而且夏天的天气很闷热，会让我的身上起一些“豆子”，我就会用芦荟的叶子清凉一下，“豆子”一下子就不痒了。正因为这样，可怜的芦荟做出了重大的牺牲，他的身上留下了一道道让它心甘情愿的伤疤。也因为这样，我才这么的爱护它。因为它为我做出牺牲，它想要的是我对它的爱。所以我就这么回报它啦！我喜欢芦荟，我更喜欢它舍己为人、助人为乐的可贵精神！我们人类也要向这种植物学习和致敬呢！七、示例：《龟兔赛跑》新编兔子输掉了比赛，它趁着乌龟领奖时偷偷溜回了家，心里后悔万分：我真是不应该在大树底下睡觉，要不然怎么会输给乌龟呢？不行！我一定要改掉骄傲的毛病，和乌龟再比一场。于是，它开始拼命练习。早晨，公鸡一叫，它就起来训练耐力；晚上，直到星星开始眨眼，它还在训练速度。日子一天天过去了，由于勤学苦练，兔子跑步的技术越来越高超，多次在森林举办的各种跑步比赛中获奖。乌龟呢？自从得奖后，它就整天挂着奖牌到处演讲，宣传自己打败兔子的经历。当别人告诉它兔子刻苦训练的消息时，它不屑一顾地想：反正兔子也是我的手下败将，就算它还要比的话我也不怕。于是，它仍然一天到晚不厌其烦地讲述着自己的胜利。三个月后，兔子正式向乌龟提出挑战，第二次龟兔赛跑开始了。森林里的小动物们都赶来助威。发令枪一响，只见兔子像离弦的箭一样冲了出去，一下就跑得没了影儿了。跑到半路上，它觉得有点累，真想休息，但转念一想：我一定不能犯老毛病。于是咬牙坚持了下去。而乌龟一直在慢慢地爬，小动物们看了都很着急。可乌龟想：这次兔子肯定还会睡觉的，我根本不用着急。可是等乌龟爬到终点的时候，兔子已经领完奖了，乌龟羞得把头和四肢都缩进了壳里，再也不敢见人了。这次比赛让乌龟明白了一个道理：谦虚使人进步，骄傲使人落后。八、范文：我喜欢那是一双温暖的手，是一双永远也回不来的手。这双手陪伴我度过了快乐童年，这双手就是姥爷的手。姥爷的手很粗糙，手掌有很多老茧，但这双手在我的脑海中留下很多永远抹不去的回忆。姥爷的手是灵巧的。记得有一次，姥爷说要给我做木偶娃娃，我半信半疑。只见姥爷拿出一根木料，动手做了起来。姥爷先用锯子将木棒分成两段，然后，用小刀将其中一根认真地削了起来，就在这时，锋利的小刀将姥爷的手划破了。我大叫一声：“姥爷，你的手流血了，怎么办呀？”姥爷却满脸笑容地说：“没事，这点小伤不算什么，给你做木偶娃娃才是重要的。”姥爷用手轻轻地擦掉血迹，继续做了起来。我的眼睛模糊了，我知道流出来的并不是血，而是对我的爱啊！姥爷给我做的玩具我会永远珍藏，每个玩具都记载着一个故事，每个故事都是一段爱的谱曲！姥爷的手是勤劳的。每天早上，姥爷都会把院子打扫得干干净；到了播种时，姥爷早早地就给土地松土；播种后，还要经常给庄稼浇水，施肥，锄草；抽空还要给果树剪枝，打药。在秋天收获时，地里仍能看到姥爷忙碌的身影。每当秋天看到树枝上挂着红彤彤的果实，就会让我想到了姥爷那双勤劳的手。虽然姥爷已经不在了，但是姥爷那双勤劳、灵巧的手永远铭刻在我心中！九、范文：我的自画像我叫陈颖玥，是个女孩子，今年十岁了，耳朵大大的，人家说耳朵大的人很有福气。我的鼻子小巧，微微翘起，显得有几分灵气。总的来说我给人的印象是聪明又伶俐。我属虎，脾气就像老虎一样暴躁，有一次，我要看电视，妈妈却不让，把电视机给关了，我才不理她这一套呢！又把电视机开了，这样“你”关，“我”开，来来回回好几次。妈妈终于火了说：“你真不听话，给我滚出去”！我听了，瞪了妈妈一眼，开门就走，最后还是妈妈把我拖回来的！你看我脾气坏吗？我还喜欢唱歌，不高兴的时候唱歌，兴奋的时候唱歌，无聊的时候唱歌，家人还给我取了一个外号—“小歌迷”呢！我还有一个爱好那就是看书。一放学回家就拿起书来看。《安徒生童话》，《民间故事》，《一千零一夜》我爱看；《长袜子皮皮》，《欧阳海》，《雷锋》，我爱看《西游记》，《红楼梦》，《水浒》我更是看得津津有味儿。我看的