读后续写+疤痕背后：汤姆的觉醒+讲义 高一下学期期中考试英语试题

第1页/共1页育华中学23-24学年高一第二学期期中测试英语学科阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tom’sfamilywasasmallfamilyonthecoastallineofasmallvillage.Tomwas11yearsold.Hewastall,darkandhandsomeandhadalotofdreams.Hehadalwaysdreamtoflivinginacity.Hewasalwayshisdad’scharm,ashewasnotquitehappytospendtimewithhismom.Allhecouldrememberabouthismomwasherscars,redandwhitescarsonherface,neckandhands.Healwaysfeltunpleasanttoseehismom’sface.Butwhathedidnotknowwasthathismomscratchedherbeautytosavehimfromafirewhenhewasoneyearold.Notwantingtoburdenhimwithit,Tom’sparentskeptitasecret.HismomMariausedtodrophimtoschoolandpickhimupeveryday.Hefeltawkwardtoseehismomwiththatscarredfacestandinginfrontoftheschoolgate.Ashewaslaughingandchattingwithhisfellowschoolmates,allofthembecamesilentandstartedstaringatthegate.So,Tomturnedtowardsthegatewithalotofcuriosity.Hefrozewhenseeinghismom,facecoveredwithapieceofcloth.Tomfeltashamedandrushedoutoftheschoolwithlotsofanger.Withdayspassingby,Tomstartedtodislikehismommore.Hedidnotliketogetpickedupordroppedbyhismom.Hefeltthatshewasuglyandsoabnormal.Ashegrewold,hestoppedgoingoutwithhertothemarketoranywhereoutside.Kamalatriedherbesttomakehersonhappy,gothimeverythingthathewantedandgavehimhisspace.Sheunderstoodwhathersonwasgoingthroughandfeltpityforherselfandsadforherson,asshewashelpless.WhenTomturned16,hewassenttoacityhighschool80kilometersawayfromhiscoastalvillage.Theverythoughtofnotbeingwithhisuglymothermadehimveryhappy.Threeyearslater,thencameTom’sgraduationceremony.Hisparentsdidn’twanttobeabsentfromsuchanimportantoccasion,sotheymanagedtobetherewithoutinformingTom.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Tomwasshockedwhenhesawhisparentsappearattheceremonyhall._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hesitatingforamoment,Tom’sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversion:Tomwasshockedwhenhesawhisparentsappearattheceremonyhall.Hestoodrootedtothefloorforamoment,notknowingwhattodo.Secondslater,hetriedtocontainhimselfandawkwardlywalkeduptogreethisfather,ignoringhismother’sexistence.Butwhenheheardotherswhisperingabouthismum’suglyface,embarrassmentcameoverhim.Withangerwrittenallonhisface,hepushedhismumhardoutofthehall.SeeingTom’smumleavewithdeepsorrow,hisfatherfollowedherout.Hesitatingforamoment,Tom’sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago.Hismumgotburntseverelytosavehiminaterriblefire.Tearsstreameddownhisfacewhenherecollectedhowmuchhehadhurtheralltheseyears,howhehadignoredherandherealizedtheamountofpainandagonyshehadgonethrough.Aftertheceremony,hefoundhismumandembracedher,saying“Sorry”againandagain.Fromthenon,hethoughtofhismom’sfaceevenwithscarsasthemostbeautifulfaceintheworldandhismomasthemostrespectedwomanintheworld.文章大意：这篇文章讲述了Tom的故事，他是一个11岁的男孩，梦想着离开他所在的小村庄，去城市生活。Tom不喜欢他的母亲Maria，因为她脸上有疤痕，这让他感到不舒服。他不知道的是，这些疤痕是母亲在火灾中救他时留下的。随着Tom长大，他越来越不喜欢和母亲一起外出。当Tom16岁时，他去了一个远离家乡的城市高中，他对此感到很高兴，因为他不再需要和母亲一起生活。三年后，在他高中毕业典礼上，他的父母没有告诉他就出现了，这让他感到震惊。几处伏笔以及在续写中的回应：1.伏笔：Tom对母亲脸上的疤痕感到尴尬。回应：在毕业典礼上，父母突然出现，可能会引发Tom对母亲疤痕背后故事的了解。2.伏笔：Maria对Tom的理解和给予他空间。回应：在毕业典礼上，可能会展示Maria对Tom的爱和牺牲，以及Tom对母亲看法的改变。3.伏笔：Tom对城市生活的向往。回应：毕业典礼可能是Tom人生的一个转折点，他可能会开始理解家庭的重要性。续写要点（分两段）：1.描述Tom在毕业典礼上看到父母突然出现时的反应，以及他内心的震惊和混乱。2.描述父亲向Tom透露母亲疤痕背后的故事，以及这一启示对Tom的影响。主旨升华句：1.Thetruemeasureofbeautyisnotskindeep;itliesintheactsofloveandsacrifice.2.Sometimes,themostimportantlessonsinlifearelearnednotintheclassroom,butatthefeetofourparents.3.Theloveofamotherisaflamethatburnsthroughadversity,illuminatingthepathtounderstandingandcompassion.4.Thescarswebeararenotjustmarksonourskin,butstoriesofourjourney,writteninthelanguageoflove.5.Itisinthemomentsofrevelationthatwecometoappreciatethedepthofamother'sloveandthetruemeaningoffamily.三篇写作范文：范文一：Tomwasshockedwhenhesawhisparentsappearattheceremonyhall.Hisheartracedashewatchedthemnavigatethroughthecrowd,hismother'sfacestillmarredbythescarshehadoncefoundsorepulsive.Astheyapproached,hewasovercomewithamixofemotions,buttheprideintheireyeswasunmistakable.Theyhadcometocelebratehisachievement,andinthatmoment,hefeltapangofguiltfortheyearsofdistancehehadputbetweenthem.Hesitatingforamoment,Tom’sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago.Asthestoryunfolded,Tom'seyeswelledupwithtears.Hesawhismotherinanewlight,herscarstransformedfromasourceofshametoabadgeofhonor.Thegraduationceremonybecamemorethanjustanacademicmilestone;itwasamomentofprofoundgratitudeandanewfoundappreciationforthesacrificesmadebyalovingmother.范文二：Tomwasshockedwhenhesawhisparentsappearattheceremonyhall.Thesurprisewasoverwhelming,butwhatstruckhimmostwasthelookofloveandprideonhismother'sface,thefacehehadoncefoundsohardtobear.Astheyembraced,hefeltasurgeofemotionshehadneverexpected.Hesitatingforamoment,Tom’sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago.Therevelationwaslikeathunderbolt,andashelistened,thescalesfellfromhiseyes.Hesawhismother'sscarsnotasadeformitybutasatestamenttoherbraveryandlove.Thegraduationday,whichwasmeanttocelebratehisacademicsuccess,turnedintoacelebrationoflove,forgiveness,andtheunbreakablebondbetweenamotherandherson.范文三