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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Onarrivinghomeafterschool,Deanrushedintohisroom,shutthedoorandturnedonhiscomputer.Likemanyteenageboys,17-year-oldDeanwasaddictedtothedigitalworld,spendingcountlesshoursonhiscomputerplayinggamesandsurfingtheInternet.Theonlysoundsweretheclickingofhiskeyboardandtheoccasionalexcitedshout.Dayspassed,andDean’gradesbegantosuffer.Heskippedmeals,lostsleep,andignoredhisfriends.Hiseyeswerealwaysredanddullasifhewerelostinanotherworld.Dean’sparents,seeingtheworseningsituation,repeatedlyadvisedhimtotakeabreakandfocusonhisstudies.However,theirwordsfellondeafears.ThefrequentconflictsbetweenDeanandhisparentsgrewincreasinglytense,leadingtoaviolentargumentoneday.“You’realwaysonthatcomputer!Whenareyougoingtodosomethingproductivewithyourlife?”shoutedDean’sfather,amixtureofconcernandangerinhisvoice.Deansatinhischair,eyesfixedonthescreen.Hedidn’tevenlookupashereplied,“I’mfine.I’mhappy.”ThefatherrushedtowardDeanandfirmlyturneddownthecomputer.“No!Whydidyoudothat?”Deanyelled,jumpingtohisfeet.Hisheartpoundedwithamixofangerandpanic.“Becauseyouneedtogetoutofthisvirtualworldandstartlivingintherealone!”thefathershouted,hisvoiceshaking.AwaveofangersweptoverDean.“Youdon’tunderstand!Thisismylife!”Hestormedoutofthehouse,vowing(发誓)nevertoreturn.HewentintoanearbyInternetcafe(网吧).Therehespentthenextthreedaysandnightslostinthethrillofgaming.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Asthedayspassed,Deangraduallyuseduphispocketmoney.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Inthedepthsofhisdespair(绝望),afamiliarvoicecalledouttohim.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:文章描述了17岁的少年Dean对数字世界的沉迷。他花费无数时间在电脑上玩游戏和上网,导致学业成绩下滑,忽略了饮食、睡眠和朋友。父母对此非常担忧,多次劝他休息并专注于学习,但Dean并未听从。一次激烈的争吵后,Dean的父亲强行关闭了他的电脑,并要求他回到现实世界中去。愤怒的Dean离家出走,并在附近的网吧连续三天三夜沉迷于游戏。几处伏笔及在续写中的回应:1.伏笔:Dean的沉迷和忽视学业。-回应:父母担忧并尝试干预。2.伏笔:父母与Dean之间的紧张关系。-回应:一次激烈的争吵导致Dean离家出走。3.伏笔:Dean在网吧沉迷游戏。-回应:口袋的钱逐渐用尽,他开始感到绝望。续写要点:1.描述Dean在网吧的钱逐渐用尽,开始感到绝望。2.描述Dean在绝望中听到一个熟悉的声音,可能是父母或朋友,给他带来希望或帮助。主旨升华句:1.Thedigitalworld,thoughenticing,canneverreplacethewarmthandrealityofhumanconnection.2.Thepathtoredemptionoftenbeginsinthedarkestmoments,whenweareforcedtoconfrontourchoices.3.Sometimes,ittakeshittingrockbottomtorealizethevalueofwhatwehavetakenforgranted.4.Theharshrealityofaddictioncanonlybeovercomebythesofttouchofunderstandingandsupport.5.Inthesilenceofourdespair,thevoicesofthosewhotrulycarecanbetheloudest,guidingusbacktothelight.参考范文1:Paragraph1:Asthedayspassed,Deangraduallyuseduphispocketmoney.Theexcitementofthegamesbegantofadeashungerandexhaustionsetin.Theonce-thrillingpixelsnowblurredbeforehiseyes,andthenoiseofthecafeseemedtodulltoadistanthum.Hestartedtofeeltheweightofhisdecision,therealityofhissituationsinkingin.Thecomfortofthevirtualworldwasreplacedbythecoldhardnessofhispredicament.Paragraph2:Inthedepthsofhisdespair,afamiliarvoicecalledouttohim.Itwashisfriend,Mark,whohadbeensearchingforhimsincehedisappeared.Mark'sexpressionwasamixofreliefandconcern."Dean,yourparentsareworriedsick.Theyjustwantyoutocomehome."Mark'swordsresonatedwithDean,piercingthroughthefogofhisaddiction.Herealizedthatthebattleshefoughtinthedigitalworldweremeaninglesscomparedtotheloveandconcernwaitingforhimintherealone.WithMark'shelp,Deandecidedtogohome,readytofacehismistakesandstartrebuildinghislife.参考范文2:Paragraph1:Asthedayspassed,Deangraduallyuseduphispocketmoney.Theonce-comfortingchairofthecafebecameaprisontohisachingbody,andthescreenthathadbeenhisworldstartedtofeellikeamirror,reflectinghisholloweyesandtheghostlypallorofalifenotlived.Thebeepsandboopsofthegamesturnedintoamockingsymphony,playingthetuneofhisisolation.Hebegantounderstandthecostofhisobsession,notjustinmoney,butinthemomentsandrelationshipshehadlost.Paragraph2:Inthedepthsofhisdespair,afamiliarvoicecalledouttohim.Itwashisfather,notwithanger,butwithagentlenessthatcutthroughthenoiseofthecafe."Dean,it'stimetocomehome."Hisfather'spresencewasalifeline,anofferofforgivenessandasecondchance.TheangerthathadfueledDean'sescapewasreplacedwithshameandregret.Butseeingtheoutstretchedhandofhisfather,heknewtherewasstillawayback.Hetookhisfather'shandandleftthecafe,leavingbehindthefantasyworldthathadalmostconsumedhim.Together,theywalkedhome,readytostartthelongjourneyofhealingandreconnecting.参考答案Paragraph1:Asthedayspassed,Deangraduallyuseduphispocketmoney.Thethrillofgamingbegantofade,replacedbyagrowingsenseofuneaseandhunger.TheInternetcafe,onceahaven,nowfeltcrampedandsuffocating.Hiseyes,oncegluedtothescreen,nowfeltheavyandstrained,aconstantreminderofhisexcessiveindulgence.Hecouldn’tignorethepangsofguiltthatgnawedathisconsc
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