新高考英语二轮复习题型专练30 读后续写故事拓展策略(原卷版)

高考英语二轮复习题型专练（新高考）30读后续写故事拓展策略【策略1：烘托情节特征】在读后续写中，运用侧面描写，可以对人物进行多角度映照和多层次烘托，人物的描写就会达到“横看成岭侧成峰”的丰富境界。

侧面描写有“以旁面写正面”、“以对面写正面”、“以反面写正面”三种方法。如果从一个侧面去描写，人物形象往往单薄。如果从多个侧面去描写，人物形象就容易丰满。在写作中，我们可以尝试以下几种侧面烘托法：景物烘托法——通过对自然景物的描绘，来烘托人物心情；他人反映法——听听他人的反映，去了解主人公的个性特征；借人写人法——通过对受影响者的刻画，间接地表现主人公的思想品质。一、场景拓展思维1：选择关键词1.关键词语blow吹howl咆哮crash碰撞stir搅动darken使变黑envelope信封，包裹gloomy阴郁的dip蘸pour泼sunshine/sunlight阳光breeze微风dim昏暗的faint微弱的winding蜿蜒的frighten是某人害怕chilling寒冷的thunder雷，打雷lightening闪电frosty寒冷的melt融化2.常用短语bebathedin沐浴在amber-likesunshine琥珀色的阳光stretchoff延伸凉爽清新的风coolandrefreshingbreeze落日thesettingsunstrolldownthestreet在街上漫步thefirstrayofsunlight第一缕阳光floodinto涌入gentlebreeze微风多雨的季节arainyseason暴风雨之夜astormynight在茫茫大雨中intheblindingrain在春天温暖的阳光里inthewarmspringsunshine难以忍受的热unbearablehot放晴了clearup木日光浴batheinthesunshine一个偏僻的小村庄asmallvillageoffthemap离海滨仅咫尺之遥bedottedwith点缀着二.场景拓展思维2：景色特征烘托人物心情（一）阳光明媚的景色烘托生命美好与心情的愉悦【典例赏析】Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff(延伸)tothehorizon,slowlynarrowingtonothingness（虚无）,onlytore-emerge（重新出现）againonyourleft.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳光倾斜而入Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、点缀）theslope.风，轻柔而清冷，轻点这树枝，搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.（二）暴风骤雨的场景烘托心情的抑郁【典例赏析】Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(苍白昏暗的月亮).Thefrostyair（寒冷的空气）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。Stung的原形为sting“叮咬”Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswithasighingsound.叹息的声音Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(阴郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(阴冷的暴风雨袭来),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛）,whichthewindwasdespoiling(摧残),andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）（三）烦闷焦躁的景色烘托心理的急躁等【典例赏析】It’shotenoughtomelthell.天热得能融化地狱。Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybecomesheavy.Ithangsoverthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,andsitsonmyshoulders.整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。（四）凄风苦雨与狂风暴雨烘托恐惧、阴冷与害怕【典例赏析】Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling(嚎叫).Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂风肆意冲击房屋。Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky(闪电在空中持续乱舞).Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling(寒冷的细雨),andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）puffs（一阵阵小风）intoasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir（活动的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉闷地）andsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands（踹口袋里的手）.三.场景拓展思维3：精细化用语再现场景与心理的交织（一）细节描述之“describeapeacefulscene”【典例赏析】WhenI

wasbathedin

thesunlight,itfeltlike

theamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.(沐浴在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的肌肤)Mist-coveredmountains

weredottedwith

smallfarmsandvillages.(点缀着)Thesoundofmyfootstepswasaccompaniedonlyby

thegracefullywavingreeds.

(优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇)（二）细节描述之“describestormyweather”【典例赏析】Theskyis

overcast,

darkenedwithgloomyclouds.(乌云密布；黑云压顶)Onthatdarkandstormynight,

thewaves

were

crashingandthewindswerehowling.

(海浪肆意拍打；劲风咆哮)Therain

came

pouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewand

beatagainst

thehouse.(暴风骤雨)

（三）Goodsettingdescriptionforappreciation(佳“景”赏析)【典例赏析】Thehousesmelledmustyanddamp,andalittlesweet,asifitwerehauntedbytheghostsoflong-deadcookies.

Thesunkeptdippingdownintotheoceanandthelightscameonattheharbor,castingsuddenshadowsontheground,illuminatingthefacesthatwerejustasecondagosilhouettes.Theskywasgoldenandpurple,theoceanadarkershadeofviolet.

Thesunhadset,butafaintpastelhazelingeredinthemid-summersky.Theyrolledupthepath,treebranchesrakingthewindshieldlikeangrywardens.

Outside,theairfilledwithcricketnoise,asthesunreddenedinitsdescent.ArestaurantoverlookingastarlitnightsprangtomyimaginationlikesomethingoutofanilluminatedmanuscriptfromthelateMiddleAges.Themoonwentslowlydowninloveliness;shedepartedintothedepthofthehorizon,andlongveil-likeshadowscreptuptheskythroughwhichthestarsappeared.

Allbrightnesswasgone,leavingnothing.Westeppedoutofthetentontonothing.Sledgeandtentwerethere,Estravenstoodbesideme,butneitherhenorIcastanyshadow.Therewasdulllightallaround,everywhere.Whenwewalkedonthecrispsnownoshadowshowedthefootprint.Weleftnotrack.Sledge,tent,himself,myself:nothingelseatall.Nosun,nosky,nohorizon,noworld.Nighthadfallenfastupontheland.Nomorethananhouragotheskywaspaintedwithhuesofred,orangeandpink,butallcolorhadfadedleavingonlyamattblackcanvaswithnostarstobelookedupon.

Itwouldbeacoldmoonlessnight.Theskywasdarkandlow,theairsochilledithurttobreathe.Alreadythegroundwaslaidwhitewithfrostandanywaterthathadbeenliquidunderthewintersunhadbecomeice.四、四季与自然景观的描写的精细化

【典例赏析】weusedtoliveinabeautifulvillage,andthereweretreesandflowersandgreengrass,andtheairwassosweet.我们以前住在一个漂亮的村舍里，那里树很多，还有花花草草，连空气都是甜的。

Thesightofalargecornfieldinthelatterpartofsummer,withallitsgreenbannerswavinganditstasseledplumesnodding,isonetoadmire,andnottobeforgotten.盛夏时节，一望无际的玉米地，绿色的叶子像旗帜一样迎风飞舞，抽穗的包谷随风点头，这是多么赏心悦目而又令人难忘的景色啊！Inthespringitsbranchesarecoveredwithbunchesofcreamyflowers,春天里，栗子树的枝干上开满了一簇簇奶油般的花朵，

Beforethis,hehadlivedinawarmcountry,wherethesunshinesdownonbeautifulorangegroves,andfieldsalwayssweetwithflowers.在这之前，他一直住在一个天气暖和的乡村。那里，阳光洒满美丽的满是橘子的山坡，田野里到处是芳香扑鼻的鲜花。Lastnight,thecoldnorthwindblewgreatsnowcloudsoverthesky.Notastar,notabitofblueskycouldbeseen.昨天夜里，北风呼啸，乌云密布。看不见一颗星星，整个天空也不见一丝蓝色。Itiswinter.Thecoldwindwhistlesthroughthebranchesofthetrees.正值冬季，寒风呼啸着吹过树枝。Johnnylookedthroughtheglass.Therelaythepure,featherysnowflakelikealovelylittlestar.乔尼透过玻璃看着雪花，那片纯洁轻柔的雪花就像一颗可爱的小星星。

Soonthetinyflakesfloatedsoftlydown,likeflocksoflittlewhitebirds.不久，小小的雪花静悄悄地飘落下来，就像一群白色的小鸟。

Thesunmusthavebeenpleasedwithwhathesaw,forhesmiledsuchabright,sweetsmile,thatthewholewhiteworldsparkledasifitweremadeoflittlestars.太阳一定对雪花们的作品非常满意，因为他笑得如此灿烂和甜蜜。整个洁白的世界闪闪发光，就像一颗颗小星星在眨眼睛。（五）早中晚场景举例【典例赏析1】早上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.Thefirstrayofsunlightistoofragiletotouch.Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthesunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.Thewholeworldblossomswithonebreathofthesunshine.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofold

trees.雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上。Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatI'mthere.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在那儿。Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳光倾斜而入.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate（纤弱的,精致的）airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.黄昏：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）hequickenedhissteps.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.Fallingleavesfluttereddowninthecoolmid-autumnair,biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandbeckoningtheautumnin.秋天的树叶在凉爽的中秋空气中飘落，告别甜美夏天，召唤秋天的到来。It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingmindlesslydown,theairmoist,thesidewalkmushyunderfoot.现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪花随风飘落，空气潮湿，走在人行道上，脚底粘糊糊的。Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一缕阳光告别.Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，像是天空被一层漆黑幕布覆盖。TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，因为空气轻轻地把它吹到地上。Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblamelessblueandshimmering.湖面映照着上方的天空，它们都是无比湛蓝，并且闪闪发光。Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.ThestrongsunonmyblackhairwouldburnmeinminutesifIcouldn’tfindshelter.如果我找不到庇护所，我黑发上强烈的阳光几分钟后就会把我烧焦Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。晚上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight(昏暗的灯光)inthevillage.Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousandscared.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality,andthestarsthatdottedtheskylitupthenight.天空，午夜蓝，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量，星星点点的天空照亮了夜晚。Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintherpower.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(阴郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(阴冷的暴风雨袭来),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛）,whichthewindwasdespoiling(摧残),andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(苍白昏暗的月亮).Thefrostyair（寒冷的空气）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.【典例赏析2】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleysandsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.Thegentlebreeze(微风)strokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Wanderinginthewoods,Allyslowedherpacetofindthelittleguyinthemixedair.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmileandtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.Thebreezepattedherontheface,warmandcomfortable.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.Onthedaybacktoschool,darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Therainpoureddown,withcolddropsandangrywindsslapping(拍;掴)myface.Iwasdrownedinfloodsofwarmtearsandfreezingrain.Spring,likeanamazingartist,paintsourcampuswithricheranddeepercolors.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate纤弱的,精致的airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.Oh,I’mlost…inthemasterpieceofSpring!【策略2：构筑故事高潮】文学故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要场景（keyscene）也通常是故事的转折点（turningpoint），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的"危机"点。有时候,它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点,发生了一些事情,或者主角必须做出决定,从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。【典例赏析】1.常见故事高潮Alittlegirlhasbeensearchingforherlostdog.Allofasudden,shehearsabarkcomingfromaroundthecorner,andshelooksaroundtosee...Kevinhasworkedveryhardtotryoutforthesoccerteamatschool.Thecoachhaspostedalistofthisyear'steammembersonhisofficedoor.Kevinwalksforwardtolookatthelist....Mary'sparentshavebeendiscussingwhetherornottomovetoanotherstate.TheycallMaryandhersisterdowntotalkwiththemabouttheirdecision...Loishasperformedinthestategymnasticsfinals.Shewaitsanxiouslytohearthenamesofthewinners.Theannouncersays,"Andfirstplacegoesto..."2.文学名著中的一些故事高潮ThedeathsofRomeo(whokillshimselfbecausehethinksJulietisdead)andJuliet(whokillsherselfwhensheawakesandseesRomeodead).RomeoandJuliet,Shakespeare（《罗密欧和朱丽叶》）WhenGastonandthetownspeoplecometoattackthebeast,andBelleadmitsherloveforthebeast.BeautyandtheBeast,Disney（《美女与野兽》）In"TheThreeLittlePigs,"suspensebuildsupuntiltheconfrontationbetweenthethirdpigandthewolf.Thisconfrontationistheclimax.（三只小猪）Howtocreateaclimaxofastory?一、高潮冲突思维1：.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感,将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。1.角色之间的冲突(人物观点差异,竞争需要等)【真题再现】（2017年11月浙江英语高考）Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张，心有不悦（母子的观点不一）2.角色与环境之间的冲突【真题再现】（2017年6月浙江英语高考）ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.……hesawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,butawolf:quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac'sheartjumped.……,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,…….Thenit……,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellback……Mac骑车独自行，路遇饿狼，与之搏斗，险象环生。（人（角色）----狼（环境）大战）3.时间依赖的发展：决策变得紧急【真题再现】（2017年6月浙江英语高考）Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim."Getintothecar."PaulshoutedatMac.MacjumpedoffthebikeandslidintothecarwithoutdelayasthewolfwasjusttwostepsawayandwasabouttotearMacintopieces.Whatanarrowescape!骑车突停面前---急喊上车---Max上车避险---饿狼近在咫尺（此情此景，刻不容缓）4.增加的障碍：人物角色必须克服挑战,以达到他们的目标【真题再现】（2018年6月浙江英语高考）Butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefoundthatwehadbeenoffthebeatentrackandgotlost.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.小兔突现---马儿受惊---草原迷路（障碍1）----天色渐黑（障碍2）----又累又饿（障碍3）----心理恐慌（障碍4）二、高潮冲突思维2：放大内心冲突放大内心冲突（你的角色的内心斗争）也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。【真题再现】（2016年10月浙江英语高考）Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn'thelpcrying,"Hadn'tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.夫妇争吵---独自行走---荒野走散---夜色渐黑---独处森林---阴森恐怖---后悔莫及（内心冲突的刻画）内心独白（往昔对比+虚拟语气使用+旁边描写是常见技巧之一）三、高潮冲突思维3：使用环境描写增加不确定性充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用，具体方法可以看上期读后续写微技能。当故事角色在碰到困难时候，我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗，恐怖和不祥。强化环境描写增强了高潮元素。我们感受到了紧张的倍增。【典例赏析】Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest(黑暗).Evenworse,thetemperaturesuddenlydroppeddramatically.(寒冷）Itdidn’ttakelongfortheforesttobeenvelopedindarkness（黑暗）.Herraspingbreathsteamed（寒冷）inthemoonlightandherthroatwasparchedfromthirst.【真题再现】【2020年1月·浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“I'mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,"saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions(情绪)getthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.”Iguessthisisit,“hesaid.”I'llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay？"Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy'smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn'tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit.Poppydidn't.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn'therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried."WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup？"askedDad.“We'vetriedeverything.”“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,“smiledMom.”Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let'sgetalittledogforPoppy."Itdidn'ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigbox.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging(摆动)eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1.Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dadputtheboxonthegroundandopenedthetop.Ashinylittlewetnosepoppedup.Thentwofluffypaws.Nexttheboxtippedoversideways,andouttumbledamassofwigglygoldensilliness.

Poppywasamazed.Shewaggedfuriously.Shebarkedwithjoy.Shesmiled,hertonguelollingoutassheinvestigatedthesurprise.Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartingyippingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog.

“Thatdidn’ttakelong,”remarkedMom,asbothdogswentroaringaroundthehouseinanimpromptugameofchase.Dadlaughed.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.HehadmissedPoppyandwaslookingforwardtoseeingher.Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo.

“Ohmygosh,whoisthis?”heexclaimed.Hisparentslaughedatthelookofshockonhisface.

“That’sPee-wee,”saidDad.

“Ican’tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy!”

“Wedidn’t,”repliedMom.“ThispuppyisforPoppy!”【写作分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子，一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Poppy的。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【范文点评】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：amassof，withjoy，lookforwardto等高级词汇；非谓语动词的运用Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartingyippingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog.；时间状语从句Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo.等高级句式。【题型演练】1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasarainyNovembermorning.OvercomewithangerIknewifIdidn’tleavethehousesoonIwouldlosemytemperwithmyhusband,Joe.Asraincamedowninsheets,Joeofferedtotakemetowork.Istruggledintomyjacket,seizedmybagandteachingplansandignoredhim.Heinsistedandreachedforhisboots.Ilookedatthepilesofnewspapersandthedirtydishessillonthetable.“Don’tyouhaveenoughtodo?Icantakecareofmyself.”Istormedout,notevenkissinghimgood-bye.Joeshoutedaftermenottotaketheshortcut.JoeandIhadbeeneagerlylookingforwardtoourretirementwhenaheartattackthatpastspringforcedhimtoleavehisjobearlierthanwehadplanned.AsthemedicalbillsmountedwerealizedIwouldhavetocontinueworkingfull-timewhileJoestayedhomeandtookoverthehousework.Thenewarrangementwasadisaster.Exhaustedafteradayoffullwork,allIwantedwasahothome-cookedmealandagoodnight’ssleep.However,whatgreetedmeatthetablewasamicrowavepackage.Sometimeshewouldserveoatmeal（燕麦）forseveralnightsinarow.OnenightwhenIdraggedmyselftobed,IwasterrifiedtodiscoverJoehadturnedourwhitesheetsblue.Hetoldmehehadfoundouthowtosaveonwater,soapandelectricity.Hepattedhisbluetrousersandannouncedproudlywashingeverythingtogetherwasjustthesecret.Tenminuteslater,ignoringJoeswarning,Iturnedoffthemainroute.Ithoughtithadn’trainedenoughtofloodtheroad,butasIroundedthecornerwaterrushedacrossmypath.Afterafewfeet,thecargotstuck.Iopenedthedoorandwaterpouredin.Ihurriedlyclosedthedoor.Icouldn’triskwalkinginthis.Almost20minutespassed.Thecarbegantoshake.IgotfrightenedtodeathwhenIheardthreelonghonks（喇叭声）.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IscreamedatJoethatIcouldn’tmakeit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jennystaredatthestorewindowlongingly.TherewasnothinginthisworldthatshewantedmorethanaHappyHannahdollandallthatcurrentlyseparatedherfromthehottestdolloftheholidayseasonwasathinpieceofglassandS29.95plustax.Unfortunately,Jennydidn'tevenhavethe95cents,sosheletoutadeepsighandcontinuedwalkinghome.Suddenly,apinkrectangle(矩形)inthesnowcaughthereye.Jennywalkedoverandrealizeditwasaleatherwallet.Sheremoveditfromthesnow,andopenedthewallettofindathickpileoffoldedgreenbillsandtwoplasticcards.OnewasacreditcardandtheotheranID.JennystaredattheoldwomaninherIDphoto.ThewomanhadabeautifulsmilethatremindedJennyofhergrandma.Jennysighedandthensheputthewalletintoherpurse.Sheturnedaroundandwalkedinthedirectionfromwhichshecame.Jenny'sheartbeatquicklyassheenteredthestore.Shehadlongdreamedaboutthismoment,butsomethingdidn'tfeelrightaboutitAssheapproachedaneatpileofHappyHannahdolls,shepushedawayherfeelings.ShegraspedoneHappyHannahdolly.AsJennyapproachedtheregister,theHappyHannahShowthemesongbeganplaying.Itwashermobilepone.ItwashergrandmaInonehandsheheldtheHappyHannahdollandintheothersheheldthephoneonwhichhergrandmawascalling.Jenny’sheartwasfiledwithloveandappreciationasshethoughtofhersweetoldgrandmaSheputthedolldownandpickedupthephonecall.“HiGrandma?I'mgoingtobealittlebitlatetonight.I'vegottodropsomethingoff...Yeah,itwasgood...OK...Alright...Iloveyoutoo.”.Jennyleftthestoreandwalkedthroughthemeltingsnowallthewaytotheothersideofthetown.Shethoughofhergrandmaassherangthebellat301WestStreet.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Thewomanwhoansweredthedoorhadbeencryingrecentlyandlookedupsetandanxious.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thewomantookthewalletsmilingly._____________