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读后续写I个人成长类「微技能」高考专练②附参考范文
个人成长类是一个了解自我、完善自我、开发自我潜能的持续过程。在读后续写中,
有关个人成长题材的短文不仅体现在语言知识层面,更多体现在情感、态度和价值观
有关的表达。
这一主题最终的升华指向:健康的生活方式,积极的生活态度,完善的自我,优秀的
品行及更好的未来规划。
成长过程中一个重要的因素就是成长的动机。成长动机的出现可能是一个偶发事件,
也可能是一个关键人物的行为或影响。因此,对此类话题:
首先要把握语篇的主要角色,确定成长的主题;
其次要确定语篇的主旨及升华指向,遵循正能量原则;
此外,还要精准把握文中人物的情绪变化,并通过不同的手法描述心情。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Whyisthatmansougly,buttheladysopretty?^^Five-year-oldNancydrewhermother's
arm,pointingatamanwithascarredfaceandabeautifullady.Themotherlookedatthe
coupleherdaughterwaspointingat,quicklytakingherchildaway.Butdayinanddayout
duringtheseacruise,theysawthecouple.
OnedayNancyandhermother,Maria,metthecoupleagain.Thelittlegirlwasdyingto
knowthereason,sosheblurtedout(月兑口而出),"Whyareyousopretty,butyourhusbandso
ugly?”
Mariawasabouttoblameherdaughterwhentheyoungwomanspoke,“No,wait!I've
noticedyourchildlookingatusquiteoften.Iadviseyoutolistentoastoryaboutmy
husband.^^
“FiveyearsagomymotherandIwerevisitinginFlorida,wherewewerestayingatahotel.
Atthesametimesomeservicemencheckedinatthesamehotel.Onevery
handsomecolonel(上校)tookspecialnoticeofme,insistingthatIdinewithhim.He
purchasedlotsofbeautifulflowersandsentthemtomyroomnumeroustimes,andsmiledat
meeverytimeIhappenedtocomeacrosshim.Mymotherencouragedmetoaccepthisoffer
ofameal.So,atlastIdid.Itwasthenthathetoldmehehadfalleninlovewithme.Heasked
meifIwouldliketoseehimonaregularbasis.ButIfoundhimmostannoying,andtriedmy
besttoignorehim,whichhurthisfeelings.
“Onenight,wewerejolted(唤醒)outofbedbythefrighteningwords,TIRE!FIRE!'
Alreadywecouldseethesmoky,orangeshadowsencirclingthehotel.ColonelBrown,which
washisname,wasoneofthefirstonesoutofthehotel.Heriskedhislifetohelpthehotel
gueststoruntothesafetyofthefreshair.Hesearchedthegroupinthecourtyard,butmy
motherandIwerenotthere.
注意:L续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
“Hedashedthroughtheflamestoourroomandkickedthedoor
open._____________________________________________________________________
Hewastakenimmediatelytothe
hospital.___________________________________________________________________
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Itwastimetogohome."'Remembertoworkonyourclassspeechesforhomework,9,Miss
Walkercalled,aseveryonestartedtalkingandpackingtheirschoolbags.Jennyfeltsick.She
hatedreadingaloudinclass.Shewassureeveryonegotreallyboredlisteningtoher.Once,
whenJennywasreadingoutherholidaydiary,Leewasevenlookingathiswatch,asilver
andblueonewhichseemedjustmagical.
JennywatchedLeewalkaheadofherastheyleftschool.Heseemedsoclever,andhehada
certainsortofshiningconfidence.Hewasjustoneofthosepeoplewhoweregoodat
everything.Jennysighed.Assheturnedthecorner,shesawLee'swatchlyingrightinthe
middleofthepath.
JennyknewsheshouldjustpickitupandreturnittoLee,butshedidn'twanttorunafter
him.Jennybentdownquickly,pickedupthewatchandranhome.Onarrivinghome,Jenny
putitonalmostwithoutthinking.Shewassurprisedthatitfittedhersowell.Shewalkedto
themirrorandstartedpractisingherspeech.'Tmgoingtotalkaboutswimming.Ihavebeen
lucky.I'vewonlotsofcompetitions.ButwhenFminarace,I'mnotreallythinkingabout
winning.Fmjustlovingthefeelingofbeinginthewater...Jennylaughedwithexcitement.
Shewalkedacrosstheroom.Shesuddenlyseemedtohaveacertainsortofconfidence.
Turningbacktothemirror,Jennysawaflashoflightfromthewatchintheglass.Theflashes
ofsilverseemedalmostmagical.SomaybeLee'swatchreallydidhavesomethingmagic.
Thenextday,asthelessonbegan,MissWalkeraskedwhowasgoingtobebraveandgofirst.
Nobodymoved.Jennyslowlyraisedherhand.BeforeMissWalkercouldsaysomething,
therewasashoutfrombehind."She'sstolenmywatch!”Leesaidangrily.uItwentmissing
atschoolyesterday.^^
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforan
explanation.______________________________________________________________________
Atthatmoment,MissWalkersmiledandaskedthestudentstolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.
读后续写微技能
动作神态描写一一兴奋篇
I.词语及表达积累
delight
in/withdelight/tosb's(great)delight/tothe(great)delightofsb/itisadelighttodosth
excited
beexcitedabout/at/bysth/beexcitedtodosth
Excitement
in/withexcitement/afeelingofexcitement
Jump
jumpupanddownII.句的积累
1.Hiseyesshonewithexcitement.
2.Icouldn,thelpbutsmilefromeartoear.
3.ThechildrenwereexcitedatthesightoftheChristmastree.
4.Theplayerjumpedforjoywhenhescoredthewinninggoal.
III.句子翻译
1.爸爸激动得几乎说不出话来。(so…that)
2.听到这个消息,我兴奋得上蹦下跳。(现在分词短语作状语)
3.看着这美丽的景色,琳达无法控制她的兴奋之情。(现在分词短语作状语)
4.当杰克得知他的文章已被发表时,他非常兴奋。(when引导的时间状语从句)
5.看到小狗时,孩子们高兴地叫了起来。(withdelight)
参考范文一“Hedashedthroughtheflamestoourroomandkickedthedooropen.Trapped
andfrozenwithfright,mymotherandIwerejustdecidingifjumpingoutofthewindowwas
abetterchoice.Brownsnatchedtwoblanketsoffthebed,andthrewthematus."Wrapthis
aroundyourface,9hecommanded.Blindly,weallowedourselvestobeguidedbyhim,until
weweresafeoutside.Butwhatwehadn'trealizedwasthathistowelhadcomeoffhisface.
Hisfacewasburnedbeyondrecognition.HewastakenimmediatelytothehospitaLHewas
treatedforburnsalloverhisbody.Whenhewasreleasedfromthehospitalfourweekslater,
gonewasthehandsomeface.ButIdidn'tseehisscarredface.Instead,Isawthefaceofthe
onewhoriskedhislifetosaveothers.Duringthoseweeksofattendingandcomfortinghimat
hisbedside,Ihadfalleninlovewithhim.Soonwemarried,andhavegrownmoreinlove
witheachothereveryday."Whenshefinishedthestory,NancysmiledupatColonelBrown,
“MrBrown,Idon'tthinkthatyouareuglyanymore.Ithinkyouhaveabeautifulface."二
EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Embarrassed,Jenny
didn'tsayanything.Howcouldsheexplainaboutthewatchanditsmagic?Shewasaboutto
telleveryonethetruthwhenshethoughtofthewell-preparedspeechandthemagicofthe
watch.Hesitatingforawhile,shesaid,t6MissWalker,couldIgivethespeechfirstandthen
giveallofyouanexplanation?^^Atthatmoment,MissWalkersmiledandaskedthestudents
tolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformslowly.Seeingthewatch
aswellasMissWalker
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