Unit10ConnectionsWritingWorkshop课件高中英语北师大版选择性

Unit10Writingworkshop

LearningObjectives01020304

Toreadandtalkaboutanewsreport

TounderstandthestructureofanewsreportToidentifythewritingskillsusedinthenewsreport.TowriteanewsreportaboutaschoolorcommunityeventHowtowriteanewsreport?Whatisanewsreport?Anewsreportsisaboutsomethingthatishappeningnoworthatjustrecentlyhappened.Currentissues,events,crimes,andinvestigationsaregoodsubjectsfornewsreports.TipsonWritingaNewsReportWhenwritinganewsreport,it'simportanttoconcentrateonfourelements:facts,context,impact,andemotion.Howyoucombinethesefourelementswilldeterminethesuccessofyournewsstory.Thefactsanswerthe5WsandH:who,what,where,when,why,andhow.It’simportanttomakesurethefactsareaccurateandreasonablycomplete.Ifyouhavetowriteareportbeforeyougetallthefacts,thensaysointhereport.Contextprovidesthecircumstancessurroundingthefactsofthenewsstory.FactsContextImpactkeepsreadersintunebeyondtheheadlineandthelead,oropeningsentence.Whataretheramificationsorpotentialconsequencesofthisnewsstory?Howwillthisseriesofeventsaffectmeandmylovedones?ImpactEvokingemotionisthemagicofnewsreporting.Writersmustwalkthefinelinebetweencold,hardfactsandatugonemotionalheartstrings.Butwemustletthereadersdecideforthemselves.Forexample,theAmericanPressInstitutepointsoutwemustnotdictatetheaudience'sfeelingsbywriting,“Inashocking,newdevelopment…”Rather,weshouldletthemchoosetobeshockedontheirown.EmotionPairWork.Youaregoingtowriteanewsreportonaschoolorcommunityevent.Discusswithyourpartner.11.Whateventwouldyouliketowriteabout?2.Whataspectsareyougoingtoinclude?3.Howisanewsreportnormallyorganised?2Readthenewsreport.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.1.Whateventisthereportabout?2.Whenandwheredidtheeventhappen?3.Whoattendedtheevent?4.Whatdidtheydo?

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”5.Whatdidtheeventbringtothecommunity?ReadandlocateBriefintroductionabouttheevent.Peopleattendingtheeventandtheactsduringtheevent.Thebenefitsoftheeventtothepeople.Para.1Para.4Para.2&33Thenewsreporthasfourparagraphs.Labeleachparagraphwithafunction.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”1.Lead3.Body2.Body4.Round-upUnderlinetheusefulsentencesforanewsreport.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.

Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”Circlealltheexpressionsthatconveythefactthattheeventwasasuccess.4

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.

Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”Whatelsecanyoufindout?5Write2-3sentencesabouttheeventyouaregoingtoreport.UsetheSentenceBuildertohelpyou.AdverbsofDegreehighlyThefestivalwashighlysuccessful…ratherTheperformerswererathergood…mainlyPeopleattendingtheeventweremainlyfamilies.particularlyTheactsappealingtochildrenwereparticularpopular.SentenceBuilderAdverbsofdegreemakesomethingwereportstrongorweakandshowwhatwefeelaboutsomething.Nowwrite2-3sentencesabouttheeventyouaregoingtoreport.①

Eventually,allthecontestantssparednoefforttofinishtherace.②

Moreimportantly,wecometoknowitisourresponsibilitytochallengeourselvestoavarietyofhardships.

假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.参加人员；2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3.活动反响。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。Writingtask6Outlining.

CompletetheoutlineofyournewsreportbasedonActivity3.Reviewthestructureofanewsreport;Copythestructureinyournotebooks;Writesomenotesonwhateachparagraphwillcontain.体裁话题时态人称文章架构核心要点记叙文；关于越野赛跑的报道一般过去时为主；第一、第三人称首段：活动的时间和内容中段：活动的过程尾段：对活动的认识1.上周日举办5公里越野赛跑活动2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下3.活动认识：强身健体、挑战自己Outline7Drafting.

UseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfistdraft.

WritingaNewsReportIt’simportantto:haveanattractivetitleandabrieflead;includethewho,when,where,what,whyandhowoftheevent;useformalandclearlanguage.WritingHelp8Editing.Edityourreportinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.Beforeyournewsreportwouldbepublished,you’dhavetoeditittomakesureyourfactsareclearandyoursentencesarecomplete.Exchangeyourwritingwithyourpartnerandoffersuggestionstoimprovedrafts.Afterediting,writerswillmakechangestodraftsandeitherrewriteorprintacleancopyofthework.Prepareafinaldraftofyourworktosubmit.EditingSheetDoesthereporthaveacleartitleandabrieflead?Doesthe