Unit1Section3Writing写作课件沪教牛津版（2024）七年级英语上册

Unit1FriendshipWhatmakesastrongfriendship?KeyquestionWriting主题范畴：人与社会Howtodescribeagoodfriend?Lead-inBody:

tall/short/

medium

heightFace:round/squareHair:long

/short/

black/

brown/

straight

/curlyEyes:

dark//blue...myfriendAppearanceBasicinformationHobbiesTom12yearsold...swimreadbooksdrawplayfootball...personal

qualitiesfriendlyhelpfulhonestconfidentpatient...Writingapostaboutyourfriend

写一个关于你的朋友的网帖Whatisyourfriendlike?Weallhavefriends.Whatisyourfriendlike?Pleasewriteapostaboutyourbestfriend\agoodfriend\anewfriend.

我们都有朋友。你的朋友什么样？请写一个帖子介绍你的最好的/好/新朋友。Pre-writingbasicthoughtmoderndanceadj.基本的；基础的n.想法现代舞Newwordsandphrases1.WangYaodrewamindmapbeforeshewroteaboutherbestfriend.Lookatthemindmapandlabelthepartsofthetextbelow.Tip

Usingmindmaps

isagood

way

toorganizeyourideas.Youdo

nothavetowritefullsentencesin

mind

maps.思维导图是组织写作思路的好方法。在做

思维导图时，只列出关

键词即可，不用写完整

的句子。MybestfriendHanLiismybestfriend.Sheis12yearsold.HanLiistall.Shehaslong,straighthairandbig,darkeyes.Ithinksheislovely.Sheisgoodatdancingandlikesmoderndance.HanLiisverykindandhelpful.WhenIneedhelp,sheisalwaysthereforme.IcantrustherandIsharemythoughtswithher.IoftentellherhowIfeelaboutpeopleorthings.Itiswonderfultohavesuchagoodfriend.WangYao2023/10/20 19:09(1)___________(3)___________(4)___________(2)___________BasicinformationAppearanceHobbiesPersonalqualitiesLanguagepoints1.Sheisgoodatdancingandlikesmoderndance.

句意：她擅长跳舞，喜欢现代舞。①begoodatdoingsth. 擅长做某事②moderndance 现代舞2.WhenIneedhelp,sheisalwaysthereforme.

句意：当我需要帮助时，她总是在我身边。when意为“当……的时候”，引导时间状语从句。3.IcantrustherandIsharemythoughtswithher.

句意：我可以信任她，并与她分享我的想法。①trust

n.&v.

信任；信赖延伸trustworthy

adj.

值得信任的②sharethoughtswithsb.

和某人分享想法4.Itiswonderfultohavesuchagoodfriend.

句意：拥有这样一个好朋友真的很棒。句型Itis+adj.+todosth.意为“做某事是……的”。Nowwriteapostaboutyourfriend.Writing假如你是李华，你们学校的校报正在征集题为“Mynewfriend”的英语文章。请根据以下提示写一篇英语文章向校报投稿。要求：70词左右，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不算入总词数。提示：

Alice年龄13外貌见图片爱好及梦想看书；想成为一名作家性格特点聪明、积极乐观的(positive)（需举例说明）你的感受及希望……主题：人与社会——社会服务与人际沟通文体：记叙文人称：第一和_____________人称 时态：以_____________为主第三一般现在时Step1:题干细审1.她是一个留着长黑发和戴着眼镜的矮个子女孩。(with)________________________________________________2.当她遇到困难时，她总是保持微笑。(when)________________________________________________3.她喜欢在空闲时间读书。(enjoy;inone’sfreetime)________________________________________________4.我很幸运能和她成为朋友。(beluckyto)________________________________________________Sheisashortgirlwithlongblackhairandapairofglasses.Whenshemeetsdifficulties,shealwayskeepsasmileonherface.Sheenjoysreadingbooksinherfreetime.I’mluckytobefriendswithher.Step2:句型点拨Beginning0201Mynewfriend03EndingName:AliceAge:13yearsoldAppearance:Sheisashortgirlwith(1)______

___________(长长的黑发)andapairofglasses.Characteristics:Sheissmart.Shecan(2)_____

________(回答问题)quickly.Sheisalsopositive.Hobby:Sheenjoys(3)______________(看书).Dream:She(4)_________________(想成为作家).BodyI’dliketointroducemynewfriend.longblackhairanswerquestionsStep3:谋篇布局Yourfeeling:It’sluckyto(5)______________(和……成为朋友)her.readingbookswantstobeawriterbefriendswithMynewfriendHello,I’mLiHua.TodayI’dliketointroducemynewfriend.MynewfriendiscalledAlice.Sheisa13-year-oldgirl.Webegantoknoweachotheronthefirstdayofjuniorhighschool.Aliceisashortgirlwithlongblackhairandapairofglasses.Sheissosmartthatshecananswerquestionsquicklyinclass.Sheoftengetsgoodgradesinexams.Besides,sheisapositivegirl.Whenshemeetsdifficulties,shealwayskeepsasmileonherfaceandnevergivesup.Inherfreetime,sheenjoysreading.Herdreamistobeawriter.Itisluckytobefriendswithher.Ihopewewillremainfriendsforever.Step4:扩充成文Post-writingCheckandrevise

检查和修改Tick(√)theboxestocheckyourwriting,andthenreviseit.根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。Iprovidedbasicinformationaboutmyfriendanddescribedhis/herappearance,hobbiesandpersonalqualities.Iusedsuitableadjectives,suchas________________todescribemyfriend'spersonalqualities.Iusedthe