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续写题目阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thewaitercarefullyplacedourfoodonthetable."Enjoyyourmeal.Letmeknowifyouneedanything,"hesaidwithapolitesmileashewalkedofftoservetheotherguestsintherestaurant.RaulliftedhisforktobegineatingbeforeIinterruptedhim,"Wait,canItakeapictureformyblog?"Hesighed,"Goahead."Itookoutmycellphoneandtookthepicture.Then,Ispentthenextthirtysecondsdecidingonhowtomakeaperfectpost.Bythetimeouricecreamdessertcamearound,Iwasgettingreadytotakemyfifthpictureofthenight.Raulrolledhiseyes.Iquicklyhadashotofthedessertbeforeaskinghim,"Sorry,amIbotheringyoubytakingpictures?""I'mnotgoingtolie.It'salittleannoying,"hesaidhesitantly."Butit'sokay.Iwantyoutodowhatmakesyouhappy."Iputawaythephone,alittlebitembarrassed,anddecidedtojustenjoyourdinner.Whileweconversedoverdessert,hisstatementlingered(逗留)inthebackofmymind.Itwasn'tuntilIreachedhomethatIreallythoughtovertheissue.DidtakingpicturesofmylifetoshowsomeonewhomIbarelyspoketomakemehappy?Well,therewasdefinitelythatindescribablefeelingIfeltwhenmypostgainedovertwentylikes.Itfeltgood;itfeltlikeIwon.But,whatwastheprize?IlookedthroughthestreamofphotosthatIhadpostedofRaulandme.Mostwereofourtimespentatfinerestaurantsorthelatestattractionsnearourcity,andthebrandnamegiftsweboughteachotheronholidays.IclickedontheprofilesofotherpeopleIknewandnoticedasimilartrend.Well,whenmypostgainedovertwentylikes,itfeltgood.Butdoesitreallymatter?1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1:IcalledRaulthatnight.Para2:“Howaboutdoingsomethingmeaningfulforatleastthenextyear?”Ianswered.文章大意文章讲述了主人公在餐厅与朋友Raul共进晚餐时,因为频繁拍照记录而忽略了与朋友的真实互动。在Raul的委婉提醒下,主人公开始反思自己的行为,意识到社交媒体上的点赞和关注并不能带来真正的满足感。回家后,主人公审视了自己过去在社交媒体上发布的照片,意识到这些照片并不能代表他们之间真正的关系和经历。在与Raul的深夜电话交谈中,主人公提出了一个想法:在未来一年内,他们将不再为了社交媒体而生活,而是专注于真实的体验和创造有意义的回忆。这个决定标志着他们将从追求虚拟的认可转向追求真实的生活体验。在原文中,有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了基础:1.拍照行为的频繁:主人公在餐厅频繁拍照,这不仅影响了与Raul的用餐体验,也暗示了主人公对社交媒体的依赖。2.Raul的微妙反应:Raul对主人公拍照行为的不满,虽然他没有直接表达,但从他的眼神和语气中可以感受到。3.主人公的自我反思:在对话中,主人公开始质疑自己追求社交媒体认可的行为是否真的让她快乐,这为后续的改变埋下了伏笔。4.社交媒体的虚幻满足:主人公意识到社交媒体上的点赞虽然让她感到短暂的满足,但这种满足是虚幻的,这促使她思考更深层次的满足感。在续写部分,这些伏笔得到了回应:1.改变拍照习惯:主人公在电话中向Raul表达了想要改变频繁拍照的习惯,这直接回应了原文中拍照行为的频繁。2.Raul的支持:Raul在电话中的支持和理解,回应了原文中他微妙的不满和对主人公幸福的关心。3.追求真实体验:主人公提出不再为了社交媒体而生活,而是专注于真实的体验,这回应了她在原文中的自我反思和对社交媒体虚幻满足的质疑。4.一年之约:主人公提出的“至少未来一年”的承诺,是对原文中她对社交媒体依赖的直接回应,也是她决心改变的明确表示。这些伏笔和回应构成了故事的连贯性,推动了情节的发展,并揭示了主人公内心的变化和成长。参考范文Para1:IcalledRaulthatnight."Hey,it’sme,"Isaid,myvoicetentative."I'vebeenthinkingandIcan'thelpbutwonderifI'mmissingsomethingmoremeaningfulinlife."Therewasapauseontheline."Youknow,"hefinallyreplied,histonethoughtful,"Sometimes,itjustfeltlikeyouweremorefocusedoncapturingthemomentthanactuallylivingit."Hishonestystruckachord.Staringoutattheflickeringlights,Iadmitted,"Idon’twantthattodefineourmomentstogether."AsIimaginedhimnoddingslowly,heuttered,“Igetthat,”hisvoicesteady,“Whatdoyousuggest?”Para2:“Howaboutdoingsomethingmeaningfulforatleastthenextyear?”Ianswered.MypulsequickenedasIenvisionedusembarkingonadventuresthattranscendedthedigitalrealm.“Let’sputourphonesawaywhenwe’retogetherandfocusonrealexperiences—exploretheworld,volunteer,oreventryoutnewhobbies.”Icouldsenseasparkinhimasheleanedintomyidea.“I’dlikethat,”hereplied,asmileblossomingthroughthespeaker.Atthatmoment,anewresolveignitedwithinme,shimmeringwithinfinitepossibilities.Iknew,insteadofchasingephemerallikesthateroded,wewouldbecreatingmemoriesthatendured.下水文1Para1:IcalledRaulthatnight,mymindracingwiththerealizationsoftheday."Raul,I'vebeenreflectingonourdinnerconversation,"Isaid,myvoicefilledwithanewfoundclarity."Theconstantneedtocaptureeverymomentforsocialvalidation...it'sbeenovershadowingthejoyofthemomentitself."Icouldsensehisattention,hispatienceashelistened."Ithinkit'stimeforachange,"Ideclared,feelingaresolveIhadn'tknownIpossessed."Iwanttoliveourexperiencesfully,withoutthefilterofacameralens."Therewasathoughtfulsilenceontheotherendoftheline,andIheldmybreath,waitingforhisresponse.Para2:"Howaboutdoingsomethingmeaningfulforatleastthenextyear?"Ianswered,myexcitementgrowingwitheachword."Let'smakeapacttoliveinthemoment,totrulyenjoyourtimetogetherwithoutthepressureofdocumentingitforsocialmedia."Icouldhearthesmileinhisvoiceasheresponded,"Ilikethesoundofthat.Let'sdoit."Wediscussedideasforexperiencesthatwouldenrichourlives,fromvolunteeringatalocalcharitytotakingupanewhobbytogether.Theconversationwasfilledwithenthusiasmandasenseofadventure,andaswehungup,Ifeltarenewedsenseofpurpose.Itwastimetoshiftthefocusfromlikesandsharestolaughterandmemories.下水文2Para1:IcalledRaulthatnight,mythoughtsswirlingwiththeimplicationsofourearlierdiscussion."Raul,I'vebeenmullingoverwhatyoumentionedattherestaurant,"Iventured,myvoicetingedwithahintofuncertaintybutalsoasparkofresolve."ThewayI'vebeentreatingouroutings—turningthemintophotoopsforsocialmedia—it'snotreallyaboutus,isit?"Ipaused,allowingthequestiontohangbetweenus."I'vebeensofocusedontheonlineapproval,onthevirtualpatsontheback,thatImighthavelostsightoftherealtreasure:thetimewespendtogether."IcouldalmostfeelRaulnoddingontheotherend,hisunderstandingandsupportpalpableeven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