考研小作文冲刺

考研小作文冲刺

1.投诉信

范例1：YoutookaninterviewinacorporationlastWednesday.Buttheinterviewer

criticizedinaveryunfairwayandmadeyoufeelextremelyembarrassed.Now,write

alettertothedepartmentconcerned,makeacomplaint,stateyourreasonsandsuggest

asolution（s）.

DearSirorMadam,

Iamajobapplicantwhohadparticipatedintheinterviewheldbyyourcompany

lastWednesday.IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakea

complaintconcerningthisundesirableexperience.

Thereasonformydissatisfactionhasnothingtodowiththeoutcomebutthe

toneofyourinterviewer,Mr.Wang.Firstandforemost,whenIwasaboutto

illuminatemythoughtregardingthepositionIappliedfor,hebegantoblamemefor

myso-callednonsenseaccordingtohisperspective.Inaddition,hiscynicaleyesight

alwaysmademefeeluncomfortable.Underthesecircumstances,Ifounditdifficult

tobringmypotentialintofullplayduringtheinterview.

Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemyletterinto

consideration,whatIreallywantisjustanapologyfromhim,andIwouldliketo

havethismattersettledbythisFriday.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyat

yourearliestconvenience.（162words）

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

Dear,

Iam（自我介绍）.1feelterribletotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhave

tomakeacomplaintaboutthisundesirableexperience.

Thereasonsformydissatisfactionareasfollows.（总体介绍）.Firstand

foremost,（抱怨的第一个方面）.Inaddition,（抱怨的第二个方

面）.Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit（感觉）（抱怨的方面给你

带来的后果）.

Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemyletterintoconsideration,

andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby（设定解决事情最后期限）.Iam

lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.

Yourssincerely

LiMing

范例2：Writealettertotheheadofatrain,andcomplainaboutitsbadservices.

DearSirorMadam,

Asaregularpassengerofyourtrain,Iamcompletelydisappointedtofind

thattheserviceyouprovideisfarfromsatisfactory.Therefore,Iamwritingthis

lettertodrawyourattentiontothematterinthehopethatthepresentsituation

willbegreatlyimproved.

Asweallknow,punctualityisessentialtotherailwayservice.Yet,thetrainis

delayedfromtimetotime,whichbringsmemuchtroubleandinconvenience.Worst

ofallisthebadmannersofyourstewardsandstewardesses.Fromtheirservices,we

cannotunderstandthesaying,“Thecustomersarethegod.”

Wouldyoupleasetakethismatterintoseriousconsiderationandgivemea

satisfactoryreplyatyourearliestconvenience?Ireallyappreciateyourtimeand

efforts.(127words)

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

2.感谢信

Dear,

Iwouldliketoextendourmostsinceregratitudefor_感谢事由_____.I

sincerelyappreciateyouraidin

Icouldnotenjoysuchawonderfultrip/arriveatsuchsplendidachievements

withoutyourgenerousassistance,andIwillneverforgetyourpainstakinglaborand

fullcooperation.

IhopethatImayrepayyourkindnessbydoingsth..Again,Ifeel

mostobligedtothankyouoncemoreandlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

范例L考研面试后致教授的一封感谢信

DearProfessors,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforthechanceyougavemelast

Fridayfortheinterviewregardingthepostgraduatestudyinyourprestigious

university.

Ireallyappreciatedtheopportunitytolearnfromsomanyknowledgeable

professorsofpsychologyschool.Thefacultycertainlyseemstobehighlyskilledin

teachingandresearchinginthisfield.Ithinkfurtherstudyinthisdisciplineisas

rewardingasitischallenging.Moreover,Igainedastrongsenseofhappinessin

devotingmyselftoscientificresearch.

IamconfidentthatIpossessthequalitiesandpotentialstobecomea

promisingpostgraduatestudentinpsychology.Ibelievetheforthcomingstudyand

researchingexperienceswillpreparemeverywellformyfuturepsychological

exploration.Iamlookingforwardtoournextmeeting.Thankyouagainfor

consideringmeforthisopportunity.

范例2：一封感谢信给车祸事故后热心帮助你的人

DearMr.Shakespeare,

Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyourgeneroushelp.Iam

referringtothatunfortunateaccidenttheotherday,whenIwasknockedoffmybike

byataxi.

Ifithadnotbeenforyourtimelyassistanceingivingmefirstaid,Ifearthat

theconsequencesmighthavebeenmuchserious.Everyoneagreesthatitwasyour

quick-wittedresponseinthatemergencythathasledtothissatisfactoryoutcome.(强

调句型):

Althoughnowadayspeopleinmountingnumberstalkabouttheneedtobe

unselfish,weseeveryfewpeoplepracticewhattheypreach.Ifthereweremore

peoplelikeyou,thisworldwouldbeamuchnicerplace.(116words)

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

3.邀请信

范例1：邀请教授做报告

Directions:

WritealettertoProfessorWhite,aworldfamousprofessormajoringinChinese

philosophyandreligiousstudies,andinvitehimtoparticipateinaconferencetobe

heldinyouruniversity.

DearProfessorWhite,

IamverypleasedtoinformyouthatBeijingUniversityisorganizingan

academicconferenceentitled“Sino-USConferenceonPhilosophyandReligious

Studies”onDecember8,2011inBeijing.

YouarecordiallyinvitedtoparticipateinthisimportantChineseacademicevent

tobeourguestspeaker.Youwillbewelcometoparticipatefullyintheactivitiesof

theconference,includinglectures,seminars,andotherrecreationalactivities.Your

roundtripairticket,accommodationandmealexpenseswillbesubsidized.

Welookforwardtoseeingyouinthisconferenceandtohavingyouas

significantpartofthisevent.Ifyouacceptthisinvitation,pleaseadviseusof

yourdateofarrival,sothatwecouldmakenecessaryarrangements.(118words)

Yburssincerely,

LiMing

私人邀请信

Dear,

Iwillbeholding活动at_地点on_时间inorderto

___目的—.Asyouareaclosefriendofourfamily,myparentsandIwouldvery

muchlikeyoutojoinusinthiscelebrationandshareourjoy.

Theoccasionwillstartat,andactivitiesinclude,

and.Inaddition,therewillbe.Iamsureyouwill

enjoyagoodtime.

Myfamilywouldfeelhonoredbyyourpresence.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

公务邀请信

Dear,

Onbehalfoforganizingcommitteefortheconference,Ihavethehonortoinvite

youtoourconferenceentitled”会议题目"onDecember19,2011inBeijing.（我代表

会议组织委员会，荣幸地邀请您来参加我们将于2011年12月19日在北京举行的…

会议）

Itwouldgiveusgreatpleasureifyoucoulddeliveraspeechonthetopicof

duringthevisit.Iamsurethatitwouldbeimmenselybeneficialtothe

teachersandstudents'furtherstudyandresearchinthisfield.Besides,youwillbe

welcometoparticipatefullyintheactivitiesoftheconference,includinglectures,

seminars,andotherrecreationalactivities.Yourroundtripairticket,accommodation

andmealexpenseswillbesubsidized.

Welookforwardtoseeingyouinthisconferenceandtohavingyouas

significantpartofthisevent.Ifyouacceptthisinvitation,pleaseadviseusofyour

dateofarrival,sothatwecanmakenecessaryarrangements.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

4.询问信

范例1:Directions：YouarepreparingforanEnglishtestandareinneedofsome

referencebooks.Writealettertothesalesdepartmentofabookstoretoaskfor：

（1）detailedinformationaboutthebooksyouwant；

（2）methodsofpayment；

（3）timeandwayofdelivery.

DearSirorMadam,

Iamwritingtoyououtofanurgentneedofareferencebook.

AsIamgoingtotakethePostgraduateEntranceExaminationintwomonths,I

desperatelyneedtoimprovemyEnglishwritingskills.Iwouldliketobuyabookthat

willinformmealotabouthowtowriteanexcellentcomposition,enablemetowrite

asmanywordsasrequiredandavoidmakingseriousmistakes.Iwishtopaythecost

ofthebookviatheInternet.Besides,Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucould

sendmethebookbyEMSassoonaspossible.

Thankforyourtimeandefforts.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyour

earliestconvenience.（120words）

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

Dear，

Iam（自我介绍）Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyouto

providemewithinformationregarding（要询问的内容）

Firstofall,（第一个问题）Secondly,（第二个问

题）Iwouldalsoliketoinquire（最重要的问题）Wouldyoupleasesend

mesomerelevantbookletsontheabove-mentionedaspects?

Thankyouforyoukindness,andyourpromptattentiontothisletterwillbe

highlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

5.备忘录/报告

范例：Youarethepresidentofacompany.WriteamemotoGeorgeGordonByron,

thevice-presidentontheemployee'strainingoncomputer,tellinghimtheneedto

traintheemployees,detailedinformation,andaskhimtowriteaplan.

Date：January7,2012

To：GeorgeGordonByron

From：LiMing

Subject：ComputerTrainingoftheStaff

Aswediscussedearlierthisweek,Iagreewithyouthatourfirmisfacedup

withproblemofthehighrateofcomputerilliteracyofthestaff.Weneedtomake

upaplanfortrainingouremployeesinthenewfield.

Iwouldlikeyoutodesignourownin-housecomputer-trainingprogram.We

hadbetterclassifytheemployeesandputthemthroughtheprograminturn.

Writeupabriefproposal,describingwhatyouthinktheprogramshould

cover.Assumetheclassrunsfourhoursaweekfortenweeks.Also,assumepeople

havenopriorcomputerknowledgeoranyformalcourseworkincomputerscience.

6.求职信

DearSirorMadam,

IhavereadyouradvertisementinChinaDailyon9Decemberforthepost

ofaccountant,andIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldconsidermefavorablyasan

applicantfortheposition.

MyprofessionaltrainingandexperienceallprovethatIamqualifiedfor

thejob.IgraduatefromtheDepartmentofAccountinginGuanghuaManagement

SchoolofBeijingUniversityin2010.Youwillnotefrommyenclosedresumethat

IwasawardedFirst-prizescholarshipfourtimesformyoutstandingacademic

performance.Aftergraduation,IworkedasanaccountantinNewOriental

EducationandTechnologyGroup.

Ihaveenclosedaresumeforyourreference.Iwouldliketoextendmy

heartfeltappreciationifyoucouldletmeknowtheresultofmyapplicationin

duecourse.(138words)

Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

7.求学信+询问信

Directions:

Youwanttostudyatacertainforeignuniversity.Writealetterto

1)Askaboutthesituationthereasregardsaccommodationandfees,

2)Possiblescholarships,and

3)Whatqualificationsoneneedsforacceptance

DearSirorMadam,

IamaChinesestudentwhowishestoapplyforadmissionintoyourprestigious

university.Myplanistostartmycoursenextterm,andIwouldbegratefulifyou

couldprovidemewithcertainessentialinformation.

First,whatqualificationsdoIneedtofollowacourseofstudyatyouruniversity?

Ialreadyhaveabachelor'sdegreefromBeijingForeignStudiesUniversity,butI

wonderifthereareanyfurtheracademicrequirements.Second,howmucharethe

tuitionfees?AlthoughIintendtobeself-supporting,Iwouldbeinterestedtohearif

thereareanyscholarshipsavailableforinternationalstudents.Third,whatisthe

situationasregardsaccommodation?

Ilookforwardtoyourreply,andtoattendingyouresteemedinstitution.(126words)

Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

8.社团招新启示

范例：英语俱乐部招新启示一-四级真题

WelcometotheEnglishClub

January7,2012

WelcometoEnglishClub!Itcouldserveasaplatformtoshowyour

outstandingabilitiesandhelpyoudeveloparangeofgreatskills.

Youcanbeinvolvedinavarietyofactivitiesincludingstagingmusical

dramas,holdinggroupdiscussions,watchingOscar-winningmovies,andsoon.

Theseafter-classactivitiescouldofferyouampleopportunities.First,youractive

participationishelpfultostrengtheningthesenseofresponsibilityandmanaging

interpersonalrelations.Second,variousactivitiesorganizedbyuscouldraise

yourlevelofproficiencyinEnglish.AgoodcommandofEnglishempowersyou

toenjoycompetitiveedgeoveryourpeers.

Youcanfileawrittenapplicationtoourstaffofficeoremailusvia

englishclub@163.com.ThedeadlineforentriesisJanuary22.Comeon,joinus

now!(127words)

EnglishClub

欢迎加入英语俱乐部

2012年1月7日

欢迎加入英语俱乐部！它能成为一个平台，展示你卓越的才能，并帮助你开

发众多技能。

你可以参加各种各样的活动，包括表演音乐剧、进行小组讨论，观看奥斯卡

获奖影片等等。这些课外活动能为你提供丰富的机会。首先，你的积极参与

有助于培养责任感与开发人际关系。其次，我们组织的种类繁多的活动能提高你

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英语俱乐部

9.摘要:大纲样题答案

FundamentalCausesofEconomicGlobalization

Economicglobalizationhasbeenprogressingrapidlysincethebeginningofthe1950s.

Severalfactorshavecontributedtosuchdevelopment.Firstly,advancementsin

scienceandtechnologyhaveofferedatechnicalfoundationbyprovidingthematerial

basisandthetechnicalmeans.Meanwhile,asolideconomicfoundationforsucha

globalizationhasbeenlaidbythemarketeconomywhichisprevailingovertheworld.

Otherfactorsincludethepillaringandpropellingroleofmultinationalsin

micro-economicoperations,theevergrowingcoordinatingandcontrollingpowerand

functionexercisedbysuchinternationaleconomicorganizationsasWTO,IMFand

WBintheinternationaltradeandfinance.（100words）

10.各类书信模板

⑴辞职信模板

Dear,

ThisistoinformyouthatIintendtoresignfrommycurrentposition.Ifeel

reluctanttogiveupmypresentjob,butIfinditisinappropriateformetotakethe

positionas（接职务，如aneditor）forthefollowingreasons.

Tostartwith,Ihaveexpectedthejobtobeinterestingandchallenging,which

turnsouttobetheopposite.Inaddition,.（第二个原因）

Lastly,.（第三个原因）

PleaseletmetotakethischancetothankyoufortherewardingexperienceIhave

acquiredduringmyemployment.Isincerelyhopethatyouwouldapproveofmy

resignation.Iamdeeplysorryforanyinconveniencecaused.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

⑵申请大学的推荐信

DearSir/Madam,

AsaProfessorofBeijingUniversity,Iamverypleasedtorecommend___人名

—,oneofmyfavoritestudent,forhisapplicationtoyourprestigiousuniversity.

Iwasveryimpressedby___人名—whoserichknowledgeandkeeninsightin

thesubjectindicatesthatheisaveryintelligentindividualinthefield.Basedonmy

interactionwithhim,Ibelievethat_人名possessesverystrong

capability.Moreover,itisworthnotingthathestandsoutofhisclassmatesfor

excellentacademicperformance.Inaddition,hehasapleasantpersonalityandahigh

motivation,andhealwaysbehavesingoodmanners.

Therefore,Idonothesitatetorecommendhimasanidealcandidateforthe

university.Iamsureyouwillmakeawisedecisioninenrollinghim.Ifmore

informationregardingthispromisingcandidateisneeded,pleasefeelfreetocontact

me.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

⑶感谢信

Dear，

Iwouldlikethislettertobetakenasanexpressionofheartfeltgratitudetoyou.

Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceingivingmeaid,Ifearthattheconsequences

mighthavebeenmuchserious.Duringthe,youhavegivenmegenerous

helpand.

Thus,Ireallyappreciate,andIhopethatImayrepayyourkindness

by----------------

Finally,Ifeelmostobligedtothankyouoncemore.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

（4）投诉信：用于比较严重的情形

DearSir/Madam,

Iamwritingthislettertoyoutomakesomecomplaintsabouttheterrible

treatmentIhaveexperienced,whichmakesmeextremelyunhappy.

Ithinkyourstoreshouldtakefullresponsibility.Asmyrightswereseverely

violated,Iherebydemandyoutopayformyloss.AstheConsumers'RightLaw

states,Iwouldrequireanadditionalcompensation.Apartfromthis,Irequireserious

apologies.Andconsideringtheseriousnessofthematter,Iwithholdmyrighttosueif

mydemandsarenotproperlyhandled.Iinsistthatyoushouldgivemeasatisfactory

reply.

Yourpromptattentiontomyinquirywouldbehighlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

⑸建议信：用于比较严重的情形

Dear,

Youaskedforadviceconcerning（建议的事由）andIwouldliketotry

tomakesomesuggestions.

Firstofall,youmayconsider.（considerdoingsth.第一个建议）

Secondly,Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif.（第二个建议）Lastly,IfI

wereyou,Iwould.（第三个建议）

Ihopeyoufindtheseproposalspractical.Iwouldbereadytodiscussaboutthis

matterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

（6）请求信模板

Dear,

Iamwritingtoseekyourassistanceindoingsth.（说明在哪方

面请求帮助）

Iwonderwhetheritisconvenientforyouiftwothingsregardingthismatterare

takenintoaccount.Foronething,.（需要考虑的第一个方面）For

another,.（需要考虑的第二个方面）

Yourpromptattentiontomyrequestwouldbehighlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

⑺道歉信模板

过去没有完成的事情

Dear,

Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto_dosth.

Thereasonisthat.IamsorrythatIcannotfinishitintime,

butisitpossiblethatImakeupthelossby?Ifso,Iwillput

everythingelseasidetodoit.

Idohopethatyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Iam

lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

将来不能做的事情

Dear,

IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto_dosth..Itismainly

becauseatthattimeIwillbefullyoccupiedbywhichisquiteoutof

myexpectation,andthatwillconflictwithyourarrangement.ThereforeIamforcedto

adjustmyscheduleandcannotmakemypresenceonyour.Isincerely

hopethatyouwillenjoyagoodtime.Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersome

timenextweek?Ihopetoseeyousoon.

IamreallysorryagainandItrustthatyouwillunderstand.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

（8）祝贺信模板

Dear,

ItwaspleasanttolearnthatyouhavebeenadmittedbyBeijingUniversity.I

wouldliketoexpressmybestwishesandwarmestcongratulationstoyou.

ThisoutcomeiswhatIhaveexpected.BeingadmittedbyBeijingUniversityhas

beenyourwishformanyyears,andyoudevotedallyourenergiestoit.Itproves“No

pains,nogains”.You'vesetaverygoodexampleformeandenhancemyconfidence

tohavetheexaminationnextyear.

BeijingUniversityisthebestinthespecialtyyouwilllearninChina,sothisisa

perfectopportunitytoaccomplishanMAdegree.Youwillgetwhatyouwantaslong

asyoucontinuetostudyhard.Congratulationsandallgoodwishestoyou!

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

考研大作文冲刺

1.负面信息…酒驾…社会责任意识

思维拓展

实际上，本文的内容和行文思路，不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车，还适用于所有关

于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。例如，火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交

规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题，都可以参考此文。

高分范文

Whatascaryandsensationalsceneitis!Inthedrawing,thedriver,asdrunkenas

afiddler,isdrivingfastontheroad,withalargebottleofbeeronthetopofhiscar.

Whatisconveyedbythepicturehasbothrealisticandalarmingimplicationsfor

eachmemberofthecountry.

Theprofoundmeaningofthevividdrawingcanbeelaboratedintermsofboth

awarenessofsecurityandsocialresponsibility.Foronething,consciousnessof

safetyshouldbeoneofourtoppriorities.Lifeisone-wayjourney:youcannot

experienceittwice.Solifeistoberespectedandawed.Itiscrueltoandinhumaneto

endanylifewithacarelessdrivingundertheinfluence(DUI).Foranother,toactasa

responsiblememberofthesociety,eachofusshouldbearsocialresponsibility.We

donotliveonlyforourselvesbutalsoforthosewhoweloveandwholoveus.Itis

irresponsibletoclaimeitherlivesofdriversorlivesofothervictimsarenotimportant,

leavingthefamiliesandrelativesintodeepgriefand,maybe,greatlivingburden.

Inshort,itisimperativethatlegislativemeasuresshouldbetakenbythe

authoritytopunishdrunkdriversseverelysuchassuspendingtheirdrivinglicenses

orevenputtingthemintojail.Besides,themassmedia,suchasTV,radioand

website,shouldworktogethertoenhanceawarenessofsecurityandsenseof

responsibilitytoreducetherateofcaraccident.

翻译

这是一幅多么可怕的触目惊心的场景啊！在这幅图中，烂醉如泥的司机正在

马路上飞速行驶，车上还顶着一大瓶啤酒。这幅图所传达的意义，对我们国家的

每一位成员，都具有现实和警醒的意义。

这幅栩栩如生的图画的深刻意义可以从安全意识和社会责任感两个角度阐

释。一方面，安全意识应该是我们首先要重视的问题。生命是一次单程旅行：你

不能经历两次生命。所以我们应该敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒驾车的疏忽而

宣告任何一条生命的结束是残忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作为这个社会负责任

的一员，我们每个人都应该去承担社会责任。我们不仅仅是为了自己活着，我们

也为那些我们所爱的和爱我们的人活着。无论是声称司机的、还是受害者的生命

不重要，都是不负责任的。因为这会给他们的家人和亲戚带来巨大的悲痛和沉重

的生活负担。

总而言之，权威机构应当采取严厉的法律措施去严惩酒驾的司机，例如吊销

驾照或监禁，除此以外，大众传媒，如电视、广播、网络应通力合作提高公众的

安全和责任意识以减少车祸事故。

①sensational[sendsei/anal]a.耸人听闻的；轰动社会的；极好的

②fiddler[,fidlo]n.游手好闲的人asdrunkenasafiddler烂醉如泥

2.人生哲理话题…豁达与乐观

思路点拨

图画中的一只小绵羊，正呆在一块大石头的阴影下面。但是它乐观、豁达地

认为，有阴影，那么就说明有阳光。这幅图无疑向我们传达了一种健康的人生哲

学：乐观生活、达观处世。由于这是一篇人生哲理类文章，所以文章安排可以相

对自由一些：第一-段：描述图画；第二段：利用正反举例论证悲观与乐观的差距

+总结句；第三段：倡导一种乐观生活、达观处世的人生态度和人生哲学。

思维拓展

本文也可以从世界观、人生观的角度入手。相反，如果是一幅表明悲观厌世

的图片，我们也可以采取同样的手法进行处理。

高分范文

Asisapparentlyrevealedinthecartoonabove,thesheepliveshappilyinan

optimisticstateofmind,ignoringthethreatofadarkshade,becausehebelievesthat

wherethereisshadow,thereissunshine.Whatisconveyedinthepictureisboth

positiveandilluminating.

Asfarasthepurposeofthedrawerisconcerned,Ithinkheintendsto

remindusoftheimportanceofoptimism.Ifthesheepinthecartoonfeelsanxious

andpessimisticaboutthedarkshadealldaylong,hecanbynomeanshavea

comfortableandpleasantlife.Exampleslikethisarenumerous,butIthinkthe

followingonewillbeconvincingenough.Ifthereishalfacupofwater,the

pessimistmaycryoveritbecausetheyhaveonlyahalf,whiletheoptimistmaycheer

foritbecausetheystillhaveahalf.Obviously,theywillhavedifferentperceptions

andfeelingstowardthesamelife.

Thereisnodenyingthat,mostoptimistshaveahighhappinessindex,whichcan

hardlybeexperiencedbypessimists.Therefore,wemustreadourlifewithapositive

attitude.What'smore,theoptimisticattitudecaninfectothersstrongly,meaningthat

wewillfindthatallthefriendsaroundusareoptimisticifweobservetheminthe

sameperspective.Asaresult,anatmosphereofoptimismandhappinesscouldbe

naturallysetup.Therefore,let5skeepthefamouslineofShelley,thewell-knownpoet,

inmindforever,thatis,“Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?"

译文

上面的漫画清楚地表现出这只山羊不顾阴影的威胁仍然保持乐观，因为它相

信有阴影的地方就一定有阳光。图片中反映的问题是积极的和富有启发性的。

我认为作者要表达的意义是要提醒我们保持乐观心态的重要性。如果漫画中

的山羊终日悲观地生活在阴影中，它将永远无法获得舒适和幸福的生活。类似的

例子千千万，但是我认为下面的例子就足够有说服力。如果这里有半杯水，悲观

的人会抱怨只剩下半杯了，而乐观的人在庆幸还有半杯可以喝。显然，面对同样

的生活，他们会有不同的感受。

毫无疑问，乐观者拥有更高的幸福指数，而悲观者永远也体会不到。因此我

们必须以积极的态度面对生活。而且乐观的情绪能强烈地感染他人，这就意味着

如果我们以乐观的视角面对周围的朋友们，他们也会同样地乐观。于是，乐观和

幸福的气氛自然而然地就建立起来了。因此，让我们把著名诗人雪莱的名句铭记

在心吧：冬天来了，春天还会远么？

★非常重要：本题题目要求最后-一段也可能会变成：supportyourviewwithan

example/examples

这时候，我们可以把文章的结尾改写为：

Examplesofoptimisticattitudetowardlifecaneasilybefoundanywhereinour

world.HowwouldhaveZhangHaidi,sufferingfromthehighparaplegia,madesuch

glowingachievementsinlife,withoutherstrongmindandoptimisticattitude?Facing

theseriousdiseasesandhardshipsinlife,shedidnotchoosetoholdback.Instead,she

hasbeencourageousand