Unit5Workingtheland读后续写作业设计（学生版）

XBook1Unit5读后续写作业I课文素材库微技能语料出处动作描写Totacklethiscrisis,hechosetostudyagricultureandreceivedaneducationatSouthwestAgriculturalCollegeinChongqing.Throughintenseeffort,Yuanovercameenormoustechnicaldifficultiestodevelopthefirsthybridricethatcouldbeusedforfarmingin1974.3.Today,itisestimatedthatabout60percentofdomesticriceconsumptioninChinaisprisedofcropsgeneratedfromYuan’shybridstrains.4.Organicfarmersalsoplantdiversecropsthatusedifferentdepthsofsoiltohelpkeepitrich.5.Somepeoplewouldprefertostoptheuseofmanmadechemicalsinagricultureentirely.6.Asaresult,herdecisionhasalsohelpedtoalleviatepovertyandimprovethelivesofmanypeopleinhervillage.1.Page50Para2Line52.Page50Para3Line113.Page51Para4Line14.Page56Para4Line75.Page56Para5Line16.Page92Para2Line8场景描写ZhangTao,fromBinchuancountyinYunnanProvince,addsthattheairwasbad,transportwasterrible,anditwashardtomakeadecentliving.Page92Para4Line2语言描写“Lifeinbigcitiesisnotallit’scrackeduptobe,”saidZhangTao.Page92Para4Line1外貌描写Indeed,hisslimbutstrongbodywasjustlikethatofmillionsofChinesefarmers.Page50Para1Line3心理描写1.Yuanwasconvincedthattheanswercouldbefoundinthecreationofhybridrice.2.Manypeopleworrythatthesechemicalsmaymakethemillandevencausecancer.1.Page50Para3Line52.Page55Para2Line7II语言训练场汉译英1.我们必须带着同情和谅解来处理这个问题。(tackle)2.有件事给了我克服困难的勇气。(overe)3.一个篮球队由12名队员组成。(beprisedof)4.他们在山顶上插了一面旗子。(plant)5.我更愿意做一些有难度和有挑战的事情，而不是那些简单的事情。(prefertodosth)6.我们采取了一系列措施缓解这个问题。(alleviate)7.昨天夜里发生了一件可怕的事情。(terrible)8.他并不像某些人吹捧的那样聪明。(becrackeduptobe)9.你是怎样把身材保持得这么苗条的？(slim)10.读者可能不相信这是真的。(beconvincedthat)III美文体验馆BeingPlanted“106!”Thecryofdisappointmentbreaksthesilenceofthepeacefulnight.Indarkness,hestandsstillthere,withtearsdroppingcontinuouslyfromhiseyes.Heisa5thyearPh.D.studentmajoringinbiology.Thisishis106thattempttocultivatestrawberrieswhichcouldbearextremeclimates.Inhis105thexperiment,hedidalltheprecautionsthatheknewcouldleadhimclosertohisgoal.Everygenerationofthestrawberryseemedtobringhimclosertosuccess,buteverytimetheresultwasalike—failure,failure,failure.Hehasliterallygotusedtoit.Butthistime,hecanhardlyhelpfeelingfrustratedandangry.“Whostolemyexperimentalstrawberry!”Lastnight,whenhegottothefield,hewasthrilled.Althoughmostoftheplantswereobviouslydying,oneplantstoodvigorouslyinthemiddleoftheexperimentalfield.Theplantwaslabeled“PlantNo.106”.Whatacoincidence!Inhis106thattempt,the106thplantwasfinallymutating(变异)initsidealway—thesparkofhope,tohim.Lastnight,PlantNo.106'sfruitstartedtoturnred.Hewasneversoclosetosuccess.Whatheneededtodowaswaitforseveraldaystoharvestthatpink,shinyandattractivefruit.Butthisnight,thefruitdisappears.Sodoeshishope.“3years’effort!1,096days’struggling!13,152hours’DNAeditingandexperiment.ALLGONE!”hemurmurstohimself.Heregretsthathedidn’tgetasmallsampleofthestolenstrawberrylastnight.Nowheisusinghisfingerstodigtheground.Hedoesn’tknowwhyheisdoingso.Heiswellawarethattheresultsofthepast106attemptsareallwastedbecauseoftheincidentandhisnottakingthesampleintime.Hehasnoseedsleft.Atthepresent,heseemstohaveonly2choices:tostartfromtheverybeginning,ortogiveup.Heuseshisfingerstodigthesoilofthatinchoffieldwhichusedtocontainhishope._______________________________________________________________________________Heissoexcitedthatheburstsintotears._______________________________________________________________________________主题语境人与自我文章出处2022“外研社·国才杯”写作大赛全国季军记叙文,按照高考读后续写试题的要求，略有修改。词数正文英文词数317+2（标题），续写第一段首句19个单词，续写第二段首句9单词。What故事脉络(Useonesentencetosummarizethemainideaofeachparagraph)Opening(Para.14)Buildup(Para.56)Climax(Para.78)Resolution(续写第一段)Heuseshisfingerstodigthesoilofthatinchoffieldwhichusedtocontainhishope.……Ending(续写第二段)Heissoexcitedthatheburstsintotears.……Why故事主题How写作手法人物分析“106!”Thecryofdisappointmentbreaksthesilenceofthepeacefulnight.Thisishis106thattempttocultivatestrawberrieswhich…Heregretsthathedidn’tgetasmallsampleofthestolenstrawberrylastnight.Hedoesn’tknowwhyheisdoingso.场景语言风格伏笔/照应Title:BeingPlanted指什么？Para8:Nowheisusinghisfingerstodigtheground.以及续写第一段的首句Heuseshisfingerstodigthesoilofthatinchoffieldwhichusedtocontainhishope.说明什么？谋篇布局续写第一段Q1:Whatisonhismindwhenheisdiggingtheland?Whatdoeshewanttodigoutfromtheground?Q2:Whatwillhappenattheendofthefirstparagraphofcontinuation?Whatdoeshedigoutinthesoilthatmakeshimveryexcited?谋篇布局续写第二段Q3:Whatishethinkingwhenhedigsupthisseed?Q4:Whatisthesignificanceofthediscoveryofthisseed?【素材积累】Para11.breaksthesilenceofthepeacefulnight打破了宁静夜晚的寂静Para21.Thisishis106thattempttocultivatestrawberrieswhichcouldbearextremecl