Unit1ScienceFictionUsingLanguage课件高中英语人教版选择性

ContinuationWritingReviewthekeyelementsofthestoryItwas

_____________(Para.1)

todaythattheTimeTraveller_______________________________(Para.2)tobeginhistimetravel.Whenhewastravelling,hefelt_______________________________(Para.3).Andwhenhewantedtostop,he_______________________(Para.4)

hard.TheTimeMachinesuddenlyflippedandhewasthrownthroughtheair.Finally,hewas________(Para.5)tofindhimselfsittingintherain

insomemudnexttothemachine.atteno’clockWhenpushedthestartingleverforwardsstunnedFeelingsActionActionFeelingpulledtheleverbackwardsstrangeandunpleasantTheTimeTravellerTheMorlocksCharactersNewCharacters:Build-upOpeningEndingResolutionProblemAStoryMountainThemostexcitingpartofthestoryParagraph1:TheTimeTravellerstoppedintheyear802701._______Paragraph2:TheMorlocksthenstoletheTimeMachineanduseditasbait(诱饵)tocaptureandkilltheTimeTraveller.________________TheTimeTravellerTheMorlocksConflictProblemWhatcausedthisconflictHowtosolvetheproblemBuildtheframework--ProblemParagraph1:

TheTimeTravellerstoppedintheyear802701.Paragraph2:TheMorlocksthenstoletheTimeMachineanduseditasbaittocaptureandkilltheTimeTraveller.

inthefutureHowwastheweather(Settings)Whatdidhesee(Actions&Feelings)WhathappenedbetweenthemWhydidtheyhaveaconflictwitheachotherHowdidhefeel(Actions&Feelings)Tip1：根据第二段首句预测第一段Settings:Withheavyrainpouringdown/lightningflashing/thunderroaring...Actions:sawsb.doing.../communicatedthrough.../proposedtodo.../refusedtodo...Feelings:astonished/curious/frightened/angry...Buildtheframework--Resolution+EndingParagraph2:TheMorlocksthenstoletheTimeMachineanduseditasbaittocaptureandkilltheTimeTraveller.

HaveMorlockscapturedhim(Actions&Feelings)DidhereturntohisowntimeIfso,howdidhereturn(Actions&Feelings)WhyandhowdidhegetthechancetousethetimemachineHowmuchtimehadpassedwhenhereturnedtohisowntime(Settings)Tip2:根据第二段首句和正能量结尾预测第二段NOYesUsingtimemachinehappyendingorbadendingHappyendingActions:thoughtofaway.../sathimselfin.../pulled...back/travelledbackto...Feelings:scared/nervous/calmedhimselfdown/relieved...Settings:inthelab/...hadpassed.Themuch-anticipatedpresentationstarted.Thepresenterbeganwithasmalljoke,andthensharedsomeinterestingfactsaboutRealityRoboticsCompanybeforeintroducingtheinnovativeworkthecompanywasdoing.Nostumbling,norutteringofTom’sdreadedphrase-“butwhatIreallymeanttosaywas...”Instead,theaudienceweretotallydrawnbytheinnovativeproductthepresenterdescribed.Theyhopedtheywouldbegivenademonstrationtoseehoweffectivethenewinventionwas.Asthepresentationneareditsend,thepresentersaidcalmlyandconfidently,“AndnowIwouldliketosharethisstagewiththemanwhoinventedme.”Tomwalkedontothestage,lookingexactlythesameasthepresenter.The“identicaltwins”tooktheaudiencebysurprise.Tomthenspokeslowly,“Whatyouhavejustwitnessedisademonstrationofthelatestinventionfromthecompany-apresentationrobot.”Suddenlyitallclickedandtheaudienceeruptedincheers.Tomthenexplainedhowthecompanycreatedsucharobotandprogrammedittospeak.“Asyoucouldseeandhear,ithadtheconfidenceIcouldneverexhibitinsuchapresentation.Wecanmodelitintoanexactcopyofyou.”Theaudiencegotexcitedattheprospect.Thebosssmiledapprovingly.MaybeTomdeservedapromotion,hethought.1.与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理(Reasonableandlogical);2.内容丰富，情节合理，有细节描写(动作,情感,环境,对话等)(Actions+Feelings+

Settings);3.所使用语法结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达(Goodvocabulary&variedstructures);第五档：21-25分EvaluationSentencepatterns无灵主语非谓语动词倒装句式强调句名从、定从、状从with复合结构被动语态Para.1-Problem1.Howwastheweather2.Whatdidhesee3.WhathappenedbetweenthemWhydidtheyhaveaconflictwitheachotherPara.2-Resolution+Ending1.Whyandhowdidhegetthechancetousethetimemachine2.Howdidhereturn3.HowmuchtimehadpassedwhenhereturnedtohisowntimeParagraph1:(byMissHe)TheTimeTravellerstoppedintheyear802701.

TheTimeTravellerwasastonishedtoseetheabsolutelystrangesceneinfrontofhim.Therewasdarknessasfarastheeyecouldsee,andthetreeswerebare.Withlightningflashingandthunderroaring,hesawseveralscary-lookingpeoplewalkingdownthestreet.Hefeltagreatsenseoffearwellingupinhisheart,

butcuriositydrovehimtocommunicate.Aftercommunicatingthroughbodylanguageandspeech,herealizedthattheyweretheMorlockswhoproposedtoborrowthetimemachine.Frightenedbytheunfamiliarsurroundingsandalltheunknownofthefuture,herefusedtoaccepttheirrequest,whichmadetheMorlocksenviousandangry.Paragraph2:TheMorlocksthenstoletheTimeMachineanduseditasbaittocaptureandkilltheTimeTraveller.

Nervousandscared

though

hewas,hehadtocalmhimselfdowntothinkofawaynottogetkilled.Astheonlypersonwhocouldmanipulatethetimemachine,hewasgiventh