读后续写专练二-高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写专练二续写原文--原文翻译--写作思路--参考范文--范文翻译--重点词Para.1:ItwasaSaturdayafternoon.Thecoloroftheskywaschanging,firstlightgray,thendarkgray，andfinallydarkanddense.Thewindwasblowingheavily,andthetreeswereswayinginthestrongwind.ltbegantoraincatsanddogs.Soon,theroadwasfilledwithpuddlesfromtherain.Onsuchastormyafternoon,mymothertookmyfive-year-oldbrother,Christopher,andmetoanewbigtoystoreshehadreadaboutinthenewspaper."Somanytoys,"theadvertisementhadshoutedinfullandflashycolor,"thatwehadtogetahugewarehousetofitthemall!"ChristopherandIcouldn'thavebeenmoreexcited.Weranacrosstheparkinglot,throughthecoldandbitingrain,asfastasourlittlelegscouldcarryus.Weleftourmotheroutsidetobattlewiththefrustratingumbrella,whichneverworkedwhenshewanteditto."Christine!Takecareofyouryoungbrother!"Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.Para.2:

"Christine!I'mgoingtofindtheLegosection!There'sanewpirateshiplwant,andlhavefourdollars!Maybelcanbuyit!"Christopherexclaimedandranoffexcitedly.Ionlyhalfheardhim.Itookarightturnand,tomywide-eyeddelight,foundmyselfinthemidstoftheBarbieWorld.IwasstudyingaBarbieanddoingsomesimplemathinmyheadwhensuddenlyanearthshakingclapofthunderroaredfromthestormoutside.Ijumpedatthenoise,droppingthedolltothefloor.Thelightsflickeredonceanddied,coveringeverythinginablanketofblackness.Thundercontinuedtoshaketheskyandlightningilluminatedthestoreforseconds，castingfrighteningshadowsonmymind.提示句1：“Ohno,”Ithought,“Where'sChristopher?"__________________________________________提示句2："Christine，I’mhere."__________________________________________思路点拨：作者的母亲带着两个孩子去买玩具，恰逢雨天，母亲在整理伞，两个孩子先进了店里，之后两人分别去了不同的区域。突然店里停电。第一段：姐姐：Where'sChristopher?所以续写第一段重在描写“姐姐面对停电也很害怕却仍然要找弟弟的焦急的心情”第二段："Christine，I’mhere."姐姐听到了弟弟的回应，重在描写“两人终于找到对方激动、开心的场景”最后，不要忘了作者母亲的描写，使文章完整。

原文翻译与重点词ItwasaSaturdayafternoon.Thecoloroftheskywaschanging,firstlightgray,thendarkgray，andfinallydarkanddense.

lightn.光;光线adj.轻的;浅色的vt.照亮;点燃

grayadj.灰色的;苍白的n.灰色

darkadj.黑暗的,深色的n.黑暗;夜

dense/dens/adj.稠密的；浓密的那是一个星期六的下午。天空的颜色在变化，先是浅灰色，然后是深灰色，最后是暗而浓密。

Thewindwasblowingheavily,andthetreeswereswayinginthestrongwind.blow

v.(风)刮，吹sway/sweɪ/v.摇摆，摇晃风刮得很大，树在强风中摇摆。Itbegantoraincatsanddogs.Soon,theroadwasfilledwithpuddlesfromtherain.

raincatsanddogs

倾盆大雨

puddle/ˈpʌdl/n.水坑，泥潭下起了倾盆大雨。很快，路上布满了雨水留下的水坑。

Onsuchastormyafternoon,mymothertookmyfive-year-oldbrother,Christopher,andmetoanewbigtoystoreshehadreadaboutinthenewspaper."在这样一个暴风雨的下午，我妈妈带着我五岁的弟弟克里斯托弗和我去一家新开的大玩具店，这是她在报纸上看到的。“Somanytoys,"theadvertisementhadshoutedinfullandflashycolor,"thatwehadtogetahugewarehousetofitthemall!"

flashy

adj.

闪光的

warehouse/ˈweəhaʊs/n.仓库“这么多玩具，”广告用鲜艳的色彩大声喊道，“我们得找个大仓库才能装下所有的玩具!”

ChristopherandIcouldn'thavebeenmoreexcited.Weranacrosstheparkinglot,throughthecoldandbitingrain,asfastasourlittlelegscouldcarryus.否定+比较级=最高级

biting/ˈbaɪtɪŋ/adj.刺痛的克里斯托弗和我都非常兴奋。我们穿过停车场，冒着寒冷刺骨的雨，用我们的小小的腿尽可能快地跑着。Weleftourmotheroutsidetobattlewiththefrustratingumbrella,whichneverworkedwhenshewanteditto.frustrating/frʌˈstreɪtɪŋ/adj.令人沮丧的令人失望的workn.

工作；产品

vi.

工作；运作；起作用我们把母亲留在外面，让她和那把令人沮丧的雨伞做斗争，那把她想用的时候从来都不好用的伞。

Christine!Takecareofyouryoungbrother!"Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.Christine!照顾好你的弟弟!”母亲大声喊道。

"Christine!I'mgoingtofindtheLego

section!There'sanewpirateshipIwant,andIhavefourdollars!MaybeIcanbuyit!"Christopherexclaimedandranoffexcitedly.

sectionn.截面；部分；部门

piraten.海盗

exclaimev.大叫，呼喊“克里斯汀!我要去找乐高积木区!我想要一艘新的海盗船，我有4美元!也许我能买下来!克里斯托弗大叫着，兴奋地跑开了。Ionlyhalfheardhim.Itookarightturnand,tomywide-eyeddelight,foundmyselfinthemidstoftheBarbieWorld.delightn.高兴；令人高兴的人或物midstn.中部，中间我隐约听到他的声音。我右转了一圈，发现自己置身于芭比娃娃世界之中，我的眼睛睁得大大的。

IwasstudyingaBarbieanddoingsomesimplemathinmyheadwhensuddenlyanearthshakingclapofthunder

roaredfromthestormoutside.shakevt./n.动摇；摇动clapv./n.拍手，鼓掌thunder/ˈθʌndə(r)/n.雷roarvt.咆哮；呼喊我正在研究芭比娃娃，在脑子里做一些简单的数学运算，突然，外面的暴风雨里响起了一声惊雷。Ijumpedatthenoise,droppingthedolltothefloor.

听到声音，我吓了一跳，把娃娃摔在地上。Thelightsflickeredonceanddied,covering

everythinginablanketofblackness.flicker/ˈflɪkə(r)/v./n.闪烁，摇曳blacknessn.黑色dievi.死亡；凋零；熄灭灯光闪烁了一下就熄灭了，一切都笼罩在一片黑暗之中。

Thundercontinuedtoshaketheskyandlightningilluminatedthestoreforseconds，castingfrighteningshadowsonmymind.

castvt.投；计算;投射illuminate/ɪˈluːmɪneɪt/v.照射，照亮；阐明雷声继续震动着天空，闪电照亮了商店几秒钟，在我的脑海里投下了可怕的阴影。

ItwasaSaturdayafternoon.Thecoloroftheskywaschanging,firstlightgray,thendarkgray，andfinallydarkanddense.Thewindwasblowingheavily,andthetreeswereswayinginthestrongwind.ltbegantoraincatsanddogs.Soon,theroadwasfilledwithpuddlesfromtherain.那是一个星期六的下午。天空的颜色在变化，先是浅灰色，然后是深灰色，最后是暗而浓密。风刮得很大，树在强风中摇摆。下起了倾盆大雨。很快，路上布满了雨水留下的水坑。

Onsuchastormyafternoon,mymothertookmyfive-year-oldbrother,Christopher,andmetoanewbigtoystoreshehadreadaboutinthenewspaper."Somanytoys,"theadvertisementhadshoutedinfullandflashycolor,"thatwehadtogetahugewarehousetofitthemall!"在这样一个暴风雨的下午，我妈妈带着我五岁的弟弟克里斯托弗和我去一家新开的大玩具店，这是她在报纸上看到的。“这么多玩具，”广告用鲜艳的色彩大声喊道，“我们得找个大仓库才能装下所有的玩具!”

ChristopherandIcouldn'thavebeenmoreexcited.Weranacrosstheparkinglot,throughthecoldandbitingrain,asfastasourlittlelegscouldcarryus.Weleftourmotheroutsidetobattlewiththefrustratingumbrella,whichneverworkedwhenshewanteditto."Christine!Takecareofyouryoungbrother!"Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.克里斯托弗和我都非常兴奋。我们穿过停车场，冒着寒冷刺骨的雨，用我们的小小的腿尽可能快地跑着。我们把母亲留在外面，让她和那把令人沮丧的雨伞做斗争，那把她想用的时候从来都不好用的伞。Christine!照顾好你的弟弟!”母亲大声喊道。

"Christine!I'mgoingtofindtheLegosection!There'sanewpirateshiplwant,andlhavefourdollars!Maybelcanbuyit!"Christopherexclaimedandranoffexcitedly.Ionlyhalfheardhim.Itookarightturnand,tomywide-eyeddelight,foundmyselfinthemidstoftheBarbieWorld.“克里斯汀!我要去找乐高积木区!我想要一艘新的海盗船，我有4美元!也许我能买下来!克里斯托弗大叫着，兴奋地跑开了。我只听了一半。我右转了一圈，发现自己置身于芭比娃娃世界之中，我的眼睛睁得大大的。

IwasstudyingaBarbieanddoingsomesimplemathinmyheadwhensuddenlyanearthshakingclapofthunderroaredfromthestormoutside.Ijumpedatthenoise,droppingthedolltothefloor.Thelightsflickeredonceanddied,coveringeverythinginablanketofblackness.Thundercontinuedtoshaketheskyandlightningilluminatedthestoreforseconds，castingfrighteningshadowsonmymind.我正在研究芭比娃娃，在脑子里做一些简单的数学运算，突然，外面的暴风雨里响起了一声惊雷。听到声音，我吓了一跳，把娃娃摔在地上。灯光闪烁了一下就熄灭了，一切都笼罩在一片黑暗之中。雷声继续震动着天空，闪电照亮了商店几秒钟，在我的脑海里投下了可怕的阴影。

参考范文：

“Ohno,”Ithought,“Where'sChristopher?"Scaredandfrozenonthespot,Ifelttheneedtosee,hugmybrotherandmakesurehewasallright.Mystomachtwisted.Iranupanddowntheaislesinthedark,panicfillingmysmallchestandmakingitdifficulttobreathe.Iknockedintodisplaysofcandiesandtrippedovertoys,whilecallingmybrother'snamelikecrazy.AnxiousasIwas,Icouldnotfindhim.Tearsoffrustrationandfeartrickleddownmyface,butIcontinuedtorun.“哦，不，”我想,“克里斯托弗在哪里?”我吓坏了，僵在那里，我觉得有必要去看看，去拥抱我的弟弟,并且确保他没事.我的胃扭曲（心情很紧张）。我在黑暗中在过道里跑来跑去，惊恐填满了我小小的胸膛，使我呼吸困难。当我疯狂地叫着我弟弟的名字时，我撞到了陈列的糖果，被玩具绊倒了。尽管我很焦急，但还是找不到他。沮丧和恐惧的泪水顺着我的脸流下来，但我还是继续跑着。"Christine，I’mhere."Excitementtookmybreathaway--thereintheLegoaisleIfoundChristopher.Hewasstandingalone,perfectlystill,nexttothepirateshipset.Ibegantocryinrelief,throwingmyarmsaroundhimandhuggedhimtightly.Hehuggedmeback,saying，"IknewifIwaitedhere,Christine，youwouldbeabletofindme."Then,Itookhishandinmineandwewenttolookforourmother,whomustbedesperatelysearchingthestoreforus.“克里斯汀,我在这里。”兴奋得我喘不过气来—在乐高过道处，我找到了克里斯托弗。他独自站在海盗船旁边，一动也不动。我如释重负地哭了起来，伸出双臂紧紧地抱住他。他也拥抱了我，说:“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你会找到我的。”然后，我拉着他的手，我们一起去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里找我们。

“Ohno,”Ithought,“Where'sChristopher?"Scaredandfrozenonthespot,Ifelttheneedtosee,hugmybrotherandmakesurehewasallright.spotn.地点，场所v.看见，注意到frozenadj.冻结的scaredadj.惊恐的，恐惧的“哦，不，”我想,“克里斯托弗在哪里?”我吓坏了，僵在那里，我觉得有必要去看看，去拥抱我的弟弟,并且确保他没事.Mystomachtwisted.Iranupanddowntheaislesinthedark,panicfillingmysmallchestandmakingitdifficulttobreathe.

twist/twɪst/v.歪曲;旋转aisle/aɪl/n.走廊，过道我的胃扭曲（心情很紧张）我在黑暗中在过道里跑来跑去，惊恐填满了我小小的胸膛，使我呼吸困难。

Iknockedintodisplaysofcandiesandtrippedovertoys,whilecallingmybrother'snamelikecrazy.displayv./n.展示，陈列tripvi.绊倒，跌倒n.旅行当我疯狂地叫着我弟弟的名字时，我撞到了陈列的糖果，被玩具绊倒了。AnxiousasIwas,Icouldnotfindhim.Tearsoffrustrationandfeartrickleddownmyface,butIcontinuedtorun.as虽然,尽管（引导让步状语从句倒装）adj.+as+主语+谓语frustrationn.沮丧；挫败trickle/ˈtrɪkl/vi.细细地流vt.使...淌尽管我很焦急，但还是找不到他。沮丧和恐惧的泪水顺着我的脸流下来，但我还是继续跑着。"Christine，I’mhere."Excitementtookmybreathaway--thereintheLegoaisleIfoundChristopher.Hewasstandingalone,perfectlystill,nexttothepirateshipset.pirat