树作文之英语作文关于对图书馆的建议信

英语作文关于对图书馆的建议信【篇一：作文模版之建议信与图书馆】见纸……。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。充分利用考前十分钟写的模板连接词（如何语意连贯？）原因becausesinceasduetohisdoctorsdegreeinthat所以/因此sotherefore并列andaswellasoreitherorneithernornotonly…but递进alsotoomoremoreoveraswellafterallbesides让步asoncethoughalthougheventhoughwhilewhendespiteinspitenevertheless转折buthoweverwhilestillonthecontrary时序firstofallsecondlythenwhat’smoremoreoverinaddition(另外，此外)强调especially总结personally就我而言tosumup总之。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。大体四级作文用词中心细节aletterofsuggestionwritealettertothepresidentofyourcollegeoruniversityabouttheproblemsinthelibrary.1.图书馆存在很多问题，如藏书偏旧，数目较少，灯光昏暗等2.提出可行的建议3.期待图书馆出现新面貌正文：onmonday,march11,2013dearpresident,mynameissimonwhoisafreshmanintheshanghaimaritimeuniversity(考试时候不能写学校的哟～).libraryisthethirdhometothemostofthestudentsnexttotheclassroomsanddormitories.therearemanybenefitsofreadingregularlyinthelibrary.weacquireskillsandinspiration,increasecreativityaswellasmotivationhere.therefore,itisimportantforustohaveagoodlibrary.however,someproblemsemergeintheprocessofusingourlibrary.onbehalfofthestudents,i’dliketoexpressourviews:firstofall,openinghoursaredifferentfromourstudytime,whichhasbroughtmuchinconveniencetous.thelibraryisclosedtooearly.sowhenwehavesparetimeafterclass,itisoftennotaccessible(我们有时间的时候图书馆不开稍微把逻辑关系再表达清楚一点更好).therefore,mysuggestionistoextendtheopeningtime.secondly,therearetoomanyoutdatedbooks.specially,theperiodicalsinthelibrarycantkeepupwithtrends.thirdly,thelibraryisinapoorstudycondition,forexamplethelightingisdingy.worsestill,somethingisalwayswrongwithcomputers,whichexhaustsourpatience.forthereasonsmentionedabove,therearesomesuggestionsforreference.isuggesttheheadsetisprovided.what’smore,itisnecessarytopurchasemorebooksandacademicjournals,forinstance,magazines,periodicalsandliteraturebooks.lastbutnotleast,wehopethatbetterlightingsystemwillbeprovided,andthelibrarysystemwillbeupdatedandkeyboardswillbereplaced.ibelievethatourlibrarywillhaveanewlookinthenearfuture.sincerelyyourssimon整个文章写得很好，结构、用词、语法都很好，现在这个水平13分以上应该没什么问题。如果想进一步完善，包括之后要考雅思的话，有几个小问题再注意一下：1。动词使用，什么时候是谓语，什么时候用ing,单复数等。2。名词的单复数细节再注意）3。文章段落太多啦，问题可以合并，建议可以合并。3－4段是最清晰的结构了。希望你再接再厉争取拿个高分喔！指导老师:郭蕾刘如虹recently,asurveyhasbeenconductedamongthestudentsingradethreeaboutwhattheywilldoduringthethreemonthholidayafterthecollegeentranceexam.7.whynotdo/whydon’tyoudo…?为什么不…3.表示喜欢和感兴趣1.like/lovedoing2.enjoydoing3.befondofdoing喜欢做…4.bekeenonn/doing喜欢做…5.prefertodoaratherthandob宁愿做a也不愿做b6.beinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestinn/doing4.努力做…1.trytodo努力做…2.strivetodo努力做…3.tryone’sbesttodo=doone’sbesttodo竭尽全力做…4.makeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodo尽力做…5.dowhatsbcan(do)todo尽力做…6.sparenoefforttodo不遗余力的做…7.dowhat/everythingsb.cantodo尽某人全力做…5.打算做…/计划做…1.intend/plantodo打算做…2.begoingtodo打算做…3.decidetodo决定做…4.determinetodo决定做…5.bedeterminedtodo决定做…6.makeupone’smindtodo下定决心做…6.表示想/希望1.wanttodo=wouldliketodo想做…2.hopetodo希望做…3.expecttodo期待着做…4.wishtodo希望做…5.considerdoing考虑做…7.只加doing作宾语的动词1.finish完成practice练习suggest建议consider考虑mind介意enjoy喜欢+doing2.固定句型lookforwardtodoing盼望做…keepondoing坚持做…dreamofdoing梦想做…can’thelpdoing情不自禁地做…keep/stop/preventsb.fromdoing阻止某人做…bebusy(in)doingbebusywith+名词忙于做…spendtime/money(in)doingspendtime/moneyon+名词花费时间做…havefun/haveagoodtime/enjoyoneselfdoing玩得开心havetrouble/haveproblem/havedifficulty(in)doing或with+名词做…有困难8.学习用定语从句先行词+关系词+定语从句高中英语满分书信作文模板——建议信dear______,①youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout______,andiwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.②inmyopinion,_____（建议的内容）.③iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.iwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.yourssincerely,liming高中英语满分书信作文模板——请求信dear______,①iamwritingaskto_____（请求的内容）.②couldyouplease___________-②wouldyoumind___________③iwonderifyoucould___________⑥thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests..⑧ilookforwardtoafavorablereply.yourssincerely,liming高中英语满分书信作文模板——询问信dear______,①iam______（自我介绍）.②iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding______（要询问的内容）.③firstofall,whatare______（第一个问题）?④secondly,whenwill______（第二个问题）?⑤thirdly,is______（第三个问题）?⑥iwouldalsoliketoinquire______（将最重要的问题单独成段）.⑦couldyoubesokindastosendmesomerelevan