专题29 读后续写语料积累之如何表达动眼背诵与测试（词-句-文）讲义高考英语读后续写高分宝典 解析版

《2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》专题29读后续写语料积累之如何动眼背诵与测试（词-句-文）讲义解析版背诵积累区：背诵迁移举一反三一、高频语块1.gazeat凝视2.stareat凝视3.gapeatsb目瞪口呆地看着…4.glareatsb怒视着……5.peek/peepatsb偷看……6.glance/glimpseatsb看了……一眼7.meetone’seyes接触某人的目光8.stareintoone’seyes凝视9.fix/focusone’seyeson盯着10.lower/dropone’seyes垂下眼睛11.raise/liftone’seyes抬起眼睛12.keepaneyeon注视13.looksb.straightintheeye直视某人的眼睛14.narrowone’seyes眯起眼睛15.turnone’seyesto转向16.shutone’seyes闭上眼睛17.squeezeone’seyesshut紧闭双眼18.catchaglimpseofsb看了……一眼19.peeroverone'sshoulder回头看20.castalookatsb朝……看了一眼21.castarapidglancearound迅速一瞥四周22.stareatsbupanddown上下打量某人23.exchangeaglance交换眼色24.squintone'seyes眯着眼睛25.stealaglanceat偷看一眼26.rollone'seyes翻了翻眼27.one'seyesscantheroom扫视房间28.catch/losesightof看见/看不见29.comeintoview映入眼帘30.atthesightof一看见31.eyesfallon目光落在32.glueone’seyesto紧盯着33.watch/observe/spot/notice看到二、佳句赏析1.We

lostsightof

theboatinthefog.

由于大雾我们看不见那条船了。2.

She

staredat

himindisbelief,shakingherhead.

她摇着头，狐疑地看着他。3.Abigleafytree

cameintoview

atsomedistance.

远处有一棵枝繁叶茂的大树映入眼帘。4.She

turnedhereyestome

whenItappedhershoulder.

我轻拍她的肩膀时，她把目光转向我。5.Whenhefinished,he

raised/liftedhiseyes

and

lookedout

thewindow.

说罢他抬起眼睛并望向窗外。6.I

glancedback

overmyshouldertomakesurethatnoonewasfollowingme.

我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。7.Her

eyesfellonthephotos

ofherandmeatmyfourthbirthdayparty.她的目光落在我和她四岁生日聚会上的照片上。8.Myfather

lookedatmestraightintheeye

andholdfasttomyhands.

我父亲直勾勾地盯着我的眼睛并且牢牢抓住我的双手。9.Thestudentwhohadjustbeenreprimandedbytheteacher

glaredat

histeacher.

那位刚刚被老师训斥的学生狠狠瞪着他的老师。10.Whenthestudentssteppedoffthebus,James’s

eyeswidened

insurprise.当学生们走下公共汽车时，詹姆斯惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。11.Weallgatherinfrontofthetelevision,hopingto

catchaglance/glimpseof

hisface.

我们都聚在电视机前，希望能看一眼他的脸。12.

Withhereyesgluedtothephone,shedidn’trealizeherteacherstoodinfrontofher.她一直盯着手机她没有意识到老师正站在他面前。13.Thenhejumpedup,

eyestwinkling

asherrantofetchsomeofhisprizedMatchboxcars.然后他跳起来，他眼睛闪闪发光着跑去拿他那珍贵的火柴盒车。14.Jalil’s

eyesliftedslowly,

met

Mariam’s,

paused

foramoment,then

dropped.

贾利勒慢慢抬起眼睛，看见了玛利亚的眼睛，停了一会儿，然后垂了下来。15.Swallowinghard,I

staredintoMeghan’seyes

foralongmoment,wonderinghowIcouldcopewithit.

我使劲吞咽，盯着梅根的眼睛看了很久，在想如何处理。测试巩固区：分级测试步步为赢一、高频语块汉译英1.凝视2.凝视3.目瞪口呆地看着…4.怒视着……5.偷看……6.看了……一眼7.接触某人的目光8.凝视9.盯着10.垂下眼睛11.抬起眼睛12.注视13.直视某人的眼睛14.眯起眼睛15.转向16.闭上眼睛17.紧闭双眼18.看了……一眼19.回头看20.朝……看了一眼21.迅速一瞥四周22.上下打量某人23.交换眼色24.偷看一眼25.紧盯着26.翻了翻眼27.扫视房间28.看见/看不见29.映入眼帘30.一看见【参考答案】1.gazeat凝视2.stareat凝视3.gapeatsb目瞪口呆地看着…4.glareatsb怒视着……5.peek/peepatsb偷看……6.glance/glimpseatsb看了……一眼7.meetone’seyes接触某人的目光8.stareintoone’seyes凝视9.fix/focusone’seyeson盯着10.lower/dropone’seyes垂下眼睛11.raise/liftone’seyes抬起眼睛12.keepaneyeon注视13.looksb.straightintheeye直视某人的眼睛14.narrowone’seyes眯起眼睛15.turnone’seyesto转向16.shutone’seyes闭上眼睛17.squeezeone’seyesshut紧闭双眼18.catchaglimpseofsb看了……一眼19.peeroverone'sshoulder回头看20.castalookatsb朝……看了一眼21.castarapidglancearound迅速一瞥四周22.stareatsbupanddown上下打量某人23.exchangeaglance交换眼色24.stealaglanceat偷看一眼25.glueone’seyesto紧盯着26.rollone'seyes翻了翻眼27.one'seyesscantheroom扫视房间28.catch/losesightof看见/看不见29.comeintoview映入眼帘30.atthesightof一看见二、佳句赏析汉译英1.

由于大雾我们看不见那条船了。____________________________________________________________________________2.

她摇着头，狐疑地看着他。____________________________________________________________________________3.远处有一棵枝繁叶茂的大树映入眼帘。____________________________________________________________________________4.我轻拍她的肩膀时，她把目光转向我。____________________________________________________________________________5.说罢他抬起眼睛并望向窗外。____________________________________________________________________________6.我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。____________________________________________________________________________7.她的目光落在我和她四岁生日聚会上的照片上。____________________________________________________________________________8.我父亲直勾勾地盯着我的眼睛并且牢牢抓住我的双手。____________________________________________________________________________9.Thestudentwhohadjustbeenreprimandedbytheteacher

glaredat

histeacher.

那位刚刚被老师训斥的学生狠狠瞪着他的老师。____________________________________________________________________________10.当学生们走下公共汽车时，詹姆斯惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。____________________________________________________________________________11.我们都聚在电视机前，希望能看一眼他的脸。____________________________________________________________________________12.

她一直盯着手机她没有意识到老师正站在他面前。____________________________________________________________________________13.然后他跳起来，他眼睛闪闪发光着跑去拿他那珍贵的火柴盒车。____________________________________________________________________________14.贾利勒慢慢抬起眼睛，看见了玛利亚的眼睛，停了一会儿，然后垂了下来。____________________________________________________________________________15.我使劲吞咽，盯着梅根的眼睛看了很久，在想如何处理。____________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】1.We

lostsightof

theboatinthefog.

由于大雾我们看不见那条船了。2.

She

staredat

himindisbelief,shakingherhead.

她摇着头，狐疑地看着他。3.Abigleafytree

cameintoview

atsomedistance.

远处有一棵枝繁叶茂的大树映入眼帘。4.She

turnedhereyestome

whenItappedhershoulder.

我轻拍她的肩膀时，她把目光转向我。5.Whenhefinished,he

raised/liftedhiseyes

and

lookedout

thewindow.

说罢他抬起眼睛并望向窗外。6.I

glancedback

overmyshouldertomakesurethatnoonewasfollowingme.

我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。7.Her

eyesfellonthephotos

ofherandmeatmyfourthbirthdayparty.她的目光落在我和她四岁生日聚会上的照片上。8.Myfather

lookedatmestraightintheeye

andholdfasttomyhands.

我父亲直勾勾地盯着我的眼睛并且牢牢抓住我的双手。9.Thestudentwhohadjustbeenreprimandedbytheteacher

glaredat

histeacher.

那位刚刚被老师训斥的学生狠狠瞪着他的老师。10.Whenthestudentssteppedoffthebus,James’s

eyeswidened

insurprise.当学生们走下公共汽车时，詹姆斯惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。11.Weallgatherinfrontofthetelevision,hopingto

catchaglance/glimpseof

hisface.

我们都聚在电视机前，希望能看一眼他的脸。12.

Withhereyesgluedtothephone,shedidn’trealizeherteacherstoodinfrontofher.她一直盯着手机她没有意识到老师正站在他面前。13.Thenhejumpedup,

eyestwinkling

asherrantofetchsomeofhisprizedMatchboxcars.然后他跳起来，他眼睛闪闪发光着跑去拿他那珍贵的火柴盒车。14.Jalil’s

eyesliftedslowly,

met

Mariam’s,

paused

foramoment,then

dropped.

贾利勒慢慢抬起眼睛，看见了玛利亚的眼睛，停了一会儿，然后垂了下来。15.Swallowinghard,I

staredintoMeghan’seyes

foralongmoment,wonderinghowIcouldcopewithit.

我使劲吞咽，盯着梅根的眼睛看了很久，在想如何处理。三、动作表达片段运用运用表格中的高级词块，把下面的语篇补充完整。Anne’sfather

1.

(眯起眼睛),wonderingwhathadhappened.Then,he

2.

(转向)thedoorwhenheheardthehandleturning.EyeingAnnecomein,herfather3.

(上下打量),confused.Thoughherblueeyeswerefulloftears,she4.

(注视)herfather’sexpression.Anne

5.

(直视着父亲)

andtoldhimthetruth.Whenlearningthetruth,he

6.

(紧闭双眼)andbithislip,withtearsrunning/rolling/streamingdownhischeeks.【参考答案】Anne’sfather1

narrowedhiseyes,wonderingwhathadhappened.Then,he2

turnedhiseyesto

thedoorwhenheheardthehandleturning.EyeingAnnecomein,herfather3

eyedherupanddown,confused.Thoughherblueeyeswerefulloftears,she4

keptaneyeon

herfather’sexpression.Anne5

lookedatherfatherstraightintheeye

andtoldhimthetruth.Whenlearningthetruth,he6

squeezedhiseyesshut

andbithislip,withtearsrunning/rolling/streamingdownhischeeks.四、动作表达语篇运用1.（2023上·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Suewas83yearsoldandlivedbytheoceanshoreinabigbeautifulhouse.ShewishedhersonStevewouldvisither,evenifforonlyaday.Ofcourse,theyoungmanhadafamilyofhisownnow,adarlinglittledaughterEva,andabusinesstotakecareof.StevegotonvideocallswithSueeveryotherday.However,Suethoughtofhersonandgranddaughter,wishingshewaswiththem.Oneday,Sueheardsoundsfromtheneighboringhouse.Suelookedthroughthewindowandwasdelightedtoseethatshehadnewneighbors.Onemorning,whenSuewokeupandwalkedalongtheshore,sheheardthesoundsofwaterbeingsplashedandthesoundofchildrenlaughingwildly.Shefollowedthesoundandwasconcernedonfindingthetwinsfromtheneighboringhousestanding,kneedeepinoceanwater.Somethingdidn’tfeelright.“Whywouldanyoneleavetheirkidsunattendedontheshore?”Suethought.Shegrabbedthekids’handsandwalkedthemtotheirhome.AsSueopenedthedoor,shefoundtheyoungmotherlyingunconsciousonthekitchenfloor.Suedidn’twasteasecondincalling911.Thefirstrespondersmanagedtorevive(恢复)herconsciousnessonthespot.“Myboys!Ralph!Ray!”thewomancriedouttoherkidsastheambulancetookheraway.Suesaid,“Don’tworry.Everythingwillbealright.I’lltakecareofyoursweetboys.”Shekeptherpromiseandlookedafterthekidslikeagrandmother.ShetookRalphandRayinandletthemsleepinthebedroomthatwasspeciallymadeforhergranddaughterEva.Itwasduringthesedaysthatsheknewthattheboys’fatherdiedofillness.Sueknewthattheneighbor,Selina,hadbeentryingtomakeendsmeetbysellingsweatersandsocksthatsheknit.LookingatSelina’schildreneatanddrinkwithsuchjoy,sherealizedhowmuchshelongedtoseeherlittleEva.BythetimeSelinacamehomefromthehospital,thekidshadalreadystartedcallingSue“Grandma”.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Selinawasverymovedandstruggledtofindthewordstothankherelderlyneighbor.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:OneThanksgiving,whenSueandtheSelinasweretalking,Sue’sdoorwasknocked.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Selinawasverymovedandstruggledtofindthewordstothankherelderlyneighbor.Suehuggedherandsaidtherewasnoneedtofeelindebtedtoher.“Yourkidshaveendedupmakingroominmyoldheart.Thishouseisyoursasmuchasitismine,darling,”Suesaid.ThatwasthebeginningofalifelongfriendshipbetweenSueandSelina.SuelookedafterthekidswhileSelinawenttoanewjobshehadfound,andSelinatookcareofSuelikeherownmother.OneThanksgiving,whenSueandtheSelinaweretalking,Sue’sdoorwasknocked.ItwashersonSteveandhergranddaughter,Eva!Stevethoughtitwouldcomeasasurpriseforhismother.However,Stevewasspeechless,lookingattheamountofjoyandlovearoundthehouse.Seeinghismotherhappierthanshehadbeeninyears,Stevefeltalittleguiltyfornotgivingherthishappinesssooner.Stevemadehimselfapromise:Tobecomeanothersourceoflove,belonging,andhappinessinhisbelovedmother’ssunsetyears.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了83的Sue一直渴望儿子和孙女来看完她，但是儿子很忙不能来。有一天，Sue家旁边搬来了一个新邻居，结果邻居的女主人Selina意外晕倒了，Sue发现后救了这位女士，并帮助她照顾她的儿子的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“塞琳娜非常感动，绞尽脑汁想找个词来感谢她年迈的邻居”可知，第一段可描写Sue和邻居成为了朋友并继续帮助她照顾孩子。②由第二段首句内容“一个感恩节，苏和塞琳娜一家正在聊天，有人敲了苏的门”可知，第二段可描写Sue的儿子来看望母亲后感到很内疚，承诺经常来看望母亲。2.续写线索：感谢——成为朋友——继续照顾孩子——儿子看望——内疚——承诺3.词汇激活行为类①拥抱她：hugher/takeherinarms②照顾：takecareof/lookafter③做出承诺：makeapromise/makeacommitment情绪类①感动：bemoved/gettouched②哑口无言：bespeechless/becomesilent【点睛】【高分句型1】SuelookedafterthekidswhileSelinawenttoanewjobshehadfound,andSelinatookcareofSuelikeherownmother.（运用while引导时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Yourkidshaveendedupmakingroominmyoldheart.（运用了动名词作宾语）2（2023上·江苏苏州·高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。OneSaturdaymorning,Jeremywokeuptoaquiethouse.Usually,Momwasawakemakingbreakfastandcleaningthekitchen,butnottoday.Atthesoundofhismomcoughing,Jeremyknockedonherbedroomdoorandaskedwithgreatconcernifshewasokay.“Honey,”Momsaidweakly.“Ihaveaterriblecold.Youcanhavecereal(燕麦)forbreakfastandwatchcartoons.I’mgoingtostayinbed.”Jeremypouredsomecerealintoabowlandatethepiecesdry.Mommustfeelverybadifshewasstayinginbedallday.HowcouldJeremyhelp?First,hewipedupthecrumbsofcerealheleftonthekitchencounter.Healsoputawaythecerealboxneatly,sothekitchenlookedjustasitdidwhenhewokeup.Butwhatelsecouldhedo?Jeremythought.Saturdaywasthedaywhenmomdidsomewashing.Jeremylovedtowatchtheclothesspinninginthemachine.Thatshouldbefun!Herantohisroomtogettheclothesbasket,insidewhichtherewashismother’sfavoritewhitedress,amongotherclothesandapairofredsocks.Jeremyopenedthedoortothewasherandputtheclothesinside.HehadwatchedMomdothewashinglotsoftimes,soheknewwheretofindthewashingpowderandhowtopouritintothemachine.Finally,heclosedthedoorandpressedthebigbuttonthatsaid“START.”Jeremylookedthroughtheroundglasswindow.Waterwaspouringin,andthemachinewasstartingtospin,makinghisclothingtumblearound.Thatwaseasy!Jeremywatchedcartoonsuntilheheardthewashingmachinebeep.Thatmeantthewashingwasdone.Jeremyopenedthedoortotakeoutthedampclothes.Hetookoutafewatatimeandmovedthemintothedryer.Everythingseemedclean,andJeremyfeltproud.Thenhepulledoutapinkdress.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressintheclothesbasket.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Holdingthepinkdress,Jeremydraggedhimselftowardshismom’sbedroom.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.Overwhelmedbyasurgeofconfusion,Jeremypulledoutafewmoreclothesandcheckedovereachitem.Ashiseyesrestedontheredsocks,Jeremywassurethathehadfoundtheanswer.Hisheartmissedabeat—hehadspoiledhismom’sfavoritedressbynotwashingthemseparately!PanicseizedJeremy,leavinghiminasweat.However,heknewhehadtofacethemusic.Hetookadeepbreathtocomposehimself.Holdingthepinkdress,Jeremydraggedhimselftowardshismom’sbedroom.HardlyhadheapproachedthebedsidewhenMomnoticedherson’sunease.Shesatup,askinghimwhatwaswrong.Jeremyheldoutthepinkdress,stumblingthroughanexplanation.“Iknowyoumeanttohelp,”MombeamedatJeremy.Thensheheldthedressupbeforeherandsaidinanapprovingtone,“Ithinkitlooksnice.”Atthis,Jeremygrinnedfromeartoear,givinghismomawarmhug.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jeremy看到妈妈身体不舒服想为妈妈洗衣服，却忘了将衣服分开写，导致妈妈最爱的白裙子变成了粉色。妈妈看到粉裙子后安慰了Jeremy。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“但他记起洗衣篮里没有粉红色的裙子。”以及第二段首句内容“Jeremy拿着粉红色的裙子，拖着沉重的步子走向妈妈的卧室。”可知，第一段可描写Jeremy明白了红袜子掉色，将白裙子变成了粉色裙子。②由第二段首句内容“Jeremy拿着粉红色的裙子，拖着沉重的步子走向妈妈的卧室。”可知，第二段可描写Jeremy向妈妈承认自己的错误，得到了妈妈的安慰。2.续写线索：Jeremy一早醒来，发现屋子里很安静——Jeremy来到妈妈的卧室，才发现妈妈生病了——Jeremy自己吃了早餐，并收拾了厨房——这时，Jeremy想起可以帮助妈妈洗衣服——Jeremy把所有的衣服一股脑儿地扔进了洗衣机——洗好衣服后，Jeremy发现妈妈的白色裙子被红袜子染成了粉色——Jeremy非常内疚，主动向妈妈承认了错误——妈妈安慰了Jeremy3.词汇激活行为类①抓住：catch/seize②打算：meanttodo/intendtodo③微笑：beam/smile情绪类①困惑：confusion/bewilderment②不安：unease/restlessness【点睛】【高分句型1】Ashiseyesrestedontheredsocks,Jeremywassurethathehadfoundtheanswer.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】HardlyhadheapproachedthebedsidewhenMomnoticedherson’sunease.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）3（2023上·山东济宁·高二校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasapleasantTuesdayafternoon.78-year-oldRosewasbrimmingwithexcitementassheenteredthenursinghomewithherfavoritetulips(郁金香),herlipsendlesslycallingouttojustonename—Emily!“Emily!Whereareyou?Igotflowers...”Rosespokealoudwhenshedidn’tseeherbestfriend,79-year-oldEmily,waitingforherontheusualspot,awoodenbenchonthemaingate.WheneverRosereturnedfromthelocalhospitalaftergettingherbloodtestsdone,Emilywouldruntowardherwithfreshhand-pickedflowers.Butthatafternoon,Emilywasnotthere,andthebenchwasempty.Emilywasnowheretobefoundinanyofherfavoritespots,whichunsettledRoseevenmore.JustthenadoctorsaidtoRose,“Emily’sfamilycamehoursagowhileyouwereatthehospital...TheytookEmilywiththem.She’snotgoingtocomeback.”ThegroundseemedtoshakebeneathRose’sfeetwhensheheardthat.Rosewentbacktoherroom.Everystepstartedfeelingheavy,andeverycornerremindedherofherbestfriendandtheirlaughter.NothingbutlonelinessandsilencesurroundedRosefromallsides,andshefeltherheartcrack.ThescentoffreshlypickedflowersEmilyhadlastleftinthevaselingered(继续存留)inthestillair.AndbesidethevasewasanoldrecorderthatendlesslyplayedJusttheTwoofUs,theirfavoritemusictheylistenedtoeveryday.Whenapproachingthetable,shenoticedanotewithamessageinmessyhandwriting,“DearRose,pleasewritetomeatthisaddress:MapleRidgeAve,Springfield,VA,7...”“Ohdear...Therestofheraddressisbecomingblurred(模糊不清的).”Rosegrewunsettled.Inspiteofthat,RoseknewshecouldnotjustletEmilygolikethat.Afteradeepthought,shedecidedtoreunitewithherbestfriend.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Packingtherecorderinherluggage,Rosegotonthebustostartherjourneytotheunfamiliarcity,Spr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