高考英语复习读后续写练习：建立网站来呼吁更多的人加入捡垃圾的行列

高考英语读后续写语篇练习建立网站来呼吁更多的人加入到捡垃圾的行列1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Onemorningonmywaytoschool,noticedanelderlywomandressedinayellowvest(马甲)carryingagarbagebagandoneofthoserubbishclaws(爪形器具)."What'sthatladydoing?"Iaskedmum."VestLady.Shejustpicksuprubbisharoundhereforfun,"mumsaid."Whywouldsomeonethinkpickinguprubbishlookinglikeaconstructionworkerisfun?"Ipuzzled.ForseveralyearsI'dwitnessthismysteriousVestLady—rainorshine—onmywaytoschool.Ihadthoughtshewascrazyforpickinguprubbish.EventuallyIsmiledandwavedathereachtimeIsawher.Later,Imovedtohighschool.ThetimeIsawrubbishhereandthereIfeltreallyannoyed.ThenI'dthink,"Whyisn'tanyonepickingupthisrubbish?PeoplearesoinconsiderateI"However,shortlyafter,Irealizedpickinguptherubbishwasnotsomeoneease'sproblem.4续写原文NowIcouldn'twalkpastlitterwithoutfeelingguilty.Ivolunteeredtocleanuprubbisharoundourschool.Strangeasitmightsound,pickinguplitterwaskindofathrillforme!Infact,Iwassodeterminedthatformy17thbirthdayIboughtmyselfarubbishclaw,reusableglovesandareflectivesafetyyellowvestwithmyownnameonit.Duringmyfirstattemptinmystylishequipment,metwithunfriendlylooksfromothersasifIwereacriminaldoingcommunityservice.Oneday,Ihadanepiphany(顿悟):"I'mactingjustlikeVestLady!“Buttherewastoomuchrubbisharound,cigaretteendslitteredabout,cansrollingonthestreet,piecesofpaperhiddeninthegrassandplastic.alonewastooweakJHowwouldIgetmorevolunteersinvolvedinrubbishremoval?Asmartideaflashedintomymind.5段首句Para1:SoonIcreatedmywebsitegopickingupcom.

Para2：Moreandmorepeopleonvestswiththeirownnames.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者受到“马甲女士”的影响自己也开始穿着反光黄色安全背心捡垃圾，但是作者很快意识到一个人的力量是不够的，于是作者想到创建网站来号召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行动中来，获得了巨大的成功。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：SoonIcreatedmywebsitegopickingupcom.由第一段首句内容“很快我就创建了自己的网站go.pickingup.com。”可知，第一段可描写作者如何通过网站来号召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行动中来。10续写思路分析Para2：Moreandmorepeopleonvestswiththeirownnames.由第二段首句内容“越来越多的人穿上印有自己名字的背心。”可知，第二段可描写很多志愿者加入清除垃圾的行动，环境得到了很大改善，人们的环保意识也得到了提高。11续写思路分析续写线索发起运动——号召——成为热门——改善——成功——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①描述：describe/depict②阐释：illustrate/clarify③影响：influence/affect情绪类①惊讶：surprisingly/amazingly②高兴：delight/please13续写素材[高分句型1]Ipostedpicturesofrubbishlitteredaboutonthewebsite,whichcouldnotonlyillustratetheseveresituationbutalsoshowthatalargenumberofvolunteerswereingreatneed.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和“notonly...butalso...”固定句式)[高分句型2]Whatdelightedmemostwasthatpeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionwasimproved.(运用了that引导的表语从句和what引导的主语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现SoonIcreatedmywebsitego.pickingup.com.OnthewebsiteIlaunchedarubbishremovalcampaign.Idescribedmypurpose－callingonvolunteerstopickuprubbish.Ipostedpicturesofrubbishlitteredaboutonthewebsite,whichcouldnotonlyillustratetheseveresituationbutalsoshowthatalargenumberofvolunteerswereingreatneed.Besides,IsharedthestoryofVestLadywhoinfluencedmesomuch.Surprisingly,mywebsitegraduallybecameabighitontheinternet.16范文呈现Moreandmorepeopleputonvestswiththeirownnames.Volunteerscouldbeseenpickinguprubbishintheirsparetime.Theyellowvestsmadebeautifulsceneryintheparkoronthestreet.Withourjointefforts,theenvironmentbecamebetterandbetter.Whatdelightedmemostwasthatpeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionwasimproved.Therubbishremovalcampaignwasabigsuccess.ThankstoVestLadywhorootedthesenseofenvironmentalprotectioninmymind,morepeoplebecameVestLady.17范文译文不久，我创建了自己的网站go。捡起来。我在网站上发起了一场垃圾清理运动。我描述了我的目的——号召志愿者捡垃圾。我在网站上发布了乱扔垃圾的照片，这不仅说明了严峻的形势，也表明大量志愿者急需帮助。此外，我还分享了《背心女士》的故事，她对我影响很大。令人惊讶的是，我的网站逐渐在互联网上大受欢迎。越来越多的人穿上印有自己名字的背心。可以看到志愿者在业余时间捡垃圾。黄色背心在公园或