阅读与写作学案- 高三英语上学期一轮复习写作专项

阅读与写作学案Fallinginlovewithbiking爱上骑自行车1Thefirsttimemyparentswatchedmecompeteinamountainbikerace,theytriedtogetmetoquit.WhileIwasridingdownahill,Ihitahugerock,flewthroughtheairandcrashedtotheground.However,thiskindofthinghappensallthetime.IjustgotupasfastasIcould,gotbackonmybikeandkeptgoing.AndIwonthatrace,despitetakingquiteaspill!2Myearliestbikememoriesareofmyfathertakingmeoutforridesinthechildseatonthebackofhisten-speed.Acoupleyearslater,Igotmyfirstbike.Butmyparentswouldn'tletmeridemorethanafewblocksfromthehouseuntilIwasten.Themorningofmytenthbirthday,Igotmyeldersistertotakemeonalongride.Weendedupatmyaunt'shouse.AlthoughIwastotallyexhaustedandeverymuscleinmybodyached,Ididn'tcare.Iknewthatthiswasonlythebeginning,andallIcouldthinkaboutwaswheremynexttripwouldtakeme.3WhenIwasintheeighthgrade,ourgymteacher,MrRaines,sentoutaflyeraboutstartingamountainbikeclub.Irantohisofficebetweenclassesandsignedup.Overthenextfewmonths,thetenofuswhojoinedtheclubworkedonourbikingskills.Besidestakingusoutriding,MrRainestaughtusaboutbikesafety,andshowedushowtoproperlymaintainandrepairourbikes.Healsohelpedusformamountainbiketeam.Atfirst,wecompetedagainsteachother.Later,wewentupagainstotherschools.Wecontinuedtotrainandcompeteallthroughhighschool.4Bikinghasbeenthemajorfocusofmylife.Thoseearlytripsonthebackofmyfather'sbikegotmestarted.Thelongrideswithmysisterincreasedmyenthusiasm.Then,thetrainingandcompetitionsinthebikeclubguaranteedthatIwouldturnintoalifelongbikefan.Ithinkeveryoneshouldhaveahobbylikethis——somethingthatisgoodforthemandmakesthemhappy.ActivityAReadingforunderstanding语篇解码（一）主题归纳Whatisthetextmainlyabout?（二）结构分析与信息梳理Fillintheblanksaccordingtothetextwithonlyonewordforeachblank.（续表）ActivityBReadingforwriting一、词块积累competeinamountainbikerace参加山地自行车比赛crashtotheground摔倒在地allthetime一直；始终endup结束startamountainbikeclub成立一个山地自行车俱乐部signup报名howtoproperlymaintainandrepairone'sbike如何正确保养和维修某人的自行车formamountainbiketeam组建一支山地自行车队competeagainsteachother相互竞争goupagainstotherschools与其他学校竞争increaseone'senthusiasm增加某人的热情turnintoalifelongbikefan成为一个终生的自行车迷begoodfor有益于二、典句赏析1.让步状语从句AlthoughIwastotallyexhaustedandeverymuscleinmybodyached,Ididn'tcare.尽管我筋疲力尽，浑身肌肉酸痛，但我不在乎。【点石成金】本句中，Although引导让步状语从句，强调主句内容。在该句型中，主句前不可以加but，这是一个易错点，写作中使用该句型时应多加注意。【例句仿写】尽管我们彼此很少见面，但我们仍是好朋友。2.定语从句Ithinkeveryoneshouldhaveahobbylikethis——somethingthatisgoodforthemandmakesthemhappy.我认为每个人都应该有这样的爱好——使他们获益并让他们感到快乐的爱好。【点石成金】本句用了一个that引导的定语从句，用来说明人们应该拥有使他们获益并让他们感到快乐的爱好。由于先行词为不定代词something，所以关系代词只能用that而不能用which。【例句仿写】当你正承受着学习的压力时，你可以试着找一些能帮助你放松自己的东西。三、写作假定你是李华，山地自行车俱乐部最近组织了一场山地自行车比赛,作为自行车爱好者,你很想参加,可是父母担心这会影响你的学习并且担心你的安全,不同意你参加。请你写一封信劝说父母同意你去参加，内容包括：1.表达参加山地自行车比赛的愿望；2.阐述骑自行车的益处；3.恳请父母同意自己去参加比赛。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.至少需要使用一个本文中解析过的句式；4.注意段落内的逻辑关系。DearMomandDad,Yourssincerely,Yourbelovedson,LiHua写作导引本次的写作任务是写一封劝说信（persuasiveletter）。学生需要表达自己非常想去参加山地自行车比赛的愿望，客观分析和阐释参加山地自行车比赛的益处并恳请父母支持自己热爱骑行的爱好，同意自己去参加比赛，并且需要使用让步状语从句或定语从句。这些写作要点和要求与所给语篇的主题语境是紧密相关的。我们可以通过整合同一主题的阅读材料的内容和语言，梳理写作思路和积累素材。素材积累本文是基于同一主题的阅读和写作，我们可以通过学习、模仿并运用阅读中的语言表达，如词块和句型，积累写作的语言素材。（一）指出问题、表明写信目的1.Ifeelalittleupsettolearnthatyoudon'twantmetotakepartinthemountainbikerace.得知你们不想让我参加山地自行车比赛，我有点不开心。2.Knowingthatyoudon'tallowmetoparticipateinthecompetition,Iamwritingtoexpressmyownthoughts.得知你们不允许我参加比赛，我写信来表达我自己的想法。3.Iamwritingtopersuadeyoutoallowmetocompeteinthemountainbikerace.我写信是为了说服你们允许我参加山地自行车比赛。（二）阐述劝说的具体理由1.Thereisnodenyingthatgoodhobbiesmakelifemorecolorfulandenjoyable.不可否认，好的爱好使生活更加丰富多彩和快乐。2.Bikingasakindofexercisewillbeanidealopportunityformetokeepfit.骑自行车作为一种运动，对我来说将是保持健康的理想机会。3.Althoughcompetinginamountainbikeracemaybeabitdangerous,Iamnotscaredatall.虽然参加山地自行车比赛可能有点危险，但我一点也不害怕。4.ThemostimportantthingisthatIwilllearntoprotectmyself.最重要的事情是，我会学会保护自己。5.Inaddition,thereisnoneedtoworryaboutmysafetyatallasourcoachwillteachusaboutbikesafety,andproperprotectionandsafetymeasureswillbedonebeforeeachexercise.此外，你们完全不必担心我的安全，因为我们的教练会教我们关于自行车的安全知识，并且每次训练前都会做好适当的保护和安全措施。6.Asformystudy,IamsurethatIcankeepabalancebetweenstudyandtraining,whichwillbearrangedduringthetimeofafter-classphysicalactivitiesonceaweek.至于学习，我确信我能在学习和训练之间保持平衡。我们的训练每周一次，被安排在课外体育活动时间。（三）总结核心观点、表达期望1.Inaword,exerciseisasusefulandimportantasourstudy.总之，锻炼和学习一样有用且重要。2.Inconclusion,Iwouldbemorethanhappyifyoucouldtakemythoughtsintoconsideration.总之，如果你们能考虑我的想法，我将会非常高兴。3.Therefore,Ireallyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandallowmetotakepartintherace.因此，我非常希望你们能够站在我的立场上考虑，允许我参加比赛。写作框架本次的写作任务是写一封劝说信。根据任务中的要求，语篇结构可定为“引出问题+写作目的+阐述劝说的具体理由+总结并表达期望”。文章的框架如下：DearMomandDad,Ifeelalittleupsettolearnthat...ButIreallywanttogoforit.Thus,I'mwritingto...（引出问题+写作目的）Firstofall,althoughcompetinginamountainbikeracemaybeabitdangerous,...Inaddition,properprotectionandsafetymeasureswillbedone...Furthermore,Iamsure...（阐述劝说的具体理由）Inshort,Ireallyhopethat...（总结并表达期望）Yourssincerely,Yourbelovedson,LiHua兴趣与爱好ActivityAReadingforunderstanding语篇解码（一）主题归纳Itmainlytellsusthereasonswhytheauthorlovesbiking.（二）结构分析与信息梳理1.crashed2.exhausted3.ached4.skills5.safety6.team7.other8.started9.enthusiasm10.lifelongActivityBReadingforwriting二、典句赏析例句仿写1.Althoughwerarelyseeeachother,wearestillverygoodfriends.2.Whenyouaresufferingthestressfromstudy,youcouldtrytofindsomethi