专题06读后续写（原卷版）【查漏补缺】

专题06读后续写目录01挑战真题·查知识漏洞02回顾教材·补知识漏洞回顾知识体系回顾核心考点易混易错归纳03知识通关演练回顾知识体系回顾核心考点考点一如何写续写?厘清原文的伏笔阅读文章，找5W1H，故事线和情感线

对于学生来说，读后续写的关键点在于读懂原文,能有效获取原文的重要信息，也就是伏笔。实际上，很多学生只是了解原文的大概情节，没有获取足够多的有效伏笔信息，在续写情节时往往会逻辑混乱天马行空，出现与原文协同度不高的逻辑问题。因此，要落实好读后续写题型，就要通过精读获取准确的原文信息伏笔点和合理、流畅的构思,然后串联情节,实现情节构建的合理性。以2022年高考英语全国I.II卷读后续写为例进行分析:

(1)Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltown...(越野跑，对正常人来说都很难，对身体有残疾的大卫来说更难;来参加的人很多，为后文大卫害怕被嘲笑埋下伏笔。)

(2)Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.(他比同龄人小,并且有残疾，参加比赛虽然不易，但仍要参加，突出其勇敢。比赛结束时，受到在场师生的鼓励、钦佩，甚至尊敬,因此大卫的微笑表情不能缺失。)

(3)AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,...hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.(续写中可以用来描述大卫赛跑时的样子，是有效的动作描述，更是原文协同。)(4)Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.(这是大卫最令人敬佩的品质。竭尽全力练习,平时积极参加各种比赛，应是“我”说服他参赛的关键点。两个always的部分可以用来描述大卫在比赛时的结果:他虽然不可能跑赢别人，但坚持跑完全程。这可能是学生容易忽视的地方。有的学生写成大卫获得第一名，不符合常理。)(5）...wasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.(此处是“我”能够成功鼓励大卫参加越野跑的基础。“我”是特殊教育老师,有经验,因此续写第一段时可以参照此句。)2.掌握原文的语言特色读后续写的实质是根据所提供的原文内容,写出主旨一致、逻辑顺畅、语言风格一致的故事结尾。因此，续写时除了考虑故事的主题思想、关注逻辑之外，还要高度关注续写部分和原文语言风格的一致性。主要从主要人物、时态、原文中的高级句式三个方面考虑。3.定“两条”设“四点”主题升华“两条”指情节线(Plotline)、情感线(Emotionline)。在读后续写题型中，续写部分往往是故事的高潮。在写的过程中第一条情节线是出现问题之后先尝试，尝试未果失败之后会出现第二条情节线是在失败有冲突矛盾的基础之上会继续解决这个问题在构思过程中,合理、有效的方法是结合段首语推理情节，以及在这些情节发生的过程中伴随怎样的情感。在这个过程中我们会涉及到三种冲突（与环境的冲突与自己的冲突与第二主人公的冲突）在这这个过程中会有一些心理环境情绪动作描写，这样一添加整个过程就完整了在写作过程中尤其要关注“四点”:第一点:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;第二点:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首语;第三点:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;第四点:文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量,揭示和强调剧情的寓意。这“四点”决定了续写故事的发展方向。按照写作要求的不同侧重方向,将这四点划分为段首三点和结尾一点。段首三点指与段首句相关的三个点，即紧接两段段首句之后的两个点和第一段结尾的一个点。通过分析这三点可以保证整体故事的连贯性。第一点要限定剧情走向，同时为下文的展开留出足够的写作空间;第二点要达成两段之间的衔接,过渡不能突兀;第三点不仅要衔接第二段开头语,还要收束剧情，为结尾作铺垫。在创作过程中，学生要培养衔接意识，关注原文的隐含信息。考点二情景好词佳句+高级句式分析+解题发挥【高级词汇】一、表示人物开心快乐1．难以形容地开心：indescribablywildjoy2．极为感动：beoverwhelminglymoved3．几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋：canhardlyconcealhisexcitement4．既兴奋又开心：amixtureofexcitementandhappiness5．激发某人的激情：kindlesb.with/topassion6．显示出极大的意愿：showagreatreadiness7．被强烈地吸引：bepowerfullyattractedto8．心情愉快：incheerfulspirits9．振作精神：keepupone’sspirits10．满意的表情：asatisfiedlook11．对……感到满意：becontentwith12．对……很高兴：bedelightedat13．为成功而欣喜：beexcitedwithjoyatthesuccess14．被……场面所吸引：befascinatedbythespectacleof15．被她的美貌所吸引：befascinatedwithherbeauty16．因……而高兴：bejoyfulover/about17．喜爱，对……着迷：bekeenon18．快乐至极：beoverwhelmedwith19．高兴地跳起来：dance/jumpforjoy20．欣喜若狂：bewildwithdelight21．一个令人鼓舞的表情：anencouragingexpression22．过一个愉快的假日：haveapleasantholiday23．心满意足，非常幸福：onthetopoftheworld24．对(做)……感到非常高兴：overjoyedat/todo25．流下幸福的泪水：tearsofhappinessflowdown26．乐得大叫：yellwithdelight27．使某人心情愉快：brightensb.’sheart28．使某人安心：setone’sheartatrest29．感到鼓舞的：feelinspired/encouraged30．精神高涨：beinhighspirits二、表示人物伤心抑郁1．强烈的失落感：astrongsenseofloss2．陷入绝望：fallintodespair3．让他很伤感：puthimintoasentimentalmood4．避免陷入消极的漩涡：avoidgettingsuckedintoawhirlpoolofnegativity5．哭泣释放苦闷情绪：cryinggivessomeemotionalrelease6．减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼：easesb.ofhispain/trouble7．因某人的死亡而痛心：breakone’sheartoverone’sdeath8．使某人悲痛：makeone’sheartbleed9．伤心而死：dieofabrokenheart10．悲痛欲绝：cryone’sheartout11．怀着沉重的心情：withaheavyheart12．沮丧的：withasinkingheart13．忧郁的：withasorrowfulheart14．惊慌失措：beseizedwithpanic15．有点惊讶：comeassomethingofasurprise16．感到疲惫不堪：feelexhaustedandoverwhelmed17．很可能引发一阵挫败感：beextremelylikelytoraiseastormoffrustration18．某人突然感到一阵悲伤：aflashofgriefcomesuponsb.19．情绪低落：bedowninspirits20．垂头丧气：loseone’sspirit21．心里悲伤：besadatheart22．意志消沉：abrokenspirit三、表示人物愤怒怨恨1．引起某人的不快：arouseone’sdispleasure2．对某人的行为感到不满：bedispleasedatone’sconduct3．易为琐事而恼火：beeasilyannoyedattrifles4．气得说不出话：bespeechlesswithindignation5．不断地抱怨：complainconstantly6．对……大发脾气：rageatsb.7．怒火万丈：flamehigh8．气得满脸通红：flamewithanger9．勃然大怒：flyintoarage10．对某人生气：getirritatedat11．对某人勃然大怒：getmad/crossatsb.12．愁眉苦脸：haveaworriedlook13．对抱怨不予理会：ignore/disregardacomplaint14．对……表示不满：express/voiceacomplaintabout15．怒气冲冲地跑出房间：runoutoftheroominaburstofanger16．愤怒地跺脚：stampone’sfootinanger17．感到尴尬的：feelembarrassed18．感到困惑的：feelpuzzled/confused19．感到沮丧的：feelfrustrated/depressed20．感到恶心的：feeldisgusted/sickened21．感到恼怒的：feelannoyed22．感到愤怒的：feelirritated23．感到泄气的：feeldiscouraged24．充满怨恨的眼神：aresentfullook四、表示人物其他情绪1．激发兴趣：find...highlystimulating2．宽容的精神：aforgivingspirit3．以和蔼可亲的态度：withakindlyandgood­humoredspirit4．某人对……一点也不感兴趣：notintheleastbesb.interestedin...5．混合着焦虑与希望的情绪：mixedwiththeemotionofanxietyandhope6．引起强烈的情感：setoffstrongfeelingsintheheartsof...7．对……彻底上瘾：behopelesslyaddictedto8．在这些情绪的控制下：underthedominationoftheseemotions五、表示人物的外貌特征1．优美的身材：agracefulfigure2．匀称的形体：ashapelyfigure3．瘦削的身材：askinnyfigure4．细长的身体：aslimfigure5．发育良好的身体：awell­developedfigure6．仪表堂堂：animposing/adashing/ahandsome/astrikingfigure7．(人)形体很好：haveagoodfigure8．改善形体：improveone’sfigure9．看到月光下有一个模糊的人影：seeadimfigureinthemoonlight10．炫耀某人优美的身段：showoffsb.’slovelyfigure11．中等身材：anaveragebuild12．身材魁梧的人：awell­builtman六、表示人物个性品质1．务实的：bedown­to­earth2．保守的性格：conservativepersonality3．缺乏责任感：lackofresponsibility4．具有……的美德：withthevirtueof5．责任感：asenseofresponsibility6．一个专心致志进行探索的科学家：ascientistbentonmakingadiscovery7．高素质、有经验的老师：highlyqualified，well­experiencedteachingstaff8．脾气好的人：agood­humored/good­naturedperson9．一个完美的人：afaultless/perfectperson10．一个有自制力的人：aself­possessedperson11．一个疑心重的人：asuspiciousperson12．有抱负的人：anambitiousperson13．聪明人：anintellectualperson14．个性强的人：amanoffinepersonality15．容易相处的人：aneasypersontodealwith16．冷酷无情的人：acold­bloodedman17．性情和善的男子：agood­naturedman18．严肃的年轻人：aseriousyoungman19．头脑简单的人：asimple­mindedman20．能说会道的人：asmooth­spokenman21．消息灵通/见多识广的人：awell­informedman22．娴静有礼的淑女：aquiet，graciouslady23．说话直率的人：anoutspokenman24．有教养的女子：aculturedwoman七、表示人物心理活动1．鼓起勇气：masterupcourage2．期待：intheexpectationof3．不顾对……的忧虑：regardlessofconcernover4．感觉不适：feeloutofplace5．毫无倦意：shownosignsoftiredness6．走神：keepdriftingaway7．好奇地向某人看：throwacuriousglanceatsb.8．对某事不存幻想：beundernoillusionaboutsth.9．不耐烦地听：listenimpatiently10．赞赏的目光：anadmiringgaze八、表示人物的动作1．步态优美地走：walkgracefully2．拖着疲惫的双腿回家：gohomeontiredlegs3．朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼：castahastyglanceatsb.4．听到远处隆隆的雷声：hearthethunderrollinginthedistance5．穿过田野的散步：awalkacrossthefields6．爆发出阵阵喝彩声：breakintoshoutsofapplause7．自吹自擂：singone’sownpraise8．严厉训斥某人：givesb.asharpscolding9．一跃而起：jumptoone’sfeet10．漫步向山里走去：wanderintothemountain11．散步；闲逛：have/takeastroll12．来回踱步：pacebackandforth13．毫无目的地在街上游荡：wanderaimlesslythroughthestreets14．臂挽着臂走：walkarminarm15．故意说：saysth.deliberately九、表示天气1．凉爽清新的风：cool，refreshingbreeze2．落日：thesetting/decliningsun3．多雨的季节：arainyseason4．暴风雨之夜：astormynight5．四面受风：exposetothefourwindsofheaven6．连绵不断的雨：continuous/constantrains7．在茫茫大雨中：intheblindingrain8．深埋在雪中：beburiedinsnow9．难以忍受的酷热：unbearablyhot10．在春天温暖的阳光里：inthewarmspringsunshine11．放晴：clearup12．狂风暴雨：fierce/heavy/violentstorms13．及时雨：atimely/seasonablerain14．沐日光浴：bathe/baskin(the)sunshine15．在盛夏灼热的阳光下：undertheblazing/scorching/burningsunofmidsummer十、表示地理位置1．位置优越的城市：afavorablysituatedcity2．水下面的暗礁：ahiddenrockbeneaththesurfaceofthewater3．一个偏僻的小村子：asmallvillageoffthemap4．离海滨仅咫尺之遥：withinastone’sthrowofthebeach5．位于……最北端：besituatedatthenorthernextremeof...6．在群山环抱的村庄里：inavillageamongthehills7．朝南的房间：roomfacingsouth8．人烟稀少的农村地区：thethinlypopulatedruralarea9．位于太平洋沿岸某处：belocatedsomewhereonthePacificcoast【常用句式】一、表示心理描写1．Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我心跳开始加速，脑子里一片空白。2．Somanythoughtscrowdedintohermind，allatonce.那么多的想法突然涌入她的脑海。3．Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她是如此的羞愧以至于脸如充血般发烫。4．Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize，awideexcitementtookholdofher.当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的激动之情溢于言表。5．Hisheartsankwhenheheardthenewsthathefailedtowinaprize.听到他没获奖的消息，他的心情沉重。6．Onbluedaysyoufeellikeyou’refloatinginanoceanofsadness.在忧郁的日子里，你会觉得自己在悲伤的海洋里沉沉浮浮。7．Asaresultofanaccident，Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.因为一场事故，托尼的世界突然陷入一片黑暗与绝望之中。8．Terroranddeathstruck，andherheartwasbeatingpainfullyfast，bangingagainstherribs.恐怖和死亡袭来，她的心脏跳动得非常快，撞击着她的肋骨。9．Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodycooled/frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.看到这可怕的景象，我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。10．Hewassickwithfear，butthethoughtoftheconsequencesurgedhimon.他因害怕而感到恶心，但一想到结果，他还是要继续下去。11．Iwonderifit’sbecauseIhaven’tbeenabletobeoutdoorsforsolongthatI’vegrownsocrazyabouteverythingtodowithnature.我不知道这是不是因为我太久无法出门的缘故，我变得对一切与大自然有关的事物都无比狂热。12．Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky，thesongofthebirds，moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.我仍然清楚地记得曾经有一段时间，湛蓝的天空，鸟儿清脆的歌声，月光明亮，花香弥漫，从未令我心迷神往过。13．Iwasalittlenervousatfirst，buteveryonewassoniceandfriendlythatIsoonstoppedworrying.起初我有点紧张，但是大家都那么友好，我很快便不再担心了。14．TheEagleswenthomeangryandbitterbecausetheydidnotwinthetournament.Meanwhile，theKangarooswenthomeandtrainedharderthanbefore.老鹰队队员们回到了家，内心既愤怒又苦涩，因为他们没有赢得锦标赛。与此同时，袋鼠队队员们回家后，训练得比以前更刻苦了。15．Ifeltsoashamed.Imustbereallystupidtofailasimplemathquiz!我感到很丢脸。我一定是蠢到家了才会连一次简单的数学测试都没通过！16．Afterwards，Ipretendedtobecheerful，butHannahsensedsomethingwaswrong.后来，我假装很开心，但是汉娜觉察到了异样。17．Afteracoupleofweeks，theexcitementstartedtofade，andhomesicknessstartedtosetin.几个星期后，那股兴奋劲开始减退，想家的情绪开始蔓延。二、表示环境描写1．Thesunbegantoriseinthesky，bathingthemountainingoldenlight.太阳开始缓缓升起，给山披上了一层金纱。2．Thesunroseoveraquietworldandlookedwarmlydownuponthepeacefulvillage.太阳在一个宁静的世界里升起，温暖地俯视着这个宁静的村庄。3．Theskyisclearbluenowandthesunhasflungdiamondsdownonmeadows，riverbanksandwoods.此时已是万里蓝天，太阳将钻石般灿烂夺目的阳光洒向草原，洒向河岸，洒向树林。4．Theroselookslikeanangel，swayinginthewind，dancinginthesun.这朵玫瑰就像是在风中摇摆、在阳光下跳舞的天使。5．Thegroundswerecoveredwithdarkgreengrassthroughwhichstretchedastraightwhitestonepath.庭院里处处是碧绿的芳草，绿草中铺着洁白笔直的石路。6．Thebeautifulsceneryisafeastforyoureyes.美丽的景色令人大饱眼福。7．Thesesublimeandmagnificentscenesofferedmethegreatestconsolation.这些令人赞叹的壮美景色给了我极大的安慰。8．Nanjing，anoldcitywitharichandcelebratedpast，yetvigorousinhernewyouth—howlovelysheis!南京，这座古老而又年轻的历史文化名城，是多么的可爱！9．Itwassoquietintheclassroomthatthesoundofaneedleinthegroundcouldbeheard.教室里很安静，连一根针掉在地上的声音都听得见。10．Whenwereachedthetopofthehill，amagnificentviewoftheseagreetedus.当我们到达山顶时，我们看到了一片壮丽的海景。11．Thedark，rainyevening，thewind，thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.那漆黑的雨夜，刮着大风，电闪雷鸣，乌云滚滚，我完全被这种景象镇住了。12．However，thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.然而，湖水在落日的余晖下闪亮如镜，景色迷人。13．Thehutwasdarkinsidesoittooktimeforoureyestoadjust.小屋内很黑，所以我们的眼睛需要点时间才能适应。14．Theroomisinamess，withpizzaboxesontheflooranddirtydishesinthesink.Inthecorner，thereisagarbagecanaroundwhicharepiecesofgarbageandwastepaper.房间里一片混乱，地上扔了些比萨盒子，水槽里堆着脏盘子。角落里有一个垃圾箱，周围散落着废纸屑和垃圾。15．Uponthearrivalofspring，beautifulbirdswillsinghappilyinthepark.春天一到，美丽的鸟儿们就会在公园里欢快地歌唱。16．Thenarrowwindowsadmitlittlelightintotheroom.窗户很窄，只有少量的光能照进这个房间。17．Atthecloseoftheafternoonservice，wereturnedbyanexposedandhillyroad，wherethebitterwinterwind，blowingoverarangeofsnowysummitstothenorth，almostgrayedtheskinfromourface.下午的祷告结束以后，我们沿着一条光秃崎岖的山路返回。冬日刺骨的寒风吹过大雪覆盖的山峰，吹向北边，吹得我们一脸苍白萧索。18．Thebrightlyburningmeteordarkenedthelight.熊熊燃烧的流星使光线都变暗了。三、表示动作描写1．ItwasobviousthatthemanagerofthecoffeeshopwaswaitingforLiFangtoleave—hewipedthetables，thensatdownandturnedontheTV.很明显，咖啡馆的经理在等李方离开——他擦好桌子，然后坐下来，打开电视。2．Hiseyesstareatwhatisleftofthebrother’sdinnerontable.他的眼睛盯着兄弟俩留在餐桌上的残羹剩菜。3．OlivergetsitfromadeskandgivesittoHenrylikeagift.奥利弗从桌上取过信，像送礼物一样递给亨利。4．Thehostessscreams，theothercustomerslookatherandsheputsahandtohermouth.老板娘尖叫起来，其他顾客都望着她，于是她用手捂住了嘴巴。5．Theowner，hostessandwaiterallbowasHenryleaves.当亨利离开的时候，店主、老板娘和服务员都向他鞠躬致敬。6．Charliefirstpicksoutthelacesandeatsthemasiftheywerespaghetti.Thenhecutsofftheleathertopoftheshoeasifitwerethefineststeak.查理先把鞋带挑出来，像吃意大利面一样把它们吃了。然后他把皮制的鞋头切下来，就好像那是最美味的牛排。7．Shesteppedbackappearingsurprisedandputupherhands，asifindefence.她退了几步，显得很吃惊，举起了手，想要自卫。8．Heheldherfirmlyinhisarmsandshefeltthewarmthofhisbody.Shescreamed，pushedhimawayandrantoherroomfortherestoftheday.他把她紧紧地搂在怀里，她感觉到他身体的温热，尖叫了起来，推开他，跑进她的房间，之后一整天都未出来。9．Theboyswhohadnevercomeacrossanythinglikethisbeforestartedjumpingoutofthewindows.以前从来没有见过这种情况的男孩们吓得从窗户跳了出去。10．ProfessorHigginscarelesslythrowsahandfulofmoneyintoherbasket.希金斯教授漫不经心地朝她的篮子里扔了一把钱。11．ElizaDoolittle：(lookingatthecollectedmoneyinamazement)Well,Inever.Awholepound!伊莱扎·杜利特尔：(惊奇地看着收集起来的钱)啊，我还从来没有见过！整整一英镑呢！12．MrsPearce：(onlyhalfresignedtoit)Verywell，sir.(goesdownstairs)皮尔斯夫人：(似听非听地)好吧，先生。(随即向楼下走去)13．Danielrunsintohisbedroomandshutsthedoorangrily.丹尼尔跑进卧室，生气地关上了门。14．Duringtheexperiment，volunteerswereaskedtosniffvariouspleasantsmellsandunpleasantsmells.实验期间，志愿者要去闻各种好闻的、不好闻的气味。15．TheEagle’scaptainknockedtheballtothegroundwithhishand，andthenkickeditandscored.Therefereeblewthewhistle；thematchwasoverandtheEagleshadwon.老鹰队的队长用手将球击倒在地，踢了一脚，进球得分了，裁判吹响了哨子。比赛结束，老鹰队赢了。16．Shesaidthatsomeonemusthavebeenspyingonusinthewashroom，butIdidn’tbelieveherexplanation.她说肯定有人在洗手间一直监视我们，但是我不相信她的解释。17．AsIdroppedmydadoff，Iwatchedhim，dressedinhisworkclothes，gettinghistoolsfromthetrunkofmycar.我让父亲下车，看着他穿着工作服，从车后备箱里拿工具。18．Hebrokedownintearsandwasnevergoingtoletheroutofhissightagain.他痛哭流涕，再也不会让她离开自己的视线。19．Herfatherturnedawayasatearofjoyrolleddownhischeek.她的父亲别过脸，喜悦的泪水从脸颊上滚落下来。四、人物外貌描写1．Hehadawidemouthandhumorousgreyeyes.他有一张大嘴和幽默的灰色眼睛。2．Twospotsofcolorbrightened/lituphercheeks.两朵红霞晕染了她的脸颊。3．Hehastwobigdarkeyesunderapairofthickeyebrows.在一对浓密的眉毛下是他大而黑的双眼。4．Inoticedthathiseyeswereblack—coalblack.我注意到他的眼睛是黑色的——炭黑色的。5．Shearrivedlateforclass，herhairwetandmessy.她上课迟到了，头发又湿又脏。6．Shewasfair­skinned，havingreddishhairandlongfingers.她皮肤白皙，有着红发和修长的手指。7．Hisstrongly­builtbodyandsun­tannedskinmakehimlooklikeasportsman.他强壮的身体和晒黑的皮肤使他看起来像一个运动员。8．Everythingabouthimwasoldexcepthiseyesandtheywerethesamecolorastheseaandwerecheerfulandundefeated.他身上的一切都显得古老，除了那双眼睛，它们像海水一般蓝，是乐观而不肯认输的。9．Hehassparkingbluegreeneyes，thinningsilverhairthatspillsontohisforehead，bigears，atriangularnose，andtuftsofgrayingeyebrow.他的眼睛闪烁着蓝绿色光芒，稀疏的银发散落在前额，大耳朵，三角形的鼻子和灰白的眉毛。10．Theyoungwomanwastall，withgraceandelegance.Shehadagreatamountofdarkhairthatwasshowninthesunlight，andafacemorebeautifulthananyother，withdark，mysteriouseyes.Shewaspoliteandwell­mannered，withatenderlook.这个年轻的女人很高，且很优雅。她有一头乌黑的头发，在阳光下显得十分美丽，她的脸比任何其他人都漂亮，她有一双神秘的黑眼睛。她彬彬有礼，举止文雅，目光温柔。五、人物神态描写1．Adreaminglookcameoverherface.她脸上浮现出梦幻般的神情。2．Herfacewasfullofgloomandcruelty.她面色阴沉，表情冷酷。3．Hesmiled，hiseyesfulloflaughter.他露出了笑容，双眼充满笑意。4．Hereyesgleamedandherfragilefacebrokeintoasmile.她的眼睛闪烁着光芒，精致的脸庞展现出微笑。5．Colorglowedinhisfaceandhisstrangeeyeswidenedwithjoyfulness.他的脸熠熠闪光，奇怪的眼睛因欢乐而大大睁开。6．Aleybecamehappynowandagentlesmilespreadoverherface.阿利变得很开心，整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。7．SherodetherestofthewayhomewearingaMonaLisasmileofpeaceandgrace.她带着蒙娜丽莎式的平静而优雅的微笑，骑完了剩下的回家路。8．Hewasglaringdownatmeagain，hisblackeyesfullofdisgust.他又低头瞪着我，黑色眼瞳里充满了厌恶。9．Hiseyeslitupwhenshewalkedintotheroom.Asmilelitupherface.Thesmilespreadacrossherface，whichlituphisgloomyafternoon.看见她走进房间，他两眼一亮。她笑了，脸上露出了喜色。她满脸的微笑，点亮了他阴郁的下午。10．Hercheekswereglowing.Hertearsmingledwiththebloodonherface，droppinghergaze.她双颊绯红，泪水和脸上的血混在了一起，同时目光低垂，不再凝视。【高级句式结构】1．ItwasthefirsttimeinayearandahalfthatI’dseenthenightfacetoface.这是我一年半以来第一次目睹夜晚。[句子结构：Itis/wasthefirst(second...)timethatsb.＋现在完成时/过去完成时：这是某人第几次做某事。]2．ItwasmysisterwhofirsthadtheideatocyclealongtheentireMekongRiverfromwhereitbeginstowhereitends.首先想到要沿着湄公河从源头骑车到终点的是我的姐姐。(句子结构：强调句Itis/was＋被强调部分＋that/who...；from...to...连接where引导的宾语从句。)3．Allhopewasnotlost.不是所有的希望都破灭了。(句子结构：部分否定)4．Onlythendidwedecidetoanswerviolencewithviolence.直到那时我们才决定以暴制暴。(句子结构：Only＋状语＋部分倒装。)5．NeverwillZhouYangforgethisfirstjobattheofficeofChinaDaily.周洋永远不会忘记他在《中国日报》办公室获得的第一份工作。(句子结构：never等表示否定意义的词位于句首，句子用部分倒装。)6．AmongthepainterswhobrokeawayfromthetraditionalstyleofpaintingweretheImpressionists，wholivedandworkedinParis.在那些突破传统画法的画家中有生活和工作在巴黎的印象派画家。[句子结构：among(介词)位于句首的倒装句，who引导非限制定语从句。]7．FrederickWilliamⅠ，theKingofPrussia，couldneverhaveimaginedthathisgreatestgifttotheRussianpeoplewouldhavesuchanamazinghistory.普鲁士国王腓特烈·威廉一世绝不可能想到他送给俄罗斯人民的厚礼会有这样一段令人惊讶的历史。(句子结构：主语＋同位语＋谓语＋宾语从句。)8．ThereisnodoubtthattheboxeswerethenputonatrainforKonigsberg，whichwasatthattimeaGermancityontheBalticSea.毫无疑问，这些箱子后来被装上火车运往哥尼斯堡，当时德国在波罗的海海边的一个城市。(句子结构：Thereisnodoubt＋that引导的同位语从句＋which引导的非限制性定语从句。)9．IndiahasanationalfestivalonOctober2tohonourMohandasGandhi，theleaderwhohelpedgainIndia’sindependencefromBritain.印度在10月2日有一个全国性的节日，以纪念莫罕达斯·甘地，这位帮助印度独立于英国的领袖。(句子结构：名词＋同位语＋定语从句。)10．Perhapsweoughttocombineourideasandprovideabalancedmenuwithfoodfullofenergyandfiber.或许我们应该结合彼此的想法，然后提供一个营养充足且富含纤维的健康均衡的菜单。(句子结构：介词短语作定语，相当于一个定语从句which/thatisfullof...。)11．Earlierthatday，whentheycrossedtheRockyMountains，theymanagedtocatchsightofsomemountaingoatsandevenagrizzlybearandaneagle.那天清晨，当她们穿越落基山山脉时，她们看到了野山羊，甚至还看到了一只大灰熊和一只鹰。(句子结构：时间状语＋when引导定语从句＋主句)12．Goingeastward，you’llpassmountainsandthousandsoflakesandforests，aswellaswideriversandlargecities.一路向东，你会经过重重青山，路过千千万万的湖泊、山林，还有宽阔的河流和大都市。(句子结构：现在分词短语作状语；并列表达“AandB，aswellasCandD”。)13．AsVictorHugooncesaid，“Laughteristhesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanface”，anduptonownobodyhasbeenabletodothisbetterthanCharlieChaplin.正如维克多·雨果所说：“笑是阳光，能驱散人们脸上的寒冬”，目前为止，在这点上没有人做得比查理·卓别林更好。(句子结构：as引导非限制性定语从句；否定意义的词与比较级连用表示最高级含义。)14．YoumayfinditastonishingthatCharliewastaughttosingassoonashecouldspeakanddanceassoonashecouldwalk.你会吃惊地发现，查理一会说话就有人教他去唱歌，一会走路就有人教他跳舞。[句子结构：findit(形式宾语)＋adj.＋that引导的宾语从句；that引导的宾语从句中包含着assoonas引导的时间状语从句。]15．Theyaresohungrythattheytryboilingapairofleathershoesfortheirdinner.他们太饿了，于是尝试着煮一双皮鞋当作晚餐。(句子结构：so...that...句型。)16．Withalltheseattractions，nowondertourismisincreasingwhereverthereisaDisneyland.有这么多引人入胜之处，难怪有迪士尼乐园的地方，其旅游业就会增长。[句子结构：with＋n.作原因状语；(itis)nowonder＋...＋wherever/whenever/whatever...引导的让步状语从句。]17．JohnSnowwasawell­knowndoctorinLondon—(andhewas)sofamous，indeed，thatheattendedQueenVictoriatoeasethebirthofherbabies.约翰·斯诺曾经是伦敦一位著名的医生——他的确太负盛名了，所以能照看维多利亚女王，并帮助她顺利分娩。(句子结构：一个简单句和一个复合句合并成一句，很好地运用了插入语和符号来连接句子。)18．Theseatswerecomfortableandafteracalmingdrink，whichmadeussleepy，oureyesclosed.座位非常舒适，喝了点镇静剂后，我们很快闭上了眼睛，感到昏昏欲睡。(句子结构：非限制性定语从句插在主句和状语之间。)19．Withoutthenewpaintsandthenewtechnique，wewouldnotbeabletoseethemanygreatmasterpiecesforwhichthisperiodisfamous.没有新的颜料和新的(绘画)手法，我们就不能看到这一时代很多著名的杰作。[句子结构：“介词without＋n.”作条件状语，主句(虚拟语气)＋介词(for)＋which引导的定语从句。]20．Itiseasytowriteand，likethecinquain，cangiveaclearpictureandcreateaspecialfeelingusingtheminimumofwords.它容易写，而且像五行诗一样，它可以用最少的词语呈现一幅清晰的画面，表达出一种特殊的感情。(句子结构：Itis＋adj.＋todosth.，like＋n.作插入语，现在分词短语作方式状语。)21．ItseemsamazingthatatmyageIamstillfitenoughtocycle20kilometersinanafternoon.感到不可思议吧，像我这样的年纪，身体健康而且能在一个下午骑车20公里。[句子结构：It(形式主语)＋seems＋adj.＋that引导主语从句。]22．Thereisnodoubtthattheearthisbecomingwarmerandthatitishumanactivitythathascausedthisglobalwarmingratherthanarandombutnaturalphenomenon.毫无疑问，地球正在变暖，而地球变暖正是人类活动所致，而非一种无规律的自然现象。[句子结构：Thereisnodoubtthat...andthat...句式(两个同位语从句并列)；在第二个that引导的同位语从句中，又用了itis...that强调句型。]23．Iwasabouttogobacktosleepwhensuddenlymybedroombecameasbrightasday.我刚要继续睡觉，突然我的卧室亮如白昼。(句子结构：beabouttodo...when...。)24．Theothertwoclimbeddownintothecratertocollectsomelavaforlaterstudy，butthisbeingmyfirstexperience，Istayedatthetopandwatchedthem.另外两人向下爬进火山口去收集供日后研究用的岩浆，我是第一次经历这样的事，所以留在山顶上观察他们。(句子结构：独立主格结构thisbeingmyfirstexperience作原因状语。)25．Justacceptthemforwhotheyare，andgivethemencouragementtoliveasrichandfullalifeasyoudo.要接受他们，给他们以鼓励，让他们能像你一样过得丰富多彩，充实美满。(句子结构：as＋形容词＋a/an＋名词＋as的用法。)26．Pressedbymyfriendsandrelations，Idecidedtosendmyinventiontothepatentofficetogetrecognitionformysuccessfulidea.由于朋友和亲戚的敦促，我决定把我的发明送到专利局，请他们对我这次成功的思路给予认可。(句子结构：过去分词短语作原因状语。)1．（2024·浙江·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jay,24,gothomefromworkshortlyaftermidnight.Then,suddenly,ahorror-filledscreamrippedthroughthestillnight.Herushedoutsideandsawflameslightingtheskyhalfamileaway.Hurriedly,hecalledthefiredepartmentandrushedouttocheckthesituation.Secondslater,Jaywasfishtailinghiscaronthemainroad.Thefireragedatasmallhillsidecomplexofmobilehomes.Jayslidthecartoastopandsprintedupasteeplanetowardthereddeningglow.Reachingthehilltop,hesawthata70-foot-longtrailer(房车)wasonfire.Ayoungwomanintornnightclotheswasrunningwildlybackandforth,jumpingtosmashatthe6-foot-highwindowswithherhands.“DearGod!”shescreamed.“Myfamilyisdying!”Jayfeltamomentofpanic.Heseemedtobetheonlypersontheretohelp.Neverhadheseensuchafire!Flameswereleapingoutofbrokenwindowsatthefarendofthetrailerandwindingalongtheroof;theroaring,cracklingnoisesgrewlouderbythesecond.Hegrabbedthewomanbytheshoulders.“Whathappened?”heshouted.Barelycoherent,Cindytoldhimshehadescapedthroughoneofthemasterbedroomwindows.Herhusband,Leonard,hadgonefortheirtwochildren:22-month-oldRyanand6-week-oldAngela.Hewassupposedtohandthemouttoherfromthebedroom.But,secondslater,flameshadburstfromthekitchenandlivingroomwindows.Cindybegancryingmiserably.“Wherearethey?”Jayyelled.Cindypointedtotheendsectionofthetrailer,wherethick,blacksmokepouredfromthewindows.Fromthetimehewasoldenoughtoplaysports,Jayhadlearnedtobattletheodds.AsaLittleLeaguer,heledhisunderdogteamtothestatechampionship.AndintinySt.Maries,hiscouragehadearnedhimtownspeople’srespect.Always,Jayrecalledthewordsofhisfather:“Thewordcan’tneverdidanythingforanybody.Youcandoit!Neverstoptrying,son!”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1Jay’sfather’swordsechoedinhismind.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2Asherhusbandwasplacedintheambulancetobedriventothehospital,CindywalkedovertoJay.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2024·辽宁·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mychildhoodismagicalandfullofadventure.Ihavesomanychildhoodmemories,andIwouldliketoshareonethatstillstimulatesme.ThisunforgettablechildhoodeventwasaboutthefirstdaywhenIlearnedhowtoswim.IthappenedsounexpectedlyandquicklythatnotonlyIbutmyparentsweresurprised.Ofcourse,wewereproudaswell.Iwasbarelysevenyearsoldbackthen,andmyparentsthoughtthatitwastimeformetolearnhowtoswim.Onesummermorning,theytookmetoaswimmingpoolintheCitySwimmingComplexwhichwasjusta35-minutedrivefromourhouse.Itwasaweekendandbothmyparentsaccompaniedme.AfterwereachedtheSwimmingComplex,wefoundmanypeoplewerelearninghowtoswim.Mymothersaidshewouldwatchmelearnthisimportantskillwiththehelpofmyfather.Thenshecheeredmeonandtookaseat.IhadnoideahowtoswimbutIwasexcitedtotrythisnewadventure.However,whenmyfathergotintotheswimmingpoolwithme,Ibecameabitnervous.Itseemedthatthingswerenotquiteaseasyforme.Lookingaround,Inoticedthatmanyotherchildrenofallageswerealsotryingtograspthisskillandsomeofthemhadprettymuchlearnedtheartandscienceofthisskill.Influencedbyothers,Iwasdeterminedtofocusonmytrainingandswimaswellasthem.Undertheguidanceofmyfather,Ilearnedwithallmyeffortanddevotion,andImaderapidprogress.Afterteachingmefor30minutesorso,myfatherwenttobuysomesnacksforusandmymothercametotalktomeforawhilenearthepool.SheaskedmeifIhadlearnedanythingatall.Toprovemyprogress,Ijumpedintothewaterandstartedswimming.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mymotherwasfrightenedbymyactionatfirst.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Eatingthesnacksboughtbymyfather,wewereallthrilledandexcited.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________