初中英语写作辅导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件

初三英语写作辅导第1页writing在英语学习中，写是学生必须掌握语言技能之一。写作表达了一个人综合语言利用能力。要写好一篇文章，不但要有扎实语言基础知识包含语法、词汇、习惯用语等，还需要掌握必备写作技巧。写作能力培养不是一蹴而就，它需要进行知识积累和技能训练。第2页

新课程标准中关于五级水平（即初中毕业要求到达水平）要求是：

A.能依据写作要求，搜集、准备素材；B.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改；C.能使用常见连接词表示次序和逻辑关系（即文章中用于表示并列，转折，举例，因果，递进，让步，总结等逻辑关系固定单词或词组）

；D.能简单描述人物或事件；E.能依据所给图示或表格写出简单段落或操作说明。

1.新课程标准中关于写要求第3页ThingsIhatetodo

MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.Ihategoingtothetutorsbecauseitisboringandtiring.IalwaysstayuplateandIdon’tgetenoughsleep.SogettingupearlyisalsowhatIdon’tlike.ButthethingIhatemostistellinglies.Youwillfeelguiltyaftercheatingothers.Youwillneverbetrustedifyouoftentelllies,andnotrespectedaswell.Ihatebeingdishonest,andIhopethateveryonewillbehonesttoothers.第4页LovearoundmeLoveiseverywhereinmylife.Myparentslovemeandmyfriendscareaboutme.WhenIamindifficulty,theywillpullmeout.WhenIfeelsad,theywillcheermeup.IfeeldelightedandthankfulwhenIgetlovefromthem.Ialsowanttodosomethingtoshowmylovetoothers.Whentheyhavesomeproblems,Iwilltrymybesttohelpthem.Idobelieveifweallloveeachother,ourworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.

第5页Timeorder:First,…Firstofall,…Second,…Third,…Next,…Afterthat,…Then…Finally,…第6页SpaceorderOntheright,…Ontheleft,…Inthecenter,…Inthemiddle,…Nexttothe…,…Besidethe…,…Oppositethe______,…Nearthe______,…Underthe______,…Abovethe______,…Ononesideofthe______,…Ontheothersideofthe______,…第7页Transitionsignals1、递进：besides,inaddition,what’smore2、转折和对比：but,however,ontheotherhand,3、总结：inshort,inbrief,forthesereasons4、因果和结论：asaresult,dueto,becauseof,thus,therefore5、强调：really,indeed,surely6、其它插入语：worsestill/what’sworse,afterall,ifpossible,第8页培养英语思维---词搭配大雨大桥大楼大错大写大病大地震heavyrainlongbridgehighrise/largebuildingbig/terrible/seriousmistakecapitalletterseriousillnessmajorearthquake第9页句表示注意汉英差异：一、状语e.g.她一周有三个下午在一家百货企业做兼职。 Sheworksparttimeinadepartmentstorethreeafternoonsaweek. 在我十岁那年我和家人经历了一次奇妙旅行。ItookafantastictripwithmyfamilywhenIwastenyearsold.第10页二、谓语动词

汉语：无动词或多动词

英语：单动词e.g.我妈妈很漂亮。Mymotherispretty.

我们又唱又跳。Wesanganddanced.

我们邀请他们到上海来玩。WeinvitedthemtocometoShanghaiforavisit.

你上课经常缺席所以我想要提醒你。

YouareoftenabsentfromclasssoIwanttoremindyou.

第11页三、主语

e.g.活到老，学到老。

Oneisnevertoooldtolearn.极难说谁对谁错。It’shardtotellwhoisrightandwhoiswrong.

昨天找到了丢失钢笔。Thelostpenwasfoundyesterday.上饭店吃饭很贵。 It’sexpensivetoeatout.

乘飞机旅行更舒适、便捷。Travellingbyplaneisfasterandmoreconvenient.第12页四、定语汉：经常是前置定语英：前置和后置定语e.g.我们学校全部学生allthestudentsinourschool

左边数第五个男孩thefifthboyfromtheleft

英国人日常生活everydaylivesoftheBritish

在中国骑车人数thenumberofcyclistsinChina几个气体混合物amixtureofseveralgases

介词短语作后置定语第13页三到六岁孩子Childrenfrom3to6yearsofage隔壁音像店themusicstorenextdoor用英语写信theletter(s)inEnglish晚上最晚一班返回公交车thelastbusbackintheevening城市生活嘈杂、脏乱thenoiseanddirtofcitylife第14页玩/放松时间timetoplay/relax当一个音乐家计划planstobeamusician出国学习机会thechancetostudyabroad供人坐着休息平静场所aquietplaceforpeopletositin/rest找到任何一个能够问询人findanyonetoask动词不定式作后置定语第15页城市用水waterusedbycities不乱扔垃圾习惯thehabitofnotthrowingawayrubbish我曾经生活村庄thevillagewhereIstayed/lived我昨晚吃某样东西somethingIatelastnight到月球去宇航员astronautswhotraveledtothemoon孩子们喜欢吃食物food(which)childrenlike分词、定语从句等作后置定语第16页Writingtips:时态一致必须注意所用时态符合上下文。假如用过去时叙述一个故事，就要确保通篇都用过去时，不要在作文中间变成现在时。一样，假如是在谈论普遍问题、现实状况或日常习惯，就要用现在时，而不要用过去时。e.g.YesterdayIdidmyhomework.Ittakesmethreehours.Hisfatherthoughtheisgoodatmath.Shestartedhernewjoblastweek.Shelikedit.Wedidn’tgototheparty.Wearen’tinvited.tookwaslikesweren’t第17页Writingtips:2.主语一致应该保持全文人称一致，这么读者才能跟随一个逻辑思维次序。不然读者会感到迷惑。e.g.Althoughyoumayfailtheexam,hecanstillbeusefultothecountry.

Itnotonlyprovidesyouwithlotsofknowledgebutalsodevelopshisinterests.youyour第18页Writingtips:3.主谓一致/人称一致确保语法正确。e.g.ThingsIhatetodoisdoinghomework.WhatIhatetodois…EverypeoplestarttolearnEnglish.EverypersonstartstolearnEnglish.Theactivitiescanrelaxourselves.Theactivitiescanhelpusrelaxourselves./Wecanrelaxourselvesbytakingpartintheactivities.第19页Writingtips:4.词序/语序它能够帮助准确表示作者本意并并防止意义含糊不清。注意要让句子尽可能保持英语表示习惯。e.g.Ialreadyhavehadlunch.ShewithhermumtraveledtoItaly.

Ialwaysbethewinnerofthepianocontest.InChina,heknewtherewerebigfloods.IjustwonderwhatdoesmyfuturelikeandwhatshouldIdo.havealreadyShetraveledtoItalywithhermum.amalwaysHeknewtherewerebigfloodsinChina.IjustwonderwhatmyfatherlikesandwhatIshoulddo.第20页Writingtips:5.并列句用并列句能使文章更生动流畅，它包含两个独立分句和一个连词，如：and,but,or,so等。e.g.Theyknowwhatisbetterandtheyarealwaysright.Itwascrowded.Wewereabletoseehim.Itwascrowdedbutwewereabletoseehim.Sheisatopstudent.Sheisatalentedmusician.Sheisatopstudentandatalentedmusician.Thoughhedoesn’thavemuchmoney,buthisheartisfulloflove.

两个分句不要重复同一个单词。每个分句都必须有一个动词；每两个分句组成句子只能使用一个连词。第21页Writingtips:6.复合句。它包含一个主句和一个从句，由when,after,if等连词或who,which等关系代词引导。e.g.She

was

very

old.

She

couldn't

stand

on

the

bus

easily.

Shewassooldthatshecouldn’tstandonthebuseasily.Theresultwasnotthemostimportantthingforme.Theresultwouldbeknownawholemonthlater.Theresult,whichwouldbeknownawholemonthlater,wasnotthemostimportantthingforme.第22页Writingtips:7.防止词重复。e.g.Allinall,wehadawonderfultrip.WetravelledacrossSydney,CanberraandMelbourne.WesawthebeautifulcoastofQueensland.WetouredallofPerth.WehadagreatvisitwithDan.Perhapswewillgoagainnextwinter.第23页Usefulsentences:Sayingsandproverbs:Onself-help:Pridegoesbeforeafall骄者必败.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好开端是成功二分之一。Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功第一步。Custommakesallthingseasy.有个好习惯，事事皆不难。Greathopesmakegreatman.伟大理想造就伟大人物。第24页Usefulsentences:Honestyisthebestpolicy.做人诚信为本。Hopeforthebest,butpreparefortheworst.抱最好愿望，做最坏打算。Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事，只要肯登攀。Ifathingisworthdoing,it’sworthdoingwell.值得做是就值得做好。Wherethereislife,thereishope.生活充满了希望。/留得青山在，不怕没柴烧第25页Usefulsentences:Onhealth: Aclosemouthcatchesnoflies.病从口入。 Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果，不用请医生。 Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身体好。Onmotherhood: Amother'sloveneverchanges.母爱永恒。第26页Usefulsentences:Onfriendship: Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.得朋友难，失朋友易。 Afriendisneverknowntillamanhasneed.需要之时方知友。Onreading: Agoodbookisthebestoffriends,thesametodayandforever.一本好书，相伴一生。 Byreadingweenrichthemind,byconversationwepolishit.读书使人充实，交谈使人精明。 Chooseanauthorasyouchooseafriend.择书如择友。第27页Usefulsentences:Onentertainment: AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。Onlife: Weknownotwhatisgooduntilwehavelostit.好东西，失去了才明白。 Varietyisthespiceoflife.丰富多彩是生活调味品。 Lifeisjustlikeabowlofcherries.生活如同一盘樱桃。 Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.生活没有目标等于航行没有指南针。 Pleasanthoursflypast.高兴时光去如飞。第28页注意点：一、仔细审题，明确要求。二、主题明确，语言表示完整正确。三、重视字词利用和句子组织结构。四、防止无谓失分。（书写不规范，字迹潦草，忽略大小写等）第29页Romewasn’tbuiltinaday!Practicemakesperfect!第30页Usefulsentencepatterns:在各种…之中…Amongvariouskind