高考英语应用文写作表达微技能（全国）07祝贺信

07祝贺信(2008年，全国卷I）假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：自我介绍；祝贺苏琳生日；感谢工作人员；索取苏琳三岁生日照。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【参考范文】DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChian!I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.I’vebeenapandaloversinceIwasachild.AboutthreeyearsagoIwasdelightedtolearnthatBaiyungavebirthtoherdaughterSulinandI’vebeenwatchinghergrowonyourwebsite.Nowshe’sgoingtobethere.I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS.Bytheway,couldIhaveaphotoofSulintakenonherthirdbirthday?Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua【范文点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：1.自我介绍；2.信息来源；3.祝贺生日；4.感谢照顾；5.索取照片；6.合适的结尾。这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文要活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，注意结合简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹。亮点词汇：.delightedadj.欣喜的，快乐的2.expressv.表达3.givebirthtov.产生，生育亮点句式：I’dliketowishherahaybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahayandhealthylifeintheUS.我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。评析：定语从句的使用。开头常用句式Itwasexcitingnewsformetolearnof…Pleaseacceptmysincere/hearty/warmcongratulationson…Itwasagreatpleasuretosendyoumycongratulationson…Iwasdelightedtolearnofyoursuccess/achievementsin…Iamreallyhappytolearnthatyouhavebeenelected…结尾常用句式Wishyougoodluck!Wewishtoshareyourhonorandjoy.Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead.Mayallgowonderfullyinyournewpost!Mayeveryhappinessbeyours!Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer!Mayeachsucceedingyearbringyougreathappinessandprosperity.Everygoodwishtoyouformuchhealth,happiness,andprosperity!模板①Dear______,Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______（祝贺事由）.Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______.Youmustbe______.AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.______（所取得的成绩）isquiteexcitingnews!Iknowthisissurelyowingto______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______（被祝贺人的优点）.Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou______（咨询对方何时有空）.Ihope______（表达自己的愿望）.Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_____________,Goodnewstravelsfast!Itwasdelightfulformetohearthat______________.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationstoyour___________.Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehowmucheffortyouhaveputin.Nowyouprovetomeamaturedandwell-rounded________ineveryrespect.Judgingfromyourcurrentsuccess/achievement,Iamconfidentthatinthefuture___________.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yourssincerely,LiHua模板③Dear_____________,Congratulationsonyour_______.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Iunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardwork/yourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Thisnewposition,ontheotherhand,addsanewdimensiontoyourlifeandisboundto________.What’smore,Ialsobelievethat.Mayallgoesbeautifullyinyournewpost!Yourssincerely,LiHua日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。祝贺信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺；围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；表达美好祝福。祝贺信写作分三步走:说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->再次表达良好祝愿。在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。Dear_______,(1)Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______.(2)Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson____.(3)Youmustbeveryproudofyour______.(4)AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.(5)_____isquiteexcitingnews!(6)Youarereally__.(7)Iknowthisissurelyowingto___.(8)Itisarewardyoudeserveforyour__.(9)Withyour_____,Iamsurethatyouwillbeasuccessinwhateveryouundertake.(10)Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou____.(11)Ihope.(12)Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.SincerelyYours,LiHua(1)获悉值得祝贺的消息，说出祝贺事由(2)表达祝贺(3)描述对方的心情(4)表达自己的心情(5)被祝贺人所取得的成绩(6)对对方的赞美(7)对方取得成绩的原因(8)对对方取得成绩的肯定，说出被祝贺人的优点(9)被祝贺人的优秀品质，表达对对方的祝福(10)咨询对方的情况和时间(11)表达愿望(12)表达自己真诚的祝福1．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Mary来信告诉你，她已经被她的理想大学录取。请你给她写一封回信表示祝贺，并就自己在学习生活中的困惑向她寻求帮助。内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.寻求帮助。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMary,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua2．假定你是学校音乐俱乐部的负责人李华，上周俱乐部举行了一场留学生（internationalstudents）乐器比赛，请为本周三的颁奖仪式写一篇英文发言稿。内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.回顾比赛；3.你的期望。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是高三学生李华，最近收到了你的英国朋友Peter的来信，得知他从剑桥大学（theUniversityofCambridge）顺利毕业。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.向Peter表示祝贺；2.谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑；3.向对方征求意见或建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给，不计入词数。DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua4．假定你是李华，你从网上得知你的英国好友Allen在家乡举办的歌唱比赛中获得一等奖，请你给他写一封信，对他表示祝贺。内容包括：1.祝贺获奖2.肯定其付出的努力3.祝愿其取得更大的成功。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAllen,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua5．假定你是李华，得知你的英国朋友John刚被北京大学中文系录取。请你写封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.询问有效学习外语的方法。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJohn,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．假定你是李华，你校举办了一场有关建党102周年的英语演讲比赛，你的朋友Amy获得了第一名，请你给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括：1.表达祝贺；2.肯定她的演讲；3.希望她能够分享提高英语口语的方法。参考词汇：建党102周年the102ndanniversaryceremonyoftheCommunistPartyofChina注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearAmy,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua7．假如你是晨光中学的李华，你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：1．表示感谢并问候;2．计划与家人一起做的事情;3．你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。注意：1．词数不少于80;2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是高中生李华。为了庆祝国庆七十二周年、你市举办了“中华之美”中文演讲比赛，你校交换生Ryan在本次大赛中获得了第一名。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.评论与赞赏；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李华，你的好友Mary在我校最近举办的英语单词大赛(EnglishVocabularyCompetition)中获得了第一名的好成绩，给了你重要的人生启迪。请写信向她表示祝贺。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMary,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter不仅学业成绩优秀，而且担任国际部学生会主席一职。本学期他荣获“校园卓越奖”(SchoolExcellenceAward)。请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。要点如下：1.表示祝贺；2.赞扬对方的优秀表现（学业、履职等）。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，请你写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1、向他表示祝贺；2、你认为他获奖原因；3、请教参赛经验。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua12．假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(ChineseTraditionalCultureContest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.回顾他的付出和努力；3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearPeter,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua13．假定你是李华。你的英国留学生朋友Mike写信告诉你，他被邀请参加由CCTV举办的中国诗词大会比赛，希望你就赛前准备给他提供一些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1、祝贺他受到邀请；2、提出赛前准备建议；3、愿意提供帮助并表达祝愿。注意：1、100词左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua14．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国好友Jim来信说他收到理想大学的面试通知，他有些紧张。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.

表示祝贺并给予安慰；2.

提供建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。高中毕业在即，你的英国朋友Jenny通过电子邮件和你分享了她的高中生活感受。现在请你给她回信，介绍以下内容：(1)祝贺Jenny顺利毕业；(2)分享自己高中三年最大的收获，以及最想感谢的人和原因；(3)简单谈谈自己将来的理想。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJenny,I’msogladtohearfromyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiJin参考答案1．DearMary,Knowingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoyourdreamuniversity,I’msohappythatIcan’twaittoofferyoumyheartfeltcongratulations.Meanwhile,Iwouldliketoaskyouforhelp.First,Ihavetroublegettingalongwithmyclassmates.Forexample,whentheyarechatting,Iwanttojointhembutfinditdifficulttotrulyunderstandtheirjokes.Moreover,Ifindmyschoollifehereisnotaseasyasthatinmyoldschool.WehavealotofhomeworkandmostofthemareinEnglish,soIhavetolookupnewwordsindictionaryallthetime.Ifeelupsetaboutmylifehere.Canyouhelpmeout?Congratulationsagainandbestwishesforyourbrightfuture.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的信件。要求考生给外国朋友Mary回信，祝贺她考上了理想大学同时就自己在学习中遇到的问题向其求助。【写作分析】1.词汇积累高兴的：happy→delighted/joyful与此同时：meanwhile→atthesametime做某事有困难：havetroubledoing→havedifficultydoing沮丧：upset→depressed/blue2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First,Ihavetroublegettingalongwithmyclassmates.拓展句：WhatcomesfirstisthatIhavetroublegettingalongwithmyclassmates.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoyourdreamuniversity,I’msohappythatIcan’twaittoofferyoumyheartfeltcongratulations.（运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句和tha引导的结果状语从句）【高分句型2】Forexample,whentheyarechatting,Iwanttojointhembutfinditdifficulttotrulyunderstandtheirjokes.（运用了when引导的状语从句和it做形式宾语）2．Dearfriends,

I’mLiHua.I’mhonoredtobeheretoextendawarmwelcometoyouonbehalfofourMusioClub.

Firstofall,let’scongratulatetheinternationalstudentinstrumentcompetitiononitssuccessfulconclusionandwarmlycongratulatetheaward-winningcontestants.Duringtheoneweekcompetition,internationalstudentsactivelysigneduptoparticipateanddemonstratedahighlevelofmusicproficiency.Inaddition,notonlydidtheparticipatingstudentsbroadentheirhorizonsbutalsotheymademanylike-mindedfriends.

Ihopethatinthefuture,theschoolcanholdmoresuchactivitiestoenrichourcampuslife.Wishyouanunforgettabletimehere!Thankyou.

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LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为本周三的留学生乐器比赛颁奖仪式写一篇英文发言稿。【写作分析】1.词汇积累荣幸的：honored→privileged表示：extend→express难忘的：unforgettable→memorable另外：inaddition→what’smore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstofall,let’scongratulatetheinternationalstudentinstrumentcompetitiononitssuccessfulconclusionandwarmlycongratulatetheaward-winningcontestants.拓展句：Firstofall,let’scongratulatetheinternationalstudentinstrumentcompetitiononitssuccessfulconclusionandwarmlycongratulatethecontestantswhohaswonawards.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Inaddition,notonlydidtheparticipatingstudentsbroadentheirhorizonsbutalsotheymademanylike-mindedfriends.(运用了部分倒装句)[高分句型2]Ihopethatinthefuture,theschoolcanholdmoresuchactivitiestoenrichourcampuslife.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)3．DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mgladtoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’vegraduatedfromtheUniversityofCambridge.I’mwritingtooffermywarmestcongratulations.Iamnowintheprocessofuniversityapplication,strugglingwithwhichmajortochoose.I’masciencestudentnow,soIamsupposedtochooseamajorrelatedtoscienceandengineering.ButtheproblemiswhetherIshouldpursuemyinterestorjustensuremeagoodfuturejob.Doyouhaveanysuggestionsonthechoiceofamajor?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YourssincerelyLiHua【写作指导】本文是应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写一封，对他从剑桥大学顺利毕业表示祝贺，并询问关于大学专业选择上的建议。【写作分析】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→happy收到你的来信：receiveyourletter→hearfromyou在做某事上有困难：strugglewith→havetroubleindoingsth.和…有关：relatedto→relevantto2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：I’masciencestudentnow,soIamsupposedtochooseamajorrelatedtoscienceandengineering.拓展句：I’masciencestudentnow,soIamsupposedtochooseamajorthatisrelatedtoscienceandengineering.【典型句式】【高分句型1】I’mgladtoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’vegraduatedfromtheUniversityofCambridge.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】ButtheproblemiswhetherIshouldpursuemyinterestorjustensuremeagoodfuturejob.（由whether引导的表语从句）4．DearAllen,I’velearnedfromtheInternetwithdelightthatyouwonthefirstprizeinthesingingcompetitionheldinyourhometown.I’mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulations.AsfarasIknow,youhavethetalentformusic.Inyoursparetimeyoupracticedalotandalwayslearnedfromothersmodestly.Inmyopinion,itwastheeffortsthatyoumadethatledtoyourachievement.Soitisarewardthatyoudeserveforyourperseveranceandindustry.Pleaseacceptmyheartycongratulationsagainandwishyoufurthersuccessinthefuther.Yoursincerely,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。由于英国好友Allen在家乡举办的歌唱比赛中获得一等奖，因此要求考生给英国朋友Allen写一封祝贺信。【写作分析】1.词汇积累比赛：competition→match我认为：inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned成就：achievement→accomplishment真挚的：hearty→sincere2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulations.拓展句：I’mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulationsonwhatyouhavegained.【典型句式】【高分句型1】I’velearnedfromtheInternetwithdelightthatyouwonthefirstprizeinthesingingcompetitionheldinyourhometown.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Soitisarewardthatyoudeserveforyourperseveranceandindustry.（运用了强调句的结构）5．Onepossibleversion:DearJohn,IamwritingtoconveymyheartfeltcongratulationsonyouradmissiontoPekingUniversity.KnowingthatyouhavebeenstudyingChineseforyears,weconsideritarewardyoureallydeserve.Thisisanewstartandagoodchanceforyoutolearnfromthegreatminds.Besides,witnessingyourterrificachievement,IwouldliketoaskyouforyouradviceonhowtostudyEnglisheffectively.Wouldyoubesokindastoshareitwithme?Congratulateyouagainonyoursuccess.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给被北京大学中文系录取的英国朋友John写祝贺的邮件，需表示祝贺，并询问有效学习外语的方法。【写作分析】1.词汇积累表达：convey→express,voice诚挚的：heartfelt→sincere,genuine机会：chance→opportunity此外：besides→inaddition,additionally,moreover了不起的：terrific→wonderful,marvelous,superb有效地：effectively→effectually,efficaciously2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thisisanewstartandagoodchanceforyoutolearnfromthegreatminds.拓展句：Thisisanewstart,whichisagoodchanceforyoutolearnfromthegreatminds.【典型句式】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyouhavebeenstudyingChineseforyears,weconsideritarewardyoureallydeserve.(运用了现在分词短语Knowing…作状语、连接词that引导宾语从句、关系代词that/which引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词reward并被省略)[高分句型2]Besides,witnessingyourterrificachievement,IwouldliketoaskyouforyouradviceonhowtostudyEnglisheffectively.(运用了现在分词短语witnessing…作状语)6．DearAmy,I’mLiHua.I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmycongratulationstoyouforwinningthefirstprizeintheEnglishContestofthe102ndanniversaryceremonyoftheCommunistPartyofChina.Yourperformancewasperfect,especiallyyourexcellentspokenEnglish,whichhasleftadeepimpressiononalltheteachersandstudentspresent.Besides,whatsurprisedusmostwasthatyouweresoconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.Tobehonest,youareaheroinmyheart,andIwouldliketotakethischancetolearnfromyou.IwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsharewithmesomemethodsofimprovingoralEnglish.Allinall,nowordscanexpressmycongratulations.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校举办了一场有关建党102周年的英语演讲比赛，你的朋友Amy获得了第一名，请你给她写一封祝贺信。【写作分析】1.词汇积累表达：express→convey说实话：Tobehonest→Honestly此外：besides→inaddition勇敢的：brave→courageous2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Tobehonest,youareaheroinmyheart,andIwouldliketotakethischancetolearnfromyou.拓展句：Tobehonest,youareaheroinmyheart,whomIwouldliketotakethischancetolearnfrom.【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmycongratulationstoyouforwinningthefirstprizeintheEnglishContestofthe102ndanniversaryceremonyoftheCommunistPartyofChina.(运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2]Besides,whatsurprisedusmostwasthatyouweresoconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.(运用了what引导主语从句)7．DearNancy,IamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.I’mgoingtoTian’anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatWall.Inaddition,IwanttogotoOinghuaGardentoenjoytheelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecidedtoregisterforthecomputermajor.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.Beforechoosing,Iplantoconsultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.Onlywithaclearlearninggoal,canIstudyinatargetedway,whichwillbemoreefficient.Yours,【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，感谢游学期间你的住宿家庭Chris的妈妈，回复她祝贺你顺利高中毕业的邮件，并告知她你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。内容包括：1．表示感谢并问候；2．计划与家人一起做的事情；3．你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。【写作分析】1.词汇积累感恩的：grateful→thankful除此以外：inaddition→what’smore加入，参加：join→involveoneselfin游北京：traveltoBeijing→payavisittoBeijing2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Beforechoosing,Iplantoconsultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.拓展句：BeforeIchoose,Iplantoconsultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.【典型句式】【高分句型1】NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.（运用了nowthat引导原因状语从句）【高分句型2】Onlywithaclearlearninggoal,canIstudyinatargetedway,whichwillbemoreefficient.（运用了only+状语置于句首，部分倒装句型，运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）8．DearRyan,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtoexpressmycongratulationstoyouforwinningthefirstprizeintheChinesespeechcontestofthe72ndanniversaryofNationalDay.Yourperformanceisperfect,especiallyyourexcellentspokenChinese,whichgivesalltheteachersandstudentsadeepimpression.Besides,whatsurprisesusmostisthatyouareconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.Tobehonest,youareasuperstarinmyheart,andIwouldliketotakethischancetolearnfromyou.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Ryan写一封邮件，祝贺其在国庆七十二周年“中华之美”中文演讲比赛中获得了第一名，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.评论与赞赏；3.表达祝愿。【写作分析】1.词汇积累表达：express→convey勇敢的：brave→courageous说实话：tobehonest→honestlyspeaking机会：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Besides,whatsurprisesusmostisthatyouareconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.拓展句：Besides,itsurprisesusmostthatyouareconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Yourperformanceisperfect,especiallyyourexcellentspokenChinese,whichgivesalltheteachersandstudentsadeepimpression.（运用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句）[高分句型2]Besides,whatsurprisesusmostisthatyouareconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句的省略句）9．DearPeter,CongratulationsonyourwinningfirstplaceintheEnglishWordContestheldbyourschoolrecently.Youdeservethehonor.ThepastyearshaveseenyourrapidprogressinEnglishlearningthroughyourgreatefforts.Tobehonest,whatIadmiremostisyourdiligenceanddetermination.It’sfromyouthatIhavelearnedsomethingvaluable,thatis,“Nopains,nogains.”Therefore,Iwouldliketoexpressmysincerethankstoyouforwhatyouhavetaughtme.Wishyougreaterachievementsinyourstudies!Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信向在英语单词大赛中获得第一名的好友表示祝贺。【写作分析】1.词汇积累最近：recently→lately宝贵的：valuable→precious真诚的：sincere→genuine迅速的：rapid→fast/quick/swift2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：CongratulationsonyourwinningfirstplaceintheEnglishWordContestheldbyourschoolrecently.Youdeservethehonor.拓展句：CongratulationsonyourwinningfirstplacewhichyoudeserveintheEnglishWordContestheldbyourschoolrecently.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Tobehonest,whatIadmiremostisyourdiligenceanddetermination.（运用了what引导的主语从句）【高分句型2】It’sfromyouthatIhavelearnedsomethingvaluable,thatis,“Nopains,nogains.”（运用了Itis…that结