应用文写作：观点表达+京华时报-2025届高三英语二轮复习

假如你是李华。在口语课上，外教Alex组织同学们讨论是否使用网络投票(onlinevoting)的方式评选校园十佳歌手。请你代表小组发言，内容包括：小组观点；陈述理由。观点表达类写作的难点一般有两个：1提出明确的观点2陈述理由来支撑观点在本次写作任务中，考生可以对网络投票(onlinevoting)评选校园十佳歌手的方式持支持或者反对两种观点。无论选取哪一种，陈述合理的理由都是必须的。写作中一定要先做出明确的正反观点选择模棱两可的观点表达是明显不合适的。和批判性利弊分析描述不是一回事。Ladiesandgentlemen,Today,Iwouldliketopresentourgroup’sopiniononusingonlinevotingtoselectthetoptensingersoncampus.Wesupportthisideaforseveralreasons.Firstly,onlinevotingisconvenientandaccessible.Studentscanvoteanytimeandanywhere,whichencourageshigherparticipation.Secondly,itensurestransparencyandfairness,astheresultsareautomaticallycalculated,reducingthechanceofhumanerrororbias.Lastly,itpromotesengagementandexcitementamongstudents,astheycanactivelyparticipateinthedecision-makingprocess.Inconclusion,adoptingonlinevotingforselectingourtoptensingerswillnotonlymaketheprocessmoreefficientbutalsomoreinclusiveandfair.Thankyou.支持立场三点主要理由：网络的便捷性（convenientandaccessible）透明公正性（transparencyandfairness）学生的广泛参与度（engagementandexcitement）词汇和表达积累presentv.呈现，表达accessibleadj.可访问的，易接近的encouragehigherparticipation鼓励更高的参与度ensurev.确保transparencyn.透明度humanerror人为错误biasn.偏见inclusiveadj.包容的Ladiesandgentlemen,Today,Iwouldliketoshareourgroup’sopiniononusingonlinevotingtoselectthetoptensingersoncampus.Weallopposethisideaforseveralreasons.Firstly,onlinevotingcanbehardforsomestudentswhodon'thavegoodinternetaccessorarenotgoodwithtechnology.Thismightstopeveryonefromvoting.Secondly,itmaynotbefairandclear,asthesystemcouldbehackedorcheated,causingmistakesandunfairresults.Lastly,itmighttakeawaythefunandinvolvementoftraditionalvoting,wherestudentsmeetandvoteinperson,makingitmorelivelyandsocial.Inconclusion,notusingonlinevotingtochooseourtoptensingerswillhelpkeeptheprocesshonest,fair,andopentoeveryone.Thankyou.对网络投票持反对立场：1有同学上不了网（don'thavegoodinternetaccess）2网络投票系统可能会出问题（systemcouldbehackedorcheated）3网络投票缺乏传统现场投票的乐趣性和社交性（funandinvolvement/livelyandsocial）文章结构P1:交代背景（代表小组+发表讨论结果）P2：陈述理由逻辑词1+好处1+原因1逻辑词2+好处2+原因2逻辑词3+好处3+原因3P3:总结陈词+重申观点P1:交代背景（代表小组+发表讨论结果）lwaystovotetoselectthetoptencampussingers选择校园十佳歌手的投票方式lcollectivelysupports集体支持ladoptonlinevoting采用在线投票1.我们小组认为线上投票是一个非常棒的想法去选出校园十佳歌手Ourgroupbelievesthatonlinevotingisafantasticideatoselectthetoptencampussingers.2.在我们小组讨论如何投票选出十佳校园歌手时，我们小组一致支持我们应该采用网上投票的方式。Inourgroupdiscussionaboutthewaystovotetoselectthetoptencampussingers,ourgroupcollectivelysupportstheideathatweshouldadoptonlinevoting.P2:陈述理由逻辑词一组：firstly,secondly,thirdly....逻辑词二组：1.Tostartwith,2.Inaddition/additionally/furthermore/moreover3.Plus/lastbutnotleast,4.总结：Allinall/Overall/Inconclusion逻辑词三组1.Ourprimaryreasonis...(注意+n.)/Firstoff,2.Furthermore,whatisworthnotingisthat..../Equallyimportantis....3.Anotherimportantaspectis....4.最后一段总结：Towrapup,/Inanutshell,电子投票的好处？(角度可以从不同人着手)1.对学生的好处？----随时随地投票2.对计票人的好处？---简单方便，实时查看结果3.对参赛者的好处？---公平公正，公开透明fitwellwithhowweusetechnologytoday与我们今天使用技术的方式非常契合makethingsmoreaccessible使事情变得更容易获取votefromanywhereatanytime随时随地投票seethevotingresultsrightaway立即看到投票结果significantlyenhancetheexperienceforeveryoneinvolved显著提升每个参与者的体验ensureabroaderrepresentationofopinions确保更广泛的意见代表性resultscanbetrackedandexaminedinrealtime结果可以实时跟踪和检查clearandfair清晰且公平convenient,efficientandenvironmentallyfriendly方便、高效且环保inclusive,efficient,andengaging包容性、高效性和吸引力efficiencyandtransparency高效与透明度currenttechnologicaltrends当前技术趋势accessibilityandconvenience可访问性和便利性reducetheneedforpaperballots减少对纸质选票的需求manualcounting手工计数fortheentirestudentbody针对所有学生你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.1.词汇积累越来越：moreandmore→increasingly重视：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的：key→significant此外：what’smore→furthermore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.【点睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(运用了部分倒装结构)[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主语从句)[常用词语]moreimportantly更重要的是amconcerned依我看lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的tostartwith/firstofall首先comparedwith.......相比较asasayinggoes俗话说frommypointofview/inmyview/asfarasIasweallknow/asisknowntous众所周知假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼thecoming-ofageceremony新冠脑炎COVID-F9DearChris,Iamsogladtohearfromyou.Thecoming-of-ageceremonywasheldinourschoolonJune8ththismonth.Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.Afterthat,weallwatchedthevideoofalumnusfightingagainsttheepidemic.Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.Inthefuture,Iwillbeagooddoctortohealthewoundedandrescuethedying,devotingmyselftomywork.Bestwishes！Yours,LiJin为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数120左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern.脾气，情绪HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowt