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托福top6写作范文第一篇托福top6写作范文第一篇Itseemsthatpeoplealwayshaveadesiretocompare:amIprettierthanothers?Arewelivinginabetterage?Or,asthequestiongoes,isourlifeeasierandmoreenjoyablethanitwasseveraldecadesago?Iwouldsayno,asIhavewitnessedthestruggleandparadoxofourgeneration.

Firstofall,wearenowlivinginanageofrevolutionwithnoprevioushumanexperiencethatcouldbereferredto.Livinginsuchafastchangingworldwouldnotbeeasyandcomfortableatall;witheverythingkeepschanging,everyonehastomovefastinordertocatchupwiththemajority.However,peopleweremuchmorestableandcarefreewhenourgrandparentswerechildren;theydidnothavetolearnasecondlanguageinordertogetabetterjob,orreadalotinordertogetinformed.Yetinourage,thesearesupposedtobetheresponsibilityofyoungpeople.

Anotherdiscomfortofourageisthatweareexperiencinginterpersonalalienation.Withthedevelopmentofcommunicationtechnology,peopleinfactbecomealienatedwithfriendsandrelativessincetheycouldbesoeasilyaccessedviaphoneoremail.Toooftenwefeelthatfewofourfriendsaretruefriends,withoutthetraditionalfeelingofmutualaffectionwhichcouldonlybecreatedbylongtimeapart.Butseveraldecadesago,peopletreasuredtheirfriendsandmaintainedrelativelycloseinterpersonalrelations,whichismuchmoreenjoyablethantheestrangementsweareexperiencing.

Thelastfactorthathasmadeouragesouncomfortableistheabusiveuseoftechnology.Althoughitbringsmuchconvenience,itessentiallychangeshumanwearenolongerthemasteroftools,butinsteadtheslavesofdevices.Werushtometrostationinordertocatchanearlytrain,sitinfrontofradioactivecomputersalldaylonginordertogetourworkdone,andstayinairconditionedroomsallsummerwithoutexperiencingthenaturalchangesoutsidethickcementwalls.Severaldecadesago,peoplecouldstillliveclosertonatureandmakerationaluseofmoderntechnology,whichtomeistheessenceofhumanlivingexperience.

However,thecomparisonbetweendifferenttimesisitselfridiculous.Thecriteriacouldnotbeeasilydetermined,andopinionsarehighlypersonal.Anyway,wehavealongerlifespan,moreadvancedmedicalfacilities,andeasiertrafficthanourgrandparentwhentheywerechildren,andweshouldtreasurethepresentexperience.ImaginationofthepastmightonlybenostalgiaifIaskmygrandparentsthesamequestion,theymightaswellsaythatourlifeismuchbetterthanthepastgenerations.Whoknows?Aslongastheworldisstillpeaceful,lifeatanytimewouldnotbecometoodifficulttohandle.

托福top6写作范文第二篇托福t屠格卡是一个高智商智商人的一个杰作,他在英国的一家名叫“阿尔卑斯”的企业做过一个生意。

托福的企业在一家企业的领导下,在一家公司的领导之下,在两家公司里的领导之下,经营着一个小型的商品,其实就是一个小型的公司,但是,这个公司里的每位成员和每一个成员都有自己的一个家庭,他们的家庭分布在两边各大企业的各个领域。而每一个公司的主要职位都与每一个职位有着同样的定位,每个职位都有自己的优点,每个职位的优点都在于他们的职位。每一个职位的定位都有自己的价值,每个人的定位都有自己的风格。

但是,在这样的定位的背景下,每一个职位的确是不同的。在这个小型的公司里,每一个成员都在为自己的工作和生活负重前行,而每一个职位都不是他们自己生活的目标,每一个职位都有自己的价值,每一个职位的定位都有自己的方向,所以,每一个职位都是有它自己的优点和缺点的。

托福的人生,也是有自己特点的。托福的成功就是自己的价值。

托福top6写作范文第三篇1、逻辑结构

全文遵从总分结构,开头段直接一句话总结逻辑,开始讨论。

2、语言表达

本文用词准确,用了一些新单词增添色彩,其中可以借鉴的词句有:

1.Address:演绎,演说

/lecture/

Pleaseaddressallenquirestothisoffice.

2.Malicious:恶意

/vicious/

Thefamousactorwassurroundedbymaliciousgossips.

3.Genuine:真实的

/Authentic/

Agenuinefriendwillnotleaveyouwhenyouareintrouble.

托福top6写作范文第四篇Paragraph1

Thelectureraddresseseachofthethreecriticismsofcommunalonlineencyclopediasmentionedinthereadingpassage.

此段功能:

(Listeningpassage后文提到用L代替)

(Readingpassage后文用R代替)

此段结构:

开头段实在非常简单的说出L是持解释态度,解释的内容,为论段做好了铺垫。

Paragraph2

Thelectureradmitsthatcommunalonlineencyclopedias,likeanyreferencebook,maycontainerrors,butshethenclaimsthattheseerrorscanbecorrectedmuchmoreeasilyandquicklythanthoseprintedinaphysicalencyclopedia.Thereadingpassage,incontrast,pointstotheinaccuracyofinformationinonlineencyclopedias,presentingtheargumentthaterrorsintheseresourcesareduetoalackofprofessionalknowledgeamongcontributors.

此段功能:

托福top6写作范文第五篇Comparedwiththepastseveraldecades,currentlifestylehaschangedalotduetothedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.Despitesomepeoplemayarguethatitalsoleadstosomenegativeeffects,suchasenvironmentalpollutionormorepressure,yet,inmyopinion,lifetodayisstillmorecomfortableandeasierthanthepast,sinceitbringsmoreprosthanconsinthefollowingaspects.

Firstly,Internetbringsmoreconveniencestoourlife,whichbreaksawayfromconventionalwaysindifferentfields.Foronething,peoplecancommunicatewitheachothermorefreely,insteadofmerelystickingtofacetofacetalkinreality.Itisnotonlybeneficialtokeepharmonyrelationshipwitheachotherbutalsoimprovetheefficiencyofcommunicationtosomedegree.Foranother,variouskindsofinformationandstuffonlinecontributetobuildingeasierandmoreconvenientlifestyle.Peoplecanobtainalmosteverythingtheywantonline,suchassearchingforinformation,studying,orshopping,whichleavesoutthetroubleofgoingoutsideandwalkingthroughthecrowd.

Additionally,theimprovementoftransportation,involvingmultiplekindsoftransportation,suchasbuses,trainsandevenairplanes,theynotonlyimproveefficiencyoftravel,whichsavesmuchmoretimewithinthesamedistance,butalsoameliorateservicemechanisminordertoprovidepassengersmorecomfortableenvironmentduringtheirtravel.Meanwhile,comparedwiththeperiodwhenourgrandparentswerechildren,lowerexpensesattractmorepeopletoenjoyadvantagesbroughtbycurrentrelativelywell-developedtransportation.

Admittedly,withtheincreaseoflifepace,peoplenowadaysarestrugglingfrommorepressureinordertopursuebetterphysicallifeastheyattachmoreimportancetotheirwork,andaccordinglyhavelesstimeaccompanywiththeir

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