读后续写+攀登胡德山：一次惊险的挑战 讲义 高三下学期4月联考试题（三模）英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onmyfirstsummervacationasajuniorhighschoolstudent,Iclimbedmyfirstmountain—afairlygentle3,900-footpeaknearwhereIliveinSurrey,BritishColumbia.IwasoverweightatthetimeandoutofbreathwhenIreachedthesummit.ButIlovedthechallengeofconqueringsomethingbiggerthanmyself.SoonIclimbednearly100peaks.MyparentswerehappyI’dfinallyfoundahobby.IoftenwentclimbingwithmyfriendMelOlsen,whomI’dmetinaFacebookgroup.LastDecember,I,togetherwithMel,cametoOregontotackle11,240-footMountHood.It’ssafertostartwinterclimbsatnightwhenthere’slessriskofthesunmeltingthesnowpack.Thatdaywestartedat3am,followingthepathsalongsidetheskiruns.Thetemperaturewasabout14°F,andweworelayerswecouldeasilyremove,knowingthesportswouldmakeuswarm.Alongtheway,wemettwootherclimbers,andthefourofuscontinuedontogether.Afteraboutfivehours,wereachedDevil’sKitchen,aplateau（高原）atabout10,000feet.Bythispoint,thewindwashowling.Myexposedskinfeltasthoughitwereburning.Theotherclimbersdecidedtoturnback,butMelandIwentahead.Wehadiceaxes,helmets,andcrampons（攀登钉鞋）.Wewereinhighspiritsandpreparedfortheclimb.Thetrailwefollowedgrewnarrowerandsteeper.Ataround9am,wereachedaflightoficestep.Itwasaboutthreeorfourfeettallandslopedata75-degreeangle.Ivolunteeredtogofirst.Iplacedmyleftfootontheicestep.ConfidentIwassafe,Iputmyfullweightonit.Suddenly,Iheardacrack,andawholeslaboficebrokeoffthestep,rightundermyfoot.Inaninstant,IfellbackwardbeforeImadeanyresponse.IcouldhearMelcallingmynameinatremblingvoiceasItumbleddown,bouncingofftherockface,androllingdownthemountainasifIwereacharacterinavideogame.Irememberthinking:Thisisit.You’redone.注意：1．续写词数应为150词左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Istuckoutmyarmsandlegshopelessly,grabbingatanything.__________________________________________________________AsMelmadeherwaydown,Iyelledforhelp,andotherclimberscametomyrescue.———————————————————————————文章大意：这篇文章讲述了作者在初中第一个暑假时开始爬山的经历。起初他只是尝试了一座3900英尺的小山，但很快他便爱上了这项挑战，并与朋友梅尔一起攀登了近100座山峰。去年12月，他们挑战了11240英尺的胡德山。在攀登过程中，作者不慎滑落，但在其他登山者的帮助下被救回。这次惊险的经历让他深刻体会到了登山的危险性和团队合作的重要性。伏笔和回应：伏笔：作者在文章开头提到自己“overweightatthetimeandoutofbreath”，这为后文他在攀登过程中体力不支和遇到危险埋下了伏笔。回应：在攀登胡德山时，作者的体力问题显现出来，当他滑落时，他“couldhearMelcallingmynameinatremblingvoice”，这显示了他在攀登过程中的脆弱和对朋友依赖。伏笔：文章中提到“myparentswerehappyI’dfinallyfoundahobby”，暗示了爬山对他来说是一种新发现的爱好，可能缺乏经验。回应：在攀登过程中，作者的缺乏经验导致了他的滑落，这与他刚开始爬山时的描述形成了呼应。伏笔：作者提到“thefourofuscontinuedontogether”，暗示了团队的力量和团结。回应：在作者滑落后，是团队成员和其他登山者的帮助使他得以获救，体现了团队合作的重要性。续写要点：第一段：背景介绍：回忆初次爬山的经历，强调对挑战的热爱。挑战升级：描述与朋友梅尔一起攀登胡德山的决定，突出这次攀登的难度和危险性。准备过程：提及他们为攀登所做的准备，包括装备和策略。遭遇困境：叙述在攀登过程中遇到的极端天气和艰难路况，为后续的意外埋下伏笔。第二段：意外发生：详细描述作者在攀登过程中的意外滑落，突出其突然性和危险性。心理活动：描写作者在滑落过程中的心理活动，包括恐惧和无助。救援行动：叙述梅尔和其他登山者如何迅速组织救援，展示团队合作的力量。反思与感悟：作者对这次经历的反思，认识到自己的不足和团队合作的重要性，以及对未来登山活动的重新规划。参考范文：Istuckoutmyarmsandlegshopelessly,grabbingatanything.

Iwasoverwhelmedwithfearandregret.IfonlyIhadbeenmorecareful!Iforcedmyselftocalmdown,pressingmyselfagainsttheslopetoslowdown.Fortunately,afewminuteslater,Icametoastoponashallowincline.Myclotheswereshredded,myhelmetwasbroken,andmyfacewasbloodiedfromcutsandscratches.Imadeanattempttostandupbutinvain.Unabletomoveaninchfurther,Ilayontheiceshiveringandinpain,waitingforrescue.AsMelmadeherwaydown,Iyelledforhelp,andotherclimberscametomyrescue.

Withthemrushingtowardme,Isighedwithreliefandtearsofexcitementblurredmyeyes.Theymadegreateffortstorelievemeofthesuffering.SomeofferedtosplintmylegandsomecalledPortlandMountainRescuewhileMelstayedbymyside,huggingmetightlytokeepmewarmerandlesspainful.SoexperiencedandcomfortingweretheythatIwasnolongerasfrightenedasbefore.Eventually,Iwassenttothehospital.Istayedforalongtime.However,onmyrecovery,withgreatercautionandbetterpreparationsIreturnedonthetrails.Onesliponamountaincanchangeeverythingbutneverstopsmefromdoingmyfavoritethingintheworld.

下水文1Istuckoutmyarmsandlegshopelessly,grabbingatanything.Miraculously,myrighthandmanagedtolatchontoasmallrockprotrusion.Thesuddenstopsentajoltofpainthroughmybody,butIwasrelievedtobemomentarilystable.Iclungtotherock,myheartpoundinginmychest,asIlookeduptoseeMel'shorrifiedfacepeeringovertheedgeaboveme.AsMelmadeherwaydown,Iyelledforhelp,andotherclimberscametomyrescue.Theysecuredaropearoundmeandcarefullypulledmebackuptothepath.Thereliefwasimmense,buttheordealwasfarfromover.Westillhadtodescendthemountain,whichwasnowevenmoredauntinggivenmyshakenstate.MelandIexchangedglances,bothknowingthatouradventurehadtakenaturnfortheworse,butalsogratefulforthesecondchancewehadbeengiven.下水文2Istuckoutmyarmsandlegshopelessly,grabbingatanything.Foramoment,Ifelttheterrifyingsensationoffreefall,butthenmyrighthandfoundasmallcreviceintheice.Itwasatenuousgrip,butitwa