读后续写+马背上的抉择：胜利与友谊的考验 讲义 高二下学期6月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Doyouthinkyoucanwinthiscompetition,Caroline?”MrsWinterbottomaskedherdaughter.“Idon'tknow,mum.ButIwilldomybest.”

“Iknow,mydear.Justrememberthatyourfatherpaysalotofmoneyforthehorse.Alotofmoneyforthestables(养马场).Andalotofmoneyfortheridingclub.”“Iknow,mum,Iknow.I'lldomybest.Ireallywill.”Carolinealwaysdidherbest,butitwasneverenough.Shewasagoodrider,andherhorseApplewindwasagreathorse.Andshenevermissedacompetition.ButSophieCraigwasalwaysbetterthanher.Sophiewonalloftheshowjumpingcompetitions,andSophie'shorseBlossomwaseverybody'sdarling.EveryonelovedSophieandBlossom.“Ifyoureallywanttowin,youwillwin”,Caroline'sdadsaid.Hesaidthesamethingbeforeeverycompetition.“Lifeisaboutwinning.Youhavetolearnthat,Caroline!”Carolinesighed.“Dad,”shesaid.“Iwanttowin,too.ButSophieistoogood.”“Youhavetobebetterthanher,”MrWinterbottomsaid.”Ifyoudon'twin,Caroline,I'llsellyourhorse.Notrophy(奖杯),nohorse!”Withthenextcompetitiondrawingnear,Carolinetrainedevenharder.“What'sthematter,Caroline?Youlookunhappy.”ItwasSophie,Caroline'sstrongrivalaswellasclosefriend.“Dadsaidthathe'llsellApplewindifIdon'twinthenextcompetition.”SophieknewclearlywhatthatwouldmeantoCaroline.Afterall,theysharedthesamehobby,andtheywentthroughmanycompetitionstogether.IfshehadtoquitridingandleaveBlossom,shecouldn'timagine,oreventhinkaboutsuchascene.PoorCaroline.PoorApplewind.“You’llwin,Caroline.Everythingwillbefine.”Sophiegaveherafirmhug.Thedayofthecompetitionsooncame.Carolineknewshewasgoingtoloseagain.AndthenherdadwouldsellApplewind.Carolinewantedtocry,butshehadtobebrave.“Areyounervous,too?”CarolinewhisperedintoApplewind'sear.“Wemustwinthecompetitiontoday.Let'sgoandgetready!”注意：1.写作词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thecompetitionstarted.“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewondered.故事梗概：本文讲述了CarolineWinterbottom与她的爱马Applewind参加一场重要的马术比赛。她的父亲对她施加了巨大压力，要求她必须赢得比赛，否则将卖掉Applewind。Caroline虽然技术精湛，但总是输给技艺超群的SophieCraig。在比赛当天，Caroline意外地看到Sophie落马，这让她感到震惊。尽管内心担忧，Caroline仍需集中精力完成自己的比赛。最终，她在没有父亲期望的奖杯下，体会到了胜利的喜悦和对朋友的同情。伏笔：Caroline的父亲对她施加压力，如果她不赢得比赛，就会卖掉她的马Applewind。Sophie是Caroline的强劲对手，但同时也是她的亲密朋友，她知道如果Caroline失去她的马意味着什么。回应：在续写中，Caroline在比赛中意外领先，因为Sophie意外地从马上摔了下来，这是对父亲压力的直接回应，也是Caroline可能赢得比赛的转折点。Caroline对Sophie的担忧和关心体现了她对朋友的同情，尽管她处于领先地位，但她的第一反应是关心Sophie的安危，这与她父亲只关注胜利的态度形成了鲜明对比。通过这些伏笔和回应，故事展现了Caroline内心的挣扎和成长，以及她对胜利和友情的不同看法。续写包含的重要情节点：比赛开始：描述比赛的紧张气氛和Caroline的心理状态，展现她的决心和对胜利的渴望。Sophie的意外：Sophie在比赛中意外落马，这一转折点不仅影响了比赛的结果，也对Caroline产生了情感上的冲击。Caroline的内心冲突：Caroline在看到Sophie落马后，内心经历了挣扎，她需要在关心朋友和追求胜利之间做出选择。比赛的完成：Caroline决定继续比赛，并以出色的表现完成自己的赛程，这一行为展示了她的专注和决心。对Sophie的关心：比赛结束后，Caroline立即关心Sophie的状况，体现了她对朋友的同情和关怀。父亲的反应：故事应该展现Caroline的父亲对于比赛结果的反应，特别是当Caroline可能赢得比赛时，他是否会改变卖掉Applewind的决定。情感的解决：故事应该有一个情感上的解决，无论是Caroline如何处理与父亲的关系，还是她与Sophie之间的友情如何得到加强。主题的体现：续写应该强化故事的主题，比如胜利、友情、家庭压力和个人成长等。主题：竞争与压力：Caroline面临的来自父亲的压力，要求她在马术比赛中获胜，体现了竞争环境下的个人压力。友情与同情：尽管Sophie是Caroline的竞争对手，但她们之间深厚的友情超越了比赛的胜负，展现了同情和关怀的重要性。自我价值与成长：Caroline在比赛和个人挑战中的成长，她学会了如何在压力下保持自我价值和尊严。胜利的真正含义：故事探讨了胜利不仅仅是赢得比赛，更重要的是过程中的体验、学习以及人际关系的建立。参考答案：Thecompetitionstarted.Sophiewasfirst.Sheclearedthefirstobstacleeasily.Carolinewasnext.Firstobstacle,changeofdirection.“Wearedoingfine!”she

thought.Thentherewasasharpturn,thentwowidejumps.Blossomwasflyingbut

suddenlysomethingwaswrong.FromthecornerofhereyesshesawSophiewason

theground,alldirty.Butshehadtogo.Afewmomentslatershefinishedtheround!Yes,shewasthewinneratlast!“ButhowcouldSophiefallofthehorseback?”Carolinewondered.“Sophie,are

youalright?Whathappened?”“I’mfineandhappy.”Sophiesaidtoherfriend.“Now

youwinandyoucankeepApplewind.”“ButIonlywonbecauseyouaccidentallyfell

off.”Bysayingso,somethingsuddenlyoccurredtoCaroline.“Sophie!Youdidthis

forme?”Sophiegrinned.Intears,Carolinegaveherfriendandrivalalonghug.“Let’sgoforanotherridetomorrow!AndthistimeI’llbeatyou.”Thegirls

laughed.(150words)

下水文1Thecompetitionstarted.Ridersandtheirhorsesfilledthearena,theairelectricwithanticipation.Carolinetookherplace,herheartpoundinginsyncwithApplewind'srhythmicbreaths.Thejumpswerehigh,thecoursecomplex,butshefeltastrangecalmnesssettleoverher.Astheracebegan,sheandApplewindmovedasone,clearingeachobstaclewithgraceandprecision.Thecrowd'scheerswereadistanthum,andallthatexistedwasthecourse,thehorse,andtherider'sunyieldingdetermination.“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewondered,stunned,assheroundedthefinalturn.Inthemiddleofthearena,Sophiewasontheground,Blossomstandingcalmlybyherside.Itwasanunprecedentedsight,andforamoment,Caroline'sconcentrationwavered.Butassheregainedherfocus,sheknewshecouldn'taffordtoletthisdistractionderailher.Withafinalpush,sheandApplewindsoaredoverthelastjump,crossingthefinishlinetothesoundofthecrowd'seruptionintoapplause.Carolinehadwon,butthevictoryfeltbittersweetasshesawSophiebeinghelpedtoherfeet,alookofdisappointmentonherface.下水文2Thecompetitionstarted.Theatmospherewastenseastheriderslinedup,eachfocusedonthetaskathand.Carolinetookadeepbreath,hereyesscanningthecourseonelasttime.Thejumpsloomedlarge,butshefeltasurgeofconfidence.Applewindseemedtosenseittoo,prancinglightlybeneathher.Asthestartingbellrang,theysprangforward,aperfectlysynchronizedteam.Thejumpscameatthemoneafteranother,butCarolineandApplewindnavigatedthemwithaneasethatsurprisedevenher.“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewon