寒假作业12书面表达特训

限时练习：40min完成时间：月日天气：作业12书面表达特训（一）假如你是Karen，父母在学习上对你很严格，除了学习你很少有时间做自己喜欢的事。为此你很苦恼，请你给英文电台《知心姐姐》栏目组写一封信，讲述自己的苦恼并寻求她的帮助。要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；2.词数70左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearSisterKnown,Idon’tknowhowtodealwithmyproblems.Myparentsareverystrictwithmystudy.TheyhopethatIcanhaveagoodgrade.SoIhavetostudyafterschool.Afterfinishingmyhomework,myparentswillaskmetoreadbooks.Ifeelverytiredandupset.ButifItellthemthatIdon’twanttostudyeveryday,theywillbeangrywithme.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Yours,Karen【试题分析】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，在写作时按照信的格式来写，并且根据题目要求，Karen讲述自己的苦恼并寻求《知心姐姐》栏目的帮助。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，符合逻辑，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。（二）假如你校学生会（StudentCouncil）将要举办一场英语晚会，请你以学生会的名义写一封请柬，邀请老师们参加。请柬内容要点如下：Timeat8:00p.m.thisFridayPlaceinthehallofourschoolActivitiesputtingonashortEnglishplay,singinganddancing要求：80词左右；包括全部内容要点，可以适当发挥。参考词汇：takepartin参加；giveperformance表演________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearSirorMadam,TheStudentCouncilisgoingtoholdanEnglisheveningpartyinthehallofourschoolat8:00p.m.thisFriday.AttheeveningpartysomestudentswillputonashortEnglishplayandotherstudentsaregoingtosinganddance.Everyoneinourschoolislookingforwardtoit.Ibelieveitwillbeverywonderful.Ithinkyouwilllikeit.Youarewarmlyweledtotakepartinit.Andwe’llbeverygladifyougiveussomewonderfulperformances.Pleaseeontime.Thanksalot.StudentCouncil【写作指导】［试题分析］①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为请柬；②时态：时态以一般将来时为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“请柬内容要点”中时间、地点和主题等要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。［写作步骤］第一步，表明写作意图，借用“校学生会将要举办一场英语晚会”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从英语晚会的“时间、地点和主题”几个方面重点介绍晚会安排具体情况；第三步，书写结语，表达“邀请老师们参加”的愿望。［亮点词汇］①putonaplay上演一部话剧②lookforwardto盼望③takepartin参加④giveperformance表演［高分句型］①AttheeveningpartysomestudentswillputonashortEnglishplayandotherstudentsaregoingtosinganddance.（“some...other...”句型）②Ibelieveitwillbeverywonderful.（宾语从句）③Andwe’llbeverygladifyougiveussomewonderfulperformances.（if引导条件状语从句）（三）昨天是你妈妈的生日。你早起为妈妈煮了一碗鸡蛋面。请你根据以下要点和要求写一篇英语演讲稿，将你煮鸡蛋面的过程在下周一的班会上和同学们分享一下。要点：1.煮面的过程：准备材料、制作步骤；2.妈妈吃完面后的感受。要求：1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2.词数80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Hello,everyone!Yesterdaywasmymother’sbirthday.Igotupearlyandcookedabowlofeggnoodlesforher.First,Iboiledsomewaterinthepotforseveralminutes,andthenIputtwoeggsandnoodlesintothepot.Next,Iwashedsomevegetablesandcutthemintosmallpieces.Finally,Iputthevegetablesintothepotandaddedsomeoilandsalt.Thebreakfastwasreadytoserve.Mymotherwashappyandsaidittasteddelicious.

Feelingveryhappyandproudofmyself,Idecidedtohelpmyparentsdomorehouseworkinthefuture.【写作指导】[试题分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已经给出，需要细化，且可以适当补充。[写作步骤]第一步，阐述为妈妈煮面的原因；第二步，写出煮面的过程；第三步，写妈妈吃完面后的感受。[亮点词汇]①getup起床②bereadytodosth.准备好做某事③beproudof…以……为傲[高分句型]①Igotupearlyandcookedabowlofeggnoodlesforher.（并列句）②Mymotherwashappyandsaidittasteddelicious.（宾语从句）（四）随着科技的迅速发展，我们的生活方式也发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下要点，以“Lifein50Years”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述你对50年后的生活的预测。要点：1.changesaboutourdailylife；2.changesabouttheenvironment；3.yourideas...要求：1.短文应包括提示中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2.词数80左右。Lifein50Years________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Lifein50YearsOurlifewillbeverydifferentin50years.Indailylife,differentrobotscanbehelpfulanduseful,sotheywillmakeourlifemucheasier.Therewillbealotofrobotstodothework,sopeoplewillhavelessworktodo.Peoplecanoftentravelandrelax.Andputersaremuchmoreimportantthantheyarenow.Wewillusethemtomakeimportantplansanddootherthings.Atthattime,wewillusewindandsunlightasthemainenergy.Therewon’tbepollutionanymore,andthenwecanseetheclearwaterandtheblueskyallyearround.Ithinkourlifewillbemoreandmorefortable.【写作指导】[试题分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般将来时；③提示：根据提示要点畅想50年后的生活，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，详细介绍50年后的生活变化；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①usesth.todosth.使用某物做某事②atthattime在那时③allyearround全年[高分句型]①Indailylife,differentrobotscanbehelpfulanduseful,sotheywillmakeourlifemucheasier.(so连接的并列句)②Therewon’tbepollutionanymore,andthenwecanseetheclearwaterandtheblueskyallyearround.(and连接的并列句)（五）请你用英语写一篇短文，叙述Alice和Jack两人的新年计划，同时也谈谈你自己在新的一年里有什么新的目标和计划以及打算如何去做。要点：1.Alice的新年计划：再学习一门外语，取得好成绩。她将通过加入语言俱乐部、努力学习去实现新年计划；2.Jack的新年计划：成为一名篮球运动员。他将通过每天练习打篮球来实现新年计划；3.你的计划以及你会怎么去做。要求：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HereestheNewYear.WeallhavesomeNewYear’sresolutions,andwearereadytodoourbestinthenewyear.Alicewantstojointhelanguageclubbecausesheisgoingtolearnanotherforeignlanguage.Andshedecidestoworkhardtogetgoodgrades.Jackwantstobeabasketballplayer,soheisgoingtopracticeplayingbasketballeveryday.I’dliketoimprovemyspokenEnglish.SoI’mgoingtotheEnglishcornereverySundayafternoonandpracticespeakingEnglishwithforeigners.I’msuremyresolutionwilletrueoneday.【写作指导】[试题分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“要点”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Alice的新年计划；第二步，介绍Jack的新年计划；第三步，介绍自己的新年计划以及打算如何做。[亮点词汇]①bereadytodo准备做……②decidetodo决定做……③practicedoingsth练习做某事[高分句型]①Alicewantstojointhelanguageclubbecausesheisgoingtolearnanotherforeignlanguage.（because引导的原因状语从句）②I’msuremyresolutionwilletrueoneday.（宾语从句）（一）请以“Myplanforthewintervacation”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍你的寒假计划和打算。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyplanforthewintervacationThewintervacationising.I’mgoingtoBeijingtovisitsomeplacesofinterest.IwanttovisittheGreatWallwithmyparents,becauseIwanttobeatrueman.HaveyouheardthesayingthatamanisnotaherountilhereachestheGreatWall?AndIalsowanttovisitTian’anmenSquare.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingtheforeigners,becauseIwanttopracticespeakingEnglishwiththem.ThenIwanttogototheChildren’sPalace.Iwanttolearntoplaytheguitar.Iwanttobeagoodsingerinthefuture.Ithinkbeingasingerisverycool.MyfavoritesingerisMichealJackson.IhopeIcanhaveahappywintervacation.Whataboutyou?【写作指导】[试题分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：要求以“Myplanforthewintervacation”为题，介绍一下寒假计划和打算，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出对假期的介绍；第二步，具体介绍自己寒假要做什么；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①lookforwardto期待②inthefuture在未来[高分句型]①Iamlookingforwardtomeetingtheforeigners,becauseIwanttopracticespeakingEnglishwiththem.（because引导的原因状语从句）②IhopeIcanhaveahappywintervacation.（省略that的宾语从句）（二）近年来，一些家长为了让孩子取得更加优异的学习成绩，不惜花重金在假期将孩子送入各种培训班，这有可能会带来一系列的问题，请根据表格内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，发表自己的看法。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。问题1.父母花费许多钱，但孩子却感到厌烦；2.浪费时间，不仅不利于学习，还给孩子增加很多压力(pressure)；3.孩子产生厌学情绪，养成逃学恶习。你的看法……Inrecentyears,someparentshavebeensendingtheirchildrentodifferentkindsoftrainingclassesduringtheirholidaysinordertoimprovetheirstudies.Butasastudent,Ithinkthismaycreatesomeproblems.Firstofall,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Inrecentyears,someparentshavebeensendingtheirchildrentodifferentkindsoftrainingclassesduringtheirholidaysinordertoimprovetheirstudies.Butasastudent,Ithinkthismaycreatesomeproblems.

Firstofall,parentsspendlotsofmoneyontheseclasses,butmanystudentsfeelboredbecausethat’snotwhattheywanttolearn.Second,alotoftimeiswasted.Itisnotonlybadforchildren’sstudy,butalsogivesthemtoomuchpressure.Third,itprobablymakesthemhatestudying.Anditmaybeeasyforsomechildrentogetintothebadhabitofrunningawayfromschool.

Ithinkwestudentsshouldbegivensometimetorelaxanddosomethingsthatwewanttodo,suchasplayingbasketball,footballandputergames.【写作指导】[试题分析]①题材：本文是材料作文；②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏图表中的提示信息，几个要点均要一一阐述，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图，借用“近年来，一些家长为了提高成绩送孩子到各种培训班”来引出重点介绍的内容。第二步：具体阐述写作内容，依照提示信息的几个要点——存在的问题和我的看法等，一一阐述。第三步：书写结语，表达“我认为学生应该有时间放松，做一些他们想要做的事”的观点。[亮点词汇]①createsomeproblems产生一些问题②toomuchpressure太多压力③feelbored感到厌烦[高分句型]①Itisnotonlybadforchildren’sstudy,butalsogivesthemtoomuchpressure.(notonly...butalso的用法)②Butasastudent,Ithinkthismaycreatesomeproblems.(省略that的宾语从句)（三）梦想是心中的一盏明灯，给我们希望和前行的动力。现在某英文报正在面向中学生征稿，征稿的题目是Ihaveadream。要求：1.结合你对梦想的理解或自身的经历和感受谈一谈你的梦想；2.行文连贯通顺，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Ihaveadream________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】IhaveadreamEveryoneintheworldhasadream,includingme,andIwanttotellyouaboutmydream.Mydreamismyfuturejob.IoftenwatchalotofTVshowsaboutdoctorsandmedicine.Ithinkdoctorsareverycoolbecausetheyworkdayandnighttohelppeoplerecoverfromillness.Theyarealsocalledangelsbecausetheyhelppeoplefeelbetter.Thismakesthemmyheroes,andthat’swhyIwanttobeoneofthem.Whatisyourdreamandwhatisitabout?Isitasmeaningfulasmine?【写作指导】[试题分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据要求完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，借用“世界上每个人都有一个梦想，包括我，我想告诉你我的梦想。”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“我的梦想，有这个梦想的原因”重点介绍我的梦想；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①wanttodosth想要做某事②alotof许多[高分句型]①Ithinkdoctorsareverycoolbecausetheyworkdayandnighttohelppeoplerecoverfromillness.（省略that的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）②Isitasmeaningfulasmine?（“as+形容词/副词+as”表示“和……一样”）（四）假设你是八年二班的班长(monitor)刘明，你们班将举行新年派对。现在请根据下面要点和要求给外教Ms.Steen写一封邀请函。词数不少于40。要点：1.时间：本周五，12月29日下午3点；2.地点：八年二班教室；3.活动内容：唱歌、跳舞、游戏；4.请在周四前回复。要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。ToMs.SteenFromClassTwo,GradeEightSubjectAninvitationtotheNewYear’spartyDearMs.Steen,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiuMing【参考范文】DearMs.Steen,I’mLiuMing,themonitorofClassTwo,GradeEight.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoourNewYear’sparty.We’llhaveitinourclassroomat3p.m.thisFriday,December29.Therewillbesinging,dancingandgames.Itwillbefun.PleasereplybyThursday.Hopeyoucanmakeit.LiuMing【写作指导】[试题分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请函；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：根据要点提示完成写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]第一步，先自我介绍；

第二步，介绍活动的时间、地点、内容等；

第三步，明确想要得到回复的时间，并表达希望。

[亮点词汇]

①invitesbtodosth邀请某人做某事②NewYear’sparty新年派对

[高分句型]①Therewillbesinging,dancingandgames.（therebe句型）②Hopeyoucanmakeit.（宾语从句）（五）假如你是王林，你的朋友Molly，在上次的聚会中品尝到你做的水果奶昔很好吃，他写信给你希望你能把制作奶昔的方法告诉他。现在请你回信给Molly，告诉他水果奶昔的制作方法。要求：1.可选一种水果介绍制作过程，条理清晰；2.内容完整，可适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名；3.注意书信体格式，80词左右。____________________________________________________________________