(完整版练)八短文改错四含解析

专题能力提升练八短文改错(四)Test1[2020·安徽省部分重点中学高三联考]Lifecanbetoughsometimesbecausethereisalwayssomethingunexpectedhappened,whichmaytireorevenstopus.However,wecan'tchoosetoescape.Wearesupposedtakeresponsibilityforourselvesandourfamilies.Severalyearago,myfatherlostmyjobandwasunemployedforalongtime.Sohedidn'ttakeitseriously.Instead,hebelievedhehadanenoughtimetorestandthinkabouthowtomakeanewlyliving.Nowhehadreceivedawell­paidjoboffer.So,whenyouarefacedwithchallenges,choosingtobelievegoodthingsareintheway.Test2[2020·合肥市高三第一次质量检测]IhavebeendecidedtobecomeapilotsinceIamalittlekid.EachtimeIseeaplaneflyingacrosssky,Ifeelextremelyexcitedbutwanttoflyit.ThatiswhyIbelieveitcanmakemehappilyandfree.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Ihavetobephysicallyfitbykeepingahealthydietandworkoutregularly.Besides,Imustworkhardtomakegreatprogresseswithmystudies.Althoughitisnotthateasytobeingapilot,I'llnevergiveupmydreamandsparenoefforttorealizethem.Test3[2020·广州市高三年级阶段训练]Thefirstafewweeksofthetermareoverandithasdefinitelybeenanewexperience.HavingschoollessononlineissomethingI'veonlyreadaboutinarticleswherediscussfuturetechnology.NowIamlivinginthefuture!TheytookmesometimetogetusedtomynewInternetclassroom.Atfirst,Ican'talwayshearwhattheteacherormyclassmateswassaying.SometimesIwasn'twellpreparing.Slowly,however,Iadaptedthenewlearningenvironmentbutnowthingsaregoingsmoothly.Ofcourse,Istillmissseeingmyclassmatesandplaytogetheroutside.Hopefully,wecanmeetsoon.Test4[2020·湖北八校第一次联考]Asitisknowntoall,theGreatWallisthemostfamousplacesofinterestinChina.Everybodywantstogothere,butIamnoexception.Then,thissummervacation,thedayIhavebeenlookingforwardtocomingatlast.IgotupveryearlythatdayandsetoffwithmybrotherTimfollowedbehind.Aftertwohours'busride,wearrivedatwhichlookedlikethelargemarket,wherethereweremillionsofpeopletalking,pushingandphotographing.Lookingatthat,myenthusiasmimmediatedisappeared.Indeed,theGreatWallisreallysomethingmustbeexperiencedwithalittleeaseandprivacy.专题能力提升练八短文改错(四)Test1答案与解析：Lifecanbetoughsometimesbecausethereisalwayssomethingunexpectedeq\o(happened,\s\do16(①happening))，whichmaytireorevenstopus.However,wecan'tchoosetoescape.Wearesupposedeq\o(∧,\s\do16(②to))takeresponsibilityforourselvesandourfamilies.Severaleq\o(year,\s\do16(③years))ago,myfatherlosteq\o(my,\s\do16(④his))jobandwasunemployedforalongtime.eq\o(So,\s\do16(⑤But))hedidn'ttakeitseriously.Instead,hebelievedhehadeq\o(,\s\do16(⑥))enoughtimetorestandthinkabouthowtomakeaeq\o(newly,\s\do16(⑦new))living.Nowheeq\o(had,\s\do16(⑧has))receivedawell­paidjoboffer.So,whenyouarefacedwithchallenges,eq\o(choosing,\s\do16(⑨choose))tobelievegoodthingsareeq\o(in,\s\do16(⑩on))theway.①happened改为happening'动词形式误用。happen与something为逻辑上的主谓关系，故把happened改为happening。②supposed后加to'不定式符号漏用。besupposedtodosth.是固定用法，意为“应该做某事”，故在supposed后加to。③year改为years'名词的单复数误用。several后面应跟可数名词的复数形式，故把year改为years。④my改为his'代词误用。根据本句的主语myfather及后面的“andwasunemployedforalongtime”可知，父亲失去了他的工作，故把my改为his。⑤So改为But'连词误用。上文表述父亲丢了工作，此处所在句子表述他没把这当回事。故根据语境可知，此处表转折，应用连词But。⑥删除enough前的an'冠词多用。此处time意为“时间”，是不可数名词，其前不用不定冠词修饰。⑦newly改为new'副词和形容词混用。living是名词，意为“生计，谋生”，其前需用形容词修饰，故把newly改为new。⑧had改为has'动词时态误用。根据该句中的“Now”和语境可知，此处应用现在完成时，表示过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响，故把had改为has。⑨choosing改为choose'动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，“whenyouarefacedwithchallenges”为when引导的时间状语从句，主句为祈使句，故把choosing改为choose。⑩in改为on'介词误用。根据语境可知，此处表示好的事情即将来临，ontheway意为“即将来临”，符合语境，故把in改为on。intheway意为“妨碍”。Test2答案与解析：Ihaveeq\o(,\s\do16(①))decidedtobecomeapilotsinceIeq\o(am,\s\do16(②was))alittlekid.EachtimeIseeaplaneflyingacrosseq\o(∧,\s\do16(③the))sky,Ifeelextremelyexcitedeq\o(but,\s\do16(④and))wanttoflyit.Thatiseq\o(why,\s\do16(⑤because))Ibelieveitcanmakemeeq\o(happily,\s\do16(⑥happy))andfree.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Ihavetobephysicallyfitbykeepingahealthydietandeq\o(work,\s\do16(⑦working))outregularly.Besides,Imustworkhardtomakegreateq\o(progresses,\s\do16(⑧progress))withmystudies.Althoughitisnotthateasytoeq\o(being,\s\do16(⑨be))apilot,I'llnevergiveupmydreamandsparenoefforttorealizeeq\o(them,\s\do16(⑩it)).①删除been'语态误用。此处表示“我从小就决定要成为一名飞行员，主语I和动词decide为主动关系，故been多余，应删除。②am改为was'时态误用。此处叙述的事发生在过去，应用一般过去时。③sky前加the'冠词漏用。修饰独一无二的自然现象或事物应用定冠词the。④but改为and'连词误用。根据语境可知，“我感到非常激动”和“想要开飞机”为逻辑上的顺承关系，故应用and。⑤why改为because'连接词误用。根据语境可知，此处表示“这是因为我相信它能让我快乐和自由”，故此处应用because。⑥happily改为happy'副词和形容词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处与and后的free并列作宾语补足语，故用形容词happy。⑦work改为working'动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，此处和keepingahealthydiet并列作介词by的宾语，故用working。⑧progresses改为progress'名词误用。progress为不可数名词，没有复数形式。⑨being改为be'动词形式误用。分析句子结构并结合句意可知，此处考查“itis＋adj.＋todosth.”的用法，故此处应用be。⑩them改为it'代词误用。此处指代的是上文出现的mydream，其为单数形式，应用代词it。Test3答案与解析：Thefirsteq\o(,\s\do16(①))fewweeksofthetermareoverandithasdefinitelybeenanewexperience.Havingschooleq\o(lesson,\s\do16(②lessons))onlineissomethingI'veonlyreadaboutinarticleseq\o(where,\s\do16(③which/that))discussfuturetechnology.NowIamlivinginthefuture!eq\o(They,\s\do16(④It))tookmesometimetogetusedtomynewInternetclassroom.Atfirst,Ieq\o(can't,\s\do16(⑤couldn't))alwayshearwhattheteacherormyclassmateseq\o(was,\s\do16(⑥were))saying.SometimesIwasn'twelleq\o(preparing,\s\do16(⑦prepared)).Slowly,however,Iadaptedeq\o(∧,\s\do16(⑧to))thenewlearningenvironmenteq\o(but,\s\do16(⑨and))nowthingsaregoingsmoothly.Ofcourse,Istillmissseeingmyclassmatesandeq\o(play,\s\do16(⑩playing))togetheroutside.Hopefully,wecanmeetsoon.①删除first后的a'冠词多用。此处表示本学期的前几周结束了，其前有序数词first，冠词a多余，故删除。②lesson改为lessons'名词的单复数误用。根据第一句话中的“weeks”可知，这里表示在网上上的课不止一节，故要用名词的复数形式。③where改为which/that'定语从句的关系词误用。分析句子结构可知，此处引导定语从句，在从句中作主语，修饰先行词“articles”，故用which/that引导该从句。④They改为It'代词误用。ittakes/tooksb.＋一段时间＋todosth.为固定用法，it在此句型中作形式主语。⑤can't改为couldn't'动词的时态误用。根据该句中的“Atfirst”可知，此处讲的是过去的事情，故把can't改为couldn't。⑥was改为were'主谓不一致。此处连词“or”连接并列主语“teacher”与“classmates”，其谓语动词的数与最近的词语保持一致，即和“classmates”的数保持一致，故把was改为were。⑦preparing改为prepared'动词和形容词混用。此处表示“没有做好准备”，应用形容词prepared，而不是prepare的现在分词形式。⑧adapted后加to'adapttosth.意为“适应……”，为固定用法。⑨but改为and'连词误用。此处前后部分之间为顺承关系，故应用连词and。⑩play改为playing'动词形式误用。本句表示“当然，我仍然想见到我的同学，想和他们一起在外面玩耍”，此处和该句中的“seeing”并列作miss的宾语，故应用playing。Test4答案与解析：Aseq\o(,\s\do16(①))isknowntoall,theGreatWallisthemostfamouseq\o(places,\s\do16(②place))ofinterestinChina.Everybodywantstogothere,eq\o(but,\s\do16(③and))Iamnoexception.Then,thissummervacation,thedayIeq\o(have,\s\do16(④had))beenlookingforwardtoeq\o(coming,\s\do16(⑤came))atlast.IgotupveryearlythatdayandsetoffwithmybrotherTimeq\o(followed,\s\do16(⑥following))behind.Aftertwohours'busride,wearrivedateq\o(which,\s\do16(⑦what))lookedlikeeq\o(the,\s\do16(⑧a))largemarket,wherethereweremillionsofpeopletalking,pushingandphotographing.Lookingatthat,myenthusiasmeq\o(immediate,\s\do16(⑨immediately))disappeared.Indeed,theGreatWallisreallysomethingeq\o(∧,\s\do16(⑩that))mustbeexperiencedwithalittleeaseandprivacy.①删除it'代词多用。根据语境并分析句子结构可