新教材高中英语Unit3EnvironmentalProtection写作指导课件新人教版选择性

UNIT3写作指导关于环境问题的报告

感知文体常识报告是就一个问题展开调查后做出的分析与总结,是一种应用文体。调查者在对特定对象深入考察了解的基础上,经过归纳整理、分析研究,进而揭示事物的本质,得出符合实际的结论,并用文字形式表现出来。写作时要注意知识的科学性、行文的条理性和语言的准确性。牢记写作素材(一)增色词汇1.environmentaladj.环境的2.protectionn.保护3.pollutionn.污染4.takemeasures采取措施5.copewith对付;处理6.keepthebalanceof保持……的平衡7.ecologicalbalanceofnature自然生态平衡8.withthedevelopmentof随着……的发展9.raisepublicawareness提高公众意识10.havenegativeeffectson对……有负面影响2.分析问题的句子Thereasonwhytheriverispollutedisthatfactoriessendoutwastewaterintoit.河流受到污染的原因是工厂把废水排到河里。Poisonousgasesaresentintotheair,pollutingtheairwebreathe.有毒的气体排到空气中,污染了我们呼吸的空气。Besides,theuseofchemicalsinagriculturealsocausesenvironmentalpollution.此外,农业中化学品的使用也造成了环境污染。3.提出建议采取措施的句子It’shightimethatweprotectedourenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.该是我们保护环境不受污染的时候了。Imakeanurgentappealtothepublictotakemeasurestocopewiththesituation.我紧急呼吁公众采取措施应对这种情况。Ourgovernmentistryingitsbesttotakemeasurestofightagainstpollution.我们的政府正尽力采取措施与污染作斗争。Thegovernmentsuggeststhatpeoplegotoworkorschoolonpublictransportation,suchasthebusandtheunderground.政府建议人们乘坐公共交通上班或上学,如公共汽车和地铁。Ifwedosomethingwithnothoughtsofthefuture,thefuturegenerationswouldbeindanger.如果我们做事情不考虑未来,后代将处于危险之中。Tocherishtheenvironmentistoloveourselves.爱护环境就是爱护我们自己。示例写作步骤【写作要求】随着哥本哈根世界气候大会的召开,越来越多的人关注气候变化。请你写一篇报告,简要描述过量排放二氧化碳(carbondioxide)的危害(严重的风暴、干旱、全球变暖等),并提出具体建议,号召人们选择低碳生活(low-carbonlife)方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2.请在相应位置作答。【审题谋篇】

体裁报告人称第三人称时态一般现在时话题气候变化所造成的危害框架引入话题:二氧化碳过量排放带来的危害介绍细节:说明人们已意识到低碳生活的重要性以及所采取的实际行动发出倡议:号召人们为环保做贡献【遣词造句】1.词汇①继续

②灭绝

③导致

④专注于

⑤吸引……的注意力

⑥气候变化

continueextinctionresultin

focusonattractone’sattentionclimatechange2.句式(1)要点翻译①随着空气中二氧化碳含量的迅速增加,全球气温持续上升。Asthelevelsofcarbondioxideintheairareincreasingrapidly,theglobaltemperature___________________________.

②它导致更高的海平面,更多的风暴、洪水、干旱,甚至物种灭绝。It__________________ahighersealevel,morestorms,floods,droughts,andeventheextinctionofspecies.

continuesgoingupresultsin③联合国会议关注的是未来应对气候变化的行动,这已引起越来越多人的关注。TheUNConference__________________futureactionsonclimatechangeandithasattractedmoreandmorepeople’sattention.

④如果我们所有人都考虑这些问题,过低碳生活,我们将在未来拥有一个更好、更清洁的家。Ifallofusthinkabouttheproblemsand____________________________________,weshallhaveabetterandcleanerhomeinthefuture.

focusesonlivealow-carbonlife(2)句式升级⑤把句①升级为“with+名词+doing”句式⑥把合并后的句①、句②升级为动词-ing形式作结果状语的句子⑦把句③升级为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句Withthelevelsofcarbondioxideintheairincreasingrapidly,theglobaltemperaturecontinuesgoingup.Withthelevelsofcarbondioxideintheairincreasingrapidly,theglobaltemperaturecontinuesgoingup,resultinginahighersealevel,morestorms,floods,droughts,andeventheextinctionofspecies.TheUNConferencefocusesonfutureactionsonclimatechange,whichhasattractedmoreandmorepeople’sattention.【妙笔成篇】

Withthelevelsofcarbondioxideintheairincreasingrapidly,theglobaltemperaturecontinuesgoingup,resultinginahighersealevel,morestorms,floods,droughts,andeventheextinctionofspecies.TheUNConferencefocusesonfutureactionsonclimatechange,whichhasattractedmoreandmorepeople’sattention.Itisrealizedthatlivingalow-carbonlifeisnecessary.Recyclecans,bottles,plasticbagsandnewspapersifcircumstancesallowusto.Walkorrideabikeifwecan.Ifallofusthinkabouttheproblemsandlivealow-carbonlife,weshal