2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能09 读后续写：脱离困境型（故事构造七大绝招）

高考英语读后续写脱离困境型（故事构造“七大绝招”）教学课件第一绝招：环境描写（恶劣）——波涛汹涌：1.当我继续往前漂的时候，一个巨浪呼啸着向我们逼近。AsIfloatedon,ahugewave(一个巨浪)whistled(呼啸而来)andapproachedus.2.大风从耳边呼啸而过，我们被推离海岸越来越远。Thebigwindroaredthroughourears(在耳边咆哮),andwewerepushedawayfromtheshorefartherandfarther.3.我所有的感觉都告诉我一个大浪就要来了。Allmysensestoldmethatabigwavewasabouttocome.(即将来临)4.一个看似猛烈的海浪正向我们袭来。Apowerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wavewascomingtowardsus.

(靠近我们)——鲨鱼的可怕：.那是一条鲨鱼，一条巨大的鲨鱼，在离她不远的地方游来游去。Itwasashark,amassivesharkthatwasswimmingaround,notfarawayfromher.2.鲨鱼的下颚张开，露出一排排锋利的牙齿。Theshark’sjawsopenedwide,showingrowsofsharpteeth.——陆地上的水：1.雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。Splashingraindropshitthewindshieldfranticallyandtheskieswereoverhungwithablanketofgrey,.2.水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。Thewaterkeptrising,asifitwould

engulf

mealive.3.不幸的是，水涌了进来，水涨到了我的腰上。【在水里行走（不可能rush,dash）】Unfortunately,thewaterpouredinandcreptuponmywaist.

——推荐句型：1.Thewindblows/whistles/howls/picksup/whipsthroughsth/sweepsacrosssth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……2.Theyweregetting

drenchedbyicywater.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。3.Theheavyrainwasviolently

beating

againstthewindow.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。4.Therain

drummed

ontheroofofthebuilding.雨不停地击打着房预。5.Thefuriousstormis

grumbling

outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。——推荐句型：6.Theicywindstarted

howling,

stinging

myface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。7.

Aflashof

lightning

litup

thewholesky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。8.Thesharp

claps

ofthunder

pierced

thequietnight.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。9.Theboltoflightning

stabs

theearth.一道闪电划过天空。10.theskyandtheocean

meltinto

eachother

天空和海洋融为一体

第二绝招：情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）——疲倦/寒冷1.盐刺痛我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我还能坚持多久。Saltstinging(刺痛)myeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.2.随着时间的流逝，疲惫感席卷着我们，我们的脚僵硬/麻木和颤抖着。Timepassingus,tiredness

engulfed

(包围了)uswithmyfeet

stiff/numb

(僵硬/麻木)and

shivering.3.尽管我们筋疲力尽，我们没有停止。咬紧牙关，我们继续游泳。Exhaustedaswewere

(尽管很累),wedidn’tstop.Grittingourteeth,wekeptswimming.

4.

似乎过了一个世纪，我感到极度疲劳地努力游泳以保持漂浮。Afterwhatseemedacentury,Ifelt

extremelyfatigued

(非常累)whileswimminghardto

keep

myself

afloat(漂浮着的).——疲倦/寒冷5.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。Hewas

huddled

intohiscoat,hisface

bluewithcold.6.

手指被冰冷的海水弄得麻木，喉咙被寒风吹得哽咽，我感到快要崩溃了。Fingers

numbed

bythe

chilly

water,throatchokedbyicywind,Ifeltonthevergeofcollapsing.7.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。Sheclaspedthebabytoherbosominthe

biting/cutting/piercing/sharp

wind.8.

寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。Theicywindstartedhowling,

cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife/needles.9.她冷得牙齿直打颤。Herteethwere

chattering

withcold.——害怕1.我深吸一口气，使劲咽了下去。Itookadeepbreathand

swallowedhard

(害怕地咽了口吐沫).2.她顿感毛骨悚然。Achillfeelingcreptupherspine.3随着时间的流逝，恐惧爬上了我的心，我几乎不知道我还能坚持多久。Astimetickedby,fear

creptuponmyheart(爬上我心头)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcould

ploughon

(前行).4

一想到绝望，我就直打哆嗦。Thethoughtofhopelessness

sentshiversdownmyspine(让我后脊背发凉).5.

我被一种恐怖感淹没了。Iwas

floodedwithasenseofhorror(被恐惧感淹没).——害怕6.看到这里，我内心的恐惧感越来越强。Seeingthis,Ifeltmyfear

growing/increasing(剧增)inside.7.我感到一股焦虑席卷了我的身体。Ifelt

awaveofanxiety(一阵焦虑)

sweptovermybody

(袭来).8.沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的眼中涌出，我觉得自己陷入了绝望之中。Tearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyeyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.9.

恐惧感席卷全身，我惊慌失措地喊道：“救命！救命！”Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,Ishoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!”10.

我后颈上的汗毛因恐惧而刺痛，我浑身被汗湿透了。ThehairsonthebackofmyneckprickledwithdreadandIwasdrenchedinsweat.（汗毛倒竖；湿透）——描写挣扎努力1.我们不遗余力地游向岸边。sparednoeffortto(不遗余力地)swimtowardstheshore.2.我们交换了坚定的眼神，然后以令人难以置信的速度继续前进。Weexchangedadeterminedlook(互换了坚定的神情),thenploughedon(继续前行)atanincrediblespeed(难以置信的速度).3....,Weswamtoothandnail(全力以赴地).第三绝招：转机描写描写声音传来或看见了什么1.我们听到远处传来的声音。A

distant

sound

reachedourears.(传入耳朵)2.就在那时，我的脑子飞速运转——为什么不打给911和Joe呢？Justthen,mymindraced–whynotcall911andJoe?3.船的声音在我们耳边回响。Thesoundoftheboat

echoedinourears.(在我们耳内回响)4.就在这时，一声尖锐的哨声划破了宁静。Atthatmoment,a

shrillwhistle(汽笛)ripped

theair(划破天空).5.当我们不知所措时，远处传来刺耳的喊叫声。Whenwewereatalossofwhattodo,therewere

rasping

(刺耳的)

shouts(喊叫声)risingfromthedistance

(从远处升起).6.Jason看到远处有东西在闪烁。“灯！我看到灯了！”杰森大声喊道。Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance.“Lights!Iseelights!”Jasonshoutedout.7.我在绝望中我终于看到远处有几艘救生艇朝我们驶来。Insheerdesperation(在绝望中),Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemheadingtowardsus

inthedistance.8.过了很长时间，远处出现了一个亮点！我们挥挥手，大声呼救。Afteralongtime,alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutforhelp.第四绝招：情绪描写（希望+努力）——描写如释重负1.

就像抓着救命稻草一样，我一遍又一遍地拨号码。Asifclutchingatstraws,

Idialedthenumberagainandagain.2.

听到这个令人欣慰的消息，我忍不住激动起来。Hearingthe

comforting

news,I

couldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.(情难自抑)3.

他的话重新点燃了我心中的希望之火。Hiswordsreignitedtheflameofhopeinmyheart.——描写如释重负4.我感到一阵自豪，欣慰地微笑着。Smilinginrelief

(如释重负地微笑),I

feltarushofpride(感到一阵自豪).5.

看到有船来救我们，我和汤姆高兴极了，都松了一口气。Overjoyed(狂喜)toseeaboatcomingtoourrescue,TomandI

breathedasighofrelief(如释重负地松了口气)6.由于在一个姿势上保持了几个小时而僵硬了，他们慢慢地展开了身体。Stifffromkeepinginonepositionforhours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.第五绝招：脱险描写1.

船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。Theboatfinallyreachedusandtookallofusbacktotheshore.2.

乔大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。Yelling

atthetopofhislung,Joetriedtosoothemeandconvincemethatitwasthebestwaytoescapethedanger.第六绝招：情绪描写（感恩+高兴）1.

当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。Whenwepicturedwhatthemerryscenewouldbe,relieflayinmyheartandhappinesswaswrittenonmyface.2.

我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。Sighinginrelief,Icouldn’tstopthinkingaboutthewholeevent.Iknewtheywouldhavediediftheyhadbeenintheseaforanylonger.第七绝招：主旨描写1.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。