04 命题作文之叙事描写类（解析版）-【高分·技能】2024年中考英语写作常考题型全面突破

04命题作文之叙事描写类近三年考情分析近三年考情分析年份地区题目命题形式2023年四川南充Wherethereisawill,thereisaway命题作文江苏苏州Startingfrommeandnow命题作文辽宁丹东TheSpreadofLove命题作文山东东营TheplaceIwanttovisit命题作文2022年重庆B卷ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem命题作文江苏无锡ThePersonIWanttoThank命题作文湖南湘西OurColorfulLifeafterSchool命题作文2021年江苏南京MyBeautifulSchoolDay命题作文浙江宁波MotherlandinMyHeart命题作文写作方法指导写作方法指导命题作文的基本要求：1．习作要有扎实的英语基本功底，要牢固掌握英语基础知识，文章中的大小写、标点符号、词法、句法及语法等都要表达正确。2．要按照命题要求正确采用相应的行文格式撰写习作，层次分明，结构严谨，句式排列整齐，段落过渡自然，富有条理性。3．文章内容前后照应，词语运用准确到位，语言流畅，言简意赅，内容充实，叙事完整，深化主题。4．要根据文章规定的单词数组织安排文章的结构，不要忽上忽下。写作技巧：第一步，审题。无论写什么样的文章都不能离开文章的主题。主题是文章所要表达的中心，是文章的灵魂主宰。如果审不清主题，就有可能出现“下笔千言，离题万里”的情况。第二步，选材。审完题之后，就应该着手选材了。主题是文章的宗旨，材料必须为主题服务：主题必须统领材料，二者是密不可分、相辅相成的关系。既然要选材，就必须有充足的备选材料。只有平时多观察、多学习、多积累，才能保证材料充分、详实。在具备充足的材料的基础上，要学会去粗取精，去伪存真。还要分清材料的主次与详略，做到详略得当。第三步，列提纲。写文章之前列个提纲是个非常好的写作习惯。列提纲可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序；列提纲可以使你紧扣主题不跑题；列提纲还可以节约你的时间，提高写作效率。第四步，动笔。写作时一定要切题，抓住要点。题目要求的内容一定要写进去，以保证内容的完整。对于与要求无关的内容切忌任意发挥，画蛇添足。写作时要注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。在写不同题材和体裁的文章时，所用的句式、时态及用词均不同。写作时要多从交流的角度考虑以上几个方面。第五步，检查修改。要提高英语写作水平，除了准确遣词造句、严谨布局外，文章的修改也是很重要的一步。文章写好后，要经过反复修改润色，才能措辞准确，句子流畅，因此修改文章是提高写作水平的有效方法。写作模板写作模板 Oneday,

.(事情发生的时间、地点等) WhenIwas

,somethingstrangehappened

.(事情发生的过程)Finally,

.(结果) I’llneverforget

(感受)常用表达常用表达亮点词汇1、叙事顺序first,tobeginwith,firstofall,firstly首先secondly,then,besides,what'smore,inaddition,moreover然后atlast,lastbutnotleast,aboveall,allinall,tosumup,onthewhole,finally最后2、时间描写after.....之后 afterashort/longtime/period在一段很短/很长的时间后afterwards后来；然后 assoonas...一......就......fromthattimeon从那时起 immediately立刻;立即lately最近;近来;不久前 nowadays现在;如今recently最近 shortly马上;立刻sincethen从那时起 when,while...的时候3、地点词汇church教堂 tower塔bridge桥 station车站dormitory宿舍 supermarket超市shop商店 hospital医院theater剧院 playground操场cinema电影院 museum博物馆4.动作描写gooutforapicnic去野餐 haveaparty举行聚会gocamping去露营 rideahorse骑马haveawalk散步 flykites放风筝takephotos拍照 hurryto..匆忙赶到...seeadoctor看医生 setoff出发watchthematch看比赛 climbthemountains爬山5、结尾词汇thanksto多亏 asaresult结果luckily幸运地 because/becauseof因为atlast/intheend最后.......中考真题精讲中考真题精讲（2023·四川南充·统考中考真题）你校英语报以“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway（有志者事竟成）”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：（1）你对该谚语的理解；（2）你生活中的一个事例；（3）你的感悟。要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数100左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。Wherethereisawill,thereisawayHaveyouheardofthesaying“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”?Itmeans_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Wherethereisawill,thereisawayHaveyouheardofthesaying“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”?Itmeansifyouarereallydeterminedtodosomething,howeverdifficultitmightbe,youwilleventuallyfindawaytodoitwell.Theimportantpointisthatyoumusthavethewilltoachievesuccess.Takemeforexample.SpeakingEnglishusedtobedifficultforme.InGrade7,Icouldn’tspeakEnglishclearlyandmyclassmatesalwayslaughedatme.WithmyEnglishteacher’shelp,Imadeplanstoimproveit.IreadEnglishtextsaloudforanhoureverymorning.Ialsomadeaforeignfriendonline.Italkedtohertwiceaweek.ShehelpedmecorrectthewayIspokeEnglish.DaybydaymyspokenEnglishimprovedalot.LastmonthIwonfirstprizeinmyschool’sEnglishSpeechContest.Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatnothingistoodifficultaslongasyoumakethedecisiontodoit,justthesayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给的要点提示，结合自身经历，谈谈你对“有志者，事竟成”的理解和感悟，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，并表达自己对该谚语的理解；第二步，以自身经历为例来阐述；第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。[亮点词汇]①takemeforexample就拿我来说②usedtobe过去常常是③makeplantodo制定计划做某事④makethedecisiontodosth下决定做某事[高分句型]①Theimportantpointisthatyoumusthavethewilltoachievesuccess.(表语从句)②Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatnothingistoodifficultaslongasyoumakethedecisiontodoit,justthesayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.(aslongas引导的条件状语从句)（2023·江苏苏州·统考中考真题）HappyHomeClub本期的主题是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”，你打算以“Startingfrommeandnow”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.触动你的一件事情；2.这件事给你的启示；3.你的倡议。注意：1.词数：100左右。2.内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Startingfrommeandnow________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文StartingfrommeandnowLastweekend,Iwenttothecityparkwithmyclassmates.Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.Wefeltverysadaboutthat.Thecityisourhome,soweshouldtryourbesttokeepthecityclean.Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowrubbisharoundorspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.Second,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Third,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tridetoofastorplayonthestreet.Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Turnoffthelightsandtapsintime.Aslongaswetryourbestandstartingfrommeandnow,IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof各种各样的②besupposedtodosth.应该做某事③remembertodosth.记得做某事④intime及时[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.（when引导时间状语从句）②We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.（“sb.hadbetterdosth.”表建议的句型）③IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（宾语从句）（2023·辽宁丹东·统考中考真题）1．保持善良，传播爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历，以“TheSpreadofLove”为题，讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历，并谈谈你的感悟及今后的打算。写作要求：1.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；2.书写工整规范；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；4.词数：70词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheSpreadofLoveEveryonehasdifferentideasaboutlife.Inmyopinion,lifeisbeautifulandfulloflove.Severalweeksago,myclassmateBobwasbadlyill.Hehadtobeinhospitalforalongtime.Buthisfamilywastoopoortoaffordit.SoIdecidedtoraisemoneytohelphim.WhenIsentallthemoneytoBob,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.Helpingothersmakesmehappy.Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelievethatlifeisbeautifulandlovewillbearoundusforever.AndIwillalsohelpmorepeopleinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，介绍生活充满爱；第二步，具体阐述你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历；第三步，最后表达自己的感悟及今后的打算。[亮点词汇]①inmyopinion在我看来②too...to...太……而不能……③decidetodo决定做[高分句型]①WhenIsentallthemoneytoBob,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelievethatlifeisbeautifulandlovewillbearoundusforever.（that引导的宾语从句）（2023·山东东营·统考中考真题）旅游是我们看世界的重要方式，它可以让我们开阔视野，增长见识，丰富阅历，陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？为什么想去那个地方？你想在那个地方干些什么？请以“TheplaceIwanttovisit”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。要求：1.文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。2.照抄试卷内容不得分。TheplaceIwanttovisit________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheplaceIwanttovisitBeijing,thesecondlargestcityinourcountry,istheplaceIwanttovisit.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwouldliketovisitBeijing.First,BeijingisthecapitalofChina,andhasahistoryofmorethan3,000years.Ithasbeenthecapitalformanydynasties.Second,therearemanyhistoricalbuildings,suchastheGreatWallandtheSummerPalace.Therearealsosomenewstadiums,includingtheBirdNestandtheWaterCube,whichwerebuiltforthe2008BeijingOlympicGames.Iamreallylookingforwardtogoingthereandvisitingallthewonderfulplaces.Atthesametime,IhopeBeijingwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：题目要求以“TheplaceIwanttovisit”为题写短文介绍自己想要参观的地方。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍想要去参观哪里；第二步，谈谈想去这个地方的原因；第三步，介绍想要在那里干些什么。[亮点词汇]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②suchas例如③lookforwardtodoingsth.期待做某事④atthesametime与此同时[高分句型]①ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwouldliketovisitBeijing.（why引导定语从句）②Second,therearemanyhistoricalbuildings,suchastheGreatWallandtheSummerPalace.（therebe句型）（2022·重庆B卷·中考真题）有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校EnglishConer将进行“ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。要求：1.80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考词汇：angern.[U]愤怒1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）3.……ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblemHaveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening.【答案】例文ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblemHaveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter?Hereismyexperience.Lastterm,IboughtamagazinethatIhadalwayswanted.IlikeditsomuchthatIwascarefuleverytimeIcarriedit.Butoneday,mybestfriendTomtookthemagazinewithouttellingme.WhenIfoundit,Iwasveryangry.ButIcalmeddownsoon.IthoughtofhowTomhelpedmewhenIwasintroubleandIdidn’twanttobreaktherelationshipbetweenus.SoIcontrolledmyangeranddecidedtohaveatalkwithhim.Itoldhimthatheshouldtellmeifhewantedtoreadthemagazine.Afterthetalk,ourrelationshipbecamestronger.Fromthisexperience,whenweareangry,weshouldcalmourselvesdownandlearntoreflect.Themostimportantistocommunicatewithothersontimesothatwecansolvetheproblemsbetter.Thanksforlistening.【解析】1.题干解读：本文以“ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem”为题，结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决一件小事，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。（2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意事项：1.演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3.词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；5.演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThePersonIWanttoThankInmyjuniorschoollife,manypeoplehavehelpedme.Ithankthemverymuch.ButthepersonIwanttothankmostismyEnglishteacherMissLee.MissLeeisbeautifulwithlonghair.Andsheiskind.Shehelpsmealot.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.Shehasagreatinfluenceonme,andherhelpisveryusefulformyfuturedevelopment.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。（2022·湖南湘西·中考真题）随着义务教育阶段“双减”政策的全面实施，合理安排课外生活对我们初中生尤为重要。某报刊青少年专栏以“我们丰富的课外生活”为主题开展征文活动。请根据以下表格内容提示，以“OurColorfulLifeafterSchool”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍丰富多彩的课外生活，并推荐你最喜欢的一项活动且说明原因。OurColorfulLifeafterSchooltakepartindifferentvolunteeringactivitiesdevelophobbiesandinterests,likesinging,dancing...getclosetonature,suchasclimbingmountains,camping...learnsomeusefulskillsinourdailylife,suchas...要求:1.结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；2.表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；3.文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息；4.词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。OurColorfulLifeafterSchoolLifeafterschoolisanimportantpartinourdailylife.Howcanwemakeitmorecolorful?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OurColorfulLifeafterSchoolLifeafterschoolisanimportantpartinourdailylife.Howcanwemakeitmorecolorful?Wecantakepartindifferentvolunteeringactivities.Wecandevelopourhobbiesandinterests,likesinging,dancingandsoon.Weoftengetclosetonature,suchasclimbingmountains,camping.Wecanalsolearnsomeusefulskillsinourdailylife,suchascooking.Ilikesingingbecauseitisalsoa goodwaytorelaxmyself.Besides,inthemusicclub,Icanmakemanyfriends.Allinall,after-schoolactivitiesmakemylifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求以“OurColorfulLifeafterSchool”为题介绍课外活动；要求包含表格中的内容提示。2.写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用1段落格式，阐述最喜欢的课外活动以及原因；注意无语法和拼写错误。（2021·江苏南京市·中考真题）某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。Thisnewglobalsiteisaplaceforstudentstosharetheirideas.Wearelookingforyourbeautifulschooldaytoinspire（鼓舞）ourreaders.Didyouhelpanyoneatschool?Didyouenjoyabeautifulsonginyourartlesson?Didyouhaveanamazingexperienceintheschoollab?Yourschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Chooseabeautifulschoolday.Writeapassagetotelluswhatyoudidthatdayandwhyyouthinkitwasbeautiful.Sendyourwritingtousrightnow!注意:1.内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。2.词数80左右（已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数）。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhichmakesmefeelmeaningful.MybestfriendLucyandIalwaysridebikestogetherafterschool.Oneday,Iwaitedalongtimebutdidn’tseeher.ThenIsearchedforherinthecornerofourschool.Shewascryingatthattime.ShetoldmethatshewasnervousbecauseshewouldhaveanEnglishtest.IdecidedtohelpherwithEnglish.Thatevening,Ihelpedherreviewthekeypointsandnotes.Twodayslater,shetoldmethatshepassedit.Ifeltthathelpingotherswhoareinneedwasverymeaningful.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我美丽的学校生活”写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为两段式，第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历，并发表自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。（2021·浙江宁波市·中考真题）假如你是李华,上个月你校举行了“祖国在我心中”的主题活动（themeevent）,请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历,写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。注意：（1）短文必须包括导图的所有要点,并适当发挥;（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;（3）词数80-100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。MotherlandinMyHeart________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MotherlandinMyHeartLastmonth,ourschoolheldaneventwiththethemeof“MotherlandinMyHeart”toexpressourloveforourmotherland.Duringtheevent,wehadmanyactivities,includingsingingredsongsandtellingstoriesabouttheRedArmy.Itookpartinthesingingcompetition.Besides,IattendedthespeechcontestinwhichItoldastoryaboutahero.Manystudentsweremovedbymystory.Ithinkthiseventisverymeaningful.I’mproudofmycountry.Ihopeourmotherlandwillbecomemuchgreaterandeverybodycanliveabetterlife.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据所给提示，以“MotherlandinMyHeart”为题，结合自己参加“祖国在我心中”主题活动的经历写篇文章，向学校英语报投稿。2.写作指导：人称应采用第一人称，介绍主题活动内容时用一般过去时，表达自己的感受时用一般现在时。注意要包含所给要点，保证条理清晰。名校模拟题提升练写作方法指导名校模拟题提升练写作方法指导（2022上·吉林长春·九年级校考期末）“少年强，则国强”，青少年要勇敢肩负起时代赋予的重任，脚踏实地、志存高远。进入九年级，每个同学都在为进入梦想中的学校而努力着。那么，为了实现你的梦想，你打算怎么做？请你以“MyDream,MyFuture”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。写一写你的期待和梦想；为了实现梦想，你计划做哪些方面的努力？至少2点.；呼吁大家一起为梦想而加油！要求：1.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。MyDream,MyFuture________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyDream,MyFutureI’maGrade9studentnow.Theseniorhighschoolentranceexaminationiscoming.I’mbusygettingreadyforiteveryday,suchasreadingaloudinthemorning,finishinglotsofexercisesandsoon.It’smydreamtogotohighschool.Toachievemydream,Ihavesomeplans.First,I’lllistentomyteacherscarefullyinclass.Everylessonisimportant,Ican’tmissanypoint.Second,Ineedtofinishmyhomeworkontime.It’sagoodwaytocheckwhatIhavelearnedandhowIhavelearned.Finally,it’snecessarytopayattentiontomyphysicalandmentalhealth,whichareimportantformetofacethebigchallenge.Witheveryeffort,Ihopemydreamwillcometruesoon.Let’sworkhardtofightforabrightfuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：本文以“MyDream,MyFuture”为题，结合题干中的提示介绍如何实现自己的梦想，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，简单说明自己的梦想；第二步，具体阐说如何实现梦想；第三步，最后呼吁大家一起为梦想而加油。[亮点词汇]①getreadyfor作准备②ontime准时③payattentionto注意[高分句型]①Toachievemydream,Ihavesomeplans.（动词不定式表目的）②It’sagoodwaytocheckwhatIhavelearnedandhowIhavelearned.（what引导宾语从句）③Finally,it’snecessarytopayattentiontomyphysicalandmentalhealth,whichareimportantformetofacethebigchallenge.（which引导非限制性定语从句）（2023上·天津和平·九年级统考期中）每个时代都有自己的偶像，青少年们在成长中也一定有榜样的力量在指引。例如：航天英雄杨利伟，奥运冠军苏炳添，抗疫英雄钟南山等等。其实，只要用心观察，平凡的生活中也有我们的偶像。他们陪伴我们成长，指引我们前行，给予我们力量。请根据以下提示，以“Myhero”为题，讲述一位平凡生活中的偶像。(1)偶像：妈妈

年龄：40多岁

职业：医生

爱好：读书(2)生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议；(3)经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人；(4)两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院；(5)我认为……。写作要求：(1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。(2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。(3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。(4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。)MyheroMyheroismymotherand__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyheroMyheroismymotherandsheisfortyyearsold.Sheisadoctorandenjoysreading.MymothertakescareofmeinlifeandgivesmesomeadvicewheneverImeetdifficulties.Sheoftenspendsalotoftimeworkingtohelpmorepeople.Twoyearsago,shevolunteeredinpoorareas,trainedyoungdoctors,andhelpedfoundhospitals.Ibelievethatmymotherisgreat.WhenIgrowup,Ialsowanttobecomesomeonelikemymotherandmakecontributionstothe