高考英语百所名校好题速递分项汇编 专题06 书面表达（第01期）（含解析）-人教版高三英语试题

2020届高三百所名校好题精华速递分项汇编（1）之书面表达【2020届湖北省武汉市华中师范大学第一附属中学高考押题】假设你是李华，你校即将举办一场孔子思想讲座，主题是“见贤思齐焉，见不贤而内自省也”。请写邮件邀请对中国传统文化感兴趣的交换生Jim听讲座，内容包括:1.时间、地点；2.讲座主题；3.可能的收获。注意:1.词数100左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:《论语》TheAnalectsofConfucius儒家思想Confucianism____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim,Goodnewsforyou!TherewillbealectureaboutConfuciousnextweekinourschool.SinceyouareveryinterestedinChineseculture,thisisagoodchanceforyoutogetaglimpseofitsorigin-Confucianism.Thelectureisscheduledtobeheldat6pmnextFriday,inLectureHallI.YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.TheinvitedprofessorwillfocusononeofConfucious’sayings-Whenweseemenofworth,weshouldthinkofequalingthem;whenweseemenofacontrarycharacter,weshouldturninwardsandexamineourselves.Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.Weareapeoplewhoaregoodatreflectingonourthoughtsandbehaviours.Ifyouareinterestedinthelecture,remembertobeinLectureHallIat6pmnextFriday.Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给交换生Jim写信，邀请他参加学校即将举办的一场关于孔子思想的讲座。体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主结构：总分总要求：1.时间、地点2.讲座主题3.可能的收获第二步：列提纲（重点词组）beinterestedin/bescheduled/keeparecord/focuson/shape/reflect/remembertodosth./worth第三步：连词成句1.Goodnewsforyou!2.TherewillbealectureaboutConfuciousnextweekinourschool.3.KnowingthatyouareveryinterestedinChineseculture,Ithinkitisagoodchanceforyoutogetaglimpseofitsorigin-Confucianism.4.Thelectureisscheduledtobeheldat6pmnextFriday,inLectureHallI.5.YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.6.TheinvitedprofessorwillfocusononeofConfucious’sayings-Whenweseemenofworth,weshouldthinkofequalingthem;whenweseemenofacontrarycharacter,weshouldturninwardsandexamineourselves.7.Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.8.Weareapeoplewhoaregoodatreflectingonourthoughtsandbehaviours.9.Ifinterestedinthelecture,remembertobeinLectureHallIat6pmnextFriday.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/if/though/although…定语从句连词：which/that/when/where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.中which引导非限制性定语从句；Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.中what引导宾语从句。【2020届河南省新乡市高三第三次模拟】假定你是你班英语科代表李华，得知许多同学长时间在网上学习英语。就此请你用英语给你班同学发一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.陈述长时间在网上学习造成的影响；2.你的建议（控制时间，多种形式相结合等）。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearclassmates,I’msorrytolearnthatmanyofushavespenttoomuchtimelearningEnglishontheInternet,whichcanobviouslydoharmtoourbodies,especiallyeyesight.Thus,astherepresentativeofEnglishclass,Iwanttoofferthefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Firstofall,wecanlimitonlinestudytimetothirtyminutesatime.Secondly,weshouldcombinevariousformsofEnglishlearning.That’stosay,onlineEnglishlearningshouldbereasonablycombinedwithofflineEnglishlearning.Infact,wehavealotofthingstodobesidesstayingontheInternet,suchasdoingsomewrittenassignmentsandrelaxingourselvesonceinawhile.Inshort,let’sstudytogetherhealthilyandeffectively.Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封电子邮件给同学们，说明长时间网上学习的影响并提出相关意见。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.写出背景信息，自己的得知同学们长时间网上学习，表达自己的意图。2.长时间网上学习的影响（doharmtoourbodies）3.提出建议1）限制上网时间（limitonlinestudytime）2）结合多种途径学习英语（combinevariousformsofEnglishlearning）3）做一些其他的事情（dosomewrittenassignmentsandpracticespokenEnglish）第二步：列提纲（重点词组）doharmto;combinedwith;Infact;spokenEnglish;onceinawhile第三步：连词成句1.I’msorrytolearnthatmanyofushavespenttoomuchtimelearningEnglishontheInternet,whichcanobviouslydoharmtoourbodies,especiallyeyesight.2.AstherepresentativeofEnglishclass,Iwanttooffersomesuggestions.3.Wecanlimitonlinestudytime.4.WeshouldcombinevariousformsofEnglishlearning5.OnlineEnglishlearningshouldbecombinedwithofflineEnglishlearning.6.Wehavealotofthingstodo,suchasdoingsomewrittenassignmentsandpracticingspokenEnglishonceinawhile.7.Let’sstudytogetherhealthilyandeffectively.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n./doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：I’msorrytolearnthatmanyofushavespenttoomuchtimelearningEnglishontheInternet,whichcanobviouslydoharmtoourbodies,especiallyeyesight.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，除此之外还有一些固定搭配如doharmto;combinedwith;Infact;spokenEnglish;onceinawhile等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2020届四川省成都市高三毕业班第三次诊断】假定你是李华。你之前在网上为你校交换生Jack预定了下周六晚上7：30的川剧演出，现该演出被宣布取消，请给他写一封邮件，内容要点如下：1.告知演出取消；2.后续事项处理；3.其它活动建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】OnePossibleVersion:DearJack,I’msorrytotellyouthattheSichuanOperaPerformanceat7:30p.m.nextSaturdayIbookedforyouhasbeencancelled.Iknowyouhavelookedforwardtowatchingitforalongtimeandit’sreallyapieceofpitifulnews.Butthethingissuch.LatertheoperawillgivethemoneybackandthenIwillreturnittoyou.AlthoughthechancetowatchtheSichuanOperaPerformancehasbeenmissed,youstillhavesomeotherinterestingandmeaningfulactivitiestotakepartin.Forexample,IcanbringyoutotastethetraditionalSichuanhotpotandothertastyfoods.Andwatchingpandasisalsoagoodidea.WishyouanenjoyableexperienceinChina.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达告知朋友预定的川剧演出被取消，并告知后续处理和活动建议。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为现在完成时、一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法  总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.告知川剧演出被取消2.告知后续处理3.提出活动建议第二步:列提纲（重点词组）besorrytotell;lookforwardto;apitifulnews;givethemoneyback;someotherinterestingandmeaningfulactivities;thetraditionalSichuanhotpot;watchpandas第三步：连词成句1.I’msorrytotellyouthattheSichuanOperaPerformanceat7:30p.m.nextSaturdayIbookedforyouhasbeencancelled.2.Iknowyouhavelookedforwardtowatchingitforalongtimeandit’sreallyapitifulnews.3.Latertheoperawillgivethemoneyback.4.Youstillhavesomeotherinterestingandmeaningfulactivitiestotakepartin.5.IcanbringyoutotastethetraditionalSichuanhotpotandothertastyfoods.6.Andwatchingpandasisalsoagoodidea.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:although引导的让步状语从句AlthoughthechancetowatchtheSichuanOperaPerformancehasbeenmissed,youstillhavesomeotherinterestingandmeaningfulactivitiestotakepartin.that引导的宾语从句和省略that或者which的定语从句I’msorrytotellyouthattheSichuanOperaPerformanceat7:30p.m.nextSaturdayIbookedforyouhasbeencancelled.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。【2020届辽宁省沈阳市东北育才学校高中部高三第八次模拟】假定你是李华，你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.补救措施。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMrSmith，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【答案】DearMrSmith,I'msorrytotellyouthatIcan'taccompanyyoutotheInternationalPhotographyFestivalheldthisSaturday.SomethingunexpectedhappenedandmyparentshavetogooutsideofthecitythisSaturday,soIhavetostayathomeandtakecareofmylittlebrother.Butdon'tworryaboutthetrip.IhaveexplainedmysituationtomybestfriendJohn,whoisoneyearolderthanmeandcanspeakfluentEnglish.Heisavailablethatdayandiswillingtogowithyou.WillitbeOKwithyou?I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincercly,LiHua【解析】这篇书面表达是一篇话题类作文。假定你是李华，你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件。假定你是李华,你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展,但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.补救措施。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I'msorrytotellyouthatIcan'taccompanyyoutotheInternationalPhotographyFestivalheldthisSaturday.宾语从句的运用。IhaveexplainedmysituationtomybestfriendJohn,whoisoneyearolderthanmeandcanspeakfluentEnglish.定语从句的运用。【2020届湖南省永州市六县高三6月（第二次)联考】假定你是李华，最近在某英文论坛上看到一名叫Jonah的澳大利亚高中生发的帖子，他提到自己想结交一位中国朋友以便学习川剧（SichuanOpera)。请根据所给提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达意愿；2.帮助方式；3.期待回复。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJonah，HownicetoseeyourpostontheInternet!It'sveryinterestingthatyou,anAustralian,showsomuchloveforourlocalpride,SichuanOpera!I'dliketobeyourfriendandhelpyourealizeyourdream,formydadisworkingasanactorinoneoftheSichuanOperatheatersinChengdu.Mydadisopen-mindedaswellaseasy-going.I'msurehecanbehelpful.Asforme,I'maseniorhighschoolstudentasyouare.Ibelievewehavemuchtoshareandcangetalongwellwitheachother.Pleasewritebackassoonaspossiblesothatwecanmakeaplan.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生回一封邮件给想结交一位中国朋友以便学习川剧的澳大利亚高中生Jonah，告知他你愿意帮助他学习川剧。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表达意愿；2.帮助方式；3.期待回复。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）showlovefor；helpsb.dosth.；workas；aswellas；getalongwellwith第三步：连词成句1.It'sveryinterestingthatyou,anAustralian,showsomuchloveforourlocalpride,SichuanOpera!2.I'dliketobeyourfriendandhelpyourealizeyourdream,formydadisworkingasanactorinoneoftheSichuanOperatheatersinChengdu.3.Mydadisopen-mindedaswellaseasy-going.4.Ibelievewehavemuchtoshareandcangetalongwellwitheachother.(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast,Lastbutnotleast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also),including,also3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult5表换一种方式表达：Inotherwords,thatistosay,6.表进行举例说明：Forexample;Forinstance;suchas+n/doing7.表陈述事实：Infact,franklyspeaking8.表选择：either…or…，or连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如It'sveryinterestingthatyou,anAustralian,showsomuchloveforourlocalpride,SichuanOpera!这句话中用了that引导的主语从句（it作形式主语）；使用了非常好的短语，如showlovefor，workas，getalongwellwith等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2020届广西桂林、崇左、防城港市高三6月联合模拟】假定你是李华。你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒。请你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒。内容包括：1．关注天气变化，及时加衣物；2．适当运动，注意饮食；3．避免与感冒患者接触。注意：1．总词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSusan,I’mwritingtoinformyouthespreadofabadcoldinourcityasaresultofthechangeableweather.Lotsofpeopleareinhospitalbecauseofit.HerearesometipsIwanttoofferyou.Firstofall,you’dbetterknowaboutthechangeofweatherandputonmoreclothesaccordingtotheweather.Secondly,exerciseisagoodwaytokeepyoufarawayfromcold.Moreover,eatinghealthyfoodisnecessaryforyoutokeepyourselfingoodcondition.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldkeepafardistancewiththepatientswhoaresufferingfromcold.Ihopemysuggestionwillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。根据提示信息，文章要求假定你是李华,你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒。你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒。写作时：1.首先注意时态一般现在时，其次人称使用第二人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大段;第一段提醒他关注天气变化，及时加衣物；第二段告诉他适当运动，注意饮食；第三段提醒他避免与感冒患者接触。3.注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用可几个高分句型。1.I’mwritingtoinformyouthespreadofabadcoldinourcityasaresultofthechangeableweather此句使用了书信表达写信目的的经典句式：I’mwritingto….。2.Firstofall,you’dbetterknowaboutthechangeofweatherandputonmoreclothesaccordingtotheweather此句是and连接的两个并列句。3.youshouldkeepafardistancewiththepatientswhoaresufferingfromcold此句是个定语从句，先行词为patients，关系词是who。【2020届重庆市高三6月调研考试（三诊)】假定你是李华，你校将举办太极拳（TaiChi）比赛。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友James参加，内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.活动安排；3.表达期待。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】DearJames,Howiseverythinggoing?LearningthatyouareinterestedinChineseKongfu,IamwritingtoinviteyoutoenjoyaTaiChicompetitionorganizedbyourschool.Thecompetition,scheduledtobeheldatthestadiumat9:00nextSaturday,isamust-seeforanyenthusiastofChineseKongfu.Asplanned,therewillbeanopeningceremonywhenashortvideoaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofTaiChiwillbeintroduced.Lateron,theexcitingcompetitionwillbeconducted,whenwecanwatchtheTaiChiplayersfightingwitheachother.AsfarasIknow,themembersoftheTaiChiclubinourschoolwillbepartofthecompetition.Icannotwaittoenjoyit.Shouldyoubeavailable,IstronglysuggestyoucometolearnmoreaboutTaiChiandenjoythecompetition.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本文书面表达为应用文，要求李华写邮件邀请James参加太极比赛。第一步：审题1.体裁：邀请涵2.人称：第一人称3.时态：一般将来时，一般现在时4.要点：

①写作背景和写作目的②比赛时间，活动安排③表示期待第二步：列要点写提纲Para.1beinterestedin...;invitesbtodosth;Para.2bescheduledtobeheld…;amust;willbeintroduced;conductacompetition;watchsbdoingsth;can’twaittodosthPara.3beavailable;learnmoreaboutsth第三步：连词成句1.YouareinterestedinChineseKongfu.2.IamwritingtoinviteyoutoenjoyaTaiChicompetitionorganizedbyourschool.3.Thecompetitionisscheduledtobeheldatthestadiumat9:00nextSaturdayanditisamust-seeforanyenthusiastofChineseKongfu.4.TherewillbeanopeningceremonywhenashortvideoaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofTaiChiwillbeintroduced.5.Theexcitingcompetitionwillbeconducted,andwecanwatchtheTaiChiplayersfightingwitheachother.6.ThemembersoftheTaiChiclubinourschoolwillbepartofthecompetition.7.IsuggestyoucometolearnmoreaboutTaiChiandenjoythecompetition.第四步：润色提高1.添加交际表达

开头添加寒暄用语：Howiseverythinggoing?结尾添加期待回复：Lookingforwardtoyourreply.2.增加句子之间的连贯性Asplanned,therewillbeanopeningceremonywhenashortvideoaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofTaiChiwillbeintroduced.Lateron,theexcitingcompetitionwillbeconducted,whenwecanwatchtheTaiChiplayersfightingwitheachother.AsfarasIknow,themembersoftheTaiChiclubinourschoolwillbepartofthecompetition.Icannotwaittoenjoyit.3.使用高级表达LearningthatyouareinterestedinChineseKongfu,IamwritingtoinviteyoutoenjoyaTaiChicompetitionorganizedbyourschool.Thecompetition,scheduledtobeheldatthestadiumat9:00nextSaturday,isamust-seeforanyenthusiastofChineseKongfu.Shouldyoubeavailable,IstronglysuggestyoucometolearnmoreaboutTaiChiandenjoythecompetition.第五步：漂亮书写【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如bescheduledtodosth,amust,can’twaittodosth等。复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如例如使用非谓语做插入语：Thecompetition,scheduledtobeheldatthestadiumat9:00nextSaturday,isamust-seeforanyenthusiastofChineseKongfu.使得句子变得更简洁也更高级。使用虚拟语气Shouldyoubeavailable,IstronglysuggestyoucometolearnmoreaboutTaiChiandenjoythecompetition.让句式更为委婉和多变。【2020届四川省乐山市高中高三第三次调查】假定你是李华，你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿，内容包括：1.演讲的主题；2.健康生活习惯的重要性；3.2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mgladtostandheretosharewithyoumyideasabouthealthylivinghabits.Inmyeyes,healthylivinghabitscankeepusfit,protectusfromgettingillandhelpusstartanewdaywithfullenergy.Sowemaytakefreshfruits,meatandvegetables,andavoideatingtoomanysnackfoods.Thentakingappropriateexerciseregularlyisalsonecessaryforgoodhealth.Whenyouarrivehomefrompublicplace,pleasewashthehands,especiallybeforetouchingyourowneyes,noseormouth.Andwhenyousneezeandcough,it’sagoodmanneraswellasaprotectionforpublichealththatyouusepaperorhandkerchieftocoverthenoseormouth.Wishyouallthebest.Thankyou!【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.演讲的主题；2.健康生活习惯的重要性；3.2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）sharewith;healthylivinghabits;keepsbfit;protect…from;energy;freshfruits;avoiddoing;takeexercise;regularly;washthehands;sneeze;cough;goodmanner;handkerchief;cover.第三步：连词成句I’mgladtostandheretosharewithyoumyideasabouthealthylivinghabits.Inmyeyes,healthylivinghabitscankeepusfit,protectusfromgettingillandhelpusstartanewdaywithfullenergy.Wemaytakefreshfruits,meatandvegetables,andavoideatingtoomanysnackfoods.Takingappropriateexerciseregularlyisalsonecessaryforgoodhealth.Whenyouarrivehomefrompublicplace,pleasewashthehands,especiallybeforetouchingyourowneyes,noseormouth.Whenyousneezeandcough,it’sagoodmanneraswellasaprotectionforpublichealththatyouusepaperorhandkerchieftocoverthenoseormouth.Wishyouallthebest.Thankyou!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句，比如Andwhenyousneezeandcough,it’sagoodmanneraswellasaprotectionforpublichealththatyouusepaperorhandkerchieftocoverthenoseormouth.这句话运用了it作形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句。此外Thentakingappropriateexerciseregularlyisalsonecessaryforgoodhealth.使用了动名词做主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词和词组，如keepsbfit,regularly;protect…from等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2020届山西省运城市高中联合体高三第三次模拟】假定你是李华,你所在城市的博物馆即将开展“近代文物展”。你想邀请你校的外籍教师Robert一起参观。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括：1.展出的目的；2.举办时间；3.活动内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇：文物culturalrelicsDearRobert,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】DearRobert,OurcitymuseumhasscheduledashowofChineseculturalrelics.BeingfullyawareofyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutopayavisittotheshowwithme.Theshow,meanttopromoteourawarenessofourhistoryandarouseourprideinourdeep-rootedculture,willtakeplacethreedaysaway,onJuly5th,lastingawholeweek.Exhibitedattheshowwillbeacollectionofculturalandhistoricrelics,whichreflectpeople'slifeandsocialdevelopmentatthetime.I'llfeelprivilegedtobeyourguideduringthevisit.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华,你所在城市的博物馆即将开展“近代文物展”。你想邀请你校的外籍教师Robert一起参观。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括：1.展出的目的；2.举办时间；3.活动内容。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：culturalrelics(文物)；beawareof(意识到)；keeninterest(强烈的兴趣)；payavisit(参观)；takeplace(举行)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、现在进行时、一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Beingfullyawareofyourkeenin