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续写原文Michaelsawthetroublecoming.TherestandinginthehallwaywasFrank,theboywhoenjoyedmakingfunofanyoneatanygivenmoment.Frankwastallandstrong,sofewofhisvictimsstooduptohim.MichaelhatedtheideathatFrankalwaysgotawaywithhiswrongdoing.Yetlikemostkidswhowerepickedon,hejusttookitquietlyandwaitedfortheunpleasanttopass.
Frankwalkedup,hiseyeslockedonthebooksinMichael'sarms.Whentheymet,Frankstoppedunexpectedly,"Hey,letmeseethosebooks!"SomestudentswatchedasMichaelheldoutthebookshewascarrying,tryingnottogiveawayhisnervousness.
Franktookabook,lookedinsideforasecond,andthenthrewthebookatMichael,whodroppedalltheotherbooks."Hey,thoseareschoolproperty,"Frankbarked,"Becareful!"Thenhewalkedaway,laughingloudly.
Michael,hischeeksturningred,halfkickedthefallenbooks.Suddenlyahandpickeduponebook."Youlooklikeyoucoulduseanally(盟友)",afriendlyvoicesaid.ItwasRamon,themostathleticboyinthehighschool.Michaelcouldn'tbelieveRamonwasstoppingtohelphimastheybarelyspoke.
"Thanks,"Michaelsighedwithrelief."It'sconfusing.Idon'tknowwhathisproblemsis."
"Well,asIseeit,"Ramonsaid,"youneedtofindawaytoendthis."Michaelnodded,stuckforwhattosay.Ramoncontinued,"YouknowmygrandmotherusedtotellmewheneverIhadaproblemwithsomeone,'Youcancatchmoreflieswithhoneythanwithvinegar.
Lookingpuzzled,Michaelasked,"Whatdoesthatmean?"
"Itmeanskindnessmaybemoreeffectivethananger,"Ramonexplained.
"CanyoujusttellFranktostoppickingonme?"Michaelsuggested.
"That'svinegar,"Ramonlaughedashewalkedaway.
"Tryhoneyinstead."
Ramon'swordsleftMichaelthinking.
ThenextschooldaybroughtMichael'susualpain.TherestoodFrank,andMichaelknewitwouldbejustsecondsbeforehehadtofacehiminthemiddleofthehall.Frankcamenearer,bookinhand.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.Paragraph2:MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank'sbooksonthefloor.二.续写点拨本文主要讲述了Frank经常欺负Michael,Ramon看到后,告诉Michael善意比愤怒更容易化解矛盾,最后Michael用善意解决了和Frank之间问题的故事。第一段:
(1)Frank拿书摔倒,书撒落一地;
(2)周围人围观,没人帮助Frank;(3)Michael想起了Ramon的建议。第二段:
(1)Michael帮助Frank拾起了书;
(2)Frank受感动,冰释前嫌;
(3)Michael意识到解决问题的方式是善意或Michael和Ramon会心一笑,建议奏效(回扣主题)。三.续写示范下水文1:Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.Franktrippedoversomehowandtumbledtotheground,scatteringhisbookseverywhere.Withhis,cheeksflushing,redwithembarrassment,,hepickedhimselfupquickly,lookinganxiouslyatthebookssurroundingbin.Foronce,thetablesturned,anditwastime,forFranktobetheonewhowaslaughedout.Butatthistime,whatRamonhadsaidoccurredtoMichaelsuddenly."MaybeIshouldtryhoneyinstead.”Justsettingasidethethoughtoflaughingathim,MichaelsteppedtowardsFrank.MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank'sbooksonthefloor.Hecarefullycollectedallthebooks,handeditovertoFrankwithawarmsmileonhisfaceandwalkedaway,leavingFrankthinking.Shockedandrootedtothespot,Frankcouldn'tbelieveapersonhehadpickedonbefore,shouldhelphim.Staringatthebooksinbishands,hewasgratefultoMichael.Fromthenon,Frankneverpickedonothersagain.IntermsofMichael,neverhadheimaginedthepowerofkindnesscouldmakesuchadifference.Hedidcatchmoreflieswithhoneythanwithvinegar.下水文2:Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.
Frank,withaprankish(捉弄人的)look,waswalkingoverwithapileofbooks.Michaeldidn'tknowwhatFrankintendedto,buthefeltsurehewasabouttobemadefunofagain.Justashewasguessinghowheshouldrespond,suddenlytherewasaloud"bang"–Frankhadfallenover.Thentheclassmatesbegantoteasehim,andsomeonewhispered,"Hecaneventripoverhimself,howsilly."SeeingFrank'sawkwardsituationandotherpeople’sreaction,Michaelfeltquitepleasedandwasreadytojoininthelaughter.Butatthatmoment,herememberedRamon'swords,"youcancatchmoreflieswithhoneythanwithvinegar."So,hemadeadecisionthatsurprisedeveryone.MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.
ThenhehandedthebooksbacktoFrank,whowasshockedbyMichael'shelpatfirst,thenlookedathimanda"thankyou"cameoutofhismouthbeforehewalkedaway.Theclassmatesalsoinstantlyquieteddown,stoppingtheirlaughteratFrank,andturnedbacktotheirownaffairs.Fortherestoftheday,Frankdidn’tteaseanyone,nordidhemakefunofMichaelashehaddonebefore.AlthoughFrankdidnotapologizeforhispreviousbehaviors,atthismoment,Michaelknewhisactofkindnesshadhadaneffect.SeeingFrankkeepquietalltheday,RamoncametoMichaelandsaid,"youhavelearnedhowtohandlepeoplelikethis."Hereplied,"Youwereright,kindnessisindeedmuchmoreimportantthananger.Sometimeswedoneedtousehoneytodealwithflies."参考范文Possibleversion1Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.JustasMichaellookednervously,andrightinthesightofeveryone,Franksomehowtripped.Downhefelltotheground,sendingallhisbooksflyingandspreadingout.Timestandingstill,everyonewastakenabackbytheoccurrence.AlthoughMichaelwasjustasshocked,hismindwasracing------itwasinasplitsecondthatRamon'sGrandma'swordspoppedintohismind,“Youcancatchmoreflieswithhoneythanvinegar."Heknewwhattodo.BarelyhadFrankgottenupwithloadsofembarrassmentwhenMichaelwentup.MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank'sbooksonthefloor.Afterofferingthemtohim,Michaelsaidwithasmile.“Youlooklikeyoucoulduseanally,”Now,itwasFrank'sturntobefrozentherewithburningcheeks.Obviously,Michael'sresponsewaswayoutofhisexpectations.Aflickerofgratitudecrossedhisface.Hequicklytookthebooks,murmuredhisthanksandfledthescene.Outofthecornerofhiseye,MichaelcaughtRamonapproachingwithaknowingsmileandathumbs-up.“Well,Iguessthat'shoney,”,Michaelgrinnedtohim.AndIhopeitsticks.Possibleversion2Thensuddenlytheunexpectedhappen.Franktrippedoverhisownlacesandfelltotheground,scatteringhisbookseverywhere.TheotherstudentslaughedasFrankstruggledtopickhimselfup,hisfaceburningredwithembarrassment.TherewasamomentwhenMichaelcouldn'tbelievehisluck.Foronce,thetableshadturnedanditwasFrankwhowastheonetobeawkward.HecouldhavelaughedandmadefunofFrank,or
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