高考英语二轮专题练习（五）改错专项-人教版高三英语试题

【二轮专题练】（五）改错专项假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。AHowdoesthediseasepresent?Well,fromwhatisknownsofar,therecanbethenumberofsymptomsrangefrommildtosevere.Therecanbefeverandrespiratorysymptomssuchascoughandshortofbreath.Inmoreseverecase,there’sbeenpneumonia(肺炎),kidneyfailure(肾衰竭),anddeath.Themortalityrate(死亡率)wasnotknownyet.Howcanwetellifsomeoneisinfectedornot?Theinfectioncanbediagnosed(诊断)byatestcallingPCRorPolymeraseChainReaction(聚合酶链反应).Thistestidentifiesthevirusbasingonitsgeneticfingerprint.Thereiscurrentnospecificmedicationforthevirusandtreatmentissupportivecare.There’snovaccine(疫苗)toprotectthevirus.Treatmentandvaccinesareindevelopment.BStickingtoavegandietmightsounddifficult,especialwithmanypopulardishescontainingmeatorotheranimalproducts.Yetinrecentyears,veganismhasbecomeoneofthefastest-growinglifestyletrendintheworld.AccordingtoHuffPost,morethan3millionpeopleintheUnitedStatesarevegans.IntheUK,about542,000peoplechooseveganismoverthepastdecade.Whatisdrivingthisgrowthinveganism?Onereasonmaybethatpeoplewanttoprotecttheenvironment.Producemeatanddairyproductsisknowntobestressfulfortheenvironment.Accordingtoa2013studybytheUNFoodandAgricultureOrganization,globalmeatmanufacturingcausesabout18percentoftheworld’sgreenhousegasemissions.Thisfigureishighthanalltheworld’scars,trainsandplanescombined.AccordingtoBBCNews,anotherreasoniswhymanyoftoday’syoungpeoplebelieveit’swrongtokillanimalsforfood.Formanypeople,veganismsimplymeanseatingnomeat,cheeseoreggs,andgoinganimal-freealsoappliestofashionandmanufacturing.Forexample,leatherisusedtomakeshoesandclothing.Everyyearmorethanabillionanimals,fromcowstosnakes,killedtomakeleatherproductsfromtheirskins.Now,manybrandsarelookingothermaterials.So,ifyou’reinterestedinprotectinganimalsandtosavingtheenvironment,youmightwanttogiveveganismatry.CWhenIwasyoung,Ididn’tknowwhatfriendship.WhenIstayedwithmyfriends,awarmfeelingcameoutofthebottomfrommyheart.NowIhavegrownupandgotmanyfriend.AndIhavebeentastedthepleasantfeelingoffriendship.WhenIamhappy,theyarealsohappyandsharedthehappinesswithme.WhenImakeprogress,theywillbeveryexciting.Instead,whenI’minadifficultsituation,theywillofferhelptome.Sofriendshipisneveranone-wayticket.Ifwewanttogetthem,wemusttreatotherswellatfirst.Weshouldalwaysbereadytohelpothers,especiallythattheyareindifficultsituations.DIcan’tswimbecauseIhaveastrongfearofwater.Lookbackmychildhoodexperiences,Ithinkthatthreereasonsmightexplainthefear.ThefirstreasonisthatIwasnotallowtogonearthewaterwhenIwasachild,formymotherhadaunreasonablefearofit.So,evenasachildthatIwastaughttoseethewaterassomethingdanger.Second,myeyesbecamebadwhenIwasfive.IfItookoffmyglassinthewater,Icouldn’tseeanything,orthisincreasedmyfear.TheworstpartofmyexperienceisthatasachildIsawaneighbordrowning.AfterthenIhavebeenmorefrightened.EGetagoodeducationismoreimportanttodaythaneverbefore.InCanadamostlychildrenattendpublicschools.Publicschoolsaremainlyfoundbygovernmentsthroughtaxincome.StudentsinCanadataughtinEnglishandinFrench.TherestofCanadianchildrenattendprivateschools,thataresupportedmainlybyfeespayingbyparents.Inlaw,thechildrenmustattendtheschoolfrom5to16.ThereisseveraldifferentlevelsintheCanadianeducationsystem.ThefirstwascalledElementarySchools,whichincludekindergartensthroughgrade7or8.FAfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,Itook partatacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIcanspeakGermanwellinGermany,Ithoughtthatitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Inthefirstclass,theteacheraskedustodoapronunciationexercise,inwhichhewouldsayonewordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhat.“Ifinditgreatfuns.It’sthefirsttimeI’veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent,”heexplainedit.GDearLinda,Iamverysorrytohearthatyouarebadillinhospital.Areyougettingbetternow?Pleasedon’tworryaboutmyillness.Allyoushoulddonowistohavegoodrestandfollowthedoctor’sadvices.Atpresent,wearelearningsomenewlessons.Theyaren’tverydifficult,butyoudon’tneedtoworryaboutyourstudy.Whenyougotbacktoschool,weareallwillinglytohelpyouwiththosemissinglessonsattheweekend.Youwillnotmissonthefinalexam.Ourheadteacher,togetherwithourclass,aregoingtothehospitaltoseeingyounextWednesday.Ihopeyouwillrecoversoon.Bestregards.Yours,LiHuaHIliveinatypicalChinesefamilyoffourgenerationslivedtogetherundersameroof.Everyonehasfunswitheachotherhere.Everynight,wewillhavedinnertogether,talkingorlaughingaroundthedinnertablesothatalltheworriesofthedaywillbesweptaway.Atweekends,DadwilltakeGrandpa,thatlikesoutdooractivitiesalot,tothecountrysidetofish.MomandGrandmawillcookdeliciousfoodforourselves.Whentheweatherisfine,Iwillpushmy95-year-oldgreatgrandmotherinawheelchairtosunbatheintheyard.MyfamilyissuchharmoniousthatIhavebeengrownupintoapersonwithloveandresponsibility.IwilldefiniteteachwhatIhadalreadylearnedtomyfuturechildren.

参考答案A1.第一段第2句：the改为a2.第一段第2句：range改为ranging3.第一段第3句：short改为shortness4.第一段第4句：case改为cases5.第一段第5句：was改为is6.第二段第1句：if改为whether7.第二段第2句：calling改为called8.第二段第3句：basing改为based9.第二段第4句：current改为currently10.第二段第5句：protect后面加againstB1.第一段第1句：especial改为especially2.第一段第2句：trend改为trends3.第一段第4句：choose改为havechosen4.第二段第3句：Produce改为Producing5.第二段第5句：high改为higher6.第二段第6句：why改为that7.第三段第1句：第一个and改为but8.第三段第3句：killed改为arekilled9.第三段第4句：在arelooking后增添for10.第三段第5句：删掉tosavingtheenvironment中的toC1.第一句：在friendship后加was2.第二句：from改为of3.第三句：friend改为friends4.第四句：删去been5.第五句：shared改为share6.第六句：exciting改为excited7.第八句：So改为But8.第八句：an改为a9.第九句：them改为it10.第十句：that改为whenD1.第二句：Look改为Looking2.第二句：my前面加on/upon3.第三句：allow改为allowed4.第三句：第二个a改为an5.第四句：删掉that6.第四句：danger改为dangerous7.第六句：glass改为glasses8.第六句：or改为so9.第七句：drowning改为drowned10.第八句：After改为SinceE1.第一句：Get改为Getting2.第二句：mostly改为most3.第三句：found改为founded4.第四句：在taught之前加are5.第五句：that改为which6.第五句：paying改为paid7.第六句：In改为By8.第六句：删掉school前面的the9