高考英语冲刺读后续写失去父亲的圣诞节讲义

读后续写原文Actofmemory

Iwasayounggirlofeleventhen,livinginBrooklyn.Myfatherhad

diedunexpectedly

thatsummer.Timeswassuddenlyveryhardformymother,mybrother,andme.

那时我还是一个十一岁的小女孩，住在布鲁克林。那年夏天，我父亲意外去世了。突然间，我的母亲、哥哥和我的日子都很难过

PapahadalwaysmadeabigdealoutofChristmas.EveryChristmas,whenwewereabouttodecoratethetree,

hewouldmakealittleceremonyoutoftakingaspeciallittleKewpie-dolloutofitsbox,holdingitupinfrontofme,saying,“Maria,thisdollisasoldasyouare.”ThenhewouldhangitontheChristmastree.

PapaboughtthatlittledollwhenIwasborn,andthenitbecameasmalltradition.ButthisChristmasweweretohavenotree.Mymotherwasapracticalwoman,sayingitwasaluxury.Ithought,withquietbutstrongbitternessandanger,thatithadnevermeantasmuchtoherasithadtoPapaanyway.

爸爸总是把圣诞节当作一件大事。每年圣诞节，当我们准备装饰圣诞树时，他都会做一个小小的仪式，从盒子里拿出一个特别的小丘比娃娃，把它举到我面前，说：“玛丽亚，这个娃娃和你一样老了。”然后他会把它挂在圣诞树上。我出生的时候爸爸就买了那个小娃娃，然后它就成了一个小传统。但是今年圣诞节我们没有树了。我母亲是一个务实的女人，说这是一种奢侈。我带着平静但强烈的苦涩和愤怒，心想这对她来说从来没有像对爸爸那样重要。

Wehadbeentochurchthateveningandwerewalkingbackhome

insilence.AllIcouldseewerethetree-litwindowswepassed.Theircheerfulglowmademybitternessevenmoreintensebecause

Ipicturedhappyfamiliesinthosehouses,sharinglaughter,exchangingpresents,talking,joking.

Iknewwhilearrivinghome,wewould

begreetedby

darkenedwindowsandendlessemptiness.

那天晚上我们去了教堂，正默默地走回家。我所能看到的只是我们经过的那些被树照亮的窗户。他们欢快的光芒让我的痛苦更加强烈，因为我想象着幸福的家庭在那些房子里，分享欢笑，交换礼物，交谈，开玩笑。我知道，当我们到家时，迎接我们的将是黑暗的窗户和无尽的空虚。

Aswepassedmyfriend’shouse,Iaskedmymothertopleaseletme

dropin

forawhile.Shenodded.Iwaiteduntilmymotherandbrotherdisappearedaroundthecorner.ThenIturnedandheadedformyfriend’shouse.Suddenly,apileofabandonedChristmastreesfromthestorenexttoherhouse

cameintomysight.Surprisedandexcited,Idashedtothetrees,pickedoutthebestoneandbeganhalf-draggingmytreasurehome.

ItseemedasifPapawasmixedupinthissomehow.Itseemedasifhewasinthestarsaboveme,ineverylighted-house,intheverytreeIwascarrying.

当我们经过我朋友家时，我请我妈妈让我顺便来一下。她点点头。我一直等到母亲和弟弟在拐角处不见了。然后我转身向朋友家走去。突然，她家旁边商店里的一堆废弃的圣诞树进入了我的视线。我既惊讶又兴奋，冲到树上，挑选出最好的一棵，开始半拖着我的宝贝回家。爸爸似乎不知怎么地卷入了这件事。他似乎就在我头顶的星星里，在每一座灯火通明的房子里，在我抱着的那棵树上。

注意:1.续写词数应为150

左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Para1:WhenIgothome,Irangthedoorbellandcouldn’twaittoshowthemthetree.

Para2:Beforegoingtobed,Islippedtoseemytreeonelasttimebutsawmymotherstandinginfrontofit.

文章大意文章大意：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在父亲去世后，由此日子突然变得非常艰难。作者的爸爸总是把圣诞节看得很重。每年过圣诞节的时候都会有圣诞树的装饰而且还会在树上挂娃娃，可是因为爸爸的去世，所有的一切都已然不再。就在这次的圣诞节夜晚，作者和家人从教堂回来之后，作者借由去邻居家串门的时候，

看到了隔壁商店里一堆废弃的圣诞树，作者从中挑选了最好的一棵，然后带回家进行装扮，所发生的故事。参考范文Para1:

①brother的反应—欣喜②妈妈的反应—最好是沉默③一起装扮圣诞树④衔接Para1:

WhenIgothome,Irangthedoorbellandcouldn’twaittoshowthemthetree.Mybrother

answeredthedoorwithhisastonishedbutcheerfullook,saying,“Wheredidyougetthat?”Facingtheirdoubt,Iexplainedwhathadhappened.We

dragged

thetreeinside

andimmediately

startedtodecorateitwithawildexcitement.However,she

stoodinsilence

andtooknopart.Itwasatthatmomentthat

mybitternessandangercouldn’tbeheldback

anymore.“ItwouldmeanalottoPapa.”I

dashedtomybedroom,

tearsstreamingdown.(刻画矛盾冲突)或者Seizedbyexultation(兴高采烈),Icouldhave

stayedupallnight

decoratingit.Butmymother

insistedthat

itwasnearlymidnight,andthat

weshould

allgetreadytobed.We

hadnoalternativebut

to

saygoodnight.(衔接)Para2:

①我观察妈妈的行为②理解妈妈之前的沉默③主题—回忆的形式有所不同Para2:Beforegoingtobed,Islippedtoseemytreeonelasttimebutsawmymotherstandinginfrontofit.Thetreewas

helduprightoverthere,decoratedwith

sometinyChristmas

bulbs(灯泡).Surprisedbythescene,I

cautiouslyapproached

mymother.

Meanwhile,sheturnedaround

withtheKewpie-doll

gripped(紧握)inherhands.

Asif

noticingmyfeelings,thepracticallady

squeezedoutagentle

smile(挤出微笑)while

tearswelledupinhereyes.“Maria,thedollisasoldasyouare.”HearingthesamewordsPapahadsaideveryyear,I

threwmyselfintomymother’sarms,burstingintotears.

NotuntilthendidIrealizethat

wemighthavedifferentactsofmemory,butwehadthesamelovetoPapa,andtothefamily.（主题句）中文意译：第一段：当我回到家时，我按了门铃，迫不及待地想给他们看那棵树。我哥哥惊讶但高兴地应门说：“你从哪里弄来的？”面对他们的怀疑，我解释了发生的事情。我们把这棵树拖了进去，立刻开始用一种疯狂的兴奋来装饰它。然而，她沉默地站着，没有参加。正是在那一刻，我的痛苦和愤怒再也无法抑制了。“这对爸爸来说意义重大。”我冲到卧室，泪流满面。我欣喜若狂，本可以彻夜装饰它。但我母亲